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Ironhorse
03:32:15 Sting
I was just going to ask about Black Chestnut. I reckon i tried to re-roll one once, but it never happened.
Gaelic Gladiacres
03:30:24 Gladius
ice - yeaaaaaaaah that's uh. yep. I feel that lol
Bluegrass Racing
03:29:31 Blue
Black chestnut can be re-roll onto a horse as long as they have the right combo of genes?
Jericho Stables
03:26:36 
Wild, keep/sell questions belong in the sales chat
Just Chaos
03:24:10 AL
Cute little half-tail
Icewar Isles
03:22:14 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
OH i didnt even see the lamb ahahha
Mythological
03:18:51 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Lamb was born with half a tail.
Dire Wolf
03:16:06 Fang
Cute little sheep
Icewar Isles
03:14:58 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
aweeee I miss sheepies
Icewar Isles
03:14:41 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
Theres that and Im responsible for tracking over 26 THOUSAND pieces of information on the daily due to being administratively responsible for 90 personnel... No exaggeration.. if anything this is an underestimate...
Mythological
03:14:35 RIP-Tim:2016-26
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Dire Wolf
03:13:26 Fang
Have fun with the art <3
Dire Wolf
03:13:13 Fang
No wonder why your brain is mush sheesh
Jericho Stables
03:13:03 
Whelp. Back to the art grind
Icewar Isles
03:12:12 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
Its freaking insane lol
Icewar Isles
03:11:02 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
Never failed the exam so Im not so worried about that.. it takes A LOT to fail.. I got 99th percentile when I made my last promotion.. that means I scored better than 99% of my peers... but I did the math and only got like a 61% on the exam XD.. Military is dum dum...
Dire Wolf
03:10:17 Fang
Sounds like a living nightmare for sure
Icewar Isles
03:09:34 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
and even if I pass the test, I may not be eligible for promotion.. and even if I am eligible for promotion, my record has to be reviewed to ensure "sustained superior performance". And even if I have sustained superior performance it depends on how many quotas for the next paygrade and my job LOL
its a freaking nightmare. I wont know about THAT until mid august
Dire Wolf
03:08:26 Fang
Sounds insane Ice, hopefully you did well 🤞 I’m sure you’ll pass no problem
Icewar Isles
03:07:20 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
first 90 questions I felt pretty solid on.. the last 80 or so completely whooped my ass... I wont know results of the test for the next week or two

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Ironhorse
03:32:15 Sting
I was just going to ask about Black Chestnut. I reckon i tried to re-roll one once, but it never happened.
Gaelic Gladiacres
03:30:24 Gladius
ice - yeaaaaaaaah that's uh. yep. I feel that lol
Bluegrass Racing
03:29:31 Blue
Black chestnut can be re-roll onto a horse as long as they have the right combo of genes?
Jericho Stables
03:26:36 
Wild, keep/sell questions belong in the sales chat
Just Chaos
03:24:10 AL
Cute little half-tail
Icewar Isles
03:22:14 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
OH i didnt even see the lamb ahahha
Mythological
03:18:51 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Lamb was born with half a tail.
Dire Wolf
03:16:06 Fang
Cute little sheep
Icewar Isles
03:14:58 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
aweeee I miss sheepies
Icewar Isles
03:14:41 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
Theres that and Im responsible for tracking over 26 THOUSAND pieces of information on the daily due to being administratively responsible for 90 personnel... No exaggeration.. if anything this is an underestimate...
Mythological
03:14:35 RIP-Tim:2016-26
-Click-
Dire Wolf
03:13:26 Fang
Have fun with the art <3
Dire Wolf
03:13:13 Fang
No wonder why your brain is mush sheesh
Jericho Stables
03:13:03 
Whelp. Back to the art grind
Icewar Isles
03:12:12 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
Its freaking insane lol
Icewar Isles
03:11:02 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
Never failed the exam so Im not so worried about that.. it takes A LOT to fail.. I got 99th percentile when I made my last promotion.. that means I scored better than 99% of my peers... but I did the math and only got like a 61% on the exam XD.. Military is dum dum...
Dire Wolf
03:10:17 Fang
Sounds like a living nightmare for sure
Icewar Isles
03:09:34 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
and even if I pass the test, I may not be eligible for promotion.. and even if I am eligible for promotion, my record has to be reviewed to ensure "sustained superior performance". And even if I have sustained superior performance it depends on how many quotas for the next paygrade and my job LOL
its a freaking nightmare. I wont know about THAT until mid august
Dire Wolf
03:08:26 Fang
Sounds insane Ice, hopefully you did well 🤞 I’m sure you’ll pass no problem
Icewar Isles
03:07:20 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
first 90 questions I felt pretty solid on.. the last 80 or so completely whooped my ass... I wont know results of the test for the next week or two

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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