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The Undercity
04:57:15 Dory
I need to do this project but I have so many ideas for art running through my head
ShiningStar Stables
04:57:14 Chey / Star
Thoughts on this?
I'm not done yet, obviously lol
-Click-
Echo Creek
04:55:45 Echo | River
My favorite part is adding the shinee xD
Bug in a Rug
04:53:55 Bug | Flea | KPH
Love love lovee the forelock 👀 nice and defined and shiny and just *chefs kiss*
Echo Creek
04:52:40 Echo | River
Opinions on the hair? I only have the forelock semi done but like-
Bug in a Rug
04:52:27 Bug | Flea | KPH
Of course!<3
Echo Creek
04:52:10 Echo | River
KPH
Okay thank you! and good to know :)
Bug in a Rug
04:51:13 Bug | Flea | KPH
Yesss very nice :D
You do gotta be careful when doing recolors to a lighter color like that though, as its really easy to lose detail x'D I reccomend using a medium/large somewhat soft brush and a dark brown and just bringing back some larger shadows and definition:3
Echo Creek
04:48:07 Echo | River
KPH
Did I do itt? -Click-
KPH Equestrian
04:43:07 Rapcoon | Jester
Ok so make a clipping layer over the horse and fill it in with a large soft brush and a light orangey brown, focusing on the greenest parts of the horse like the belly.
Set it to color (or maybe overlay if you want),play with the opacity, and whabam 😎
Echo Creek
04:40:22 Echo | River
KPH
Ibis ( without pro )
KPH Equestrian
04:39:42 Rapcoon | Jester
I got you😘
What program are you using?
Echo Creek
04:38:54 Echo | River
KPH
Teach me your ways xD
KPH Equestrian
04:37:05 Rapcoon | Jester
Lol echo but its so easy xD
Echo Creek
04:26:48 Echo | River
I need to get rid of that green hue from the horse but I'm too lazy to do it right now :/ -Click-
Boulder Creek
04:13:08 
Adventures in Online Dating:
This guy wants to meet up when it's downpouring and lots of sky grumbling overhead.
I have to take a shower but I don't think it'll matter if I end up soaked.
And he wants to go some place twenty minutes away.
Team Mum said no - maybe the park that's ten minutes away or the mall.
And an airtag on your person at all times when meeting strangers.
Find the bits that are left of me.
Jericho Stables
04:05:25 
I feel like death warmed over 🤧
Dash and Duchess
03:58:59 DD | ~Squizard~
(which only shows on gene tests so it wouldn't appear in her color description)
Jericho Stables
03:58:45 
The black is probably sooty. And the spots are from the patterns…
Dash and Duchess
03:58:19 DD | ~Squizard~
lyra, could be sooty :)

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The Undercity
04:57:15 Dory
I need to do this project but I have so many ideas for art running through my head
ShiningStar Stables
04:57:14 Chey / Star
Thoughts on this?
I'm not done yet, obviously lol
-Click-
Echo Creek
04:55:45 Echo | River
My favorite part is adding the shinee xD
Bug in a Rug
04:53:55 Bug | Flea | KPH
Love love lovee the forelock 👀 nice and defined and shiny and just *chefs kiss*
Echo Creek
04:52:40 Echo | River
Opinions on the hair? I only have the forelock semi done but like-
Bug in a Rug
04:52:27 Bug | Flea | KPH
Of course!<3
Echo Creek
04:52:10 Echo | River
KPH
Okay thank you! and good to know :)
Bug in a Rug
04:51:13 Bug | Flea | KPH
Yesss very nice :D
You do gotta be careful when doing recolors to a lighter color like that though, as its really easy to lose detail x'D I reccomend using a medium/large somewhat soft brush and a dark brown and just bringing back some larger shadows and definition:3
Echo Creek
04:48:07 Echo | River
KPH
Did I do itt? -Click-
KPH Equestrian
04:43:07 Rapcoon | Jester
Ok so make a clipping layer over the horse and fill it in with a large soft brush and a light orangey brown, focusing on the greenest parts of the horse like the belly.
Set it to color (or maybe overlay if you want),play with the opacity, and whabam 😎
Echo Creek
04:40:22 Echo | River
KPH
Ibis ( without pro )
KPH Equestrian
04:39:42 Rapcoon | Jester
I got you😘
What program are you using?
Echo Creek
04:38:54 Echo | River
KPH
Teach me your ways xD
KPH Equestrian
04:37:05 Rapcoon | Jester
Lol echo but its so easy xD
Echo Creek
04:26:48 Echo | River
I need to get rid of that green hue from the horse but I'm too lazy to do it right now :/ -Click-
Boulder Creek
04:13:08 
Adventures in Online Dating:
This guy wants to meet up when it's downpouring and lots of sky grumbling overhead.
I have to take a shower but I don't think it'll matter if I end up soaked.
And he wants to go some place twenty minutes away.
Team Mum said no - maybe the park that's ten minutes away or the mall.
And an airtag on your person at all times when meeting strangers.
Find the bits that are left of me.
Jericho Stables
04:05:25 
I feel like death warmed over 🤧
Dash and Duchess
03:58:59 DD | ~Squizard~
(which only shows on gene tests so it wouldn't appear in her color description)
Jericho Stables
03:58:45 
The black is probably sooty. And the spots are from the patterns…
Dash and Duchess
03:58:19 DD | ~Squizard~
lyra, could be sooty :)

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


Moonlight Stud
 
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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


The Old Gods
 
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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


Darley Heights
 
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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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