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11:47:06 River | Van
So tonight I have to finish my chemistry test review, some math lesson stuff, and history for ancient greece T-T
Red Hill Hollow
11:32:17 Red, Hollow
Oakie, I wish but apparently it goes against health safety
Oak River Farms
11:25:56 Oakie
Oh. I forgot about you. -HEE Click-
fire
11:23:56 
bawk bawk
ahahahaha
Oak River Farms
11:17:16 Oakie
Are you allowed to wear earbuds/headphones?
Red Hill Hollow
11:16:53 Red, Hollow
The building creaks so much, scares the shit outta me. And then I start to think my own heartbeat is footsteps 😂😂😂 I’m such a chicken lol
Oak River Farms
11:16:00 Oakie
Ahhhhhh, I understand completely. Just remember, if you think you heard something, no you didn't.
Red Hill Hollow
11:15:25 Red, Hollow
Thank you, I’ll need it
Red Hill Hollow
11:15:10 Red, Hollow
I work for a cleaning company. I clean this big ass warehouse in the middle of nowhere after hours so no one is there. Usually I work with my partner but he’s not coming today. So it’s really spooky being there by myself, especially at night.
Oak River Farms
11:14:10 Oakie
I'll send you good thoughts and tenacity though!
Red Hill Hollow
11:13:39 Red, Hollow
I guess I can forgive you oakie 😔
Oak River Farms
11:12:41 Oakie
Red, I would, but I need it for dr appointments tomorrow. Sorry!
Red Hill Hollow
11:12:02 Red, Hollow
I’ve gotta go to work early today. Someone give me the strength to not call in sick 😩
Oak River Farms
11:11:26 Oakie
Do it, Aspen! It's always nice to find a niche you can call home!
Aspen Fire ES
11:08:37 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy
Thank you Issy ^^
Nightingales Ridge
11:08:04 𔓘 Issy
Oooh he's beautiful Aspen
Aspen Fire ES
11:07:46 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy
Thank you Red and I love how the WBs look, I mainly stick with them since I have a soft spot for them lol
Oak River Farms
11:06:23 Oakie
I love the more action poses of the WB and TB. Just wish they were nicer to me so I could breed more of them xD
Aspen Fire ES
11:05:18 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy
Yeah xD and He is indeed very pretty ^^
Red Hill Hollow
11:04:16 Red, Hollow
Ooo Aspen he’s gorgeous 😍

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Vanguard Stables
11:47:06 River | Van
So tonight I have to finish my chemistry test review, some math lesson stuff, and history for ancient greece T-T
Red Hill Hollow
11:32:17 Red, Hollow
Oakie, I wish but apparently it goes against health safety
Oak River Farms
11:25:56 Oakie
Oh. I forgot about you. -HEE Click-
fire
11:23:56 
bawk bawk
ahahahaha
Oak River Farms
11:17:16 Oakie
Are you allowed to wear earbuds/headphones?
Red Hill Hollow
11:16:53 Red, Hollow
The building creaks so much, scares the shit outta me. And then I start to think my own heartbeat is footsteps 😂😂😂 I’m such a chicken lol
Oak River Farms
11:16:00 Oakie
Ahhhhhh, I understand completely. Just remember, if you think you heard something, no you didn't.
Red Hill Hollow
11:15:25 Red, Hollow
Thank you, I’ll need it
Red Hill Hollow
11:15:10 Red, Hollow
I work for a cleaning company. I clean this big ass warehouse in the middle of nowhere after hours so no one is there. Usually I work with my partner but he’s not coming today. So it’s really spooky being there by myself, especially at night.
Oak River Farms
11:14:10 Oakie
I'll send you good thoughts and tenacity though!
Red Hill Hollow
11:13:39 Red, Hollow
I guess I can forgive you oakie 😔
Oak River Farms
11:12:41 Oakie
Red, I would, but I need it for dr appointments tomorrow. Sorry!
Red Hill Hollow
11:12:02 Red, Hollow
I’ve gotta go to work early today. Someone give me the strength to not call in sick 😩
Oak River Farms
11:11:26 Oakie
Do it, Aspen! It's always nice to find a niche you can call home!
Aspen Fire ES
11:08:37 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy
Thank you Issy ^^
Nightingales Ridge
11:08:04 𔓘 Issy
Oooh he's beautiful Aspen
Aspen Fire ES
11:07:46 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy
Thank you Red and I love how the WBs look, I mainly stick with them since I have a soft spot for them lol
Oak River Farms
11:06:23 Oakie
I love the more action poses of the WB and TB. Just wish they were nicer to me so I could breed more of them xD
Aspen Fire ES
11:05:18 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy
Yeah xD and He is indeed very pretty ^^
Red Hill Hollow
11:04:16 Red, Hollow
Ooo Aspen he’s gorgeous 😍

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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