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ADHD is great because what do you mean I spent a ton of time putting things into my shop this morning only to have every one of them sell and confuse me with the income when I login again
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Under stable activities, manage your hay
Briar Thorn Ranch
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ah darn, but fair enough, in that case I either have wayyyy to many bales or I've done my maths wildly incorrectly (apparently I have enough for 103 real life years... I think I've done the maths wildly incorrectly)
Nanami
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Service>store>store hay you can see what you got i think
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do the math
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Briar Thorn Ranch
12:34:39 Rowena/Ro
how do you work out your hay surplus? Is there a shortcut to it or is it just doing the maths on it lol?
Glacier Bay Cove
12:34:17 Glacier Kittens
Sorry where to go, I mean
Jericho Stables
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-Click- I have enough hay for... ever
Glacier Bay Cove
12:30:53 Glacier Kittens
If I need hay, I know what to go, lol
ArcticLights
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Hmm, some wild bays are just gorgeous
Cloud Peak Stables
12:28:07 Cloud
That's even more painful Void.
Sunset River Arabian
12:28:03 Athena - AA/TB
This mare better end up with a decent LB spot
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Stag's Court
12:27:04 Stag / Ares
I keep accidentally buying normal hay whenever I'm supposed to be buying round bales so I've got enough in surplus to last me almost 2 full real life years.
The Old Gods
12:26:18 Void Malign
I had one go all up 3 and 6 but nothing on 9 🙃
Sunset River Arabian
12:25:21 Athena - AA/TB
I know T-T
Jericho Stables
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Cloud Peak Stables
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oof like a knife through the heart Athena
Sunset River Arabian
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Hate when my SD go AU Wk3 but none on Wk6
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Magpie Ridge
12:41:31 Ven | RID
ADHD is great because what do you mean I spent a ton of time putting things into my shop this morning only to have every one of them sell and confuse me with the income when I login again
Glacier Bay Cove
12:36:53 Glacier Kittens
Under stable activities, manage your hay
Briar Thorn Ranch
12:36:28 Rowena/Ro
ah darn, but fair enough, in that case I either have wayyyy to many bales or I've done my maths wildly incorrectly (apparently I have enough for 103 real life years... I think I've done the maths wildly incorrectly)
Nanami
12:35:53 
Service>store>store hay you can see what you got i think
The Old Gods
12:35:45 Void Malign
Total Feedings Available: 1584514.8
Estimated Weekly Feedings Needed: 17745

🤔 think I need more hay?
SandWitch Arabians
12:35:07 Witchypoo
do the math
Nanami
12:34:46 
image isn't available
Briar Thorn Ranch
12:34:39 Rowena/Ro
how do you work out your hay surplus? Is there a shortcut to it or is it just doing the maths on it lol?
Glacier Bay Cove
12:34:17 Glacier Kittens
Sorry where to go, I mean
Jericho Stables
12:32:29 
-Click- I have enough hay for... ever
Glacier Bay Cove
12:30:53 Glacier Kittens
If I need hay, I know what to go, lol
ArcticLights
12:29:10 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

Hmm, some wild bays are just gorgeous
Cloud Peak Stables
12:28:07 Cloud
That's even more painful Void.
Sunset River Arabian
12:28:03 Athena - AA/TB
This mare better end up with a decent LB spot
-HEE Click-
Stag's Court
12:27:04 Stag / Ares
I keep accidentally buying normal hay whenever I'm supposed to be buying round bales so I've got enough in surplus to last me almost 2 full real life years.
The Old Gods
12:26:18 Void Malign
I had one go all up 3 and 6 but nothing on 9 🙃
Sunset River Arabian
12:25:21 Athena - AA/TB
I know T-T
Jericho Stables
12:24:55 
I really need a nap. I had a cheese stick. I don't know what I did with it...
Cloud Peak Stables
12:24:54 Cloud
oof like a knife through the heart Athena
Sunset River Arabian
12:23:45 Athena - AA/TB
Hate when my SD go AU Wk3 but none on Wk6
-HEE Click-

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


The Old Gods
 
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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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