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Crescent Estate
08:49:36 River / Crescent
What colors do y'all like to see in adoptables?
Laika Groves
08:38:05 Laika
8 fullbodies on my to-do list u-u
Elephant Walk Stable
08:36:14 Chey
That's how my mom was. Everyone knew not to fuck with her, or her kid. She could get real crazy real fast
QualitySH
08:32:33 
My mom's job was advocating for adults with disabilities. A strong passion for my mom since her sister growing up. My mom taught me to have a backbone when necessary.
QualitySH
08:28:57 
For real lucky. Im now 23 and my oldest just graduated kindergarten. I will definitely be the mom the school board doesnt wanna make angry. I will advocate for my children
Elephant Walk Stable
08:27:43 Chey
*him
Elephant Walk Stable
08:27:34 Chey
My accountant is not amused by me batting my eyelashes at thim... Honestly buddy, I wouldn't be either
Lucky Ranch
08:25:30 luhckeigh
lol I’m so glad all that’s over I don’t understand anyone who says high school was the best time in their lives or best years, even my shittiest times since then have still not been as bad lol
Lucky Ranch
08:24:06 luhckeigh
Dude yes they never respected people’s 504s but would turn a blind eye to the kids doing lines in the bathroom like make it make sense
One of my friends needed to take tests in a separate room to concentrate and they got shit about it every time it was awful
Elephant Walk Stable
08:24:05 Chey
SH that's so shitty. At least the principal didn't give you any punishments
iiSea
08:15:48 Sierra
my WWW boy grew up so pretty
Kryptonite Equines
08:15:35 
Wild Bay Gene!
-HEE Click-
QualitySH
08:14:55 
I dislike anyone in the school district that wanted to take power over me. I had a 504plan in school because of my ADHD. Im allowed a few extra mins to gather my stuff before the next class. So right before lunch ended I went to gather my stuff I got stopped, humiliated and sent to the office all because my other class mates were throwing food she violated my 504plan. I didn't listed to hear and went to gather my stuff. She got so mad. Principal heard my story and let me go no punishments
Lucky Ranch
08:13:02 luhckeigh
that’s insane ya glad you held your ground
QualitySH
08:10:45 
I only had one teacher who tried to take my phone. I wouldn't hand it over so I got sent to the office. All over texting my mom in class about a health thing. I definitely held my ground
Lucky Ranch
08:10:39 luhckeigh
But I also didn’t have it half the time lol it was god knows where soo can’t really take something I don’t have
Lucky Ranch
08:07:17 luhckeigh
They were just happy I showed up though lol I rarely got bothered about my phone
Breaker Bay EQ
08:06:48 Junie
Where I live the schools just got a lot stricter about it too. We used to be able to use them in much and study hall but now they’re completely banned
Whitewolf
08:06:14 Fang
Adult life is not one I wish upon anyone under 18 lol
Lucky Ranch
08:05:42 luhckeigh
I never understood the hand over your phone thing like unless a student is distracted by it or disruptive there’s no reason to take it and many need to be in contact with family or whatever, everyone’s situation is different

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Crescent Estate
08:49:36 River / Crescent
What colors do y'all like to see in adoptables?
Laika Groves
08:38:05 Laika
8 fullbodies on my to-do list u-u
Elephant Walk Stable
08:36:14 Chey
That's how my mom was. Everyone knew not to fuck with her, or her kid. She could get real crazy real fast
QualitySH
08:32:33 
My mom's job was advocating for adults with disabilities. A strong passion for my mom since her sister growing up. My mom taught me to have a backbone when necessary.
QualitySH
08:28:57 
For real lucky. Im now 23 and my oldest just graduated kindergarten. I will definitely be the mom the school board doesnt wanna make angry. I will advocate for my children
Elephant Walk Stable
08:27:43 Chey
*him
Elephant Walk Stable
08:27:34 Chey
My accountant is not amused by me batting my eyelashes at thim... Honestly buddy, I wouldn't be either
Lucky Ranch
08:25:30 luhckeigh
lol I’m so glad all that’s over I don’t understand anyone who says high school was the best time in their lives or best years, even my shittiest times since then have still not been as bad lol
Lucky Ranch
08:24:06 luhckeigh
Dude yes they never respected people’s 504s but would turn a blind eye to the kids doing lines in the bathroom like make it make sense
One of my friends needed to take tests in a separate room to concentrate and they got shit about it every time it was awful
Elephant Walk Stable
08:24:05 Chey
SH that's so shitty. At least the principal didn't give you any punishments
iiSea
08:15:48 Sierra
my WWW boy grew up so pretty
Kryptonite Equines
08:15:35 
Wild Bay Gene!
-HEE Click-
QualitySH
08:14:55 
I dislike anyone in the school district that wanted to take power over me. I had a 504plan in school because of my ADHD. Im allowed a few extra mins to gather my stuff before the next class. So right before lunch ended I went to gather my stuff I got stopped, humiliated and sent to the office all because my other class mates were throwing food she violated my 504plan. I didn't listed to hear and went to gather my stuff. She got so mad. Principal heard my story and let me go no punishments
Lucky Ranch
08:13:02 luhckeigh
that’s insane ya glad you held your ground
QualitySH
08:10:45 
I only had one teacher who tried to take my phone. I wouldn't hand it over so I got sent to the office. All over texting my mom in class about a health thing. I definitely held my ground
Lucky Ranch
08:10:39 luhckeigh
But I also didn’t have it half the time lol it was god knows where soo can’t really take something I don’t have
Lucky Ranch
08:07:17 luhckeigh
They were just happy I showed up though lol I rarely got bothered about my phone
Breaker Bay EQ
08:06:48 Junie
Where I live the schools just got a lot stricter about it too. We used to be able to use them in much and study hall but now they’re completely banned
Whitewolf
08:06:14 Fang
Adult life is not one I wish upon anyone under 18 lol
Lucky Ranch
08:05:42 luhckeigh
I never understood the hand over your phone thing like unless a student is distracted by it or disruptive there’s no reason to take it and many need to be in contact with family or whatever, everyone’s situation is different

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


Moonlight Stud
 
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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


Darley Heights
 
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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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