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Mythological
02:37:56 RIP-Tim:2016-26
DD
Have you seen Mana around?
Mythological
02:37:15 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Min
Not that I know of. Almost broke a dam south of me. I don't think any houses got washed away this year.
Pink Latte Dressage
02:36:48 🦦
Want to vote?

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Minerva
02:35:46 Min
Shitting hell! Hope they've not done too much damage to things?
Dash and Duchess
02:35:09 DD | ~Squizard~
Myth, it's like the plague xD sticks to everything and everyone immediately lol
Mythological
02:34:41 RIP-Tim:2016-26
DD
LMAO

Min
We're at 4 flash floods now. Two were in the same bloody day. 😭
Dash and Duchess
02:33:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Gosh, I was drawing for practically no time, and managed to coat my hand and clothes in graphite xD
Minerva
02:32:19 Min
Lol- think it's caught everyone by surprise to be fair! Nobody's thinking suncream just yet xD

Fingers crossed Myth! Could do without that lol
Mythological
02:31:18 RIP-Tim:2016-26
I hope we're done with flash floods here for the year.
Ashcroft Park Stud
02:30:02 Ash
How lovely, that sounds like the perfect Sunday afternoon <3
Almost like summer - although I have spotted some absolutely luminous sunburns out haha
Minerva
02:29:48 Min
Heya Myth!
Mythological
02:29:27 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Hey Min
Minerva
02:28:19 Min
It's been lovely today hasn't it Ash!! I've been grooming ponies all afternoon for a friend
Ashcroft Park Stud
02:27:22 Ash
If your weather was anything like ours Min, it was too gorgeous out to be indoors this afternoon anyways :D
Minerva
02:25:35 Min
I'm definitely not winning any attendance awards xD
Artemis Ridge
02:24:19 Howl
Yeah Min x)
Lucky Ranch
02:23:52 luhckeigh
si
Minerva
02:23:44 Min
Ahh bollocks it was afternoon trivia today wasn't it
Artemis Ridge
02:23:24 Howl
She's pretty
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Ryn Equestrian
02:21:59  ryn ୨୧
My husband and I like to go out to eat for our birthdays


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Mythological
02:37:56 RIP-Tim:2016-26
DD
Have you seen Mana around?
Mythological
02:37:15 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Min
Not that I know of. Almost broke a dam south of me. I don't think any houses got washed away this year.
Pink Latte Dressage
02:36:48 🦦
Want to vote?

-HEE Click-
Minerva
02:35:46 Min
Shitting hell! Hope they've not done too much damage to things?
Dash and Duchess
02:35:09 DD | ~Squizard~
Myth, it's like the plague xD sticks to everything and everyone immediately lol
Mythological
02:34:41 RIP-Tim:2016-26
DD
LMAO

Min
We're at 4 flash floods now. Two were in the same bloody day. 😭
Dash and Duchess
02:33:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Gosh, I was drawing for practically no time, and managed to coat my hand and clothes in graphite xD
Minerva
02:32:19 Min
Lol- think it's caught everyone by surprise to be fair! Nobody's thinking suncream just yet xD

Fingers crossed Myth! Could do without that lol
Mythological
02:31:18 RIP-Tim:2016-26
I hope we're done with flash floods here for the year.
Ashcroft Park Stud
02:30:02 Ash
How lovely, that sounds like the perfect Sunday afternoon <3
Almost like summer - although I have spotted some absolutely luminous sunburns out haha
Minerva
02:29:48 Min
Heya Myth!
Mythological
02:29:27 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Hey Min
Minerva
02:28:19 Min
It's been lovely today hasn't it Ash!! I've been grooming ponies all afternoon for a friend
Ashcroft Park Stud
02:27:22 Ash
If your weather was anything like ours Min, it was too gorgeous out to be indoors this afternoon anyways :D
Minerva
02:25:35 Min
I'm definitely not winning any attendance awards xD
Artemis Ridge
02:24:19 Howl
Yeah Min x)
Lucky Ranch
02:23:52 luhckeigh
si
Minerva
02:23:44 Min
Ahh bollocks it was afternoon trivia today wasn't it
Artemis Ridge
02:23:24 Howl
She's pretty
-HEE Click-
Ryn Equestrian
02:21:59  ryn ୨୧
My husband and I like to go out to eat for our birthdays


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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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