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Tanglewood
09:38:54 Technically Tangle
If it makes you feel better, I've dropped upwards of 2 million on matches before only to get the wimpiest EEE you've seen in your life
River
09:33:25 ♡ River
And it was a decent LB stud too- curse you RF!
Zalia Equine
09:31:03 Traveller
River, that's usually how it goes!
River
09:29:16 ♡ River
I did it anyways and hoped for something nice, was a perfect match, each covered eachothers weaknessess, and I got an EEE and I'm 50k broker T-T
Blacknight Legend
09:29:14 Knightie
River I believe it's quarter horse crossed with RID or WB is Sporthorse or Irish sporthorse I might be wrong
Blacknight Legend
09:27:10 Knightie
-HEE Click-
Here ya go lyra my fave
River
09:26:34 ♡ River
Knightie
Darn it! I need anything else xD
Blacknight Legend
09:26:08 Knightie
River that's an appendix quarter horse
River
09:25:34 ♡ River
What does an AQH mare x TB stallion make?
Wild Island PONs
09:21:14 Ly/Lyra
golden bay, not copper .-.
Wild Island PONs
09:19:20 Ly/Lyra
my fav wild and copper bay foals
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
Deez Nuts Stables
09:16:29 hannah
Knightie
Wild bays are already gorgeous but that brindle tops it off
Blacknight Legend
09:15:11 Knightie
Thanks fang I'm hoping he rates well
Whitewolf
09:14:06 Fang 🐺
Knightie he is a cute one. Always love brindle
Blacknight Legend
09:13:22 Knightie
-HEE Click-
Finally a wild bay brindle
Deez Nuts Stables
09:11:03 hannah
Lol Gem that is gonna be you very soon
Whitewolf
09:11:00 Fang 🐺
Another medallion quest? I must have been good to deserve two in two days in a row
Deez Nuts Stables
09:10:40 hannah
Gem
Mmm I get that, hopefully he warms up soon XD

Traveller
Yeah, so my experience has taught me XD
Gemstone Stable
09:09:31 Snow❆Gem
LMAO

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Zalia Equine
09:08:52 Traveller
Hannah, but with their mouth, they could make a sailor blush XD

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Tanglewood
09:38:54 Technically Tangle
If it makes you feel better, I've dropped upwards of 2 million on matches before only to get the wimpiest EEE you've seen in your life
River
09:33:25 ♡ River
And it was a decent LB stud too- curse you RF!
Zalia Equine
09:31:03 Traveller
River, that's usually how it goes!
River
09:29:16 ♡ River
I did it anyways and hoped for something nice, was a perfect match, each covered eachothers weaknessess, and I got an EEE and I'm 50k broker T-T
Blacknight Legend
09:29:14 Knightie
River I believe it's quarter horse crossed with RID or WB is Sporthorse or Irish sporthorse I might be wrong
Blacknight Legend
09:27:10 Knightie
-HEE Click-
Here ya go lyra my fave
River
09:26:34 ♡ River
Knightie
Darn it! I need anything else xD
Blacknight Legend
09:26:08 Knightie
River that's an appendix quarter horse
River
09:25:34 ♡ River
What does an AQH mare x TB stallion make?
Wild Island PONs
09:21:14 Ly/Lyra
golden bay, not copper .-.
Wild Island PONs
09:19:20 Ly/Lyra
my fav wild and copper bay foals
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
Deez Nuts Stables
09:16:29 hannah
Knightie
Wild bays are already gorgeous but that brindle tops it off
Blacknight Legend
09:15:11 Knightie
Thanks fang I'm hoping he rates well
Whitewolf
09:14:06 Fang 🐺
Knightie he is a cute one. Always love brindle
Blacknight Legend
09:13:22 Knightie
-HEE Click-
Finally a wild bay brindle
Deez Nuts Stables
09:11:03 hannah
Lol Gem that is gonna be you very soon
Whitewolf
09:11:00 Fang 🐺
Another medallion quest? I must have been good to deserve two in two days in a row
Deez Nuts Stables
09:10:40 hannah
Gem
Mmm I get that, hopefully he warms up soon XD

Traveller
Yeah, so my experience has taught me XD
Gemstone Stable
09:09:31 Snow❆Gem
LMAO

-Click-
Zalia Equine
09:08:52 Traveller
Hannah, but with their mouth, they could make a sailor blush XD

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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