Gypsy Family Farm |
Well that makes no sense but here; "Congress pontificated over the best course of action." |
Gypsy Family Farm |
Well that makes no sense but here; "Congress pontificated over the best course of action." |
Nolified |
Jester, the sentence needs to be short and it needs to be even more descriptive than before it was rewritten. |
Gypsy Family Farm |
Hazard; you to make it more descriptive; no other changes beside the action verb? |
Nolified |
Gypsy, only change the action verb.. in this sentence the action verb is 'deliberated' |
Gypsy Family Farm |
"A deadlocked, unagreeable Congress deliberated intensely over the best potential course of action." |
KPH Equestrian |
hazard oh that's a fun oneđź‘€what's the sentence for this one? |
Nolified |
Now the text book wants me to take a descriptive sentence and make it even more descriptive.. how much more descriptive can a sentence get?? |
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Gypsy Family Farm |
Well that makes no sense but here; "Congress pontificated over the best course of action." |
Nolified |
Jester, the sentence needs to be short and it needs to be even more descriptive than before it was rewritten. |
Gypsy Family Farm |
Hazard; you to make it more descriptive; no other changes beside the action verb? |
Nolified |
Gypsy, only change the action verb.. in this sentence the action verb is 'deliberated' |
Gypsy Family Farm |
"A deadlocked, unagreeable Congress deliberated intensely over the best potential course of action." |
KPH Equestrian |
hazard oh that's a fun oneđź‘€what's the sentence for this one? |
Nolified |
Now the text book wants me to take a descriptive sentence and make it even more descriptive.. how much more descriptive can a sentence get?? |
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Remarks Wk 1-3. 333333 Wk 4. 443333 Wk 5-6. 443334 Wk 7. 453334 Wk 8. 553334 Wk 9-10. 553335 Wk 11-12. 663335 |
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