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03:10:49

Oh that's too real. I hope you feel better soon!

Minerva

03:09:29 Min

LOl Elfie, Im sending prayers for your back 🤣

Port Royal Equines

03:07:58 Elfie

I'll be fine i hope lol. I was hyper fixated on my computer.

03:06:11

Oh no! What's going on, are you okay?

Port Royal Equines

02:56:42 Elfie

I've been hunched over in my seat for 6 hours. I lost track of time. :') Everything hurts.

02:51:07

Nice Flowers! Bug/update or not, the game guide and what happens on the game should match

02:47:56 Flowers

-HEE Click- Hopefully that's helpful to someone behind the scenes!

02:46:55

Fawn what do you think?

02:46:38 Flowers

I'll get on that then!

02:46:02

I would think that's the right thing to do? It's a little confusing with updates going back and forth

02:42:57 Flowers

Should I still go ahead and post it as not matching it's game guide entry? Bug or no, one of them needs updating yes?

02:41:38

Oh okay then the changed it again! Maybe the game guide just needs to be updated

02:41:15 Flowers

Well it's good it's been noticed, at least!

02:40:40

Then it must be a bug. The last one I linked is from october

02:40:27 Fawn

However I think it has been updated again since then so I'm not sure

02:38:58 Fawn

As of Sept 11 2023 black chestnut needs to be genetically recessive for Agouti

Wild River Run Farm

02:38:51 WRR

looking at forums after the gene update black chestnuts will be Aa, aa or Ata

02:38:40

This one is just 3. I feel like the change must be older than that, or I'd remember it better. Weird
-HEE Click-

02:38:37 Flowers

Shall I post to the bug forum about it or is someone else working on that?

02:35:40 Flowers

Found some much younger ones with the genetic blip too, all born after September!

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03:10:49

Oh that's too real. I hope you feel better soon!

Minerva

03:09:29 Min

LOl Elfie, Im sending prayers for your back 🤣

Port Royal Equines

03:07:58 Elfie

I'll be fine i hope lol. I was hyper fixated on my computer.

03:06:11

Oh no! What's going on, are you okay?

Port Royal Equines

02:56:42 Elfie

I've been hunched over in my seat for 6 hours. I lost track of time. :') Everything hurts.

02:51:07

Nice Flowers! Bug/update or not, the game guide and what happens on the game should match

02:47:56 Flowers

-HEE Click- Hopefully that's helpful to someone behind the scenes!

02:46:55

Fawn what do you think?

02:46:38 Flowers

I'll get on that then!

02:46:02

I would think that's the right thing to do? It's a little confusing with updates going back and forth

02:42:57 Flowers

Should I still go ahead and post it as not matching it's game guide entry? Bug or no, one of them needs updating yes?

02:41:38

Oh okay then the changed it again! Maybe the game guide just needs to be updated

02:41:15 Flowers

Well it's good it's been noticed, at least!

02:40:40

Then it must be a bug. The last one I linked is from october

02:40:27 Fawn

However I think it has been updated again since then so I'm not sure

02:38:58 Fawn

As of Sept 11 2023 black chestnut needs to be genetically recessive for Agouti

Wild River Run Farm

02:38:51 WRR

looking at forums after the gene update black chestnuts will be Aa, aa or Ata

02:38:40

This one is just 3. I feel like the change must be older than that, or I'd remember it better. Weird
-HEE Click-

02:38:37 Flowers

Shall I post to the bug forum about it or is someone else working on that?

02:35:40 Flowers

Found some much younger ones with the genetic blip too, all born after September!

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I'm Writing a Thing

December 18, 2020 04:39 PM

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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.

The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.

And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD

Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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