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Minerva
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Ooh yas queen
Minerva
06:29:24 Min
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Ooh ill take that from a wild!
Shamrock Equines
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Bye bye
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Dandelion Fields
06:28:36 Lien :3
-HEE Click- My first time seeing this girly grown up, and damn I adore her
Mythological
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Alright then
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Autumn Leaf
06:22:40 Win | Leaf
I'm gonna go off for a minute, gotta fix something on the computer of my sister. Sorry, ill be right back.
Autumn Leaf
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Lily
Exactly, that's why I just PM ed Cali.
Blue Sky Equestrian
06:21:25 Aris/Quinn
and i agree, Cali is amazing at art
Alpine Acres
06:21:12 Lily/Alpine
Win, I'm here! xD
Also, I know you're not actually buying or selling anything, but be careful talking about sales-related topics in main.
Calela Eventing
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Hi Aris!
Blue Sky Equestrian
06:20:33 Aris/Quinn
hi cali!
Autumn Leaf
06:20:21 Win | Leaf
I'm gonna PM you about that
Calela Eventing
06:19:32 Cali
I've got a couple pieces lying about I can give too you, or just make a new. You definitely don't need to pay!
Autumn Leaf
06:19:11 Win | Leaf
Lily
A minute ago I checked the friends list, and you weren't online. I just got a shock...
Autumn Leaf
06:18:25 Win | Leaf
Cali
Also, how are you doing? I wanted to ask the 3 of you, to give me a piece of art, so that I could post it for the forum post. Cuz I said that you are amazing artist, want to give a bit of proof. I'll pay, if needed. Although I have 21k left.
Alpine Acres
06:17:42 Lily/Alpine
nice idea Win! I'm not sure what it's purpose would be though...
Calela Eventing
06:16:47 Cali
Win
Ooh, we should! I'll get into that before I leave for teams
Autumn Leaf
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Cali

Hi ! So, yesterday I had an idea, of you creating a party trio club.. More people will see it that way.
ZequineZ
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Oh O.O good boy!
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Marvel Farms
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She is perfect!

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Minerva
06:30:30 Min
-HEE Click-

Ooh yas queen
Minerva
06:29:24 Min
-HEE Click-

Ooh ill take that from a wild!
Shamrock Equines
06:29:02 Crowley
Bye bye
-HEE Click-
Dandelion Fields
06:28:36 Lien :3
-HEE Click- My first time seeing this girly grown up, and damn I adore her
Mythological
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Alright then
-HEE Click-
Autumn Leaf
06:22:40 Win | Leaf
I'm gonna go off for a minute, gotta fix something on the computer of my sister. Sorry, ill be right back.
Autumn Leaf
06:21:40 Win | Leaf
Lily
Exactly, that's why I just PM ed Cali.
Blue Sky Equestrian
06:21:25 Aris/Quinn
and i agree, Cali is amazing at art
Alpine Acres
06:21:12 Lily/Alpine
Win, I'm here! xD
Also, I know you're not actually buying or selling anything, but be careful talking about sales-related topics in main.
Calela Eventing
06:21:00 Cali
Hi Aris!
Blue Sky Equestrian
06:20:33 Aris/Quinn
hi cali!
Autumn Leaf
06:20:21 Win | Leaf
I'm gonna PM you about that
Calela Eventing
06:19:32 Cali
I've got a couple pieces lying about I can give too you, or just make a new. You definitely don't need to pay!
Autumn Leaf
06:19:11 Win | Leaf
Lily
A minute ago I checked the friends list, and you weren't online. I just got a shock...
Autumn Leaf
06:18:25 Win | Leaf
Cali
Also, how are you doing? I wanted to ask the 3 of you, to give me a piece of art, so that I could post it for the forum post. Cuz I said that you are amazing artist, want to give a bit of proof. I'll pay, if needed. Although I have 21k left.
Alpine Acres
06:17:42 Lily/Alpine
nice idea Win! I'm not sure what it's purpose would be though...
Calela Eventing
06:16:47 Cali
Win
Ooh, we should! I'll get into that before I leave for teams
Autumn Leaf
06:15:41 Win | Leaf
Cali

Hi ! So, yesterday I had an idea, of you creating a party trio club.. More people will see it that way.
ZequineZ
06:04:03 ZEZ - ZZ
Oh O.O good boy!
-HEE Click-
Marvel Farms
05:58:02 Hails
-HEE Click-
She is perfect!

