Gypsy Family Farm |
You wouldn't use contemplated over; it would just be contemplated by itself. |
Gypsy Family Farm |
You wouldn't use contemplated over; it would just be contemplated by itself. |
Gypsy Family Farm |
Well that makes no sense but here; "Congress pontificated over the best course of action." |
Nolified |
Jester, the sentence needs to be short and it needs to be even more descriptive than before it was rewritten. |
Gypsy Family Farm |
Hazard; you to make it more descriptive; no other changes beside the action verb? |
Nolified |
Gypsy, only change the action verb.. in this sentence the action verb is 'deliberated' |
Gypsy Family Farm |
"A deadlocked, unagreeable Congress deliberated intensely over the best potential course of action." |
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Gypsy Family Farm |
You wouldn't use contemplated over; it would just be contemplated by itself. |
Gypsy Family Farm |
Well that makes no sense but here; "Congress pontificated over the best course of action." |
Nolified |
Jester, the sentence needs to be short and it needs to be even more descriptive than before it was rewritten. |
Gypsy Family Farm |
Hazard; you to make it more descriptive; no other changes beside the action verb? |
Nolified |
Gypsy, only change the action verb.. in this sentence the action verb is 'deliberated' |
Gypsy Family Farm |
"A deadlocked, unagreeable Congress deliberated intensely over the best potential course of action." |
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