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Good luck with yours later too, Ryn.
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Zen I also have an interview today but mine isn’t until later
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Hope it goes well, Zen!
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I'm so nervous >> I have my interview call for the Dept of Ag in like 7 minutes
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Yeah, that's what Oklahoma is
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Probably, my brain doesn't do the thing
The Old Gods
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oh. you mean rocky mountain horse?
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Rocky mountain pony
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what breed's a RMP?
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Sinister Ranch
10:31:57 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
-HEE Click-
I think the roan pattern changed... before the foal's roan pattern was deeper and harder to see the markings.... or am I tripping-
Glacier Bay Cove
10:11:38 Glacier Kittens
From the HEE store, or other players, yes
Resplendent Ranch
10:03:49 Tally/Twi
can I buy treats
Nolified
09:51:58 Miren
Thanks Ven
Stormsong Manor
09:51:27 Ven
WB x WB or WB stud x TB mare = WB
Stormsong Manor
09:51:00 Ven
SH
Nolified
09:48:47 Miren
Guys, what would I get if I do a WB x SH?
Ryn Equestrian
09:29:22 ryn ၄၃
Thank you :)
Rubygem-Chenya
09:28:47 Ruby/Cheshire
Good luck with yours later too, Ryn.
Ryn Equestrian
09:26:29 ryn ၄၃
Good luck!
Ryn Equestrian
09:26:23 ryn ၄၃
Zen I also have an interview today but mine isn’t until later
Rubygem-Chenya
09:23:54 Ruby/Cheshire
Hope it goes well, Zen!
Centralia Farms
09:23:19 Zen's KNNs
I'm so nervous >> I have my interview call for the Dept of Ag in like 7 minutes
Dimmed
09:21:27 Dimmy
:o oooh Ven
The Old Gods
09:16:31 Void Malign
Yeah, that's what Oklahoma is
Luxor Ranch
09:15:51 Ven
Probably, my brain doesn't do the thing
The Old Gods
09:15:22 Void Malign
oh. you mean rocky mountain horse?
Luxor Ranch
09:14:42 Ven
Rocky mountain pony
The Old Gods
09:14:11 Void Malign
what breed's a RMP?
Luxor Ranch
09:11:33 Ven
RMP-inspired silver black shades

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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