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Bioshock Manor
04:17:33 Storm
It wouldn't be until next year we move unless we win the lottery :(
Moonbird Magic
04:16:56 🛸Divaaa
Well at least it's not next year or the year after, summer isn't that far off
Bioshock Manor
04:14:12 Storm
It really is. And dad is the most useless. It's pathetic. He lives in his truck because he so consumed in his own greed to 'win big'. I'm so glad i got away from him. I finish school in May. Then might go to the police academy, no idea yet. But after this year I'm booking it to Nevada or another state, but need to do research on which one. And Definitely need money. Mom, sis and I are moving, but I really wish it could be now
Moonbird Magic
04:09:07 🛸Divaaa
Fingers crossed you sort yourself out soon and better times are coming
Moonbird Magic
04:08:31 🛸Divaaa
The judgment sometimes is so unnecessary, it hurts more if its from your own family, it's odd , the ones that are supposed to be there are often harshest critics.
Bluegrass Racing
04:08:18 Blue
Dang, grew up handsome
-HEE Click-
Bioshock Manor
04:06:50 Storm
Im going crazy here. I need to start my internship ASAP
Bioshock Manor
04:06:08 Storm
I don't habe any in person friends. Cousins are toxic and don't talk to us. My friend, but super distant cousin near home has no room, plus people would start rumors about us -.- my home is a camper that I keep at his family's barn. 4 hours south of moms
Moongold Magic
04:01:49 🍭 Diva
Even friends
Moongold Magic
04:01:25 🍭 Diva
Ah I see, I'm not sure if it's customary there, but I would do sleepovers with my aunties and cousins like 2 days here or there just to change it up. Helps to reset mind
Moongold Magic
03:59:49 🍭 Diva
Is there a reason you have to be at your mom's? Like you cannot look into other options, sorry I don't know your situation
Bioshock Manor
03:59:18 Storm
I hate it so much. Been here a month since my house is being worked on, but they've had that a month. Im going tuesday unless they're open tomorrow to see why it's taking so long.
Moongold Magic
03:58:09 🍭 Diva
Stress is a killer, so unhealthy, been there
Bioshock Manor
03:57:38 Storm
It sounds amazing though
Bioshock Manor
03:57:24 Storm
I wish I had that Diva
Moongold Magic
03:57:16 🍭 Diva
and a bit of mayo and lemon pepper... east europe lol
Bioshock Manor
03:56:45 Storm
I need healthy snacks. Im going to the store later, as they aren't open at 5am. I wanted to get fruit. My diet at moms has been rather horrible, as has stress, and even throwing my cycle off
Moongold Magic
03:56:19 🍭 Diva
I would put a fresh dill and cucumbers on it pretty much
Moongold Magic
03:55:41 🍭 Diva
You need some snacks to pick up your blood sugar after bad dreams, munching on something helps
Bioshock Manor
03:55:09 Storm
Why not do the fish with a side of veggies

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Bioshock Manor
04:17:33 Storm
It wouldn't be until next year we move unless we win the lottery :(
Moonbird Magic
04:16:56 🛸Divaaa
Well at least it's not next year or the year after, summer isn't that far off
Bioshock Manor
04:14:12 Storm
It really is. And dad is the most useless. It's pathetic. He lives in his truck because he so consumed in his own greed to 'win big'. I'm so glad i got away from him. I finish school in May. Then might go to the police academy, no idea yet. But after this year I'm booking it to Nevada or another state, but need to do research on which one. And Definitely need money. Mom, sis and I are moving, but I really wish it could be now
Moonbird Magic
04:09:07 🛸Divaaa
Fingers crossed you sort yourself out soon and better times are coming
Moonbird Magic
04:08:31 🛸Divaaa
The judgment sometimes is so unnecessary, it hurts more if its from your own family, it's odd , the ones that are supposed to be there are often harshest critics.
Bluegrass Racing
04:08:18 Blue
Dang, grew up handsome
-HEE Click-
Bioshock Manor
04:06:50 Storm
Im going crazy here. I need to start my internship ASAP
Bioshock Manor
04:06:08 Storm
I don't habe any in person friends. Cousins are toxic and don't talk to us. My friend, but super distant cousin near home has no room, plus people would start rumors about us -.- my home is a camper that I keep at his family's barn. 4 hours south of moms
Moongold Magic
04:01:49 🍭 Diva
Even friends
Moongold Magic
04:01:25 🍭 Diva
Ah I see, I'm not sure if it's customary there, but I would do sleepovers with my aunties and cousins like 2 days here or there just to change it up. Helps to reset mind
Moongold Magic
03:59:49 🍭 Diva
Is there a reason you have to be at your mom's? Like you cannot look into other options, sorry I don't know your situation
Bioshock Manor
03:59:18 Storm
I hate it so much. Been here a month since my house is being worked on, but they've had that a month. Im going tuesday unless they're open tomorrow to see why it's taking so long.
Moongold Magic
03:58:09 🍭 Diva
Stress is a killer, so unhealthy, been there
Bioshock Manor
03:57:38 Storm
It sounds amazing though
Bioshock Manor
03:57:24 Storm
I wish I had that Diva
Moongold Magic
03:57:16 🍭 Diva
and a bit of mayo and lemon pepper... east europe lol
Bioshock Manor
03:56:45 Storm
I need healthy snacks. Im going to the store later, as they aren't open at 5am. I wanted to get fruit. My diet at moms has been rather horrible, as has stress, and even throwing my cycle off
Moongold Magic
03:56:19 🍭 Diva
I would put a fresh dill and cucumbers on it pretty much
Moongold Magic
03:55:41 🍭 Diva
You need some snacks to pick up your blood sugar after bad dreams, munching on something helps
Bioshock Manor
03:55:09 Storm
Why not do the fish with a side of veggies

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


Moonlight Stud
 
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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


The Old Gods
 
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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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