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Embervale Acres
05:42:18 Solar Phoenix
whoa, staticky boy lol
-HEE Click-
Ironworks Equestria
05:42:12 Seven | Billy
Dino,

Ooh... yoink...
Wrangler Ranch
05:40:48 Wrangler
Trish she is pretty!
Diamond Drafts
05:39:37 
Ugh! I seem to avoid every single possible pattern apart from roan 😭
Morning Glory Farms
05:36:54 Terici/Dino/Trish
-HEE Click- I just might cry
Glacier Bay Cove
05:36:39 Arctic Katz
Somehow
Glacier Bay Cove
05:36:23 Arctic Katz
Time to rebuild my Ebs savings account
Bug in a Rug
05:34:01 Bug | Flea | KPH
<3
annnd after several months of bad training and no color, I finally have another good stud :3
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
05:33:55 Arctic Katz
YAY, my first horse with lace
Wolf Dancer
05:32:39 Wolf Burger (Leg)
KPH
Dang!!! Nice!
Bug in a Rug
05:32:05 Bug | Flea | KPH
oh wilf look! my AD matches were all flops, but the SDs tried to make up for it lol
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
got 28 Ws in total :D
Angels angels
05:31:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Because they can't be caught with tobi lol
winteria
05:31:31 
-HEE Click-
ugh im so sad
Embervale Acres
05:30:33 Solar Phoenix
If you search for wild TBs with tobi, nothing comes up lol
Wolf Dancer
05:28:52 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Eh could have been splash or something though lol
Midnight Manors
05:28:23 Bunny ♡
Wolf
Yes!!

Solar
I swear on my life it was Tobiano
Karearea Equestrian
05:28:15 Kiwi
Yes, he does Arctic :)
Morning Glory Farms
05:28:09 Terici/Dino/Trish
I have to giggle that the game guide says that RID dont have frame but the #1 girl is frame and so is the #3 boy lol
Glacier Bay Cove
05:27:37 Arctic Katz
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
05:27:32 Arctic Katz
Question, does he have lace

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Embervale Acres
05:42:18 Solar Phoenix
whoa, staticky boy lol
-HEE Click-
Ironworks Equestria
05:42:12 Seven | Billy
Dino,

Ooh... yoink...
Wrangler Ranch
05:40:48 Wrangler
Trish she is pretty!
Diamond Drafts
05:39:37 
Ugh! I seem to avoid every single possible pattern apart from roan 😭
Morning Glory Farms
05:36:54 Terici/Dino/Trish
-HEE Click- I just might cry
Glacier Bay Cove
05:36:39 Arctic Katz
Somehow
Glacier Bay Cove
05:36:23 Arctic Katz
Time to rebuild my Ebs savings account
Bug in a Rug
05:34:01 Bug | Flea | KPH
<3
annnd after several months of bad training and no color, I finally have another good stud :3
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
05:33:55 Arctic Katz
YAY, my first horse with lace
Wolf Dancer
05:32:39 Wolf Burger (Leg)
KPH
Dang!!! Nice!
Bug in a Rug
05:32:05 Bug | Flea | KPH
oh wilf look! my AD matches were all flops, but the SDs tried to make up for it lol
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
got 28 Ws in total :D
Angels angels
05:31:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Because they can't be caught with tobi lol
winteria
05:31:31 
-HEE Click-
ugh im so sad
Embervale Acres
05:30:33 Solar Phoenix
If you search for wild TBs with tobi, nothing comes up lol
Wolf Dancer
05:28:52 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Eh could have been splash or something though lol
Midnight Manors
05:28:23 Bunny ♡
Wolf
Yes!!

Solar
I swear on my life it was Tobiano
Karearea Equestrian
05:28:15 Kiwi
Yes, he does Arctic :)
Morning Glory Farms
05:28:09 Terici/Dino/Trish
I have to giggle that the game guide says that RID dont have frame but the #1 girl is frame and so is the #3 boy lol
Glacier Bay Cove
05:27:37 Arctic Katz
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
05:27:32 Arctic Katz
Question, does he have lace

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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