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Guinness Hollow
02:04:48 Dimmed | RID
She has similar strength/weakness as Felice
Guinness Hollow
02:04:19 Dimmed | RID
Shove her with Capps boy lil
Guinness Hollow
02:02:20 Dimmed | RID
Oh! Tosk I shall fix that I promise
Equile
02:00:56 Tosk's RID
Also she needs a date for her second embryo
Equile
02:00:29 Tosk's RID
Someone is looking forward to her artsie
-HEE Click- x3
Guinness Hollow
02:00:28 Dimmed | RID
Haha you're not wrong though 😭
Minerva
02:00:00 Min
KPH I'd defs go Runfell then- especially if you can Scp glass/J med it
Rainview
01:59:45 Irish Capp
Honestly, I think RF will always be a turd one way or another XD
Guinness Hollow
01:59:29 Dimmed | RID
She just needs more chances Tosky
Guinness Hollow
01:59:00 Dimmed | RID
Capp, does that work out well? I try to do that too but it doesn't always match up in training
Equile
01:58:53 Tosk's RID
Granted, with her wk 11 I still have hopes for jer.
Guinness Hollow
01:58:20 Dimmed | RID
That lace though 😍😍

I wanted to reroll her but her eyes 🥲
Tenebris Hollow
01:57:43 Aris/Maki
Thanks capp!
Equile
01:57:36 Tosk's RID
I see Bambi is playing favorites with you, Dimmeh xD
That's m brat out of her

-HEE Click-
Rainview
01:57:24 Irish Capp
Idk Im more of a matching based on discipline strength now XD
Guinness Hollow
01:56:21 Dimmed | RID
She doesn't match him well though 😭
Rainview
01:55:59 Irish Capp
The #1 WB is strong in int
ghost light stables
01:55:43 Toaster rapcoon
Min,
If your speaking to me, my only requirements are a TB or X WWW. A ABLB stud would be nice but it doesn't matter much :3
Tenebris Hollow
01:54:41 Aris/Maki
Anyone know any good Wb studs that are strong int?
Cappuccino
01:50:23 Heyy it's Capp
OMG Dimmy she's gorgeous!! Send her to Wise Bandit - hes the highest AB D boy

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Guinness Hollow
02:04:48 Dimmed | RID
She has similar strength/weakness as Felice
Guinness Hollow
02:04:19 Dimmed | RID
Shove her with Capps boy lil
Guinness Hollow
02:02:20 Dimmed | RID
Oh! Tosk I shall fix that I promise
Equile
02:00:56 Tosk's RID
Also she needs a date for her second embryo
Equile
02:00:29 Tosk's RID
Someone is looking forward to her artsie
-HEE Click- x3
Guinness Hollow
02:00:28 Dimmed | RID
Haha you're not wrong though 😭
Minerva
02:00:00 Min
KPH I'd defs go Runfell then- especially if you can Scp glass/J med it
Rainview
01:59:45 Irish Capp
Honestly, I think RF will always be a turd one way or another XD
Guinness Hollow
01:59:29 Dimmed | RID
She just needs more chances Tosky
Guinness Hollow
01:59:00 Dimmed | RID
Capp, does that work out well? I try to do that too but it doesn't always match up in training
Equile
01:58:53 Tosk's RID
Granted, with her wk 11 I still have hopes for jer.
Guinness Hollow
01:58:20 Dimmed | RID
That lace though 😍😍

I wanted to reroll her but her eyes 🥲
Tenebris Hollow
01:57:43 Aris/Maki
Thanks capp!
Equile
01:57:36 Tosk's RID
I see Bambi is playing favorites with you, Dimmeh xD
That's m brat out of her

-HEE Click-
Rainview
01:57:24 Irish Capp
Idk Im more of a matching based on discipline strength now XD
Guinness Hollow
01:56:21 Dimmed | RID
She doesn't match him well though 😭
Rainview
01:55:59 Irish Capp
The #1 WB is strong in int
ghost light stables
01:55:43 Toaster rapcoon
Min,
If your speaking to me, my only requirements are a TB or X WWW. A ABLB stud would be nice but it doesn't matter much :3
Tenebris Hollow
01:54:41 Aris/Maki
Anyone know any good Wb studs that are strong int?
Cappuccino
01:50:23 Heyy it's Capp
OMG Dimmy she's gorgeous!! Send her to Wise Bandit - hes the highest AB D boy

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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