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maple oh no
Cataclysm
02:11:51 Maple Syrup ✨
Hey chat
My kitten won't let me sleep and its 2am lol
All Breeds
02:11:15 Fawn
It will be as hubby is making me my favorite dinner and dessert :D
Nightingales Ridge
01:50:11 𔓘 Issy
I hope you have a happier birthday despite that! :(
Gypsy Family Farm
01:39:26 
Oh Fawn that SUCKS.
Siren Sound Estates
01:38:07 S҉ Sem
Oh Ali! Poor you! Happy birthday nonthless ♡
Gypsy Family Farm
01:37:50 
I'd about kill for someone sinking an elbow into my traps right now. ;)
All Breeds
01:36:58 Fawn
What a way to start off my birthday. Was on my way home and got a flat tire :')
Siren Sound Estates
01:36:41 S҉ Sem
I don't do rubbing, only very good massages.
Gypsy Family Farm
01:35:32 
Rub my back?
Siren Sound Estates
01:35:11 S҉ Sem
I've tested all my bravery foals. I've shown everyone for the week.
.... what do I do now?! xD
Moonland And Elites
01:29:42 M&E, Loony
Anyhow I am off to go finish preparing so I hope everyone has a lovely day/night! :)
Moonland And Elites
01:27:38 M&E, Loony
Booked it way ahead of time so it was nice and cheap too for the hotel and the flights
Cadence Farms
01:26:13 evebot
Loony, that sounds exciting! I'm envious!
Moonland And Elites
01:23:28 M&E, Loony
Thanks Eve! first time leaving my part of Australia too so there's gonna be many photos and activities haha
Cadence Farms
01:21:07 evebot
Loony, have fun! First time on a plane is very memorable.
Hobo Queens Farm
01:20:29 Her Majesty
Yep, my best friends dog will literally tear a hole in the wall of the house to escape a bang or boom. It's horrible how scared they get.
Cadence Farms
01:18:50 evebot
Majesty, I love a good thunderstorm also! Good for the garden. Just not good for my dog.
Moonland And Elites
01:18:34 M&E, Loony
Actually a bit windy in Australia at the moment and i'm not excited about it because it's my first time flying in an plane tonight
Cadence Farms
01:17:47 evebot
I've been teaching him to go into his crate when he's scared. He's getting better at it. It's in a lower level basement type room. Very insulated from the thunder.

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02:17:11 
maple oh no
Cataclysm
02:11:51 Maple Syrup ✨
Hey chat
My kitten won't let me sleep and its 2am lol
All Breeds
02:11:15 Fawn
It will be as hubby is making me my favorite dinner and dessert :D
Nightingales Ridge
01:50:11 𔓘 Issy
I hope you have a happier birthday despite that! :(
Gypsy Family Farm
01:39:26 
Oh Fawn that SUCKS.
Siren Sound Estates
01:38:07 S҉ Sem
Oh Ali! Poor you! Happy birthday nonthless ♡
Gypsy Family Farm
01:37:50 
I'd about kill for someone sinking an elbow into my traps right now. ;)
All Breeds
01:36:58 Fawn
What a way to start off my birthday. Was on my way home and got a flat tire :')
Siren Sound Estates
01:36:41 S҉ Sem
I don't do rubbing, only very good massages.
Gypsy Family Farm
01:35:32 
Rub my back?
Siren Sound Estates
01:35:11 S҉ Sem
I've tested all my bravery foals. I've shown everyone for the week.
.... what do I do now?! xD
Moonland And Elites
01:29:42 M&E, Loony
Anyhow I am off to go finish preparing so I hope everyone has a lovely day/night! :)
Moonland And Elites
01:27:38 M&E, Loony
Booked it way ahead of time so it was nice and cheap too for the hotel and the flights
Cadence Farms
01:26:13 evebot
Loony, that sounds exciting! I'm envious!
Moonland And Elites
01:23:28 M&E, Loony
Thanks Eve! first time leaving my part of Australia too so there's gonna be many photos and activities haha
Cadence Farms
01:21:07 evebot
Loony, have fun! First time on a plane is very memorable.
Hobo Queens Farm
01:20:29 Her Majesty
Yep, my best friends dog will literally tear a hole in the wall of the house to escape a bang or boom. It's horrible how scared they get.
Cadence Farms
01:18:50 evebot
Majesty, I love a good thunderstorm also! Good for the garden. Just not good for my dog.
Moonland And Elites
01:18:34 M&E, Loony
Actually a bit windy in Australia at the moment and i'm not excited about it because it's my first time flying in an plane tonight
Cadence Farms
01:17:47 evebot
I've been teaching him to go into his crate when he's scared. He's getting better at it. It's in a lower level basement type room. Very insulated from the thunder.

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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