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Star Hooves Stable
11:08:16 gen! ☆
-HEE Click-
he's a pretty boy too, should I geld him?
Star Hooves Stable
11:07:38 gen! ☆
thank you fang!
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:07:27 Gladius
Fang - right?? It's so frustrating. Especially when each new doctor just follows the same protocols you've already tried
Star Hooves Stable
11:07:18 gen! ☆
thank you Gladius!
Whitewolf
11:06:59 Fang
Congrats Gen
Nordahl
11:06:56 Athena | RID/KNN
Those good ones are few and far between I feel
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:06:45 Gladius
A good doc is worth their weight in gold

Congrats gen!
Whitewolf
11:06:45 Fang
Ridiculous Gladius
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:06:16 Gladius
That's super. My whole family at various points has had Lyme, started with my mom who had it the worst and her GP no hesitation set her up with all the blood work and referred her to a specialist. Just about saved her life, pretty much
Star Hooves Stable
11:06:13 gen! ☆
just rated my first self bred W, I'm so happy!
Nordahl
11:04:24 Athena | RID/KNN
My chiro ordered my hip and back xrays. My left hip has always been higher than the right and after almost 2 years of adjustments nothings changed and I had mentioned it was starting to cause me alot of pain some days. He didnt even hesitate to be like okay we need some xrays just to make sure I'm not missing something. Hes amazing
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:04:21 Gladius
Oof that sucks fang. I hurt my wrist cross country schooling ten years ago and it took 2-3 years of insisting shit was wrong before we finally got some MRIs worth a damn that showed the tear in one of my wrist ligaments. 3 years of x-rays, PT/OT, four different doctors and finally an injection before getting surgery.
Whitewolf
11:03:44 Fang
I guess they all know best. Lol!
Whitewolf
11:01:49 Fang
It took me two years of telling my doctor about my shoulder to finally get X-rays and an MRI done. After hurting already for 2/3 years. I still don’t like her but options here are all crap Dr wise.
Nordahl
11:01:07 Athena | RID/KNN
I couldnt even tell the xray tech yesterday that she was in fact not at my hip. I guess I have a very high pelvis and she couldnt find the top of it and I couldnt bring myself to correct her because obviously she knows what shes doing.
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:01:06 Gladius
Em - so true lol and we as patients have so much more, and more simple, access to those records these days. I'm always so thankful I have a medical professional in my family, so I grew up around the lingo for the most part and have someone to run it by
Insignia Elites
11:00:06 Em
Thats 100% me Athena
Whitewolf
10:59:09 Fang
Athena, I feel that in my soul.
Ladys Syable
10:58:38 
can i breed my mare that is in one of my accounts to my stallion that is in this account
Nordahl
10:57:53 Athena | RID/KNN
I kind of just suck at standing up for myself in general

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Star Hooves Stable
11:08:16 gen! ☆
-HEE Click-
he's a pretty boy too, should I geld him?
Star Hooves Stable
11:07:38 gen! ☆
thank you fang!
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:07:27 Gladius
Fang - right?? It's so frustrating. Especially when each new doctor just follows the same protocols you've already tried
Star Hooves Stable
11:07:18 gen! ☆
thank you Gladius!
Whitewolf
11:06:59 Fang
Congrats Gen
Nordahl
11:06:56 Athena | RID/KNN
Those good ones are few and far between I feel
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:06:45 Gladius
A good doc is worth their weight in gold

Congrats gen!
Whitewolf
11:06:45 Fang
Ridiculous Gladius
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:06:16 Gladius
That's super. My whole family at various points has had Lyme, started with my mom who had it the worst and her GP no hesitation set her up with all the blood work and referred her to a specialist. Just about saved her life, pretty much
Star Hooves Stable
11:06:13 gen! ☆
just rated my first self bred W, I'm so happy!
Nordahl
11:04:24 Athena | RID/KNN
My chiro ordered my hip and back xrays. My left hip has always been higher than the right and after almost 2 years of adjustments nothings changed and I had mentioned it was starting to cause me alot of pain some days. He didnt even hesitate to be like okay we need some xrays just to make sure I'm not missing something. Hes amazing
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:04:21 Gladius
Oof that sucks fang. I hurt my wrist cross country schooling ten years ago and it took 2-3 years of insisting shit was wrong before we finally got some MRIs worth a damn that showed the tear in one of my wrist ligaments. 3 years of x-rays, PT/OT, four different doctors and finally an injection before getting surgery.
Whitewolf
11:03:44 Fang
I guess they all know best. Lol!
Whitewolf
11:01:49 Fang
It took me two years of telling my doctor about my shoulder to finally get X-rays and an MRI done. After hurting already for 2/3 years. I still don’t like her but options here are all crap Dr wise.
Nordahl
11:01:07 Athena | RID/KNN
I couldnt even tell the xray tech yesterday that she was in fact not at my hip. I guess I have a very high pelvis and she couldnt find the top of it and I couldnt bring myself to correct her because obviously she knows what shes doing.
Gaelic Gladiacres
11:01:06 Gladius
Em - so true lol and we as patients have so much more, and more simple, access to those records these days. I'm always so thankful I have a medical professional in my family, so I grew up around the lingo for the most part and have someone to run it by
Insignia Elites
11:00:06 Em
Thats 100% me Athena
Whitewolf
10:59:09 Fang
Athena, I feel that in my soul.
Ladys Syable
10:58:38 
can i breed my mare that is in one of my accounts to my stallion that is in this account
Nordahl
10:57:53 Athena | RID/KNN
I kind of just suck at standing up for myself in general

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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