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12:50:05 Laika

dapple. can't spell.
-HEE Click-

12:47:58 Laika

everytime i color dapple i figure it out on the fly
dabble brush? don't know her.

12:38:31 Maple Syrup ✨

Depends on what you need
Anything for quests is amazing, svens too

12:33:49

What is best thing in Store Credits shop?

Nightingales Ridge

12:21:07 𔓘 Issy

Nestle** haha

Nightingales Ridge

12:20:22 𔓘 Issy

Ooooo very nice! Gosh I bet. It can be a stressful initial process but once it's over and theres time to nest down it's the best

Dash Warmbloods

12:16:59

Good evening.

Red Hill Hollow

12:15:56 Red, Hollow

It’s been good! All done now, just waiting for some furniture to arrive on Monday. Been so busy though 😩 so excited to be able to settle in

Nightingales Ridge

12:14:27 𔓘 Issy

:D yippee
How's the unpacking going? Finished yet?

Red Hill Hollow

12:11:20 Red, Hollow

I should be done today <3 atleast later tonight, I’m about 70% done

Red Hill Hollow

12:10:38 Red, Hollow

:D hehe

Nightingales Ridge

12:10:32 𔓘 Issy

Nightingales Ridge

12:10:26 𔓘 Issy

No rush <3

Nightingales Ridge

12:09:39 𔓘 Issy

Heh heh heh yay :3

Nightingales Ridge

12:09:22 𔓘 Issy

:oooo

Red Hill Hollow

12:06:18 Red, Hollow

Issy,
Expect some art later today ;)

Nightingales Ridge

11:58:08 𔓘 Issy

Ven I just want to say your LB status being #22 for the first 3 listed isnvery satisfying haha

Stormsong Manor

11:56:33 Ven

Please don't advertise that you're selling horses, straws, etc in main chat

Nightingales Ridge

11:54:00 𔓘 Issy

Mm I wouldn't say it's the best way to make money lol

11:52:44 Centura

Good to know, Im broke so figuring out what to do with my few ebs, currently using all my free captures to get money lol

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12:50:05 Laika

dapple. can't spell.
-HEE Click-

12:47:58 Laika

everytime i color dapple i figure it out on the fly
dabble brush? don't know her.

12:38:31 Maple Syrup ✨

Depends on what you need
Anything for quests is amazing, svens too

12:33:49

What is best thing in Store Credits shop?

Nightingales Ridge

12:21:07 𔓘 Issy

Nestle** haha

Nightingales Ridge

12:20:22 𔓘 Issy

Ooooo very nice! Gosh I bet. It can be a stressful initial process but once it's over and theres time to nest down it's the best

Dash Warmbloods

12:16:59

Good evening.

Red Hill Hollow

12:15:56 Red, Hollow

It’s been good! All done now, just waiting for some furniture to arrive on Monday. Been so busy though 😩 so excited to be able to settle in

Nightingales Ridge

12:14:27 𔓘 Issy

:D yippee
How's the unpacking going? Finished yet?

Red Hill Hollow

12:11:20 Red, Hollow

I should be done today <3 atleast later tonight, I’m about 70% done

Red Hill Hollow

12:10:38 Red, Hollow

:D hehe

Nightingales Ridge

12:10:32 𔓘 Issy

Nightingales Ridge

12:10:26 𔓘 Issy

No rush <3

Nightingales Ridge

12:09:39 𔓘 Issy

Heh heh heh yay :3

Nightingales Ridge

12:09:22 𔓘 Issy

:oooo

Red Hill Hollow

12:06:18 Red, Hollow

Issy,
Expect some art later today ;)

Nightingales Ridge

11:58:08 𔓘 Issy

Ven I just want to say your LB status being #22 for the first 3 listed isnvery satisfying haha

Stormsong Manor

11:56:33 Ven

Please don't advertise that you're selling horses, straws, etc in main chat

Nightingales Ridge

11:54:00 𔓘 Issy

Mm I wouldn't say it's the best way to make money lol

11:52:44 Centura

Good to know, Im broke so figuring out what to do with my few ebs, currently using all my free captures to get money lol

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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