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Nightingales Ridge
04:17:43 𔓘 Issy
Aha cuzzie bro <3
Ravenwood Farm
04:16:30 Raven
Here come the corpse mail 3:
Red Hill Hollow
04:13:12 Red, Hollow
Hahah ty Issy
My cousie bro ;) sweet as
Red Hill Hollow
04:12:41 Red, Hollow
I’m sorry you went through that Issy, that’s horrible. I’m glad you had your friend there for you <3
And thank you all so much for being here, you’re all so amazing <3
Ravenwood Farm
04:12:04 Raven
Sounds like you have some good plans, Red! You've got this, hang in there <3
Nightingales Ridge
04:11:32 𔓘 Issy
Aussie to kiwi you're my honorary cousin
Nightingales Ridge
04:10:12 𔓘 Issy
You've sooo got this Red <3
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:10:10 Ash
Just sharing to show it can all work out. Feeling like you have no options sucks
Nightingales Ridge
04:09:36 𔓘 Issy
After my intense break up (they cheated and left me for our mutual friend) I was lucky that i reached out to a friend of a friend with a spare room and he let me stay while I gained my feet. 2 years later we became super good friends and I really value the friendship.
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:08:41 Ash
You’ve got this Red 💪
Red Hill Hollow
04:08:10 Red, Hollow
Awh that’s lovely Ash, I’m so glad it worked out for you <3
Red Hill Hollow
04:07:46 Red, Hollow
Issy, after this year I have one year left. It’s just tricky with work bc I can’t drive and then this job is convenient with uni. I’d honestly love to move back home and my parents would let me but there’s nothing for me in my home town. Population of less than 1000, with only 1 main road. I’ll be ok, I think I just need to finish uni, get a big girl job and then move on
Nightingales Ridge
04:06:55 𔓘 Issy
Ugh really is sticky situation mate I'm sorry. You're in my prayers :c
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:05:58 Ash
When I split up with my ex, I was freaking out thinking I’d have to quit my job (we lived in an expensive city) and relocate. Ended up staying in that city, in a house-share for a year… then met my now fiancé and moved in with them!
Red Hill Hollow
04:05:50 Red, Hollow
Yeah definitely Ash. He’s throwing a tantrum right now so I’m just fed up.
But thank you so much for being so sweet <3
Nightingales Ridge
04:05:45 𔓘 Issy
Have you been looking at alternative work you could possibly do? How much longer do you have at university
Ravenwood Farm
04:05:22 Raven
Red
Oh D: that is definitely a tough situation, I'm so sorry. It makes a lot of sense that someone would stay when the consequences of ending things are like that
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:03:48 Ash
It is extra difficult when you live together and your lives are so intertwined. I’ve been there and it’s hard, sending you good energy <3
Red Hill Hollow
03:59:39 Red, Hollow
Raven,
Sometimes he doesn’t even notice when I cry in front of him. It wasn’t like this in the beginning but now we’ve been together for almost 2 years and I live with him. If we were to break up I’d be homeless and jobless and I’d have to drop out of uni. So it’s a tough situation
Tiluu
03:56:28 Honey
4:15 Game time

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Nightingales Ridge
04:17:43 𔓘 Issy
Aha cuzzie bro <3
Ravenwood Farm
04:16:30 Raven
Here come the corpse mail 3:
Red Hill Hollow
04:13:12 Red, Hollow
Hahah ty Issy
My cousie bro ;) sweet as
Red Hill Hollow
04:12:41 Red, Hollow
I’m sorry you went through that Issy, that’s horrible. I’m glad you had your friend there for you <3
And thank you all so much for being here, you’re all so amazing <3
Ravenwood Farm
04:12:04 Raven
Sounds like you have some good plans, Red! You've got this, hang in there <3
Nightingales Ridge
04:11:32 𔓘 Issy
Aussie to kiwi you're my honorary cousin
Nightingales Ridge
04:10:12 𔓘 Issy
You've sooo got this Red <3
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:10:10 Ash
Just sharing to show it can all work out. Feeling like you have no options sucks
Nightingales Ridge
04:09:36 𔓘 Issy
After my intense break up (they cheated and left me for our mutual friend) I was lucky that i reached out to a friend of a friend with a spare room and he let me stay while I gained my feet. 2 years later we became super good friends and I really value the friendship.
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:08:41 Ash
You’ve got this Red 💪
Red Hill Hollow
04:08:10 Red, Hollow
Awh that’s lovely Ash, I’m so glad it worked out for you <3
Red Hill Hollow
04:07:46 Red, Hollow
Issy, after this year I have one year left. It’s just tricky with work bc I can’t drive and then this job is convenient with uni. I’d honestly love to move back home and my parents would let me but there’s nothing for me in my home town. Population of less than 1000, with only 1 main road. I’ll be ok, I think I just need to finish uni, get a big girl job and then move on
Nightingales Ridge
04:06:55 𔓘 Issy
Ugh really is sticky situation mate I'm sorry. You're in my prayers :c
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:05:58 Ash
When I split up with my ex, I was freaking out thinking I’d have to quit my job (we lived in an expensive city) and relocate. Ended up staying in that city, in a house-share for a year… then met my now fiancé and moved in with them!
Red Hill Hollow
04:05:50 Red, Hollow
Yeah definitely Ash. He’s throwing a tantrum right now so I’m just fed up.
But thank you so much for being so sweet <3
Nightingales Ridge
04:05:45 𔓘 Issy
Have you been looking at alternative work you could possibly do? How much longer do you have at university
Ravenwood Farm
04:05:22 Raven
Red
Oh D: that is definitely a tough situation, I'm so sorry. It makes a lot of sense that someone would stay when the consequences of ending things are like that
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:03:48 Ash
It is extra difficult when you live together and your lives are so intertwined. I’ve been there and it’s hard, sending you good energy <3
Red Hill Hollow
03:59:39 Red, Hollow
Raven,
Sometimes he doesn’t even notice when I cry in front of him. It wasn’t like this in the beginning but now we’ve been together for almost 2 years and I live with him. If we were to break up I’d be homeless and jobless and I’d have to drop out of uni. So it’s a tough situation
Tiluu
03:56:28 Honey
4:15 Game time

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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