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12:22:27 The Black Cats SA

Ok just putting it out there I haven't been on my accounts for a bit only checking in once in a while to breed my horses and I just noticed I've got 170 rerolls :|

Invertia

12:18:36 Tia

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... well huh.

That's... one thing to give me--

Cactus County Barn

12:14:42 Cactus

River, oof, I wish you luck. I have two tests tomorrow

Dragonwood Stables

11:58:30 Skye Ghostrider

He is so pretty!

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River

11:48:30 ♡ River

Two essays due tomorrow and none of them are started... time to get to work 🤦‍♀️

Crimson Manor

11:44:35 Lillie Pt 2

lmao

Twin Flames

11:40:25 Blaze

Found whilst browsing for background stock
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Wisteria Run Farm

11:40:16 Solar/Ria

You dodged the silver but caught ratings lol
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Aura Show Horses

11:31:49 Pea/Aura

Hi chat!

Halloween stable

11:20:57

I forget how much is an upgrade

Glacier Bay Cove

11:18:37 Glacier Kittens

Currently sorting my horses by their bravery ratings

Greenheart Stables

11:07:41 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

So good news is, its little to nothing if juju got a parasite from her new food. I got juju on a antibiotics for her issue and I found a official vet for all my snakes! They were so kind and make the hour and a half drive worth it. For once im excited for a visit since im getting the other three all looked at the week after next.

Shady Tree Farm

11:03:59 Shady (RRR Side)

Why must she have varnish 🥲
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Bermuda Estate

11:02:23 Mew | Juno

I feel like I just heard my sleeper agent code

Little Nightmares

11:02:07 Six/Mono

Boah

Royoke

11:01:21 Cat \ Cattaill

Red dead redemption 2. its a western game where you play an outlaw on the run from the law basically to put it as simple as possible. theres a lot more to it and its story is amazing.

Glacier Bay Cove

10:58:59 Glacier Kittens

I have no idea what those games are

Elysian Meadows

10:53:45

i have 3000 hours in RDR2 but right now i’m playing cyberpunk and KCD2!

Willow Grove

10:52:31 Stalker of Chat

Win
Nice lol

Whispering Windz

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Winter Elite

12:22:27 The Black Cats SA

Ok just putting it out there I haven't been on my accounts for a bit only checking in once in a while to breed my horses and I just noticed I've got 170 rerolls :|

Invertia

12:18:36 Tia

-HEE Click-

... well huh.

That's... one thing to give me--

Cactus County Barn

12:14:42 Cactus

River, oof, I wish you luck. I have two tests tomorrow

Dragonwood Stables

11:58:30 Skye Ghostrider

He is so pretty!

-HEE Click-

River

11:48:30 ♡ River

Two essays due tomorrow and none of them are started... time to get to work 🤦‍♀️

Crimson Manor

11:44:35 Lillie Pt 2

lmao

Twin Flames

11:40:25 Blaze

Found whilst browsing for background stock
-Click-

Wisteria Run Farm

11:40:16 Solar/Ria

You dodged the silver but caught ratings lol
-HEE Click-

Aura Show Horses

11:31:49 Pea/Aura

Hi chat!

Halloween stable

11:20:57

I forget how much is an upgrade

Glacier Bay Cove

11:18:37 Glacier Kittens

Currently sorting my horses by their bravery ratings

Greenheart Stables

11:07:41 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

Shady Tree Farm

11:03:59 Shady (RRR Side)

Why must she have varnish 🥲
-HEE Click-

Bermuda Estate

11:02:23 Mew | Juno

I feel like I just heard my sleeper agent code

Little Nightmares

11:02:07 Six/Mono

Boah

Royoke

11:01:21 Cat \ Cattaill

Red dead redemption 2. its a western game where you play an outlaw on the run from the law basically to put it as simple as possible. theres a lot more to it and its story is amazing.

Glacier Bay Cove

10:58:59 Glacier Kittens

I have no idea what those games are

Elysian Meadows

10:53:45

i have 3000 hours in RDR2 but right now i’m playing cyberpunk and KCD2!

Willow Grove

10:52:31 Stalker of Chat

Win
Nice lol

Whispering Windz

10:51:54

-HEE Click-

Check this EEE filly out, I'm in love!

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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