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Tamarack Mountain
04:59:24 Opal
nice
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:58:23 Ash
My WWW boy was down 2 (bleh) week 4, but pleasantly surprised with her. Now to find her a bay and intellectual husband 😂 -HEE Click-
Tamarack Mountain
04:47:39 Opal
some times ya just have to
Vahana Hollow
04:42:39 Val
I think I am going to cull 90% of my SD stock today after work, lol. Their training is so meh.
Maco Stables
04:22:51 Maco
This game just gets better and better :)
Minerva
04:21:29 Min
Oh cool- the rider image in the stable staff bit changes when you need to pay them
Alpine Acres
03:44:25 Lily
no problem :D
Hybrid Theory
03:44:03 crow !! [he/him]
thank you!
Alpine Acres
03:43:19 Lily
crow
4:15am GT
Hybrid Theory
03:42:41 crow !! [he/him]
does anyone know what time we'll be able to train?
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:42:36 Ash
Good luck!
Tamarack Mountain
03:38:47 Opal
I probably have some
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:34:21 Ash
Morning ☀️ Anyone with late foals having their week 4s today?
Ponies heaven
03:30:56 Pera/ peral
Thank you! Now to draw the featuring dragon lol- damn
Nightingales Ridge
03:24:26 Issy
Looks lovely
Ponies heaven
03:19:26 Pera/ peral
Thank you- but I wanted it to turn out more realistic T-T
Maco Stables
03:14:13 Maco
Why? I think it's fantastic!
Ponies heaven
03:11:00 Pera/ peral
I don’t know how I feel about this… -Click-
Maco Stables
03:05:49 Maco
Ooh, lovely RF!
Thunderbolt Park
03:00:31 Bolt
-HEE Click-
I wasn't expecting the rating to be that

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Tamarack Mountain
04:59:24 Opal
nice
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:58:23 Ash
My WWW boy was down 2 (bleh) week 4, but pleasantly surprised with her. Now to find her a bay and intellectual husband 😂 -HEE Click-
Tamarack Mountain
04:47:39 Opal
some times ya just have to
Vahana Hollow
04:42:39 Val
I think I am going to cull 90% of my SD stock today after work, lol. Their training is so meh.
Maco Stables
04:22:51 Maco
This game just gets better and better :)
Minerva
04:21:29 Min
Oh cool- the rider image in the stable staff bit changes when you need to pay them
Alpine Acres
03:44:25 Lily
no problem :D
Hybrid Theory
03:44:03 crow !! [he/him]
thank you!
Alpine Acres
03:43:19 Lily
crow
4:15am GT
Hybrid Theory
03:42:41 crow !! [he/him]
does anyone know what time we'll be able to train?
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:42:36 Ash
Good luck!
Tamarack Mountain
03:38:47 Opal
I probably have some
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:34:21 Ash
Morning ☀️ Anyone with late foals having their week 4s today?
Ponies heaven
03:30:56 Pera/ peral
Thank you! Now to draw the featuring dragon lol- damn
Nightingales Ridge
03:24:26 Issy
Looks lovely
Ponies heaven
03:19:26 Pera/ peral
Thank you- but I wanted it to turn out more realistic T-T
Maco Stables
03:14:13 Maco
Why? I think it's fantastic!
Ponies heaven
03:11:00 Pera/ peral
I don’t know how I feel about this… -Click-
Maco Stables
03:05:49 Maco
Ooh, lovely RF!
Thunderbolt Park
03:00:31 Bolt
-HEE Click-
I wasn't expecting the rating to be that

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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