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ohhhh luna shes so prettyyyy!!!!! and an apricot too!!! wow!! <3
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Asfa...it really does..
I didnt hate the golden
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Look at this Chim that was shared form the other day..Its the nicest ive seen lately.
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She just looks Dunalino now ;~;
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I cant either but mine is because of GERD
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@Jericho,

Those are my favorite, but I cant have them. Diabetes sucks!
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Shady Tree Farm
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Bravery test :P
Whisper Creek Ranch
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Sigghh... do I keep or yeet?
-HEE Click-
Painted Perfection
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Hey Kat and me too
Glacier Bay Cove
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Loving her, Luna
Running R Ranch
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We haven't had snow all year and just since last night it's dumped 6+" and we're supposed to get rain on Sunday. That'll be a lovely slushy muddy mess x)
Painted Perfection
08:05:46 Luna
-HEE Click-

Shes got a new sabino marking. The face marking gives it away
Asfamoth
08:04:39 Asfa
Sting
I'm out here trying to photoshop them back
Painted Perfection
08:03:23 Luna
-HEE Click-

Speaking of Manchado
Painted Perfection
08:03:04 Luna
Thank you! <3 I wish she was a PON but shes Perfection either way
MellowMares
08:02:27 
ohhhh luna shes so prettyyyy!!!!! and an apricot too!!! wow!! <3
IvorySummitEstate
08:02:21 Ivory
She's stunning!
Painted Perfection
08:00:17 Luna
-HEE Click-

My pride snd joy Chimera
Narran Park
07:59:46 Sting
Asfa...it really does..
I didnt hate the golden
Narran Park
07:59:09 Sting
Look at this Chim that was shared form the other day..Its the nicest ive seen lately.
-HEE Click-
The Old Gods
07:57:23 Void Malign
-HEE Click- ninja brindle
Asfamoth
07:56:11 Asfa
-HEE Click-
She just looks Dunalino now ;~;
Ranch Lands Training
07:53:40 Lilly/PON Addict
The gold champagne is drool worthy -HEE Click-
Painted Perfection
07:50:24 Luna
I cant either but mine is because of GERD
Dixie Sccy Stables
07:49:47 
@Jericho,

Those are my favorite, but I cant have them. Diabetes sucks!
Insignia Elites
07:48:31 Em
I love the watermelons... send them to me xD

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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