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BMR Sporthorses
12:06:57 
accountants can gift you?? my accountant must be greedy then he's never gifted me lol
QualitySH
12:05:48 
My accountant gifted me 4 silver horse captures lol. Man must not like silver horses lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:59:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
lololol
Agora
11:58:28 stormy
My car was lucky to get a full bath always just a wheel rinse from all the mud build up coming from being on a dirt road *-* a simple was always turned into a polish and wax no matter what xD
Beamng
11:58:12 Beam
Mason Long. I haven't seen him for a long time. I first thought he was dead because of an news article, but then I noticed it said Chief. He's a lieutenant. I almost got in trouble with Mason. Major Lieutenant had to come, but everything has worked out. Mason Long 💕
KPH Equestrian
11:57:14 Rapcoon | Jester
Fref
-YT Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:56:13 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
lmaoooo
stormy
my dad could never, I remember as a kid i'd be like; wake up a 7:00, feed the animals, go find pop out in the shop. washing his truck. 12pm. washing his truck. 8pm. 'mom made dinner' washing his truck 'tell her I'll be in in a minute' xD
Beamng
11:56:03 Beam
Mason knows me really well. He knows if it is me even though I had different oufits on and back away from him.
KPH Equestrian
11:54:51 Rapcoon | Jester
Fref
Oh thats how I dry mine. I just put on a ghillie suit and rotate
Beamng
11:54:41 Beam
That sounds like so much fun!
But, I may get arrested with a helicopter in my neighborhood. I live closer outskirts of the town. The last thing I want is to see Officer Mason Long wanting to talk to me.
Agora
11:54:27 stormy
Washing my TDI is a whole days work xD and it’s a small car. I don’t bother with the roof though if I’m being honest I’m short and if I can’t see it it’s not my problem lmao
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:51:57 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
beam
hear me out when I suggest this instead of a stool: -YT Click-
Beamng
11:51:42 Beam
I just rub with my towel. It takes me about the half of a day.
Beamng
11:50:56 Beam
I use a towel, soap, and a water bucket. I have to remember not to use too much soap, One extra extra small drop and everything is very soapy.
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:50:48 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
kph
to dry it off, drying it off with so can prevent spots from forming making the car looking much better. For washing it I use a mitt and if there's anything stuck then I carefully go in with a razorblade.
KPH Equestrian
11:48:59 Rapcoon | Jester
Wait you use a car towel? Man I've been doing it wrong.
Didn't realize I wasnt supposed to soap myself up and roll around on the car. Probably would've saved me quite a few bruises
Beamng
11:48:11 Beam
I can't reach the top of a crown vic while cleaning. I have to stand on a stool.
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:47:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
water and dawn dish soap plus a car towel, wax, tire brush, tire cleaner
Beamng
11:46:46 Beam
That sounds close.
Beamng
11:46:34 Beam
I'm not a car mechanic. Right now, I'm learning how to clean a car.

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BMR Sporthorses
12:06:57 
accountants can gift you?? my accountant must be greedy then he's never gifted me lol
QualitySH
12:05:48 
My accountant gifted me 4 silver horse captures lol. Man must not like silver horses lol
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:59:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
lololol
Agora
11:58:28 stormy
My car was lucky to get a full bath always just a wheel rinse from all the mud build up coming from being on a dirt road *-* a simple was always turned into a polish and wax no matter what xD
Beamng
11:58:12 Beam
Mason Long. I haven't seen him for a long time. I first thought he was dead because of an news article, but then I noticed it said Chief. He's a lieutenant. I almost got in trouble with Mason. Major Lieutenant had to come, but everything has worked out. Mason Long 💕
KPH Equestrian
11:57:14 Rapcoon | Jester
Fref
-YT Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:56:13 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
lmaoooo
stormy
my dad could never, I remember as a kid i'd be like; wake up a 7:00, feed the animals, go find pop out in the shop. washing his truck. 12pm. washing his truck. 8pm. 'mom made dinner' washing his truck 'tell her I'll be in in a minute' xD
Beamng
11:56:03 Beam
Mason knows me really well. He knows if it is me even though I had different oufits on and back away from him.
KPH Equestrian
11:54:51 Rapcoon | Jester
Fref
Oh thats how I dry mine. I just put on a ghillie suit and rotate
Beamng
11:54:41 Beam
That sounds like so much fun!
But, I may get arrested with a helicopter in my neighborhood. I live closer outskirts of the town. The last thing I want is to see Officer Mason Long wanting to talk to me.
Agora
11:54:27 stormy
Washing my TDI is a whole days work xD and it’s a small car. I don’t bother with the roof though if I’m being honest I’m short and if I can’t see it it’s not my problem lmao
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:51:57 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
beam
hear me out when I suggest this instead of a stool: -YT Click-
Beamng
11:51:42 Beam
I just rub with my towel. It takes me about the half of a day.
Beamng
11:50:56 Beam
I use a towel, soap, and a water bucket. I have to remember not to use too much soap, One extra extra small drop and everything is very soapy.
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:50:48 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
kph
to dry it off, drying it off with so can prevent spots from forming making the car looking much better. For washing it I use a mitt and if there's anything stuck then I carefully go in with a razorblade.
KPH Equestrian
11:48:59 Rapcoon | Jester
Wait you use a car towel? Man I've been doing it wrong.
Didn't realize I wasnt supposed to soap myself up and roll around on the car. Probably would've saved me quite a few bruises
Beamng
11:48:11 Beam
I can't reach the top of a crown vic while cleaning. I have to stand on a stool.
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:47:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
water and dawn dish soap plus a car towel, wax, tire brush, tire cleaner
Beamng
11:46:46 Beam
That sounds close.
Beamng
11:46:34 Beam
I'm not a car mechanic. Right now, I'm learning how to clean a car.

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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