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Crossing fingers so hopefully I am done tuesday

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11:22:15 RIP-Tim:2016-26

Oh no!

Motonemi

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Stressing about surgery and avoiding infections

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I honestly don't know. Never recovered from Tim. Put an elderly dog in the ground next to him yesterday. How are you?

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Fable

11:14:59

I hate questing but I'm too lazy to have a show string :')

Motonemi

11:13:17 AL, mum to Nemi

Why you cant pull straws from retired horses?

The Feral Equine

11:09:09 Khaos

I think I finally got my show string figured out and earning money

Angel Warmblood Stud

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Why not?

Echo Creek

11:03:47 Echo | River

AL
Darn :/

Motonemi

11:02:51 AL, mum to Nemi

Echo, not from retired horses no

Echo Creek

11:00:14 Echo | River

Can you pull straws from senior horses?

Elite Perfection

11:00:01 EP

its sabino

Motonemi

10:59:13 AL, mum to Nemi

Its one of the newer SbSb sabino patterns I think

Tanglewood

10:56:12 Technically Tangle

Yess oh my soul Lily. It was still weirdly sunny this morning, and then 2pm hit and the rain's barely paused since

Smoke Signals Ranch

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Ok, I'm thinking this looks like a tobiano to me. What do you all think? -HEE Click-

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Whitewolf

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Happy Mother’s Day to all the horse Eden moms <3

Pegasus Lane

11:24:39 Peggy (or) Peg

Apparently we finally got our irrigation at home, and my mother sent me photos of all my happy birds. I miss them so much 😭😭

Motonemi

11:22:58 AL, mum to Nemi

Crossing fingers so hopefully I am done tuesday

Mythological

11:22:15 RIP-Tim:2016-26

Oh no!

Motonemi

11:20:47 AL, mum to Nemi

Stressing about surgery and avoiding infections

Mythological

11:17:45 RIP-Tim:2016-26

I honestly don't know. Never recovered from Tim. Put an elderly dog in the ground next to him yesterday. How are you?

Motonemi

11:16:35 AL, mum to Nemi

Hey Myth, how are you?

Mythological

11:16:10 RIP-Tim:2016-26

Hey Ceci

Fable

11:14:59

I hate questing but I'm too lazy to have a show string :')

Motonemi

11:13:17 AL, mum to Nemi

Why you cant pull straws from retired horses?

The Feral Equine

11:09:09 Khaos

I think I finally got my show string figured out and earning money

Angel Warmblood Stud

11:05:00 Angel

Why not?

Echo Creek

11:03:47 Echo | River

AL
Darn :/

Motonemi

11:02:51 AL, mum to Nemi

Echo, not from retired horses no

Echo Creek

11:00:14 Echo | River

Can you pull straws from senior horses?

Elite Perfection

11:00:01 EP

its sabino

Motonemi

10:59:13 AL, mum to Nemi

Its one of the newer SbSb sabino patterns I think

Tanglewood

10:56:12 Technically Tangle

Yess oh my soul Lily. It was still weirdly sunny this morning, and then 2pm hit and the rain's barely paused since

Smoke Signals Ranch

10:55:23

Ok, I'm thinking this looks like a tobiano to me. What do you all think? -HEE Click-

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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