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Purestables

02:10:23 Pure

this is one match im super nervous and super excited for!!
-HEE Click- + sven

xA Million Thoughts

02:10:11 ⚜️.MT.

I wish he was a filly.
-HEE Click-

Ravenwood Farm

02:10:09 Raven

I got very confused for a second as to why you would wax your horse lmao

That's super duper exciting! I'm wishing her an as pleasant as possible birth!

Morning Glory Farms

02:07:35 Dino/Digital Tyrant

There is *so* much wax on my mare right now 😭 I'm not ready but I am ready but omg the stress 😂

Whitewolf

02:07:33 Fang

I’m not sure how many matches to send next month. There’s 4 I want to and like 4-6 others but I don’t have any faith after the first few 😂

Ravenwood Farm

02:06:04 Raven

Ooh are we judging matches?

Pegasus Lane

02:05:05 Peggy (or) Peg

Thank you Min! I'm pumped haha

Minerva

02:02:45 Min

Bloody hell Peg, I'm very jealous of that 0-0 Definitely deserves a sven

Purestables

02:00:54 Pure

super excited for her!!

Pegasus Lane

02:00:25 Peggy (or) Peg

Recently got my hands on this embryo. I want to sven it, but thought I should check for glaringly obvious weaknesses since I haven't really checked lmao
-HEE Click-

Whitewolf

01:59:46 Fang

Pure it looks like a pretty nice cross

Minerva

01:59:27 Min

Looks nice Pure- and nice shiny potential too

Purestables

01:58:11 Pure

what do you think of this

-HEE Click- + sven

RiverView Ponies

01:58:03 Willow/Lil

-HEE Click-
I forget how pretty she is sometimes lol, love dunskins

Whitewolf

01:57:48 Fang

Pure, I hope so too! She is a pretty one

Whitewolf

01:57:13 Fang

Two medallion quests in a day without paying to skip is suspicious 🤨

Ashcroft Park Stud

01:57:05 Ash

Ohhhh what a stunner 🥰

Hummingbird Meadows

01:55:49 Bird

Sometimes I forget how fluffy Finley is.
-Click-

Purestables

01:55:25 Pure

fang
isn't she!! hoping she likes me haha

Ravenwood Farm

01:53:48 Raven

-HEE Click-
E bravery means I get to keep you :))

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Purestables

02:10:23 Pure

this is one match im super nervous and super excited for!!
-HEE Click- + sven

xA Million Thoughts

02:10:11 ⚜️.MT.

I wish he was a filly.
-HEE Click-

Ravenwood Farm

02:10:09 Raven

I got very confused for a second as to why you would wax your horse lmao

That's super duper exciting! I'm wishing her an as pleasant as possible birth!

Morning Glory Farms

02:07:35 Dino/Digital Tyrant

There is *so* much wax on my mare right now 😭 I'm not ready but I am ready but omg the stress 😂

Whitewolf

02:07:33 Fang

I’m not sure how many matches to send next month. There’s 4 I want to and like 4-6 others but I don’t have any faith after the first few 😂

Ravenwood Farm

02:06:04 Raven

Ooh are we judging matches?

Pegasus Lane

02:05:05 Peggy (or) Peg

Thank you Min! I'm pumped haha

Minerva

02:02:45 Min

Bloody hell Peg, I'm very jealous of that 0-0 Definitely deserves a sven

Purestables

02:00:54 Pure

super excited for her!!

Pegasus Lane

02:00:25 Peggy (or) Peg

Recently got my hands on this embryo. I want to sven it, but thought I should check for glaringly obvious weaknesses since I haven't really checked lmao
-HEE Click-

Whitewolf

01:59:46 Fang

Pure it looks like a pretty nice cross

Minerva

01:59:27 Min

Looks nice Pure- and nice shiny potential too

Purestables

01:58:11 Pure

what do you think of this

-HEE Click- + sven

RiverView Ponies

01:58:03 Willow/Lil

-HEE Click-
I forget how pretty she is sometimes lol, love dunskins

Whitewolf

01:57:48 Fang

Pure, I hope so too! She is a pretty one

Whitewolf

01:57:13 Fang

Two medallion quests in a day without paying to skip is suspicious 🤨

Ashcroft Park Stud

01:57:05 Ash

Ohhhh what a stunner 🥰

Hummingbird Meadows

01:55:49 Bird

Sometimes I forget how fluffy Finley is.
-Click-

Purestables

01:55:25 Pure

fang
isn't she!! hoping she likes me haha

Ravenwood Farm

01:53:48 Raven

-HEE Click-
E bravery means I get to keep you :))

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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