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Executive Stables
04:58:20 Exec/Lyssa
Lol yeah I spent some capturing then stopped cause I figured yall would sometime and I could then see more without spending any more XD
*Westchester Racing*
04:56:24 
not yet I was hoping to but I'm about to run out of money so I had to stop
Gemstone Stable
04:56:22 Snow❆Gem
@lyssa

Good question. I haven't captured since then...
Executive Stables
04:55:30 Exec/Lyssa
Has anyone caught a GP?
Gemstone Stable
04:54:56 Snow❆Gem
@tokyo

;P *slaps knee laughing*
Sinister Ranch
04:54:24 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
Yeah loool XD
Gemstone Stable
04:53:22 Snow❆Gem
@toyko

The nickname? hehe! XD
WildWind Equestrians
04:53:22 Wild
oo tano
Sinister Ranch
04:52:31 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
Gem that name tho-
Sylvan Lake Stables
04:50:38 Tano
-HEE Click-

oh you're cool
Gemstone Stable
04:50:08 Snow❆Gem
LMAO XD

-HEE Click-
Sinister Ranch
04:49:51 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
Oop-
*Westchester Racing*
04:48:16 
I accidentally captured 5 stallions from the beach I meant to capture mares...
Sinister Ranch
04:47:06 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
-HEE Click-
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These shades for horses are getting more common idk if it is genes or what
*Westchester Racing*
04:43:50 
I wouldn't say so its just the shade seems weird to me it mostly on aqh's that I dislike em
Sinister Ranch
04:42:19 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
-HEE Click-
@westchester does dunskin look bad too with roan?
Bioshock Manor
04:41:33 Storm
Guarantee it'll be shorted to plume
Narran Park
04:40:58 Sting
Does anyone have a gene Tested Gulastra?
*Westchester Racing*
04:40:37 
I think that the only colors I don't really like are any of the duns they aren't my favorite unless they don't have the brown withers
Greenheart Stables
04:39:06 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
I see it lol
Also green is fine, i use gren to separate myself from the other Green stable lol

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Executive Stables
04:58:20 Exec/Lyssa
Lol yeah I spent some capturing then stopped cause I figured yall would sometime and I could then see more without spending any more XD
*Westchester Racing*
04:56:24 
not yet I was hoping to but I'm about to run out of money so I had to stop
Gemstone Stable
04:56:22 Snow❆Gem
@lyssa

Good question. I haven't captured since then...
Executive Stables
04:55:30 Exec/Lyssa
Has anyone caught a GP?
Gemstone Stable
04:54:56 Snow❆Gem
@tokyo

;P *slaps knee laughing*
Sinister Ranch
04:54:24 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
Yeah loool XD
Gemstone Stable
04:53:22 Snow❆Gem
@toyko

The nickname? hehe! XD
WildWind Equestrians
04:53:22 Wild
oo tano
Sinister Ranch
04:52:31 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
Gem that name tho-
Sylvan Lake Stables
04:50:38 Tano
-HEE Click-

oh you're cool
Gemstone Stable
04:50:08 Snow❆Gem
LMAO XD

-HEE Click-
Sinister Ranch
04:49:51 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
Oop-
*Westchester Racing*
04:48:16 
I accidentally captured 5 stallions from the beach I meant to capture mares...
Sinister Ranch
04:47:06 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
These shades for horses are getting more common idk if it is genes or what
*Westchester Racing*
04:43:50 
I wouldn't say so its just the shade seems weird to me it mostly on aqh's that I dislike em
Sinister Ranch
04:42:19 Tokyo(SH/WB Breeder)
-HEE Click-
@westchester does dunskin look bad too with roan?
Bioshock Manor
04:41:33 Storm
Guarantee it'll be shorted to plume
Narran Park
04:40:58 Sting
Does anyone have a gene Tested Gulastra?
*Westchester Racing*
04:40:37 
I think that the only colors I don't really like are any of the duns they aren't my favorite unless they don't have the brown withers
Greenheart Stables
04:39:06 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
I see it lol
Also green is fine, i use gren to separate myself from the other Green stable lol

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


Moonlight Stud
 
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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

Former Stable
 
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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


Darley Heights
 
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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


The Old Gods
 
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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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