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Epona Eventing
08:42:53 Citlali ˚˖
Who's obsessed? Not me...
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Snow Stable
08:40:24 Snow❆Gem
@min

O.o
Silver Melody Acres
08:40:14 Solar - KNNs
Hopefully the weather will cooperate here so I can get back to doing more in the garden! I really need to get some plants in containers but this week has been cold and rainy
Snow Stable
08:40:11 Snow❆Gem
@howl

Yum! And a walk in the park sounds nice. Maybe when it stops being so rainy we can make some time. :D

Honestly a bit tired of most of my excerise being at work. LMAO
Artemis Ridge
08:38:27 Howl
I just have one more straw I need to get before tomorrow (or find another stud that I can grab a straw from)
Minerva
08:37:49 Min
Legit! He was telling me all about how he was sorry they missed their AM timeslot, that he'd already been out here there and everywhere and then got back to the depot to find these even though others went out empty and could have taken them. Then grumbling about the fact that it was definitely going to rain this weekend purely because its a bank holiday and then annoyed at having to do logs on paper and on his phone thing 🤣🤣 Oh and that one of his other pallets had been stacked on top of some roofing tiles that had moved. I was just like ok dude hope the rest of your day goes better!
Artemis Ridge
08:37:45 Howl
I was planning to make maybe a couple chicken sandwiches and head to the park for a bit Gem. Other than that just relax x)
Sunny Side Facility
08:37:22 Sunny
my bedroom is like that 24/7 (-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)
Snow Stable
08:36:02 Snow❆Gem
@eury

O.o My gosh man!
Snow Stable
08:35:45 Snow❆Gem
@howl

XD hehe!
Snow Stable
08:34:55 Snow❆Gem
Any weekend plans anyone? I work only on the weekends and dad works weekday. So big plans don't really happen. lol
The Old Gods
08:34:52 Void Malign
I might have forgotten to turn the heater on last night and woken up to a 63 degree house lol
Sunny Side Facility
08:34:30 Sunny
he was nice but was like "Thats a...UHM....cool thing... I guess?..
Sunny Side Facility
08:33:43 Sunny
oh my gosh, haha Ive had so many Uber drivers like that! the one time my dad got pissed and cursed at him
Minerva
08:32:16 Min
Just had a few pallets of stuff delivered to work. The guy was simultaneously the nicest and most negative driver I think we've ever had 🤣🤣 Utterly pleasant whilst also spouting an endless stream of complaints 🤣🤣 He for some reason came right in when I answered the doorbell and went "God its dark in here". I was so surprised all I heard myself say was "I like to pretend it's nighttime" which was an unneccessarily fucking weird response 🙈🤣🤣
Artemis Ridge
08:30:45 Howl
Oh I didn't notice that Gem
Time to buy two gold tickets XD
Gemstone Stable
08:26:55 Snow❆Gem
@ash

Oh nice! XD
Ashcroft Park Stud
08:25:31 Ash
Ugh just 2.5 hours more of work then a long weekend 🎉
Gem Queens Estate
08:23:26 Snow❆Gem
Just noticed the giveaway mare is a WWW KNN! XD *plunks down two golden tickets*
Sunny Side Facility
08:16:47 Sunny
ok <3 ill have to wait for tollover then

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Epona Eventing
08:42:53 Citlali ˚˖
Who's obsessed? Not me...
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Snow Stable
08:40:24 Snow❆Gem
@min

O.o
Silver Melody Acres
08:40:14 Solar - KNNs
Hopefully the weather will cooperate here so I can get back to doing more in the garden! I really need to get some plants in containers but this week has been cold and rainy
Snow Stable
08:40:11 Snow❆Gem
@howl

Yum! And a walk in the park sounds nice. Maybe when it stops being so rainy we can make some time. :D

Honestly a bit tired of most of my excerise being at work. LMAO
Artemis Ridge
08:38:27 Howl
I just have one more straw I need to get before tomorrow (or find another stud that I can grab a straw from)
Minerva
08:37:49 Min
Legit! He was telling me all about how he was sorry they missed their AM timeslot, that he'd already been out here there and everywhere and then got back to the depot to find these even though others went out empty and could have taken them. Then grumbling about the fact that it was definitely going to rain this weekend purely because its a bank holiday and then annoyed at having to do logs on paper and on his phone thing 🤣🤣 Oh and that one of his other pallets had been stacked on top of some roofing tiles that had moved. I was just like ok dude hope the rest of your day goes better!
Artemis Ridge
08:37:45 Howl
I was planning to make maybe a couple chicken sandwiches and head to the park for a bit Gem. Other than that just relax x)
Sunny Side Facility
08:37:22 Sunny
my bedroom is like that 24/7 (-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)
Snow Stable
08:36:02 Snow❆Gem
@eury

O.o My gosh man!
Snow Stable
08:35:45 Snow❆Gem
@howl

XD hehe!
Snow Stable
08:34:55 Snow❆Gem
Any weekend plans anyone? I work only on the weekends and dad works weekday. So big plans don't really happen. lol
The Old Gods
08:34:52 Void Malign
I might have forgotten to turn the heater on last night and woken up to a 63 degree house lol
Sunny Side Facility
08:34:30 Sunny
he was nice but was like "Thats a...UHM....cool thing... I guess?..
Sunny Side Facility
08:33:43 Sunny
oh my gosh, haha Ive had so many Uber drivers like that! the one time my dad got pissed and cursed at him
Minerva
08:32:16 Min
Just had a few pallets of stuff delivered to work. The guy was simultaneously the nicest and most negative driver I think we've ever had 🤣🤣 Utterly pleasant whilst also spouting an endless stream of complaints 🤣🤣 He for some reason came right in when I answered the doorbell and went "God its dark in here". I was so surprised all I heard myself say was "I like to pretend it's nighttime" which was an unneccessarily fucking weird response 🙈🤣🤣
Artemis Ridge
08:30:45 Howl
Oh I didn't notice that Gem
Time to buy two gold tickets XD
Gemstone Stable
08:26:55 Snow❆Gem
@ash

Oh nice! XD
Ashcroft Park Stud
08:25:31 Ash
Ugh just 2.5 hours more of work then a long weekend 🎉
Gem Queens Estate
08:23:26 Snow❆Gem
Just noticed the giveaway mare is a WWW KNN! XD *plunks down two golden tickets*
Sunny Side Facility
08:16:47 Sunny
ok <3 ill have to wait for tollover then

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


Mediterranean
 
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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


Moonlight Stud
 
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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


The Old Gods
 
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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


Darley Heights
 
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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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