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Pragma
02:09:17 Prag/Liz
I do believe that Splash may have to be in the color name. Don't quote me, but I think I ran into that recently.
Calela Eventing
02:09:11 Cali
Estelle
I believe that goes in sales chat but i do if you want to send me a message
The Old Gods
02:09:03 Void Malign
well, can you link to the stud? If it didn't complete, then he's likely not homozygous
Moonhaven Stables
02:08:15 Estelle
Does anyone have commissions for artwork?
Scout Creek
02:08:06 Scout
It wasn't for homo spl, it was just 'breed a splash white foal.' Maybe there was a game bug.
The Old Gods
02:07:11 Void Malign
white won't matter. Chances are, the quest requires a specific rating or it needs the foal to be homozygous splash
Scout Creek
02:06:28 Scout
Ahh that must have been it.
Dash and Duchess
02:05:29 DD | ~Squizard~
If the foal was white all patterns are hidden I believe ;)
Scout Creek
02:05:01 Scout
Also FRed, lol. She was white though. Does that have some sort of negating factor on Spl?
Angels angels
02:04:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oo brindle lol
Dash and Duchess
02:04:21 DD | ~Squizard~
Can you link the dam?
Pentagram Stables
02:03:21 Penta - KNNs
That's weird, if the Dam also had Splsh
Scout Creek
02:02:33 Scout
I already FRed
Pragma
02:01:33 Prag/Liz
Scout
Can we see the baby?
Scout Creek
02:00:48 Scout
I just bred to an SplSpl stallion for a quest and didn't get a splash white foal... what the heck.
Ranch Lands Training
01:59:12 Lilly/PON Addict
We got freezing rain last night. So chores this morning was not very fun at all. I fell twice, on time into a puddle

But ponies are check, cows fed, and some tack moved out of the calving barn into the new tack room
The Feral Equine
01:58:17 Khaos
Gorgeous Pon Brats
Pon Brats
01:57:42 
Hm.. Who to send you to..
-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
01:55:47 Cali
Para
I use Ibis on my laptop, you should be able to click the free version but it is very restrictive. Krita is super good as well and free
Bioshock Manor
01:49:41 Storm
I wish there was a list of which straws we ordered and what year. It would be easier to organize things.

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Pragma
02:09:17 Prag/Liz
I do believe that Splash may have to be in the color name. Don't quote me, but I think I ran into that recently.
Calela Eventing
02:09:11 Cali
Estelle
I believe that goes in sales chat but i do if you want to send me a message
The Old Gods
02:09:03 Void Malign
well, can you link to the stud? If it didn't complete, then he's likely not homozygous
Moonhaven Stables
02:08:15 Estelle
Does anyone have commissions for artwork?
Scout Creek
02:08:06 Scout
It wasn't for homo spl, it was just 'breed a splash white foal.' Maybe there was a game bug.
The Old Gods
02:07:11 Void Malign
white won't matter. Chances are, the quest requires a specific rating or it needs the foal to be homozygous splash
Scout Creek
02:06:28 Scout
Ahh that must have been it.
Dash and Duchess
02:05:29 DD | ~Squizard~
If the foal was white all patterns are hidden I believe ;)
Scout Creek
02:05:01 Scout
Also FRed, lol. She was white though. Does that have some sort of negating factor on Spl?
Angels angels
02:04:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oo brindle lol
Dash and Duchess
02:04:21 DD | ~Squizard~
Can you link the dam?
Pentagram Stables
02:03:21 Penta - KNNs
That's weird, if the Dam also had Splsh
Scout Creek
02:02:33 Scout
I already FRed
Pragma
02:01:33 Prag/Liz
Scout
Can we see the baby?
Scout Creek
02:00:48 Scout
I just bred to an SplSpl stallion for a quest and didn't get a splash white foal... what the heck.
Ranch Lands Training
01:59:12 Lilly/PON Addict
We got freezing rain last night. So chores this morning was not very fun at all. I fell twice, on time into a puddle

But ponies are check, cows fed, and some tack moved out of the calving barn into the new tack room
The Feral Equine
01:58:17 Khaos
Gorgeous Pon Brats
Pon Brats
01:57:42 
Hm.. Who to send you to..
-HEE Click-
Calela Eventing
01:55:47 Cali
Para
I use Ibis on my laptop, you should be able to click the free version but it is very restrictive. Krita is super good as well and free
Bioshock Manor
01:49:41 Storm
I wish there was a list of which straws we ordered and what year. It would be easier to organize things.

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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