Anyone able to figure this out? I'm trying to transition into a quote with no commas or colons, just talking into it like a sentence. It is the goal for a grammar assignment. Here's the quote : âMy feelings are too loud for words and too shy for the world.â
Tora sighed she loved walking with her mare. She remembered that there were trails in the woods so she headed there. When she saw the man it was too late. Priceless had seen him first. She reared up and ran off into the woods at full speed. "priceless stop" Tora shouted but it was to late.
Tyler yelped and jumped back as he saw the horse. Oh no no no... he hadn't want to cause that! He wanted to go help but knew if he got closer it would just make It worse. Tyler hoped Tora was okay... he felt terrible.
Tora didn't know what to do now. She knew that priceless could easily get lost since they had just got there. But she also knew she was no match for a galloping horse. She walked up a little and stood watching looking for her mare. " I think if I go back and get Mercy I might be able to catch her" Tora thought aloud. Then she turned to the man "I'm sorry today seems to be a disaster maybe I shouldn't have come here" She could feel the taers in her eyes but refused to let them fall.
"No... I'm sorry. I should have been more careful. Please stay... if there's anything I can do to help please tell me." Tyler sounded sad. Why did this always happen to him...
Tora nodded " I hust feel so bad I don't mean to be afraid but I am. My father... he wasn't very nice to me. After that I started to fear men. I actually moved here to get away from him" Tora looked up and saw priceless standing with her back leg slightly off the ground. "oh no" Tora gasped "Please don't be as bad as it looks" she thought to herself
Tyler felt even more wilted as Tora spoke. -I might just disappear and never come back- Tyler thought. "I- I'm very sorry. I hope your horse is okay." He said quietly, walking the opposite direction as to not scare the horse.
Tora called out after the man "What's the number of the closest vet. I feel heat on he leg. She might have pulled a tendon" Tora paused then asked "What's your name?"
Tyler stopped and turned. "I'll just call the vet." Tyler answered. He dialed a number, said a couple things, nodded, and hung up. "She said she would be here in ten minutes. My name is Tyler." Tyler informed Tora, tipping his head and backing up slightly. He didn't want to scare the horse again... that could make the leg worse.
Tora smiled slightly "thanks. Could you go back to the barn and get mercy? She's the big black with the white star and four white stoclings. I think haveing a buddy will help alot" Tora wanted to giv Tyler something to do but she also didn't want him to leave.
Tyler nodded. He walked briskly back to the barn, gently coaxing the horse and putting a halter on her. He led the mare out, talking softly the whole time. Tyler walked back, making sure he didn't get to close. "What do you want me to do with her?" He asked, glancing at the mare beside him. Mercy. That was a pretty name..