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oooh, when quests bring surprises
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Minerva
03:37:52 Min
Not sure what someone's put in my brother's dinner today but he's come home like a new human being 0-0 Sat and chatted to Mum and I for the longest time in years and even threw in what I think was a compliment 0-0
Rubygem-Chenya
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Oh great a tornado warning..
Kryptonite Warmblood
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Morning Glory Farms
03:31:58 Dino/Digital Tyrant
like I said unless you know for sure whats going on behind closed doors (three sides to every story) its always better to just mind your own and go with "if you have nothing nice to say dont say anything at all" youre welcome to have your own thoughts and feelings about things, but it doesnt need to be voiced 90% of the time 🤷🏽‍♀️ just my opinion
The Old Gods
03:29:52 Void Malign
Okay? That doesn't mean anything. My bio dad remarried and I considered her my other mom, even though I rarely saw her.
Ryn Equestrian
03:28:12  ryn ୨୧
The mother has the kid almost 24/7 so my cousin doesn’t even get to see her like that

She gets to see her maybe twice every other week if that
The Old Gods
03:26:42 Void Malign
Yup. Had a step-dad that treated me like baggage. Ain't a fun feeling. Frankly, it's one of those situation where you should have kept your thoughts to yourself. The statement she made about mother's day ultimately hurts no one
Morning Glory Farms
03:24:34 Dino/Digital Tyrant
Probably wouldnt have said anything, who knows maybe this is the first time the kid has had someone to look up to as a mother, maybe her own mother is useless or god knows what, as for what she said to her sister just because one person says shitty things to someone doesnt mean you also have to say shitty things to someone, Id much rather someone be active and willing in a realtionship to accept the already existing kids than to treat them like trash and baggage
Whispering Wood Barn
03:22:21 ~Whispy~
Ryn, Your feelings are valid ♡
Ryn Equestrian
03:21:14  ryn ୨୧
I don’t know I guess

It just rubbed me the wrong way so I said something for once
Whispering Wood Barn
03:20:10 ~Whispy~
Now maybe if it's been a year or more then.... 🤷🏼‍♀️ but if they were engaged to be married or married that would make more sense to me.

Anything can happen when you are dating.
The Old Gods
03:19:54 Void Malign
Honestly, I see it as one of those situations where it's just better to not say anything and let them be happy.
The Old Gods
03:18:38 Void Malign
I considered my step-dad more of a parent than my biological dad pretty early on.
Ryn Equestrian
03:18:14  ryn ୨୧
Exactly whispy
The Old Gods
03:18:03 Void Malign
It really doesn't lol
Ryn Equestrian
03:17:41  ryn ୨୧
Of course parents don’t have to be blood, but I think it takes more than just being with the father to count as a parent especially for such little time
Whispering Wood Barn
03:17:00 ~Whispy~
Ryn,
I think it's fine you spoke your mind. But, 6 months is a bit soon in my opinion even if her and the child have a good/close relationship
Ryn Equestrian
03:16:56  ryn ୨୧
It’s been 6 months..

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Moonbird Magic
03:51:41 🛸Divaaa
oooh, when quests bring surprises
-HEE Click-
Minerva
03:37:52 Min
Not sure what someone's put in my brother's dinner today but he's come home like a new human being 0-0 Sat and chatted to Mum and I for the longest time in years and even threw in what I think was a compliment 0-0
Rubygem-Chenya
03:34:48 Ruby/Cheshire
Oh great a tornado warning..
Kryptonite Warmblood
03:34:07 Pepsi
WPP SH filly!
-HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
03:33:44 Ruby/Cheshire
Hello
Morning Glory Farms
03:31:58 Dino/Digital Tyrant
like I said unless you know for sure whats going on behind closed doors (three sides to every story) its always better to just mind your own and go with "if you have nothing nice to say dont say anything at all" youre welcome to have your own thoughts and feelings about things, but it doesnt need to be voiced 90% of the time 🤷🏽‍♀️ just my opinion
The Old Gods
03:29:52 Void Malign
Okay? That doesn't mean anything. My bio dad remarried and I considered her my other mom, even though I rarely saw her.
Ryn Equestrian
03:28:12  ryn ୨୧
The mother has the kid almost 24/7 so my cousin doesn’t even get to see her like that

She gets to see her maybe twice every other week if that
The Old Gods
03:26:42 Void Malign
Yup. Had a step-dad that treated me like baggage. Ain't a fun feeling. Frankly, it's one of those situation where you should have kept your thoughts to yourself. The statement she made about mother's day ultimately hurts no one
Morning Glory Farms
03:24:34 Dino/Digital Tyrant
Probably wouldnt have said anything, who knows maybe this is the first time the kid has had someone to look up to as a mother, maybe her own mother is useless or god knows what, as for what she said to her sister just because one person says shitty things to someone doesnt mean you also have to say shitty things to someone, Id much rather someone be active and willing in a realtionship to accept the already existing kids than to treat them like trash and baggage
Whispering Wood Barn
03:22:21 ~Whispy~
Ryn, Your feelings are valid ♡
Ryn Equestrian
03:21:14  ryn ୨୧
I don’t know I guess

It just rubbed me the wrong way so I said something for once
Whispering Wood Barn
03:20:10 ~Whispy~
Now maybe if it's been a year or more then.... 🤷🏼‍♀️ but if they were engaged to be married or married that would make more sense to me.

Anything can happen when you are dating.
The Old Gods
03:19:54 Void Malign
Honestly, I see it as one of those situations where it's just better to not say anything and let them be happy.
The Old Gods
03:18:38 Void Malign
I considered my step-dad more of a parent than my biological dad pretty early on.
Ryn Equestrian
03:18:14  ryn ୨୧
Exactly whispy
The Old Gods
03:18:03 Void Malign
It really doesn't lol
Ryn Equestrian
03:17:41  ryn ୨୧
Of course parents don’t have to be blood, but I think it takes more than just being with the father to count as a parent especially for such little time
Whispering Wood Barn
03:17:00 ~Whispy~
Ryn,
I think it's fine you spoke your mind. But, 6 months is a bit soon in my opinion even if her and the child have a good/close relationship
Ryn Equestrian
03:16:56  ryn ୨୧
It’s been 6 months..

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


The Old Gods
 
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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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