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Nightingales Ridge
02:05:21 𔓘 Issy
What happened do you know?
Romani Family Farm
02:04:39 Formerly Gypsy
I just wish I knew if those cats are ok.
Romani Family Farm
02:04:05 Formerly Gypsy
Yeah, it was quite the day. I'm definitely ready to go to bed but my hair smells like chemical fire.
Nightingales Ridge
02:03:52 𔓘 Issy
Oh that's horrible
Nightingales Ridge
02:03:21 𔓘 Issy
Romani oh goodness!!! Just read chat
Romani Family Farm
02:01:49 Formerly Gypsy
I mean, it's my first job burning down.
Nightingales Ridge
01:59:07 𔓘 Issy
Be*
Nightingales Ridge
01:58:55 𔓘 Issy
Oh let tonight me the night I sail to the land of nod, anchor in blanket Bay 😴
Red Hill Hollow
01:51:42 Red, Hollow
Hahah seems like we are all going through it
Minerva
01:47:34 Min
Jeez guys- hope everything works out for you all!!

Especially you Zero- that condensation is a concern 🙈
Romani Family Farm
01:46:37 Formerly Gypsy
I'm glad someone is having a normal day!
ZeroZero
01:45:08 
Oh my, Romani and Red Hill and Calela all in trouble.
I woke up and it is sunny. Very slightly worried about condensation on my velux window.
Romani Family Farm
01:37:54 Formerly Gypsy
I'm so worried about the cats.
Romani Family Farm
01:37:31 Formerly Gypsy
JFC. I am also just home and it's because the building my work is in burned tonight. No one was hurt but there are pets still trapped in the building because it's unsafe to enter right now.
Red Hill Hollow
01:36:51 Red, Hollow
Man 😩 cant catch a break. Just hanging out at the local mall while I wait to go to work and now it’s in lock down and there’s an alarm blaring. Sigh
ZeroZero
01:33:53 
Calela where do you live? And best of luck to you all.
Calela Eventing
12:52:12 Cali
Good lord
Finally home and it’s only 8am. Massive storm has hit my area and we had to go barricade the tack and feed rooms in case of flood. Opened all the fences for the horses. Everything is shut down and we’re banned from the roads
Boulder Creek
12:41:27 
The cat begs and pleads and cries to go outside - no you can't.

I set up the porch gate and grab a book for the rocking chair - no cat in sight. He's on the bed sprawled out.

And when I picked him up and put him out, he sat on the steps for thirty seconds before Running inside.
fire
12:29:08 Tinky
haas the suver moved yet
Morning Glory Farms
12:28:29 Dino/Digital Tyrant
My toaster has died after like 12 years :( no toast for me

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Nightingales Ridge
02:05:21 𔓘 Issy
What happened do you know?
Romani Family Farm
02:04:39 Formerly Gypsy
I just wish I knew if those cats are ok.
Romani Family Farm
02:04:05 Formerly Gypsy
Yeah, it was quite the day. I'm definitely ready to go to bed but my hair smells like chemical fire.
Nightingales Ridge
02:03:52 𔓘 Issy
Oh that's horrible
Nightingales Ridge
02:03:21 𔓘 Issy
Romani oh goodness!!! Just read chat
Romani Family Farm
02:01:49 Formerly Gypsy
I mean, it's my first job burning down.
Nightingales Ridge
01:59:07 𔓘 Issy
Be*
Nightingales Ridge
01:58:55 𔓘 Issy
Oh let tonight me the night I sail to the land of nod, anchor in blanket Bay 😴
Red Hill Hollow
01:51:42 Red, Hollow
Hahah seems like we are all going through it
Minerva
01:47:34 Min
Jeez guys- hope everything works out for you all!!

Especially you Zero- that condensation is a concern 🙈
Romani Family Farm
01:46:37 Formerly Gypsy
I'm glad someone is having a normal day!
ZeroZero
01:45:08 
Oh my, Romani and Red Hill and Calela all in trouble.
I woke up and it is sunny. Very slightly worried about condensation on my velux window.
Romani Family Farm
01:37:54 Formerly Gypsy
I'm so worried about the cats.
Romani Family Farm
01:37:31 Formerly Gypsy
JFC. I am also just home and it's because the building my work is in burned tonight. No one was hurt but there are pets still trapped in the building because it's unsafe to enter right now.
Red Hill Hollow
01:36:51 Red, Hollow
Man 😩 cant catch a break. Just hanging out at the local mall while I wait to go to work and now it’s in lock down and there’s an alarm blaring. Sigh
ZeroZero
01:33:53 
Calela where do you live? And best of luck to you all.
Calela Eventing
12:52:12 Cali
Good lord
Finally home and it’s only 8am. Massive storm has hit my area and we had to go barricade the tack and feed rooms in case of flood. Opened all the fences for the horses. Everything is shut down and we’re banned from the roads
Boulder Creek
12:41:27 
The cat begs and pleads and cries to go outside - no you can't.

I set up the porch gate and grab a book for the rocking chair - no cat in sight. He's on the bed sprawled out.

And when I picked him up and put him out, he sat on the steps for thirty seconds before Running inside.
fire
12:29:08 Tinky
haas the suver moved yet
Morning Glory Farms
12:28:29 Dino/Digital Tyrant
My toaster has died after like 12 years :( no toast for me

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


Moonlight Stud
 
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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


The Old Gods
 
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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


Darley Heights
 
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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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