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he also managed to hold onto a plane midair but yes
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Mission impossible was possible....Tom cruise proved it
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RFS Thoroughbreds
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I got one of those the other day and instead of blue raz it was more so blue ass. do not recomend
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coaulduraun is the correct spelling
Blue Diamond
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cauldron I think and yes 😈
RFS Thoroughbreds
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good lord is it blue raz?
RFS Thoroughbreds
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how do you spell that is it couldran? couldron?
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Of LoTuS
RFS Thoroughbreds
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bd
are you stirring a coldraun as well
Blue Diamond
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I'm cackling xD
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flea
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Assasin
12:10:35 
G'night yall!!
The Fallen Rulers
12:05:59 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Yawn
Wolf Dancer
12:03:21 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Kirph
My beautiful wife <3
Blue Diamond
11:46:19 Bluey
Semantics!!
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:46:02 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
he also managed to hold onto a plane midair but yes
Blue Diamond
11:44:30 Bluey
Mission impossible was possible....Tom cruise proved it
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:31:15 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
I mean its called impossible for a reason am I right
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:30:07 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
no <3
Blue Diamond
11:29:48 Bluey
BeLiEvE ThE iMpOsSiBlE
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:29:17 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
bd
ain't no way you called me a uncultured potato
Blue Diamond
11:28:53 Bluey
Fern
🙄 Uncultured potato
~
Rapcoon
Period 💅
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:27:40 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
I got one of those the other day and instead of blue raz it was more so blue ass. do not recomend
KPH Equestrian
11:27:33 Rapcoon | Jester
coaulduraun is the correct spelling
Blue Diamond
11:26:54 Bluey
cauldron I think and yes 😈
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:26:08 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
good lord is it blue raz?
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:25:55 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
how do you spell that is it couldran? couldron?
Blue Diamond
11:25:51 Bluey
Of LoTuS
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:25:39 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
bd
are you stirring a coldraun as well
Blue Diamond
11:25:11 Bluey
I'm cackling xD
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:25:08 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
flea
I do need to lock in, thanks for the reminder twin

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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