Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 199   Season: Winter   
$: 0
Forecast: Overcast and Calm
Forecast:
Fri 03:18pm  
Stables Online:  137 
Chatbox
Embervale Acres
03:18:21 Solar Phoenix
I love fodder babies lol
-HEE Click-
ShiningStar Stables
03:18:19 Chey / Star
Raven
Have you looked at Eury's showing guide? It helped me alot
Gaelic Gladiacres
03:17:33 Gladius
I think it depends if they're AD or SD Raven? but don't quote me on that
Ravenmoon Estate
03:16:47 Raven
Wait so you don't show in what they're highest is at? I've been putting them in shows based off the training showing whatever they've been good in.
Beamng
03:16:45 Miles Vinuline/Beam
I'm glade you're getting better. I'm going great. Finished my homework. I'm still working on my research paper.
Yelreb Yard
03:15:57 Yel
Is it better to train with a schoolmaster than enrolling in a clinic or is the only difference the cost?
Rubygem-Chenya
03:15:33 Ruby/Cheshire
How about you?
Rubygem-Chenya
03:15:25 Ruby/Cheshire
Beam
I'm doing well, my cold is finally getting over with.
Beamng
03:14:49 Miles Vinuline/Beam
Hi, Ruby! How are you doing?
Rubygem-Chenya
03:14:33 Ruby/Cheshire
Hi Beam
Nightingales Ridge
03:14:23 Issy
Because she is beginner in level 2, she needs more training before she will her next good showing
Gaelic Gladiacres
03:14:12 Gladius
star you should be able to sort the barn by gender
Beamng
03:14:09 Miles Vinuline/Beam
Just finished the book, Jigsaw, by Johnathan Kellerman. It's a great book.
Ravenmoon Estate
03:14:00 Raven
Yees
Nightingales Ridge
03:13:42 Issy
She's now leveled 2 XC so you wouldn't show her in that again. You would try in jumping or dressage
Stardust Stables LLC
03:13:35 star
My stallions are all mixed in with my mares and I can barely find the stallions T.T
Nightingales Ridge
03:13:14 Issy
Raven see this -HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
03:12:19 Ruby/Cheshire
-HEE Click-
This is what happens when I try to do a breed quest I get something I don't need but it too pretty to Free Range
TsukiMoon
03:12:08 
I’m looking forward to matching these 2 :
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Horseplus
03:11:58 
Weird😭😭

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat
Quests

Embark on a Quest.

Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Embervale Acres
03:18:21 Solar Phoenix
I love fodder babies lol
-HEE Click-
ShiningStar Stables
03:18:19 Chey / Star
Raven
Have you looked at Eury's showing guide? It helped me alot
Gaelic Gladiacres
03:17:33 Gladius
I think it depends if they're AD or SD Raven? but don't quote me on that
Ravenmoon Estate
03:16:47 Raven
Wait so you don't show in what they're highest is at? I've been putting them in shows based off the training showing whatever they've been good in.
Beamng
03:16:45 Miles Vinuline/Beam
I'm glade you're getting better. I'm going great. Finished my homework. I'm still working on my research paper.
Yelreb Yard
03:15:57 Yel
Is it better to train with a schoolmaster than enrolling in a clinic or is the only difference the cost?
Rubygem-Chenya
03:15:33 Ruby/Cheshire
How about you?
Rubygem-Chenya
03:15:25 Ruby/Cheshire
Beam
I'm doing well, my cold is finally getting over with.
Beamng
03:14:49 Miles Vinuline/Beam
Hi, Ruby! How are you doing?
Rubygem-Chenya
03:14:33 Ruby/Cheshire
Hi Beam
Nightingales Ridge
03:14:23 Issy
Because she is beginner in level 2, she needs more training before she will her next good showing
Gaelic Gladiacres
03:14:12 Gladius
star you should be able to sort the barn by gender
Beamng
03:14:09 Miles Vinuline/Beam
Just finished the book, Jigsaw, by Johnathan Kellerman. It's a great book.
Ravenmoon Estate
03:14:00 Raven
Yees
Nightingales Ridge
03:13:42 Issy
She's now leveled 2 XC so you wouldn't show her in that again. You would try in jumping or dressage
Stardust Stables LLC
03:13:35 star
My stallions are all mixed in with my mares and I can barely find the stallions T.T
Nightingales Ridge
03:13:14 Issy
Raven see this -HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
03:12:19 Ruby/Cheshire
-HEE Click-
This is what happens when I try to do a breed quest I get something I don't need but it too pretty to Free Range
TsukiMoon
03:12:08 
I’m looking forward to matching these 2 :
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Horseplus
03:11:58 
Weird😭😭

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Rider's Lounge > Writer's Nook
   1    2 

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


Mediterranean
 
Posts: 1148
#488835
Give Award
Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


Moonlight Stud
 
Posts: 2880
#488836
Give Award
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


Mediterranean
 
Posts: 1148
#488837
Give Award


Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


The Old Gods
 
Posts: 1147
#488842
Give Award
Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#488850
Give Award
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

Trivia Team
 
Posts: 4034
#488886
Give Award
Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
Posts: 5268
#489267
Give Award
When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


Darley Heights
 
Posts: 806
#489597
Give Award
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
Posts: 1147
#489602
Give Award


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#490356
Give Award


Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

Forums > Rider's Lounge > Writer's Nook
   1    2 

Refresh