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Beamng
10:18:46 Miles Vinuline/Beam
Ally,

What are you going to eat for breakfast?
Heartbeat Haven
10:18:14 Versa
Zulu was just screaming, and then sent himself into a flurry of wolf whistles. He thinks those are an intimidating noise. He's trying to chase the girls away from his treat bowl lol
Running R Ranch
10:15:42 RRR (Jo)
I'm afraid to use svens because they cost so much and I have a feeling my PONs wouldn't appreciate me using them xD
Jericho Stables
10:14:07 
To some people it is worth it, to others it isn't
MakeEm Fancy
10:13:49 Ally 💜
Well Im going to hop off to eat breakfast lol bye guys ^.^
Willow Grove
10:13:36 Stalker of Chat
Glacier
If youre using a strong mare and stud that match well, yes. Very much so
MakeEm Fancy
10:12:01 Ally 💜
Thank you! @lilly
Glacier Bay Cove
10:11:04 Glacier Kittens
Are Sven matches worth it
Ranch Lands Training
10:10:34 Lilly/PON Addict
My fingers are crossed for you Ally
MakeEm Fancy
10:10:17 Ally 💜
Thank you I need it lol @Willow
Vahana
10:09:55 Val
-HEE Click-

I am still amazed by this girl's Week 11 xD Some of my WEE combos are training better than my WWWs
Willow Grove
10:09:48 Stalker of Chat
Ally
Ohh good luck
Willow Grove
10:09:36 Stalker of Chat
Doing this +str and hoping its a filly as well
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
10:08:58 Ally 💜
Im doing two sven matches 😅 Im nervous
Circle Star RIDs
10:08:39 Granny C
I always stop capturing, when the funds go down to 500k. Got to leave something to build on.
Vixen Creek
10:08:07 Vixie
that's an interesting change from wk 4 to wk 8

-HEE Click-
Willow Grove
10:07:51 Stalker of Chat
Im hoping I can get through RO well enough. I have one sven match and 2 maidens I want to use medallions on x.x
Ranch Lands Training
10:07:10 Lilly/PON Addict
I could afford my RO but it would leave me pretty broke. I'm aiming to make 400k in the next 4 days to recover from the capture party
Glacier Bay Cove
10:06:08 Glacier Kittens
On capture day, I ran out of both Ebs and barn space
MakeEm Fancy
10:05:08 Ally 💜
Im down to 500k to save for RO and a jumping medallion

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Beamng
10:18:46 Miles Vinuline/Beam
Ally,

What are you going to eat for breakfast?
Heartbeat Haven
10:18:14 Versa
Zulu was just screaming, and then sent himself into a flurry of wolf whistles. He thinks those are an intimidating noise. He's trying to chase the girls away from his treat bowl lol
Running R Ranch
10:15:42 RRR (Jo)
I'm afraid to use svens because they cost so much and I have a feeling my PONs wouldn't appreciate me using them xD
Jericho Stables
10:14:07 
To some people it is worth it, to others it isn't
MakeEm Fancy
10:13:49 Ally 💜
Well Im going to hop off to eat breakfast lol bye guys ^.^
Willow Grove
10:13:36 Stalker of Chat
Glacier
If youre using a strong mare and stud that match well, yes. Very much so
MakeEm Fancy
10:12:01 Ally 💜
Thank you! @lilly
Glacier Bay Cove
10:11:04 Glacier Kittens
Are Sven matches worth it
Ranch Lands Training
10:10:34 Lilly/PON Addict
My fingers are crossed for you Ally
MakeEm Fancy
10:10:17 Ally 💜
Thank you I need it lol @Willow
Vahana
10:09:55 Val
-HEE Click-

I am still amazed by this girl's Week 11 xD Some of my WEE combos are training better than my WWWs
Willow Grove
10:09:48 Stalker of Chat
Ally
Ohh good luck
Willow Grove
10:09:36 Stalker of Chat
Doing this +str and hoping its a filly as well
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
10:08:58 Ally 💜
Im doing two sven matches 😅 Im nervous
Circle Star RIDs
10:08:39 Granny C
I always stop capturing, when the funds go down to 500k. Got to leave something to build on.
Vixen Creek
10:08:07 Vixie
that's an interesting change from wk 4 to wk 8

-HEE Click-
Willow Grove
10:07:51 Stalker of Chat
Im hoping I can get through RO well enough. I have one sven match and 2 maidens I want to use medallions on x.x
Ranch Lands Training
10:07:10 Lilly/PON Addict
I could afford my RO but it would leave me pretty broke. I'm aiming to make 400k in the next 4 days to recover from the capture party
Glacier Bay Cove
10:06:08 Glacier Kittens
On capture day, I ran out of both Ebs and barn space
MakeEm Fancy
10:05:08 Ally 💜
Im down to 500k to save for RO and a jumping medallion

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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