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FirstLightFarms
08:20:54 puck
omg Mara?? That's random
Mara Jade
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Just bred a WWE Apricot 0.o
Glacier Bay Farms
08:00:07 Arctic Cove Katz
Back when I was still having periods, midol was a lifesaver
Birch Creek
07:59:06 Em
I won a Thor straw and would love some advice on which of my mares to match him with - I have the ebs for a filly medallion to use on the match. my www girl has been very disappointing so idk if I want to waste it on her
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Nightingales Ridge
07:58:55 𔓘 Issy
Shheesh I don't miss cramps...I wonder when itl start again for me. Apparently breastfeeding can delay it a bit.
QualitySH
07:55:54 Asher
They make stick on ones like hot hands for that time of month. I also lived under a rock and didn't know midol was a thing I was just roughing it with ibuprofen if anything. I try not to take pain meds unless absolutely need to so they work well when needed.
Nightingales Ridge
07:55:31 𔓘 Issy
My sister in law just made us some wheat packs! So lovely
Greenheart Stables
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@Puck
I love the small hand ones. I keep them for me and the snakes when the power goes out
FirstLightFarms
07:50:52 puck
RIP. Thank god for small warm heat packs.
Sweet Valley
07:50:52 Anna/Jewel
Eeeh RO already?? At least my WWW girlie is planned.. Shes about the only one I planned for lol
Greenheart Stables
07:50:02 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Fucck I need to get breeding done tonight so I can sort tomorrow before RO
QualitySH
07:49:47 Asher
Most adorable heat pack lol
Stormsong Manor
07:49:07 Ven
My heat pack is a small dog little spoon
QualitySH
07:48:50 Asher
Do you have a heat pack? That always seems to help for me
Stormsong Manor
07:48:45 Ven
Thank you lol I'll be just fine
Cleoleopardgecko
07:48:20 Cleo
Happened to me last month, I feel your pain ven
QualitySH
07:48:19 Asher
I hope you feel better soon ven
Stormsong Manor
07:47:51 Ven
My body rages because I refuse to add to the population
Stormsong Manor
07:47:21 Ven
Not to be dramatic but I have the worst cramps of all time and cannot get out of bed
FirstLightFarms
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Vennn how goes it

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FirstLightFarms
08:20:54 puck
omg Mara?? That's random
Mara Jade
08:14:49 
-HEE Click-

Just bred a WWE Apricot 0.o
Glacier Bay Farms
08:00:07 Arctic Cove Katz
Back when I was still having periods, midol was a lifesaver
Birch Creek
07:59:06 Em
I won a Thor straw and would love some advice on which of my mares to match him with - I have the ebs for a filly medallion to use on the match. my www girl has been very disappointing so idk if I want to waste it on her
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
thank you in advance 🫢🏻
Nightingales Ridge
07:58:55 𔓘 Issy
Shheesh I don't miss cramps...I wonder when itl start again for me. Apparently breastfeeding can delay it a bit.
QualitySH
07:55:54 Asher
They make stick on ones like hot hands for that time of month. I also lived under a rock and didn't know midol was a thing I was just roughing it with ibuprofen if anything. I try not to take pain meds unless absolutely need to so they work well when needed.
Nightingales Ridge
07:55:31 𔓘 Issy
My sister in law just made us some wheat packs! So lovely
Greenheart Stables
07:53:00 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Puck
I love the small hand ones. I keep them for me and the snakes when the power goes out
FirstLightFarms
07:50:52 puck
RIP. Thank god for small warm heat packs.
Sweet Valley
07:50:52 Anna/Jewel
Eeeh RO already?? At least my WWW girlie is planned.. Shes about the only one I planned for lol
Greenheart Stables
07:50:02 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Fucck I need to get breeding done tonight so I can sort tomorrow before RO
QualitySH
07:49:47 Asher
Most adorable heat pack lol
Stormsong Manor
07:49:07 Ven
My heat pack is a small dog little spoon
QualitySH
07:48:50 Asher
Do you have a heat pack? That always seems to help for me
Stormsong Manor
07:48:45 Ven
Thank you lol I'll be just fine
Cleoleopardgecko
07:48:20 Cleo
Happened to me last month, I feel your pain ven
QualitySH
07:48:19 Asher
I hope you feel better soon ven
Stormsong Manor
07:47:51 Ven
My body rages because I refuse to add to the population
Stormsong Manor
07:47:21 Ven
Not to be dramatic but I have the worst cramps of all time and cannot get out of bed
FirstLightFarms
07:46:35 puck
Vennn how goes it

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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