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All Breeds
10:57:54 Fawn
It went out 3 weeks ago, 2 weeks ago and today
Jericho Stables
10:57:19 
Again?
All Breeds
10:56:24 Fawn
Bruh our power is out again 😑
Jericho Stables
10:51:47 
When I was pregnant with my youngest I had to go to my brother's wedding. On July 1st. During a heatwave. It was 104 degrees. And it was an outside wedding. It was so hot that their pool was like 94 degrees, it felt like bath water and didn't help with the eat at all. I was 6 months pregnant. It was awful lol
Requiem
10:46:19 Dimmed
Yesss same! It felt so nice 😭
Nightingales Ridge
10:41:17 𔓘 Issy
Dimmed it's the best! I got so many beautiful belly compliments too hahaha
Requiem
10:38:32 Dimmed
I'm excited to wear summer dresses again while pregnant. It's the only time I can feel confident with my stomach showing 😂😂 as long as I don't bloat like a whale in the last month like I did with my first
Equine Elite Stables
10:37:59 Kay
Maiden mare and stud made this!!!
-HEE Click-
ThunderStruck Herd
10:33:09 The Hunters/Hunted
dammit, welp already gotta go!! XD see yall later!
ThunderStruck Herd
10:30:51 The Hunters/Hunted
hi issy!
Nightingales Ridge
10:29:46 𔓘 Issy
Hunted
Hello :)
ThunderStruck Herd
10:25:18 The Hunters/Hunted
hey guys good morning!
Nightingales Ridge
10:23:55 𔓘 Issy
I've found nice dresses at charity shops. It's where most of my clothes are from lol
Ironhoof Estates
10:19:48 Darkside | Grape
Thanks! <3
Phantom Echoes
10:19:12 Winniefried | Win
Grape
Happy early 21st!
Alpine Acres
10:17:44 Lily
Grape
I wish we had Target here in SA, I keep hearing good things about it >.>
And no, church dress isn't quite right for such an event lol. Happy early 21st by the way :D
Ironhoof Estates
10:14:58 Darkside | Grape
I found these mens basic tees at Target and they're SO soft! I need to go back to buy more.
I still have two dresses I got years ago and they still 'fit', but they're so tight on top that they make me feel really buff lol. But they're also cut really high and I don't want to wear a modest church dress out on my 21st
River
10:13:55 ♡ River
Now I have 5 accounts to take care of, oh goody
Alpine Acres
10:12:00 Lily
Shein puts me off too but it has some options!
Alpine Acres
10:11:32 Lily
Grape
oh I'm exactly the same lol - I live in flared jeans and T-shirts and have exactly two dresses in my wardrobe, one of which doesn't fit.
Men's shirts are honestly pretty comfy though. But not what you're going for if you want to be feminine x.x

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All Breeds
10:57:54 Fawn
It went out 3 weeks ago, 2 weeks ago and today
Jericho Stables
10:57:19 
Again?
All Breeds
10:56:24 Fawn
Bruh our power is out again 😑
Jericho Stables
10:51:47 
When I was pregnant with my youngest I had to go to my brother's wedding. On July 1st. During a heatwave. It was 104 degrees. And it was an outside wedding. It was so hot that their pool was like 94 degrees, it felt like bath water and didn't help with the eat at all. I was 6 months pregnant. It was awful lol
Requiem
10:46:19 Dimmed
Yesss same! It felt so nice 😭
Nightingales Ridge
10:41:17 𔓘 Issy
Dimmed it's the best! I got so many beautiful belly compliments too hahaha
Requiem
10:38:32 Dimmed
I'm excited to wear summer dresses again while pregnant. It's the only time I can feel confident with my stomach showing 😂😂 as long as I don't bloat like a whale in the last month like I did with my first
Equine Elite Stables
10:37:59 Kay
Maiden mare and stud made this!!!
-HEE Click-
ThunderStruck Herd
10:33:09 The Hunters/Hunted
dammit, welp already gotta go!! XD see yall later!
ThunderStruck Herd
10:30:51 The Hunters/Hunted
hi issy!
Nightingales Ridge
10:29:46 𔓘 Issy
Hunted
Hello :)
ThunderStruck Herd
10:25:18 The Hunters/Hunted
hey guys good morning!
Nightingales Ridge
10:23:55 𔓘 Issy
I've found nice dresses at charity shops. It's where most of my clothes are from lol
Ironhoof Estates
10:19:48 Darkside | Grape
Thanks! <3
Phantom Echoes
10:19:12 Winniefried | Win
Grape
Happy early 21st!
Alpine Acres
10:17:44 Lily
Grape
I wish we had Target here in SA, I keep hearing good things about it >.>
And no, church dress isn't quite right for such an event lol. Happy early 21st by the way :D
Ironhoof Estates
10:14:58 Darkside | Grape
I found these mens basic tees at Target and they're SO soft! I need to go back to buy more.
I still have two dresses I got years ago and they still 'fit', but they're so tight on top that they make me feel really buff lol. But they're also cut really high and I don't want to wear a modest church dress out on my 21st
River
10:13:55 ♡ River
Now I have 5 accounts to take care of, oh goody
Alpine Acres
10:12:00 Lily
Shein puts me off too but it has some options!
Alpine Acres
10:11:32 Lily
Grape
oh I'm exactly the same lol - I live in flared jeans and T-shirts and have exactly two dresses in my wardrobe, one of which doesn't fit.
Men's shirts are honestly pretty comfy though. But not what you're going for if you want to be feminine x.x

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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