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Double S Elite Farm
01:29:54 
@ San ok thank you that makes sense.
Santana Rising
01:25:24 San
River View: J1 = jumping at level 1, 1/14 is the date the show ran (14th of January) and 12 is the placing the horse got in this show
Calela Eventing
01:19:03 Cali
Quest Level 5
Capture
Capture a Chestnut horse.
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits 1Frontier Map

Best quests are the easy ones that give you maps
River View Sportys
01:16:15 


when showing and you sort your barn out by viewing and clicking showing what all the numbers mean. looks something like this

Playing Queen - ------- - ------- J1 1/14-12
Santana Rising
01:13:24 San
Pon are also my go to. They come in such fun colours and I use my appy tokens on them.
Looking Glass Stable
01:12:18 IA Glass 👋
Hm, no solid plans. Beyond mostly AA & TB, praying for a lad strong in Dressage lol. They really are!!
And maybe some Pon/other breeds scattered in for fun (:
Santana Rising
01:05:44 San
What are your plans? An AD bravery who has W in Dressage would be nice for a change. They are all so weak at that!
Looking Glass Stable
01:04:33 IA Glass 👋
Definitely excited to see if you get any new lovely ADB prospects ♡
I hope the best of luck to you San (:
Santana Rising
01:03:32 San
The only thing I hate is that I'm working late shift that week. I mean I worked late yesterday too since a colleague needed my shift, but today I'm free so I don't mind that much. Will have to figure out what to catch, since I bought several new WWW TB boys and now I'm not that desperate for them 😜 the new kinds of maps I will definitely use for mares though!
Looking Glass Stable
12:58:53 IA Glass 👋
Nice San! What are your capturing plans/goals?
I'm actually sort of glad we have another unexpected week to prepare now lol
Santana Rising
12:57:27 San
I managed to get some questing in when I woke up 20 minutes before the show run and remembered I have a minor showing quest to get off my shoulder. Getting those map numbers up for capture day.
Calela Eventing
12:50:37 Cali
Best chem lesson I’ve had in forever
Looking Glass Stable
12:50:27 IA Glass 👋
Thanks San ♡
He definitely lucked out just about as hard as he could lol.
He'll actually get to see some ladies ♡
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:50:24 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
night chat
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:50:16 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
happens to all of us don't sweat it
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:50:07 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
oop
Calela Eventing
12:47:43 Cali
I set the floor on fire during chem yesterday xD
Santana Rising
12:46:57 San
Love this! The strpes are especially nice in the way they compliment his apricot
Looking Glass Stable
12:45:26 IA Glass 👋
-HEE Click-

Lucky, lucky lad 👀
Nordic Designs
12:36:31 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
I'll almost never try and show/play on my phone again. It's soooooo much faster clicking tab and whatever letter I need in rapid back to back movements than zoom click tap unzoom zoom click repeat cycle

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Double S Elite Farm
01:29:54 
@ San ok thank you that makes sense.
Santana Rising
01:25:24 San
River View: J1 = jumping at level 1, 1/14 is the date the show ran (14th of January) and 12 is the placing the horse got in this show
Calela Eventing
01:19:03 Cali
Quest Level 5
Capture
Capture a Chestnut horse.
Reward: 1,000 Eden Bucks 15,000Store Credits 1Frontier Map

Best quests are the easy ones that give you maps
River View Sportys
01:16:15 


when showing and you sort your barn out by viewing and clicking showing what all the numbers mean. looks something like this

Playing Queen - ------- - ------- J1 1/14-12
Santana Rising
01:13:24 San
Pon are also my go to. They come in such fun colours and I use my appy tokens on them.
Looking Glass Stable
01:12:18 IA Glass 👋
Hm, no solid plans. Beyond mostly AA & TB, praying for a lad strong in Dressage lol. They really are!!
And maybe some Pon/other breeds scattered in for fun (:
Santana Rising
01:05:44 San
What are your plans? An AD bravery who has W in Dressage would be nice for a change. They are all so weak at that!
Looking Glass Stable
01:04:33 IA Glass 👋
Definitely excited to see if you get any new lovely ADB prospects ♡
I hope the best of luck to you San (:
Santana Rising
01:03:32 San
The only thing I hate is that I'm working late shift that week. I mean I worked late yesterday too since a colleague needed my shift, but today I'm free so I don't mind that much. Will have to figure out what to catch, since I bought several new WWW TB boys and now I'm not that desperate for them 😜 the new kinds of maps I will definitely use for mares though!
Looking Glass Stable
12:58:53 IA Glass 👋
Nice San! What are your capturing plans/goals?
I'm actually sort of glad we have another unexpected week to prepare now lol
Santana Rising
12:57:27 San
I managed to get some questing in when I woke up 20 minutes before the show run and remembered I have a minor showing quest to get off my shoulder. Getting those map numbers up for capture day.
Calela Eventing
12:50:37 Cali
Best chem lesson I’ve had in forever
Looking Glass Stable
12:50:27 IA Glass 👋
Thanks San ♡
He definitely lucked out just about as hard as he could lol.
He'll actually get to see some ladies ♡
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:50:24 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
night chat
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:50:16 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
happens to all of us don't sweat it
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:50:07 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
oop
Calela Eventing
12:47:43 Cali
I set the floor on fire during chem yesterday xD
Santana Rising
12:46:57 San
Love this! The strpes are especially nice in the way they compliment his apricot
Looking Glass Stable
12:45:26 IA Glass 👋
-HEE Click-

Lucky, lucky lad 👀
Nordic Designs
12:36:31 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
I'll almost never try and show/play on my phone again. It's soooooo much faster clicking tab and whatever letter I need in rapid back to back movements than zoom click tap unzoom zoom click repeat cycle

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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