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Kashmir Ranch
12:46:06 Kashmir
looking for rp partners!! pm me! :D
Tenebris Hollow
12:45:06 Aris/Maki
Needed that Ven
Wispwillow Villa
12:42:13 Ven | KNN
In case anyone needs motivation to not capture today, I just used about 60 sherpa maps and scored one WEE and one EEE
Ravenwood Farm
12:41:23 Raven
You can check a box to fire all horseless riders in the rider's lounge
Whitewolf
12:40:45 Fang
But I’m ready for rollover. Hoping for some good enough for Red Hills art which I adore
Whitewolf
12:39:14 Fang
Life hasn’t been kind to me. Nor is it to anyone. Some weeks at work is just go go go (last week). It’s definitely hard to find motivation to spend time sorting crap on a game XD
Greenheart Stables
12:39:05 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Hey myth
Mythological
12:38:36 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Hey Gren
Whitewolf
12:38:19 Fang
This past month the BM has dealt with them and I just pay them. I’ll sort it when I get a clear headed moment, maybe one day before bed
Greenheart Stables
12:37:53 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Fang
Ah I understand that, ive been neglecting my show string myself since I got sick. Im sorting my riders now lol
Greenheart Stables
12:37:09 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Aw I killed chat lol
Whitewolf
12:37:09 Fang
Yes I’m aware to max out 10/rider and use eventing ones, let’s be honest it was nice and organized but I’ve just been having my barn manager reassign everyone. I’ve been bogged down in life. With no motivation for a few weeks.
It’s about time to sort them again. And I will when I have the time. Thanks for the advice.
Greenheart Stables
12:17:19 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Yeah you can maximize riders by shoving the max amount of horses onto them. And firing whoever doesn't have a horse. Its what I do and my rider fees are 400k+ but I make a 5mil profit a month
Shroom
12:12:50 
Especially Fang, like this is a Level 7 rider with no horses. You could fire her to save money for example. -HEE Click-
Fading Light Estate
11:54:07 Dark Sarcasm
just use eventing riders and consolidate your riders. youre wasting a lot of money on riders without horses
Astray
11:51:10 Stay |
-HEE Click-
Love music? Ever wanted to join an Idol Group? Come live the life in this new roleplay!
Rubygem-Chenya
11:50:39 Ruby/Cheshire
Thanks Astray
Whitewolf
11:50:39 Fang
I mean my riders are about 350-375k a week now and each day I make 100-150k. So basically it’s a never ending battle and I’m lucky if 200k is made in profit after everything :’D
Whitewolf
11:49:22 Fang
Yeah so are mine. And I hand enter
Guard Horseman Gang
11:49:09 GHG
I have 431 horses i can show

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Kashmir Ranch
12:46:06 Kashmir
looking for rp partners!! pm me! :D
Tenebris Hollow
12:45:06 Aris/Maki
Needed that Ven
Wispwillow Villa
12:42:13 Ven | KNN
In case anyone needs motivation to not capture today, I just used about 60 sherpa maps and scored one WEE and one EEE
Ravenwood Farm
12:41:23 Raven
You can check a box to fire all horseless riders in the rider's lounge
Whitewolf
12:40:45 Fang
But I’m ready for rollover. Hoping for some good enough for Red Hills art which I adore
Whitewolf
12:39:14 Fang
Life hasn’t been kind to me. Nor is it to anyone. Some weeks at work is just go go go (last week). It’s definitely hard to find motivation to spend time sorting crap on a game XD
Greenheart Stables
12:39:05 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Hey myth
Mythological
12:38:36 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Hey Gren
Whitewolf
12:38:19 Fang
This past month the BM has dealt with them and I just pay them. I’ll sort it when I get a clear headed moment, maybe one day before bed
Greenheart Stables
12:37:53 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Fang
Ah I understand that, ive been neglecting my show string myself since I got sick. Im sorting my riders now lol
Greenheart Stables
12:37:09 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Aw I killed chat lol
Whitewolf
12:37:09 Fang
Yes I’m aware to max out 10/rider and use eventing ones, let’s be honest it was nice and organized but I’ve just been having my barn manager reassign everyone. I’ve been bogged down in life. With no motivation for a few weeks.
It’s about time to sort them again. And I will when I have the time. Thanks for the advice.
Greenheart Stables
12:17:19 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Yeah you can maximize riders by shoving the max amount of horses onto them. And firing whoever doesn't have a horse. Its what I do and my rider fees are 400k+ but I make a 5mil profit a month
Shroom
12:12:50 
Especially Fang, like this is a Level 7 rider with no horses. You could fire her to save money for example. -HEE Click-
Fading Light Estate
11:54:07 Dark Sarcasm
just use eventing riders and consolidate your riders. youre wasting a lot of money on riders without horses
Astray
11:51:10 Stay |
-HEE Click-
Love music? Ever wanted to join an Idol Group? Come live the life in this new roleplay!
Rubygem-Chenya
11:50:39 Ruby/Cheshire
Thanks Astray
Whitewolf
11:50:39 Fang
I mean my riders are about 350-375k a week now and each day I make 100-150k. So basically it’s a never ending battle and I’m lucky if 200k is made in profit after everything :’D
Whitewolf
11:49:22 Fang
Yeah so are mine. And I hand enter
Guard Horseman Gang
11:49:09 GHG
I have 431 horses i can show

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


Darley Heights
 
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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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