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Dash Warmbloods
04:39:03 
Heck I think last winter my parents had a -17 morning
Nightingales Ridge
04:38:57 𔓘 Issy
I agree Moon. We are a long country so south stretching towards Antarctica is definitely felt
Whitewolf
04:38:52 Fang
I’d like to see the ocean again someday.
Probably alone >.>
Whitewolf
04:38:29 Fang
Just too cold and windy Issy.
I’d sit in the heated pool and freeze my body parts off standing up due to the wind XD and the ocean water was freezing
Dash Warmbloods
04:38:05 
I grew up in rural Canterbury. We would swing from -12+ in winter to 35 in summer. It’s rough
Nightingales Ridge
04:37:41 𔓘 Issy
Lmao fang. Aw true is march iffy for swimming??
Moonlight Equestrian
04:36:43 Moon
I like slow and we have a good climate, not too freezing and not too hot (most of the time)
Whitewolf
04:36:37 Fang
I only visited the Gulf of Mexico *cough* or America now apparently in March - right before spring so not ideal weather lol
Dash Warmbloods
04:36:32 
I was in the ocean in Devonport just yesterday. Shit ain’t warm right now LOL
Dash Warmbloods
04:36:10 
June-Oct south of maybe Nelson it’s too cold to swim without gear on.
Whitewolf
04:36:03 Fang
Slow sounds nice.
Nightingales Ridge
04:35:52 𔓘 Issy
Like I said I'm a northlander lol
Dash Warmbloods
04:35:13 
You wouldn’t swim down south in winter it’s bloody cold.
Nightingales Ridge
04:35:08 𔓘 Issy
June/July etc it's bit nippy
Dash Warmbloods
04:34:48 
I love when we are in Hawaiian ports though now that’s warm water.
Nightingales Ridge
04:34:37 𔓘 Issy
Wouldn't say warm but it's definitely still swimable lol!
Dash Warmbloods
04:33:29 
Not sure our ocean is warm enough to swim year around. I was in the sea just yesterday for training purposes and it wasn’t warm.
Nightingales Ridge
04:32:24 𔓘 Issy
Depends what kind of lifestyle you're after too. When I lived in London and met other kiwis they all found nz too slow - not an unwarranted opinion! Haha
Nightingales Ridge
04:30:39 𔓘 Issy
I used to have a self contained van. Was awesome to pop about nz in.
Moonlight Equestrian
04:30:07 Moon
But also for pollution too, we have the odd issue or the odd algae bloom but some countries swimming is a health risk so we are definitely lucky

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Dash Warmbloods
04:39:03 
Heck I think last winter my parents had a -17 morning
Nightingales Ridge
04:38:57 𔓘 Issy
I agree Moon. We are a long country so south stretching towards Antarctica is definitely felt
Whitewolf
04:38:52 Fang
I’d like to see the ocean again someday.
Probably alone >.>
Whitewolf
04:38:29 Fang
Just too cold and windy Issy.
I’d sit in the heated pool and freeze my body parts off standing up due to the wind XD and the ocean water was freezing
Dash Warmbloods
04:38:05 
I grew up in rural Canterbury. We would swing from -12+ in winter to 35 in summer. It’s rough
Nightingales Ridge
04:37:41 𔓘 Issy
Lmao fang. Aw true is march iffy for swimming??
Moonlight Equestrian
04:36:43 Moon
I like slow and we have a good climate, not too freezing and not too hot (most of the time)
Whitewolf
04:36:37 Fang
I only visited the Gulf of Mexico *cough* or America now apparently in March - right before spring so not ideal weather lol
Dash Warmbloods
04:36:32 
I was in the ocean in Devonport just yesterday. Shit ain’t warm right now LOL
Dash Warmbloods
04:36:10 
June-Oct south of maybe Nelson it’s too cold to swim without gear on.
Whitewolf
04:36:03 Fang
Slow sounds nice.
Nightingales Ridge
04:35:52 𔓘 Issy
Like I said I'm a northlander lol
Dash Warmbloods
04:35:13 
You wouldn’t swim down south in winter it’s bloody cold.
Nightingales Ridge
04:35:08 𔓘 Issy
June/July etc it's bit nippy
Dash Warmbloods
04:34:48 
I love when we are in Hawaiian ports though now that’s warm water.
Nightingales Ridge
04:34:37 𔓘 Issy
Wouldn't say warm but it's definitely still swimable lol!
Dash Warmbloods
04:33:29 
Not sure our ocean is warm enough to swim year around. I was in the sea just yesterday for training purposes and it wasn’t warm.
Nightingales Ridge
04:32:24 𔓘 Issy
Depends what kind of lifestyle you're after too. When I lived in London and met other kiwis they all found nz too slow - not an unwarranted opinion! Haha
Nightingales Ridge
04:30:39 𔓘 Issy
I used to have a self contained van. Was awesome to pop about nz in.
Moonlight Equestrian
04:30:07 Moon
But also for pollution too, we have the odd issue or the odd algae bloom but some countries swimming is a health risk so we are definitely lucky

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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