| Angels angels |
| Can't decide what grocery store I want to go to today |
Moderate Temperatures and Overcast| KPH Equestrian |
| hmm then yeah, I'd go with either sipped or nursed his coffee lol |
| Nolified |
| Jester, no it only wants me to change the action verb to make it more descriptive, it doesn't want the whole sentence changed |
| Nolified |
| Munn, nope, it just wants me to change the action verb so that it's more descriptive |
| KPH Equestrian |
| do they only want you to change that thing? or can we rewrite the whole thing xD I've got ideas lmao |
| Glacier Bay Cove |
| The man in black sitting at the corner of the room chugged his coffee |
| KPH Equestrian |
| sinister as in I think that's the thing we were going for? i dont remember xD |
| Nolified |
| "The man in black at the corner of the room nursed his coffee." Help- I should do that xD |
| KPH Equestrian |
| sipping, I think, would feel a bit more sinister than this guy slamming down coffee xD 'chugs' kind of gives this vibe lmao -Click- |
| Nolified |
| Munn, help- "The man in black at the corner of the room dwadled his coffee." ok maybe not the best thing to put now that I typed it out.. |
| Chateau Montelena |
| I love the use of nursing for drinking, like a cold fall morning with a mug in your hands |
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| KPH Equestrian |
| hmm then yeah, I'd go with either sipped or nursed his coffee lol |
| Nolified |
| Jester, no it only wants me to change the action verb to make it more descriptive, it doesn't want the whole sentence changed |
| Nolified |
| Munn, nope, it just wants me to change the action verb so that it's more descriptive |
| KPH Equestrian |
| do they only want you to change that thing? or can we rewrite the whole thing xD I've got ideas lmao |
| Glacier Bay Cove |
| The man in black sitting at the corner of the room chugged his coffee |
| KPH Equestrian |
| sinister as in I think that's the thing we were going for? i dont remember xD |
| Nolified |
| "The man in black at the corner of the room nursed his coffee." Help- I should do that xD |
| KPH Equestrian |
| sipping, I think, would feel a bit more sinister than this guy slamming down coffee xD 'chugs' kind of gives this vibe lmao -Click- |
| Nolified |
| Munn, help- "The man in black at the corner of the room dwadled his coffee." ok maybe not the best thing to put now that I typed it out.. |
| Chateau Montelena |
| I love the use of nursing for drinking, like a cold fall morning with a mug in your hands |
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