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WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:53:39 
I got banned from roleplaying
ArcticLights
08:50:53 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I dont think that will give any good results considering the foals are after wild unrated parents
WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:47:47 
Should I try to rate them after the auction to do something
Oakmoss Stud
08:46:31 Oak
Wonderful, unrated horses aren't going to sell for much at all at auction. It may be better to FR them if you need the space.
Bioshock Manor
08:46:30 Storm
Same Eury
Bioshock Manor
08:46:13 Storm
That's a sales question
WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:44:59 
for after my auction since my horses are over priced what can I put the prices to then
The Old Gods
08:44:04 Void Malign
No, because I doubt that SH were added to the game after X
God is Mighty Stable
08:43:59 Willow~KNN & PON
Bye guys, time to go be an animal slave XD
ArcticLights
08:42:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Are they listed after how they got added maybe?
The Old Gods
08:41:21 Void Malign
😭 okay, but it seriously bugs me that the breed list on the breeding page isn't in alphabetical order.
God is Mighty Stable
08:40:01 Willow~KNN & PON
Hey Ven!
Stormsong Manor
08:39:30 Ven
Thunder, no giveaways or advertisements in main chat
God is Mighty Stable
08:39:29 Willow~KNN & PON
Wonderful
Sometimes the genetics do that, lol
It might take a couple tries
WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:38:11 
I tried it but got a weird foal -HEE Click-
Nordic Designs
08:37:31 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
LOLOL i havent done that yet ill heavily contemplate it XD
God is Mighty Stable
08:37:06 Willow~KNN & PON
Wonderful
sure! It's a lot of fun once you get the hang of it
WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:34:56 
-HEE Click-
Can I try this horse from looking at the horses from search horses
ArcticLights
08:34:47 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Maybe you need to load him into a trailer and show him the entrance to the glitterglue factory?
Nordic Designs
08:34:39 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
his training is monster level.. it bamboozles me constantly.. but he then bamboozled me with such shit production LOL

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WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:53:39 
I got banned from roleplaying
ArcticLights
08:50:53 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I dont think that will give any good results considering the foals are after wild unrated parents
WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:47:47 
Should I try to rate them after the auction to do something
Oakmoss Stud
08:46:31 Oak
Wonderful, unrated horses aren't going to sell for much at all at auction. It may be better to FR them if you need the space.
Bioshock Manor
08:46:30 Storm
Same Eury
Bioshock Manor
08:46:13 Storm
That's a sales question
WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:44:59 
for after my auction since my horses are over priced what can I put the prices to then
The Old Gods
08:44:04 Void Malign
No, because I doubt that SH were added to the game after X
God is Mighty Stable
08:43:59 Willow~KNN & PON
Bye guys, time to go be an animal slave XD
ArcticLights
08:42:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Are they listed after how they got added maybe?
The Old Gods
08:41:21 Void Malign
😭 okay, but it seriously bugs me that the breed list on the breeding page isn't in alphabetical order.
God is Mighty Stable
08:40:01 Willow~KNN & PON
Hey Ven!
Stormsong Manor
08:39:30 Ven
Thunder, no giveaways or advertisements in main chat
God is Mighty Stable
08:39:29 Willow~KNN & PON
Wonderful
Sometimes the genetics do that, lol
It might take a couple tries
WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:38:11 
I tried it but got a weird foal -HEE Click-
Nordic Designs
08:37:31 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
LOLOL i havent done that yet ill heavily contemplate it XD
God is Mighty Stable
08:37:06 Willow~KNN & PON
Wonderful
sure! It's a lot of fun once you get the hang of it
WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:34:56 
-HEE Click-
Can I try this horse from looking at the horses from search horses
ArcticLights
08:34:47 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Maybe you need to load him into a trailer and show him the entrance to the glitterglue factory?
Nordic Designs
08:34:39 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
his training is monster level.. it bamboozles me constantly.. but he then bamboozled me with such shit production LOL

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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