KPH Equestrian |
hmm... debated considered consulted on ? |
Nolified |
Jester, the sentence needs to be short and it needs to be even more descriptive than before it was rewritten. |
Gypsy Family Farm |
Hazard; you to make it more descriptive; no other changes beside the action verb? |
Nolified |
Gypsy, only change the action verb.. in this sentence the action verb is 'deliberated' |
Gypsy Family Farm |
"A deadlocked, unagreeable Congress deliberated intensely over the best potential course of action." |
KPH Equestrian |
hazard oh that's a fun oneđź‘€what's the sentence for this one? |
Nolified |
Now the text book wants me to take a descriptive sentence and make it even more descriptive.. how much more descriptive can a sentence get?? |
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Nolified |
Jester, the sentence needs to be short and it needs to be even more descriptive than before it was rewritten. |
Gypsy Family Farm |
Hazard; you to make it more descriptive; no other changes beside the action verb? |
Nolified |
Gypsy, only change the action verb.. in this sentence the action verb is 'deliberated' |
Gypsy Family Farm |
"A deadlocked, unagreeable Congress deliberated intensely over the best potential course of action." |
KPH Equestrian |
hazard oh that's a fun oneđź‘€what's the sentence for this one? |
Nolified |
Now the text book wants me to take a descriptive sentence and make it even more descriptive.. how much more descriptive can a sentence get?? |
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