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Beamng
01:29:23 Miles Vinuline/Beam
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Which horse is the best?
Evermore Homestead
01:29:16 
It looks like for one of her foals, the sire was somewhat weak in SCP, and the other was a bit better of a match but strongest in INT and STR not INT and SCP. Someone correct me if I'm wrong, please
Evermore Homestead
01:25:13 
My understanding is you need to match her with someone strong in INT and SCP
Lucky Star Meadow
01:21:43 Starshine
would anyone be willing to help me with matchmaking for her: -HEE Click-

i dont understand matchmaking and dont want her to go to waste next RO. Any help is appreciated
River
01:19:51 ♡ River
Elfie
Thank you! I'll keep that in mind, yeah, It's a very trust the process type thing xD I showed my dad about once an hour through me drawing it and he was like "what is that?" "oh It's a horse" "where the heck did It's legs go?" xD
Port Royal Equines
01:17:53 Elfie
The head looks great. Obviously the body is a heavy wip- I would focus on detailing the anatomy of the torso after you finish the base shape. After you clean it up I would smudge your paint shades to create shape and depth. It'll make the horse look less flat.
River
01:14:16 ♡ River
Elfie
Stunning! what do you think of this piece I'm working on? and things I could improve <3 -Click-
Maco Stables
01:13:27 Maco
Wow, the hidden falls are lovely right now, thanks to whoever replenished them!
Port Royal Equines
01:11:34 Elfie
The* not there. >_>
Port Royal Equines
01:11:15 Elfie
-Click-
All that is left on this comm is there hair. I am contemplating painting an actual background but we will see.
Golden Forest Farms
12:51:35 K/Mini Steve Irwin
Oh good xD
Maco Stables
12:50:48 Maco
@K
You're spot on, though
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:48:30 K/Mini Boyd Martin
Take what I say with a grain of salt, I just came back from a very very long hiatus
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:45:24 K/Mini Boyd Martin
Round pens just train bravery, arenas are ok if you want to make a little money off shows
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:44:12 K/Mini Boyd Martin
Pastures for hay and space honestly
Lucky Star Meadow
12:41:01 Starshine
Is buying pastures, arenas, crop fields, or round pens worth it? if so, which one is "most" worth it
DSD Training Center
12:40:43 Spring <3
I feel your pain, Holly
Hot 2 Trot
12:37:34 ♡Holly♡
Having to wait for breed approval day is painful
:,(
Secret Keeper Stable
12:36:24 Dun 👑
12:15am GT
Daybreak
12:09:30 Day
Am not normally one this late tho haha

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Beamng
01:29:23 Miles Vinuline/Beam
-HEE Click-
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Which horse is the best?
Evermore Homestead
01:29:16 
It looks like for one of her foals, the sire was somewhat weak in SCP, and the other was a bit better of a match but strongest in INT and STR not INT and SCP. Someone correct me if I'm wrong, please
Evermore Homestead
01:25:13 
My understanding is you need to match her with someone strong in INT and SCP
Lucky Star Meadow
01:21:43 Starshine
would anyone be willing to help me with matchmaking for her: -HEE Click-

i dont understand matchmaking and dont want her to go to waste next RO. Any help is appreciated
River
01:19:51 ♡ River
Elfie
Thank you! I'll keep that in mind, yeah, It's a very trust the process type thing xD I showed my dad about once an hour through me drawing it and he was like "what is that?" "oh It's a horse" "where the heck did It's legs go?" xD
Port Royal Equines
01:17:53 Elfie
The head looks great. Obviously the body is a heavy wip- I would focus on detailing the anatomy of the torso after you finish the base shape. After you clean it up I would smudge your paint shades to create shape and depth. It'll make the horse look less flat.
River
01:14:16 ♡ River
Elfie
Stunning! what do you think of this piece I'm working on? and things I could improve <3 -Click-
Maco Stables
01:13:27 Maco
Wow, the hidden falls are lovely right now, thanks to whoever replenished them!
Port Royal Equines
01:11:34 Elfie
The* not there. >_>
Port Royal Equines
01:11:15 Elfie
-Click-
All that is left on this comm is there hair. I am contemplating painting an actual background but we will see.
Golden Forest Farms
12:51:35 K/Mini Steve Irwin
Oh good xD
Maco Stables
12:50:48 Maco
@K
You're spot on, though
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:48:30 K/Mini Boyd Martin
Take what I say with a grain of salt, I just came back from a very very long hiatus
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:45:24 K/Mini Boyd Martin
Round pens just train bravery, arenas are ok if you want to make a little money off shows
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:44:12 K/Mini Boyd Martin
Pastures for hay and space honestly
Lucky Star Meadow
12:41:01 Starshine
Is buying pastures, arenas, crop fields, or round pens worth it? if so, which one is "most" worth it
DSD Training Center
12:40:43 Spring <3
I feel your pain, Holly
Hot 2 Trot
12:37:34 ♡Holly♡
Having to wait for breed approval day is painful
:,(
Secret Keeper Stable
12:36:24 Dun 👑
12:15am GT
Daybreak
12:09:30 Day
Am not normally one this late tho haha

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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