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08:49:38 Exec/Lyssa
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WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:49:26 
I have no clue how I got premium when I don't have the money for it
Gem Queens Estate
08:48:56 Snow❆Gem
OK, I fired a level 8 rider, down to 32k. lol
Running R Ranch
08:48:25 RRR (Jo)
56k and change for my horde of riders today x)
Gem Queens Estate
08:48:22 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

Oh my gosh! I'm slowly building up my show string. I can barely afford all my WWW KNN gals now. O.o
God is Mighty Stable
08:48:15 Willow~KNN & PON
That's only counting the ones with riders
Ranch Lands Training
08:47:48 Lilly/PON Addict
I think I paid 80k the other day for my riders. I cried a few tears about it
God is Mighty Stable
08:47:44 Willow~KNN & PON
I have 96 horses *skull*
Elysian Meadows
08:47:44 
my girl training so bad is such a let down. was really hoping for a week 7 like her full sister - LB dreams are toast. love all of your posts though! happy to see so many pretty ponies with week 7s! <3
Requiem
08:46:52 Dimmed
Your riders cost 36k?! I don't miss those days! When I was using BM on 400 horses I think my rider bill was 65k+ and that sucked.
Insignia Elites
08:45:56 Em
I have high hopes for her -HEE Click-
Requiem
08:45:54 Dimmed
-HEE Click-
And now I'm questioning sending her to Ceres :/
Gem Queens Estate
08:45:48 Snow❆Gem
lol I need 36k to pay my riders. Oops. Time to go mass FR. ;P
Running R Ranch
08:45:36 RRR (Jo)
This and a filly who went up 1 bar are my two week 7s
-HEE Click-
Requiem
08:45:01 Dimmed
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The jerk in question. She's going to Eless again, but now I get to wait for week 14 to maybe show me some true strengths
Ranch Lands Training
08:44:49 Lilly/PON Addict
Ash - 10 foals in general, 1 LC
Ashcroft Park Stud
08:44:23 Ash
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Happy with her - no week 10 like her sister, but wasn’t expecting that anyways!
The Seven Sins
08:43:52 Sveven/Karma
Thank you, Ash :3
Requiem
08:43:45 Dimmed
No worries, Ven 🫡 I wasn't trying to step on toes
Stormsong Manor
08:43:26 Ven
People can do whatever they want with their money but to me, as someone who can see how many rules someone may have broken over a period of time, it's oof.

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Executive Stables
08:49:38 Exec/Lyssa
-HEE Click-
WonderfulPrettyHorse
08:49:26 
I have no clue how I got premium when I don't have the money for it
Gem Queens Estate
08:48:56 Snow❆Gem
OK, I fired a level 8 rider, down to 32k. lol
Running R Ranch
08:48:25 RRR (Jo)
56k and change for my horde of riders today x)
Gem Queens Estate
08:48:22 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

Oh my gosh! I'm slowly building up my show string. I can barely afford all my WWW KNN gals now. O.o
God is Mighty Stable
08:48:15 Willow~KNN & PON
That's only counting the ones with riders
Ranch Lands Training
08:47:48 Lilly/PON Addict
I think I paid 80k the other day for my riders. I cried a few tears about it
God is Mighty Stable
08:47:44 Willow~KNN & PON
I have 96 horses *skull*
Elysian Meadows
08:47:44 
my girl training so bad is such a let down. was really hoping for a week 7 like her full sister - LB dreams are toast. love all of your posts though! happy to see so many pretty ponies with week 7s! <3
Requiem
08:46:52 Dimmed
Your riders cost 36k?! I don't miss those days! When I was using BM on 400 horses I think my rider bill was 65k+ and that sucked.
Insignia Elites
08:45:56 Em
I have high hopes for her -HEE Click-
Requiem
08:45:54 Dimmed
-HEE Click-
And now I'm questioning sending her to Ceres :/
Gem Queens Estate
08:45:48 Snow❆Gem
lol I need 36k to pay my riders. Oops. Time to go mass FR. ;P
Running R Ranch
08:45:36 RRR (Jo)
This and a filly who went up 1 bar are my two week 7s
-HEE Click-
Requiem
08:45:01 Dimmed
-HEE Click-
The jerk in question. She's going to Eless again, but now I get to wait for week 14 to maybe show me some true strengths
Ranch Lands Training
08:44:49 Lilly/PON Addict
Ash - 10 foals in general, 1 LC
Ashcroft Park Stud
08:44:23 Ash
-HEE Click-
Happy with her - no week 10 like her sister, but wasn’t expecting that anyways!
The Seven Sins
08:43:52 Sveven/Karma
Thank you, Ash :3
Requiem
08:43:45 Dimmed
No worries, Ven 🫡 I wasn't trying to step on toes
Stormsong Manor
08:43:26 Ven
People can do whatever they want with their money but to me, as someone who can see how many rules someone may have broken over a period of time, it's oof.

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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