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Minerva
03:05:22 Min
RIP Aussie
Aussie Wattles
02:52:43 Aussie
Omg I just accidentally skipped a ver achievable quest that woulda given me a medallion :(
Moonrose Magic
02:33:52 🎀 Diva
Go to Help - Game guide, it explains it pretty well
Reficul
02:28:28 Ref🌈
What are straws and embryos?
Tanglewood
02:26:11 Technically Tangle
Gem is so freaking cool. I have a super old piece of hers that I always look back on to see how far she's come - need to update it sometime though <3
Dandelion Farms
02:22:57 Sky/Dandy
Even after a few months I'm still obsessed with Gem arts. I'm so happy I got this set
Calela Eventing
02:21:40 Cali
Win
Petriphae is amazing! Not surprised at ALL
Autumn Leaf
02:05:40 ᏇᎥᏁ
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Damn, DD has the whole AALB in hands
Rising Irish
01:59:34 RFS Thoroughbreds
I gotta work on this account this ones horrid
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:54:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
nevermind I'm doing it
night yall
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:52:06 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I'm not going to.
will I regret it tomorow morning? yes no
Kiwi Mountains
01:51:02 Kiwi
-HEE Click-
Kind of goes over the basic training & tracking concepts.
But as for HOW you track it, essentially you just assign a rider, and each week after training, you go see what bars(bars=traits) that they go up in, and note it down.
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:50:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I should go to bed.
it's 1:49 am.
i also don't want to
Kiwi Mountains
01:46:57 Kiwi
Dash has a really good blog on it, I'll go find it for you :)
Raptor Cross Ranch
01:43:17 Raptor
How do you track their training, sorry abt the questions
Kiwi Mountains
01:41:59 Kiwi
Horses have all traits, but what they're strong/weak in is something you can tell through tracking their training each week.
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:41:17 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
yes, you have to train them for a few irl weeks to see results
Raptor Cross Ranch
01:40:33 Raptor
Like the Intelligence, Scope, Movement, Speed, Strength, Heart
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:39:15 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
raptor
in which way do you mean?
Raptor Cross Ranch
01:28:07 Raptor
Can you see what traits your horses have?

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Minerva
03:05:22 Min
RIP Aussie
Aussie Wattles
02:52:43 Aussie
Omg I just accidentally skipped a ver achievable quest that woulda given me a medallion :(
Moonrose Magic
02:33:52 🎀 Diva
Go to Help - Game guide, it explains it pretty well
Reficul
02:28:28 Ref🌈
What are straws and embryos?
Tanglewood
02:26:11 Technically Tangle
Gem is so freaking cool. I have a super old piece of hers that I always look back on to see how far she's come - need to update it sometime though <3
Dandelion Farms
02:22:57 Sky/Dandy
Even after a few months I'm still obsessed with Gem arts. I'm so happy I got this set
Calela Eventing
02:21:40 Cali
Win
Petriphae is amazing! Not surprised at ALL
Autumn Leaf
02:05:40 ᏇᎥᏁ
-HEE Click-
Damn, DD has the whole AALB in hands
Rising Irish
01:59:34 RFS Thoroughbreds
I gotta work on this account this ones horrid
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:54:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
nevermind I'm doing it
night yall
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:52:06 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I'm not going to.
will I regret it tomorow morning? yes no
Kiwi Mountains
01:51:02 Kiwi
-HEE Click-
Kind of goes over the basic training & tracking concepts.
But as for HOW you track it, essentially you just assign a rider, and each week after training, you go see what bars(bars=traits) that they go up in, and note it down.
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:50:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I should go to bed.
it's 1:49 am.
i also don't want to
Kiwi Mountains
01:46:57 Kiwi
Dash has a really good blog on it, I'll go find it for you :)
Raptor Cross Ranch
01:43:17 Raptor
How do you track their training, sorry abt the questions
Kiwi Mountains
01:41:59 Kiwi
Horses have all traits, but what they're strong/weak in is something you can tell through tracking their training each week.
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:41:17 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
yes, you have to train them for a few irl weeks to see results
Raptor Cross Ranch
01:40:33 Raptor
Like the Intelligence, Scope, Movement, Speed, Strength, Heart
RFS Thoroughbreds
01:39:15 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
raptor
in which way do you mean?
Raptor Cross Ranch
01:28:07 Raptor
Can you see what traits your horses have?

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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