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MakeEm Fancy
10:29:03 Ally 💜
I bought a pool and the next like 4 days its supposed to rain....
Pon Brats
10:28:59 
She was born before the update, unfortunately
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Pon Brats
10:28:31 
same for her
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Minerva
10:27:55 Min
🤞🤞
Pon Brats
10:27:37 
With the bravery update it should be at least better than superb xD
Minerva
10:26:43 Min
Oh god fingers crossed Tosk!! Thats a nerve wracking one lol
Pon Brats
10:26:13 
Yes, but she sold it.
Pon Brats
10:26:05 
i am praying for at least premium bravery tomorrow.
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Minerva
10:25:51 Min
Was it Ven who got an AA as well
MakeEm Fancy
10:25:17 Ally 💜
I got this girly also
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Pon Brats
10:24:45 
I got a WWW Pon 2 days ago, Dimmeh got a WWW RID. seems to have been a good time to capture
MakeEm Fancy
10:24:33 Ally 💜
I told you its always sub 🤣 my luck with bravery is shit
Vancouver
10:24:07 Ana / Van
I got this one yesterday :)
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Minerva
10:23:47 Min
The W bravery manifesting didnt go too well then Ally lol. She's still lush though!! Fingers crossed she produces well
Wisteria Run Farm
10:23:42 Solar/Ria
oh my gosh, Ally! <3
Pon Brats
10:23:41 
that was the match
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What I got... a plain ol' roan boy.
Guard Horseman Gang
10:23:10 GHG
I'm sitting here looking at someone's username and it is similar to the name of my website
Vancouver
10:23:10 Ana / Van
Tosk
Yeah you’re better on a non-capture day lol

Min
Yep, Mister did not want homo Tobi
MakeEm Fancy
10:22:56 Ally 💜
I got this girl this morning
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Stabulum Equorum
10:22:42 
That reminds me of my #1 Pon boy, Van xD

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MakeEm Fancy
10:29:03 Ally 💜
I bought a pool and the next like 4 days its supposed to rain....
Pon Brats
10:28:59 
She was born before the update, unfortunately
-HEE Click-
Pon Brats
10:28:31 
same for her
-HEE Click-
Minerva
10:27:55 Min
🤞🤞
Pon Brats
10:27:37 
With the bravery update it should be at least better than superb xD
Minerva
10:26:43 Min
Oh god fingers crossed Tosk!! Thats a nerve wracking one lol
Pon Brats
10:26:13 
Yes, but she sold it.
Pon Brats
10:26:05 
i am praying for at least premium bravery tomorrow.
-HEE Click-
Minerva
10:25:51 Min
Was it Ven who got an AA as well
MakeEm Fancy
10:25:17 Ally 💜
I got this girly also
-HEE Click-
Pon Brats
10:24:45 
I got a WWW Pon 2 days ago, Dimmeh got a WWW RID. seems to have been a good time to capture
MakeEm Fancy
10:24:33 Ally 💜
I told you its always sub 🤣 my luck with bravery is shit
Vancouver
10:24:07 Ana / Van
I got this one yesterday :)
-HEE Click-
Minerva
10:23:47 Min
The W bravery manifesting didnt go too well then Ally lol. She's still lush though!! Fingers crossed she produces well
Wisteria Run Farm
10:23:42 Solar/Ria
oh my gosh, Ally! <3
Pon Brats
10:23:41 
that was the match
-HEE Click-

What I got... a plain ol' roan boy.
Guard Horseman Gang
10:23:10 GHG
I'm sitting here looking at someone's username and it is similar to the name of my website
Vancouver
10:23:10 Ana / Van
Tosk
Yeah you’re better on a non-capture day lol

Min
Yep, Mister did not want homo Tobi
MakeEm Fancy
10:22:56 Ally 💜
I got this girl this morning
-HEE Click-
Stabulum Equorum
10:22:42 
That reminds me of my #1 Pon boy, Van xD

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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