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Maco Stables
04:47:04 Maco
No problem ;)
Vahana Hollow
04:36:43 Val
FINALLY Completed the Stable Raid quest! Thank you for the team effort, guys, ahaha. <3
Minerva
04:31:32 Min
Oooooft Phan
Maco Stables
04:30:15 Maco
Ouch!
Well, at least she's very pretty
Vahana Hollow
04:29:54 Val
One more round of Stable Raid, anyone? Last time I swear...
Arabes d'Arnac
04:28:20 Phan
-HEE Click-
Oh that is nasty
Minerva
04:16:46 Min
I can take it or leave it but I love the names lol. Much easier to steal names from things rather than think of my own
Craic Magic Stables
04:15:27 
are you a game of thrones fan by any chance min?
Minerva
04:09:40 Min
He's so lush isn't he! Im crossing my fingers they end up liking each other 😬
TsukiMoon
04:06:18 
Min, this PON is beautiful !
Minerva
04:04:48 Min
-HEE Click-
Might end up sacrificing Nymeria's LB placings with this one but its time to try breeding some LB PONs 😬
Minerva
03:51:09 Min
Oh wow, the new EEE show group is doing well... 421 entries last night for 140k- made 11k profit 🤣🤣🤣 Just have to keep telling myself itll get better in a few months when levels are higher (or I hope it will!!!)
Highglen Ridge
03:13:47 Cali | TBs
Bronze store token gives you 10% off hay. Theyre pretty cheap so if you buy one and then go to the quest page itll complete the quest
Highglen Ridge
03:13:08 Cali | TBs
I pick a discipline for my horse and only show them for that
Gold Canyon
03:12:28 G or Canny
Also my quest is that the guy needs a bronze store token and I dont know what that is
Gold Canyon
03:11:25 G or Canny
Can I ask when you show them do you do one of each, each time or do you just pick a discipline per horse
Highglen Ridge
03:09:12 Cali | TBs
I have a large barn of show geldings, feel free to check them out for rating help
Lunoa
03:04:55 Honey
PPP are great for showing too. I would keep them all, if you have enough space.
Gold Canyon
03:04:20 G or Canny
I just checked my foals breeding rating so im unsure what to keep now
Gold Canyon
03:03:41 G or Canny
Question for showing should I keep EEE over PPP

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Maco Stables
04:47:04 Maco
No problem ;)
Vahana Hollow
04:36:43 Val
FINALLY Completed the Stable Raid quest! Thank you for the team effort, guys, ahaha. <3
Minerva
04:31:32 Min
Oooooft Phan
Maco Stables
04:30:15 Maco
Ouch!
Well, at least she's very pretty
Vahana Hollow
04:29:54 Val
One more round of Stable Raid, anyone? Last time I swear...
Arabes d'Arnac
04:28:20 Phan
-HEE Click-
Oh that is nasty
Minerva
04:16:46 Min
I can take it or leave it but I love the names lol. Much easier to steal names from things rather than think of my own
Craic Magic Stables
04:15:27 
are you a game of thrones fan by any chance min?
Minerva
04:09:40 Min
He's so lush isn't he! Im crossing my fingers they end up liking each other 😬
TsukiMoon
04:06:18 
Min, this PON is beautiful !
Minerva
04:04:48 Min
-HEE Click-
Might end up sacrificing Nymeria's LB placings with this one but its time to try breeding some LB PONs 😬
Minerva
03:51:09 Min
Oh wow, the new EEE show group is doing well... 421 entries last night for 140k- made 11k profit 🤣🤣🤣 Just have to keep telling myself itll get better in a few months when levels are higher (or I hope it will!!!)
Highglen Ridge
03:13:47 Cali | TBs
Bronze store token gives you 10% off hay. Theyre pretty cheap so if you buy one and then go to the quest page itll complete the quest
Highglen Ridge
03:13:08 Cali | TBs
I pick a discipline for my horse and only show them for that
Gold Canyon
03:12:28 G or Canny
Also my quest is that the guy needs a bronze store token and I dont know what that is
Gold Canyon
03:11:25 G or Canny
Can I ask when you show them do you do one of each, each time or do you just pick a discipline per horse
Highglen Ridge
03:09:12 Cali | TBs
I have a large barn of show geldings, feel free to check them out for rating help
Lunoa
03:04:55 Honey
PPP are great for showing too. I would keep them all, if you have enough space.
Gold Canyon
03:04:20 G or Canny
I just checked my foals breeding rating so im unsure what to keep now
Gold Canyon
03:03:41 G or Canny
Question for showing should I keep EEE over PPP

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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