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Minerva
11:03:26 Min
I absolutely love babies, but the idea of being pregnant, shoving one out and it then turning into an actual person that wants to talk and ask questions is a fat no from me
Sunset River Arabian
11:02:52 Athena - AAs
I'll whip any naughty kids into shape lol already had to do it with siblings when I was younger and my mom was busy
Gem Queens Estate
11:02:27 Snow❆Gem
@granny

Oh dear! I'm hoping to not be a lonely spinster all my days. lol And I'm interested in guys, but know lots of them aren't worth their salt. lol
RiverView Ponies
11:01:44 Willow/Lil
It's amazing that I (someone who loves to read and write short stories) cant write a short descriptive scene for American Surrealism and describe it lol
Gem Queens Estate
10:59:31 Snow❆Gem
@athena

Oh yes! I'd love to have some youngish kids around if they are behaved. But I'm the older of the two siblings. lol its up to me unless I make friends with someone that has kids or going to have kids. ;P
Sunset River Arabian
10:59:29 Athena - AAs
peggy
I think thats a first lol usually its the moms begging for grandkids in my experience
Ashcroft Park Stud
10:59:25 Ash
I’m relying on my brother to carry on the family name lol, kids are lovely but I don’t want to be pregnant or give birth so that’s not happening. My mum is happy to have my cat and pony as her grandchildren lol
Circle Star RIDs
10:59:07 Granny C
Gem - you aren't alone.
My sister's only 'child' turns 42 in a week. He's never dated either. Not interested in girls at all it seems.
Pegasus Lane
10:58:50 Peggy (or) Peg
I want kids so bad LOL My mother is fine being grandchild-free though 🤪
Sunset River Arabian
10:58:46 Athena - AAs
I do love kids. I'd probably be the babysitter anytime they want to do something. I'll sugar em up and send em back home xD
Sunset River Arabian
10:57:03 Athena - AAs
I never plan to have kids. I grew up with alot of trauma that I dont think I could refrain from passing on to my kids. Besides, the 6 little ones should give my mom plenty and I'll still get to love on them. I can be the fun aunt
Minerva
10:56:49 Min
Nobody sensible would touch my brother with a barge pole so I think Im destined to only be an honourary aunt rather than a blood relative one lol
Sunset River Arabian
10:55:13 Athena - AAs
Granny
I can't imagine that T-T

Gem
I dont even want to think about when they have kids or get married. We joke about it lots but that makes it all real. Like yeah I'd love some little nieces and nephews but my siblings are still kids to me
Gem Queens Estate
10:54:47 Snow❆Gem
Mean while I'm over here almost 30 and never dated. LMAO I can tell my mom would like grandkids or at least know I have a good stable partner in life. :)
Gem Queens Estate
10:53:13 Snow❆Gem
@athena

I feel ya. I have an older cousin how became a dad when he was 19. That boy is now like 18. O.o Where's the time gone?!
Circle Star RIDs
10:53:11 Granny C
Athena - I totally understand. I feel the same way. My 2 greatgrand daughters are about to start high school. Where did the time go
Phantom Echoes
10:51:13 Win | Mar
Thanks!
Minerva
10:50:09 Min
Yes if you go into your friends theres an option at the bottom
Sunset River Arabian
10:49:49 Athena - AAs
Also its so weird realizing how old all the little ones are. I remember the day 4 of them were born. And now the oldest of those 4 is turning 18 and the youngest is turning 12. Not even that it makes me feel old its just like no way they're that big already. I remember when they born like it was last week
BlackRose
10:49:43 Stella
Yeah it should give you the option when you click their stable page I think..?

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Minerva
11:03:26 Min
I absolutely love babies, but the idea of being pregnant, shoving one out and it then turning into an actual person that wants to talk and ask questions is a fat no from me
Sunset River Arabian
11:02:52 Athena - AAs
I'll whip any naughty kids into shape lol already had to do it with siblings when I was younger and my mom was busy
Gem Queens Estate
11:02:27 Snow❆Gem
@granny

Oh dear! I'm hoping to not be a lonely spinster all my days. lol And I'm interested in guys, but know lots of them aren't worth their salt. lol
RiverView Ponies
11:01:44 Willow/Lil
It's amazing that I (someone who loves to read and write short stories) cant write a short descriptive scene for American Surrealism and describe it lol
Gem Queens Estate
10:59:31 Snow❆Gem
@athena

Oh yes! I'd love to have some youngish kids around if they are behaved. But I'm the older of the two siblings. lol its up to me unless I make friends with someone that has kids or going to have kids. ;P
Sunset River Arabian
10:59:29 Athena - AAs
peggy
I think thats a first lol usually its the moms begging for grandkids in my experience
Ashcroft Park Stud
10:59:25 Ash
I’m relying on my brother to carry on the family name lol, kids are lovely but I don’t want to be pregnant or give birth so that’s not happening. My mum is happy to have my cat and pony as her grandchildren lol
Circle Star RIDs
10:59:07 Granny C
Gem - you aren't alone.
My sister's only 'child' turns 42 in a week. He's never dated either. Not interested in girls at all it seems.
Pegasus Lane
10:58:50 Peggy (or) Peg
I want kids so bad LOL My mother is fine being grandchild-free though 🤪
Sunset River Arabian
10:58:46 Athena - AAs
I do love kids. I'd probably be the babysitter anytime they want to do something. I'll sugar em up and send em back home xD
Sunset River Arabian
10:57:03 Athena - AAs
I never plan to have kids. I grew up with alot of trauma that I dont think I could refrain from passing on to my kids. Besides, the 6 little ones should give my mom plenty and I'll still get to love on them. I can be the fun aunt
Minerva
10:56:49 Min
Nobody sensible would touch my brother with a barge pole so I think Im destined to only be an honourary aunt rather than a blood relative one lol
Sunset River Arabian
10:55:13 Athena - AAs
Granny
I can't imagine that T-T

Gem
I dont even want to think about when they have kids or get married. We joke about it lots but that makes it all real. Like yeah I'd love some little nieces and nephews but my siblings are still kids to me
Gem Queens Estate
10:54:47 Snow❆Gem
Mean while I'm over here almost 30 and never dated. LMAO I can tell my mom would like grandkids or at least know I have a good stable partner in life. :)
Gem Queens Estate
10:53:13 Snow❆Gem
@athena

I feel ya. I have an older cousin how became a dad when he was 19. That boy is now like 18. O.o Where's the time gone?!
Circle Star RIDs
10:53:11 Granny C
Athena - I totally understand. I feel the same way. My 2 greatgrand daughters are about to start high school. Where did the time go
Phantom Echoes
10:51:13 Win | Mar
Thanks!
Minerva
10:50:09 Min
Yes if you go into your friends theres an option at the bottom
Sunset River Arabian
10:49:49 Athena - AAs
Also its so weird realizing how old all the little ones are. I remember the day 4 of them were born. And now the oldest of those 4 is turning 18 and the youngest is turning 12. Not even that it makes me feel old its just like no way they're that big already. I remember when they born like it was last week
BlackRose
10:49:43 Stella
Yeah it should give you the option when you click their stable page I think..?

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


Moonlight Stud
 
Posts: 2871
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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


The Old Gods
 
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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


Darley Heights
 
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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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