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Red Hill Hollow
04:38:25 Red, Hollow
Ahhh thank you!
Alpine Acres
04:37:04 Lily
The shadowing is perfect :D
Red Hill Hollow
04:35:20 Red, Hollow
-Click-
How’s this?
Alpine Acres
04:33:49 Lily
I don't doubt it ^^
Red Hill Hollow
04:33:03 Red, Hollow
Ahh you’re too sweet! I’m definitely a little far off from T1 but hopefully one day <3
Alpine Acres
04:31:59 Lily
Of course! And you've definitely improved so much, especially with your blending. I smell a new T1 artist in the making ;)
Red Hill Hollow
04:29:26 Red, Hollow
I thought it looked weird, I’ll give that a go! Thank you :)
And ahhh tysm! <3 I feel like I’ve made some really big improvements in my last couple of pieces
Alpine Acres
04:27:31 Lily
I would just make the back leg slightly lighter/more visible. It works that it's in shadow but it's currently quite dark so almost looks like it's separate from the horse.
Your art style is magical *-*
Red Hill Hollow
04:25:25 Red, Hollow
Thanks so much and yes please :)
Alpine Acres
04:25:17 Lily
ooh wild was au week 4 :D
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
04:19:09 Lily
Red that's absolutely beautiful! Can I offer a tiny little improvement that I noticed ;)
Red Hill Hollow
04:13:08 Red, Hollow
-Click-
Hmmmm
Angel Warmblood Stud
04:00:29 Angel
He´s cute
Black Meadow Estate
03:53:47 Meadow
-HEE Click-
Excited and nervous for his week 7
Black Meadow Estate
03:53:09 Meadow
Best luck with him
Red Hill Hollow
03:52:24 Red, Hollow
All my mare have consistently been in the top 50 on the SHLB so praying he’ll follow
Valhalla Acreage
03:51:17 Eivor/ Rumi
But all my WWW have never been svened
Valhalla Acreage
03:51:00 Eivor/ Rumi
If you do use another sven you could use the sex svens for a filly
Red Hill Hollow
03:49:53 Red, Hollow
His whole line of mares have all gone up in both wk 4 and wk 8, his dam was the first one to go up in wk 7 but none of them have ever been svened so finger crossed he does ok
Black Meadow Estate
03:47:53 Meadow
If he has a good week 4 and week 7 you have a good chance just so many SH on the LB its a gamble

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Red Hill Hollow
04:38:25 Red, Hollow
Ahhh thank you!
Alpine Acres
04:37:04 Lily
The shadowing is perfect :D
Red Hill Hollow
04:35:20 Red, Hollow
-Click-
How’s this?
Alpine Acres
04:33:49 Lily
I don't doubt it ^^
Red Hill Hollow
04:33:03 Red, Hollow
Ahh you’re too sweet! I’m definitely a little far off from T1 but hopefully one day <3
Alpine Acres
04:31:59 Lily
Of course! And you've definitely improved so much, especially with your blending. I smell a new T1 artist in the making ;)
Red Hill Hollow
04:29:26 Red, Hollow
I thought it looked weird, I’ll give that a go! Thank you :)
And ahhh tysm! <3 I feel like I’ve made some really big improvements in my last couple of pieces
Alpine Acres
04:27:31 Lily
I would just make the back leg slightly lighter/more visible. It works that it's in shadow but it's currently quite dark so almost looks like it's separate from the horse.
Your art style is magical *-*
Red Hill Hollow
04:25:25 Red, Hollow
Thanks so much and yes please :)
Alpine Acres
04:25:17 Lily
ooh wild was au week 4 :D
-HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
04:19:09 Lily
Red that's absolutely beautiful! Can I offer a tiny little improvement that I noticed ;)
Red Hill Hollow
04:13:08 Red, Hollow
-Click-
Hmmmm
Angel Warmblood Stud
04:00:29 Angel
He´s cute
Black Meadow Estate
03:53:47 Meadow
-HEE Click-
Excited and nervous for his week 7
Black Meadow Estate
03:53:09 Meadow
Best luck with him
Red Hill Hollow
03:52:24 Red, Hollow
All my mare have consistently been in the top 50 on the SHLB so praying he’ll follow
Valhalla Acreage
03:51:17 Eivor/ Rumi
But all my WWW have never been svened
Valhalla Acreage
03:51:00 Eivor/ Rumi
If you do use another sven you could use the sex svens for a filly
Red Hill Hollow
03:49:53 Red, Hollow
His whole line of mares have all gone up in both wk 4 and wk 8, his dam was the first one to go up in wk 7 but none of them have ever been svened so finger crossed he does ok
Black Meadow Estate
03:47:53 Meadow
If he has a good week 4 and week 7 you have a good chance just so many SH on the LB its a gamble

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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