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Bioshock Manor
07:17:19 Storm
Where Sun?
Nightingales Ridge
07:02:48 𔓘 Issy
Ghost
Cute!!!
Sunstone Elite
06:51:47 Sun/Sunny
It’s 103 here. Quite irritating. It will cool down next week though.
ghost light stables
06:46:55 Toaster rapcoon
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ghost light stables
06:44:37 Toaster rapcoon
My cat has stolen my seat
Nightingales Ridge
06:43:08 𔓘 Issy
I love anything from 15-25c depending what I'm doing
Ranch Lands Training
06:41:28 Lilly/PON Addict
I figured it was. My guess was 69 or 70. All I know is 72 to 22 degrees for room temp
Nightingales Ridge
06:40:40 𔓘 Issy
Lily bit below 70
Ranch Lands Training
06:35:08 Lilly/PON Addict
It's 20 here (not sure what that is in F). It's muddy out today
Glacier Bay Cove
06:34:28 Glacier Kittens
95 degrees here
ghost light stables
06:33:20 Toaster rapcoon
What makes it worse is that it snowed on Sunday was freezing cold Monday then it got scolding hot yesterday
The Old Gods
06:31:05 Void Malign
87F
ghost light stables
06:30:06 Toaster rapcoon
It's 83° where I am
Nightingales Ridge
06:29:50 𔓘 Issy
73f
Nightingales Ridge
06:29:16 𔓘 Issy
It's a nice 23c today
The Old Gods
06:28:04 Void Malign
I mean, the cats are happy
Nightingales Ridge
06:26:56 𔓘 Issy
Lol Void!
The Old Gods
06:09:43 Void Malign
#ModernProblems
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Bioshock Manor
07:17:19 Storm
Where Sun?
Nightingales Ridge
07:02:48 𔓘 Issy
Ghost
Cute!!!
Sunstone Elite
06:51:47 Sun/Sunny
It’s 103 here. Quite irritating. It will cool down next week though.
ghost light stables
06:46:55 Toaster rapcoon
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ghost light stables
06:44:37 Toaster rapcoon
My cat has stolen my seat
Nightingales Ridge
06:43:08 𔓘 Issy
I love anything from 15-25c depending what I'm doing
Ranch Lands Training
06:41:28 Lilly/PON Addict
I figured it was. My guess was 69 or 70. All I know is 72 to 22 degrees for room temp
Nightingales Ridge
06:40:40 𔓘 Issy
Lily bit below 70
Ranch Lands Training
06:35:08 Lilly/PON Addict
It's 20 here (not sure what that is in F). It's muddy out today
Glacier Bay Cove
06:34:28 Glacier Kittens
95 degrees here
ghost light stables
06:33:20 Toaster rapcoon
What makes it worse is that it snowed on Sunday was freezing cold Monday then it got scolding hot yesterday
The Old Gods
06:31:05 Void Malign
87F
ghost light stables
06:30:06 Toaster rapcoon
It's 83° where I am
Nightingales Ridge
06:29:50 𔓘 Issy
73f
Nightingales Ridge
06:29:16 𔓘 Issy
It's a nice 23c today
The Old Gods
06:28:04 Void Malign
I mean, the cats are happy
Nightingales Ridge
06:26:56 𔓘 Issy
Lol Void!
The Old Gods
06:09:43 Void Malign
#ModernProblems
#ModernSolutions

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Mustang Willows
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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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