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Royale Equestria
10:45:28 Janna
Khaos, definetly
full moon
10:41:41 usagi
I'm so excited for her! I wonder who she'll end up going to!
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fire
10:07:53 
meeeee
The Feral Equine
10:00:41 Khaos
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Should I repeat her last breeding?
The Undercity
09:58:29 Dory
She's mine forever XD
Palomino Star Valley
09:56:53 Sasha / Mira
Dory- Me? lol just kidding i mean not really but you know
The Undercity
09:56:01 Dory
I have no clue who to send this gal to
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Gaelic Gladiacres
09:54:20 Gladius
issy - lmao omg the min breed requirements really got me this RO, lesson learned lmao XD

I have too many freshies and maidens (mostly maidens...dear god I caught so many mares on capture day) to bother with more than my top 5 I think. also because I have no room in my stable XD
Crescent Estate
09:51:55 River / Crescent
Dory
I'll have to wait, maybe a foal this RO will come along
Nightingales Ridge
09:51:28 𔓘 Issy
Was 11 until I recheck the breeding requirements hahaha
Nightingales Ridge
09:51:02 𔓘 Issy
10 at the moment Gladius haha
Gaelic Gladiacres
09:49:04 Gladius
matches? y'all have matches? (me who has thought about matching this RO for all of 2 seconds thus far) XD
The Undercity
09:48:05 Dory
River
He is pretty hard to match i will say 😅
Dash and Duchess
09:46:26 DD | ~Squizard~
Issy, not quite sure yet xD trying to grab some retired boys' straws who match her, but otherwise I'll be tossing last minute it seems 😂
Crescent Estate
09:46:09 River / Crescent
mares*
Crescent Estate
09:43:12 River / Crescent
I have a straw for Trojan but none of my mare match him 😩
Nightingales Ridge
09:41:24 𔓘 Issy
Who's her match DD
Dash and Duchess
09:37:02 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm so anxious for her >.<
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The Feral Equine
09:36:19 Khaos
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I am really excited for her
The Undercity
09:33:03 Dory
I can not wait for this guy *.*
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Royale Equestria
10:45:28 Janna
Khaos, definetly
full moon
10:41:41 usagi
I'm so excited for her! I wonder who she'll end up going to!
-HEE Click-
fire
10:07:53 
meeeee
The Feral Equine
10:00:41 Khaos
-HEE Click-
Should I repeat her last breeding?
The Undercity
09:58:29 Dory
She's mine forever XD
Palomino Star Valley
09:56:53 Sasha / Mira
Dory- Me? lol just kidding i mean not really but you know
The Undercity
09:56:01 Dory
I have no clue who to send this gal to
-HEE Click-
Gaelic Gladiacres
09:54:20 Gladius
issy - lmao omg the min breed requirements really got me this RO, lesson learned lmao XD

I have too many freshies and maidens (mostly maidens...dear god I caught so many mares on capture day) to bother with more than my top 5 I think. also because I have no room in my stable XD
Crescent Estate
09:51:55 River / Crescent
Dory
I'll have to wait, maybe a foal this RO will come along
Nightingales Ridge
09:51:28 𔓘 Issy
Was 11 until I recheck the breeding requirements hahaha
Nightingales Ridge
09:51:02 𔓘 Issy
10 at the moment Gladius haha
Gaelic Gladiacres
09:49:04 Gladius
matches? y'all have matches? (me who has thought about matching this RO for all of 2 seconds thus far) XD
The Undercity
09:48:05 Dory
River
He is pretty hard to match i will say 😅
Dash and Duchess
09:46:26 DD | ~Squizard~
Issy, not quite sure yet xD trying to grab some retired boys' straws who match her, but otherwise I'll be tossing last minute it seems 😂
Crescent Estate
09:46:09 River / Crescent
mares*
Crescent Estate
09:43:12 River / Crescent
I have a straw for Trojan but none of my mare match him 😩
Nightingales Ridge
09:41:24 𔓘 Issy
Who's her match DD
Dash and Duchess
09:37:02 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm so anxious for her >.<
-HEE Click-
The Feral Equine
09:36:19 Khaos
-HEE Click-
I am really excited for her
The Undercity
09:33:03 Dory
I can not wait for this guy *.*
-HEE Click-

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


Darley Heights
 
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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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