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Vahana
04:06:50 Val
Stable Raid anyone? Need to do it for quests x)
Minerva
04:06:02 Min
Aaargh I hate exports. Why this company in Switzerland is buying one singular tiny US-made joystick from our UK distribution company is beyond me...
Asfamoth
03:47:20 Asfa
-HEE Click- Psst new forum game
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:41:00 Ash
I wanna keep my Stormrage embryo frozen for a while lol xD
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:40:33 Ash
Ah fab, thanks Min
Minerva
03:39:18 Min
No Ash it won't 😊
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:38:58 Ash
Morning, does anyone know how it works if I use a straw to create an embryo but keep it in my freezer - will the straw still count as ‘outstanding’ against the stallion’s straw count?
SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:26:07 
i wish it showed on the barn page, like the E shows there
SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:25:17 
ok thanks minerv. thats what i wondered. if entering both kinds would scratch one out. i have seen some scratched tht i did not DO, so i thought that was what happened.
Minerva
03:18:38 Min
What do you mean? If you scratch a show, you withdraw your entry and then can enter another one. You can have a horse be entered into normal, speciality and member shows at the same time
SwankPony
03:17:56 Swanky
He grew up really pretty
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SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:10:44 
still wondering if one show type cancels out the other in a scratch? i got mixed messages on this
SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:01:13 
i wish that entering member shows showed up on the barn page the way regular shows do!
Guard Horseman Gang
02:59:51 GHG
I haven't even begun my color breeding for this year
Guard Horseman Gang
02:59:06 GHG
I am in the process of a huge cull
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:58:06 
guard horseman tht is a really nice looking pony
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:56:24 
Huge Congratulations! Your Stable has won an award! Good job!
The Joker
02:45:53 Ari <3
Shiny pasture bred 👀
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Guard Horseman Gang
02:41:20 GHG
not to mad at the color
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Maco Stables
02:16:38 Maco
@Diva
I think she is stunning just like that :)

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Vahana
04:06:50 Val
Stable Raid anyone? Need to do it for quests x)
Minerva
04:06:02 Min
Aaargh I hate exports. Why this company in Switzerland is buying one singular tiny US-made joystick from our UK distribution company is beyond me...
Asfamoth
03:47:20 Asfa
-HEE Click- Psst new forum game
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:41:00 Ash
I wanna keep my Stormrage embryo frozen for a while lol xD
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:40:33 Ash
Ah fab, thanks Min
Minerva
03:39:18 Min
No Ash it won't 😊
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:38:58 Ash
Morning, does anyone know how it works if I use a straw to create an embryo but keep it in my freezer - will the straw still count as ‘outstanding’ against the stallion’s straw count?
SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:26:07 
i wish it showed on the barn page, like the E shows there
SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:25:17 
ok thanks minerv. thats what i wondered. if entering both kinds would scratch one out. i have seen some scratched tht i did not DO, so i thought that was what happened.
Minerva
03:18:38 Min
What do you mean? If you scratch a show, you withdraw your entry and then can enter another one. You can have a horse be entered into normal, speciality and member shows at the same time
SwankPony
03:17:56 Swanky
He grew up really pretty
-HEE Click-
SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:10:44 
still wondering if one show type cancels out the other in a scratch? i got mixed messages on this
SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:01:13 
i wish that entering member shows showed up on the barn page the way regular shows do!
Guard Horseman Gang
02:59:51 GHG
I haven't even begun my color breeding for this year
Guard Horseman Gang
02:59:06 GHG
I am in the process of a huge cull
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:58:06 
guard horseman tht is a really nice looking pony
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:56:24 
Huge Congratulations! Your Stable has won an award! Good job!
The Joker
02:45:53 Ari <3
Shiny pasture bred 👀
-HEE Click-
Guard Horseman Gang
02:41:20 GHG
not to mad at the color
-HEE Click-
Maco Stables
02:16:38 Maco
@Diva
I think she is stunning just like that :)

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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