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   Evitas Story thread (THIS is where the story is) December 6, 2020 02:06 PM


Midnight Eclipse
 
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So if you haven't read the other thread I recommend doing that first it will help you understand the story and my ideas and you can give me feed back and ideas there!!!
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PLEASE NO POSTING ON HERE!!! THIS IS WHERE THE STORY IM WRITING IS AND I DONT WANT OTHERS POSTING ON THIS THREAD. IF YOU HAVE AN IDEA GO TO THE OTHER THREAD PLEASE!!!
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So yes this is where the magic will be! AGAIN NO POSTING ON HERE PLEASE. SAVE THAT FOR THE OTHER THREAD
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I think I may be creating a Rp off of this but still not sure go to other thread for more info.
Every post will be a chapter and maybe sorter or longer then the last all depends on how much time and ideas I have :)
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THE CHARECTERS AND THERE LOOKS ARE IN THE OTHER THREAD AS WELL :) (I am hosting a contest for people to post pictures (STOCK or HEE) of what they think the characters should look like, im also working on there personalitys)
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Feedback/suggestion threadd: ~Clicky~
Rp sign ups thread:!CLICKY!
Contest Thread: CLICKY DA LINKY
Co-writers:
Idea people:
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{THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR READING AND FEED BACK ON THE OTHER THREAD}

Edited at December 7, 2020 06:17 PM by Midnight Eclipse
   Evitas Story thread (THIS is where the story is) December 6, 2020 10:48 PM


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Chapter one
Bullet and Harper
She was nursing peacefully when she felt something knock into her side, she stoped and looked over and saw her older brother Arrow. She looked at him confused then went back to nursing just to have him say "Follow me Evita" she looked at him confused "why? I'm hungry" she complained. He pinned his ears and looked behind him obviously anxious and aware of something she didn't. "Just follow me please" she sighed and turned fully towards him, she nuzzled her mom and followed after him in a rush. She heard her mom nicker to the both of them so she turned and gave a whinny of good bye then followed after arrow.
Arrow always had that big brother personality and always did his best to protect her and make sure she was happy. Him being the oldest foal in the "herd", if you could even call what they lived in a herd. There was just two mares, Harper and Zala, and the three foals, Arrow her and Sunny, the rest of them were stallions and if seemed more stallions were coming and some always leaving.
Harper usually couldn't of had a care in the world for anyone or anything, everyone knew she hated staying in the "herd" but that confused Evita. She didn't know why Harper never left, she thinks it's cause of her and Arrow. Even though arrow was old enough to be on his own at 1 1/2 she still always made time for him. She was still only 4 months old so she stayed with her a lot more but didn't care that arrow was there, she being with her brother.
She followed after arrow not paying attention until she ran into something. She shook herself off then look up and saw Arrow standing tall with his neck arched and chest puffed, his ears were pinned and he was giving a hard glare to their father who stood in front of them. She quickly stood and got behind arrow so she was just peaking out from behind him, she was still only 4 months old so she knew she was no match for her ful-grown father. She watched as Arrow and Bullet had a mini stare down, with one last hard look from bullet he walked right past them and towards their mom.
She rushed to turn around and see what was going on but Arrow jumped to stand in her way. She didnt know what was going on only thier father was mad and going towards there mom, and she didnt like it. She kept trying to get around arrow but he wouldnt move out of the way! "Arrow move! I want to go to mom! Move!" she said but he just stayed calm and blocking her way. The two of them both froze when they head a shrill pain-filled whinny come from the direction of there mother and father. Arrow looked behind him then turned back to Evita and said, "Lets go"
He gave her a nip on the withers and she turned around and started moving in the direction they had been going. She would feel a bump or nip on the rump every now and then to remind her too keep moving. As they were walking they heard two sets of hooves running off somewhere, one was louder and belonged to a bigger horse and the other ones softer and lighter. She wanted to turn around and run back to her mom but knew Arrow wouldn't let her so she kept moving.
At one point Arrow stoped onve they were out of view and hearing range of the "herd". Arrow looked at a bush and said "hide in the bush, stay down and low until I come back for you, Okay?" she nodded and crawled into the bush and laid down. She watched as Arrow turned and took off galloping back towards the group. She still had no clue what was going on other then she needed to stay in the bush and wait for Arrow to come back.

Edited at December 7, 2020 11:18 AM by Shadow Eclipse

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