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Red Hill Hollow
01:08:53 Red, Hollow
Going to go pick up bumble now!
Maco Stables
01:03:10 Maco
-HEE Click- Wow, talk about eyeshadow
Whitewolf
12:58:35 Fang
Have a good rest of your hopefully not too soggy day <3
Red Hill Hollow
12:57:52 Red, Hollow
Goodnight fang <3 have a good rest friend
Whitewolf
12:57:26 Fang
Grammar. .-. I’m tired. I’m sure I’ll see y’all again later lol
Whitewolf
12:56:31 Fang
Well don’t let the piggies get bogged down and I’m see I’ll see you and Issy and everyone later <3
Whitewolf
12:55:26 Fang
It beats talking to myself as I do the 99% of the time lol
Whitewolf
12:54:57 Fang
Oh no lol it’s about time for me to go to bed anyway. I’ve definitely enjoyed chatting <3
Red Hill Hollow
12:54:40 Red, Hollow
Awh :( poor bunny
Red Hill Hollow
12:54:27 Red, Hollow
Oof it’s just started bucketing down rain, gotta go rescue the piggies before they get too soggy lol
Whitewolf
12:53:51 Fang
So now I just take them and find them a good home lol
Whitewolf
12:53:26 Fang
What’s bad is he had a friend in there with him as well but that one wasn’t touched. It was never the same
Red Hill Hollow
12:52:29 Red, Hollow
Oh god 😳 I don’t think I’d ever recover from that
Whitewolf
12:51:18 Fang
Every time we get rabbits in at work they give them to me lol I had one called Sugar Daddy for a while but a bobcat got him and took his head off. Traumatized.
Red Hill Hollow
12:50:12 Red, Hollow
XD that was 11yr old me stealing the pumice stone
Red Hill Hollow
12:49:43 Red, Hollow
People here smuggle bunnies over the boarder between my state and the neighbouring one. Of course I live in the strictest Aus state where rabbits are illegal >:(
Whitewolf
12:48:34 Fang
It’s like, hurry get the rock and go go
Whitewolf
12:48:18 Fang
I’d hope not XD
Red Hill Hollow
12:47:45 Red, Hollow
Bahah I think it’s mostly if you’re taking tons of rocks, I don’t think they’d care much over a single rock
Whitewolf
12:46:44 Fang
I guess from state parks it isn’t legal but it was from a random spot along the road so 🤷‍♀️

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Red Hill Hollow
01:08:53 Red, Hollow
Going to go pick up bumble now!
Maco Stables
01:03:10 Maco
-HEE Click- Wow, talk about eyeshadow
Whitewolf
12:58:35 Fang
Have a good rest of your hopefully not too soggy day <3
Red Hill Hollow
12:57:52 Red, Hollow
Goodnight fang <3 have a good rest friend
Whitewolf
12:57:26 Fang
Grammar. .-. I’m tired. I’m sure I’ll see y’all again later lol
Whitewolf
12:56:31 Fang
Well don’t let the piggies get bogged down and I’m see I’ll see you and Issy and everyone later <3
Whitewolf
12:55:26 Fang
It beats talking to myself as I do the 99% of the time lol
Whitewolf
12:54:57 Fang
Oh no lol it’s about time for me to go to bed anyway. I’ve definitely enjoyed chatting <3
Red Hill Hollow
12:54:40 Red, Hollow
Awh :( poor bunny
Red Hill Hollow
12:54:27 Red, Hollow
Oof it’s just started bucketing down rain, gotta go rescue the piggies before they get too soggy lol
Whitewolf
12:53:51 Fang
So now I just take them and find them a good home lol
Whitewolf
12:53:26 Fang
What’s bad is he had a friend in there with him as well but that one wasn’t touched. It was never the same
Red Hill Hollow
12:52:29 Red, Hollow
Oh god 😳 I don’t think I’d ever recover from that
Whitewolf
12:51:18 Fang
Every time we get rabbits in at work they give them to me lol I had one called Sugar Daddy for a while but a bobcat got him and took his head off. Traumatized.
Red Hill Hollow
12:50:12 Red, Hollow
XD that was 11yr old me stealing the pumice stone
Red Hill Hollow
12:49:43 Red, Hollow
People here smuggle bunnies over the boarder between my state and the neighbouring one. Of course I live in the strictest Aus state where rabbits are illegal >:(
Whitewolf
12:48:34 Fang
It’s like, hurry get the rock and go go
Whitewolf
12:48:18 Fang
I’d hope not XD
Red Hill Hollow
12:47:45 Red, Hollow
Bahah I think it’s mostly if you’re taking tons of rocks, I don’t think they’d care much over a single rock
Whitewolf
12:46:44 Fang
I guess from state parks it isn’t legal but it was from a random spot along the road so 🤷‍♀️

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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