Munchkin Stables |
savoring perhaps |
Nolified |
Now the text book wants me to take a descriptive sentence and make it even more descriptive.. how much more descriptive can a sentence get?? |
KPH Equestrian |
hmm then yeah, I'd go with either sipped or nursed his coffee lol |
Nolified |
Jester, no it only wants me to change the action verb to make it more descriptive, it doesn't want the whole sentence changed |
Nolified |
Munn, nope, it just wants me to change the action verb so that it's more descriptive |
KPH Equestrian |
do they only want you to change that thing? or can we rewrite the whole thing xD I've got ideas lmao |
Glacier Bay Cove |
The man in black sitting at the corner of the room chugged his coffee |
KPH Equestrian |
sinister as in I think that's the thing we were going for? i dont remember xD |
Nolified |
"The man in black at the corner of the room nursed his coffee." Help- I should do that xD |
KPH Equestrian |
sipping, I think, would feel a bit more sinister than this guy slamming down coffee xD 'chugs' kind of gives this vibe lmao -Click- |
Nolified |
Munn, help- "The man in black at the corner of the room dwadled his coffee." ok maybe not the best thing to put now that I typed it out.. |
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Nolified |
Now the text book wants me to take a descriptive sentence and make it even more descriptive.. how much more descriptive can a sentence get?? |
KPH Equestrian |
hmm then yeah, I'd go with either sipped or nursed his coffee lol |
Nolified |
Jester, no it only wants me to change the action verb to make it more descriptive, it doesn't want the whole sentence changed |
Nolified |
Munn, nope, it just wants me to change the action verb so that it's more descriptive |
KPH Equestrian |
do they only want you to change that thing? or can we rewrite the whole thing xD I've got ideas lmao |
Glacier Bay Cove |
The man in black sitting at the corner of the room chugged his coffee |
KPH Equestrian |
sinister as in I think that's the thing we were going for? i dont remember xD |
Nolified |
"The man in black at the corner of the room nursed his coffee." Help- I should do that xD |
KPH Equestrian |
sipping, I think, would feel a bit more sinister than this guy slamming down coffee xD 'chugs' kind of gives this vibe lmao -Click- |
Nolified |
Munn, help- "The man in black at the corner of the room dwadled his coffee." ok maybe not the best thing to put now that I typed it out.. |
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