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It's so annoying anytime my phone screen goes black it logs me out of HEE.
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Anyone up for a raid? I got a quest
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Oh shiny and completed a quest first shot to get me a med *-*
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Creme is what is making her a smokey grullo so not really hiding
Silver Tail Farm
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Oooh she's hiding a cream gene in there...
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I hope she produces decently so I can get her art xD
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I don't think it can show on them back it is one of those white patterns like tobi and splash even though it is random. I could be wrong though
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Has anyone else noticed manchado in the gene test for KNNs? I think this is the second one I've seen it on, it just doesn't actually show
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Well, yesterday I learned my 20 year-old coworker was raised well. :D Shocking, since most young folks seem unthoughtful and such. lol
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cool! Thank you :D
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Yes, Sash. That is homozygous (:
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Is this a ToTo variation?
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He is...different, that's for sure
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Oh, very cool!
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This Chim is really special
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Sunni
09:42:53 Sunni bunny
It's so annoying anytime my phone screen goes black it logs me out of HEE.
Insignia Elites
09:42:48 Em
Anyone up for a raid? I got a quest
Wolf Dancer
09:42:17 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Oh shiny and completed a quest first shot to get me a med *-*
-HEE Click-
Jericho Stables
09:39:26 
Creme is what is making her a smokey grullo so not really hiding
Silver Tail Farm
09:37:48 Jo (X Acct)
Oooh she's hiding a cream gene in there...
Silver Tail Farm
09:35:27 Jo (X Acct)
I hope she produces decently so I can get her art xD
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
09:31:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah it is odd that they can still get it lol
Silver Melody Acres
09:30:59 Solar - KNNs
Yeah, I guess since I kind of knew it couldn't show up with them, I assumed they just couldn't have it at all XD
Angels angels
09:29:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Because not back
Angels angels
09:28:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I don't think it can show on them back it is one of those white patterns like tobi and splash even though it is random. I could be wrong though
Silver Melody Acres
09:18:26 Solar - KNNs
Has anyone else noticed manchado in the gene test for KNNs? I think this is the second one I've seen it on, it just doesn't actually show
-HEE Click-
SandWitch Arabians
09:01:41 Witchypoo
That's a good thing
Gem Queens Estate
08:41:35 Snow❆Gem
Well, yesterday I learned my 20 year-old coworker was raised well. :D Shocking, since most young folks seem unthoughtful and such. lol
Sashimi Stables
08:38:51 Sash
cool! Thank you :D
Looking Glass Stable
08:38:14 IA Glass 👋
Yes, Sash. That is homozygous (:
Sashimi Stables
08:36:13 Sash
-HEE Click-
Is this a ToTo variation?
Munchkin Stables
08:33:07 Munn - PONs
He is...different, that's for sure
Silver Melody Acres
08:32:38 Solar - KNNs
Oh, very cool!
Siren Sound Estates
08:31:48 S҉ Sem
-HEE Click-
This Chim is really special
Silver Melody Acres
08:28:00 Solar - KNNs
Yeah, I need to see which boys get to keep their balls XD

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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