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Peace

07:58:10 Halo / Peace

Oh my lord Val. I had an 11 hour shift yesterday running on 2 cans of redbull and spite haha so I feel ya haha. Luckily I only have a 5 hour shift then another 7 hour tomorrow and 3 days off- can't wait.

Vahana

07:55:51 Val

I have done a 10hour shift on 1hour of sleep :) the bags under my eyes are looking extra *spicy* today

Peace

07:53:26 Halo / Peace

I start my shift in 8 minutes. Send help haha.

Nocturne Fields

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Pon Brats

07:45:38

no idea how you came out EEW
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DearBorn Ranch

07:44:54 Louise

1-87 or so

WonderfulPrettyHorse

07:43:38

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how rare is it to get this coat

Ravenwood Farm

07:39:21 Raven

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Pon Brats

07:36:57

Finally sorted my barns xD They were a mess

DearBorn Ranch

07:36:43 Louise

Banned

Equity Falls

07:36:22 Dimmed | KNN

Alright someone ban me for 20 mins so I can get to work on time 😭 I have to get dressed, put my contacts in, and fix my hair still

Ravenwood Farm

07:35:26 Raven

11 is very different from 7 though?

Pon Brats

07:35:03

But doesn't have to repeat wk 11. Any up is good

Equity Falls

07:34:57 Dimmed | KNN

Most have stopped tracking week 11

All Breeds

07:34:44 Fawn

It's to early so don't mind if I'm wrong

Pon Brats

07:34:39

Wk 14 is usually like wk 11 and 7

Equity Falls

07:34:30 Dimmed | KNN

I'm seeing it closer to 7/11 repeat with most of the high LB that have it tracked being 5/6 or 6/6. For KNN I'm seeing 2-4/6 for the top boys it looks. My boy is up 2/6

All Breeds

07:33:10 Fawn

Wk 14 I believe is Wk 6/10 repeat?

Equity Falls

07:32:13 Dimmed | KNN

Wait they should go most up week 14 apparently lol

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07:32:02 Stella

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Peace

07:58:10 Halo / Peace

Vahana

07:55:51 Val

I have done a 10hour shift on 1hour of sleep :) the bags under my eyes are looking extra *spicy* today

Peace

07:53:26 Halo / Peace

I start my shift in 8 minutes. Send help haha.

Nocturne Fields

07:52:34

-HEE Click-

Pon Brats

07:45:38

no idea how you came out EEW
-HEE Click-

DearBorn Ranch

07:44:54 Louise

1-87 or so

WonderfulPrettyHorse

07:43:38

-HEE Click-
how rare is it to get this coat

Ravenwood Farm

07:39:21 Raven

-HEE Click-
Ooo👀

Pon Brats

07:36:57

Finally sorted my barns xD They were a mess

DearBorn Ranch

07:36:43 Louise

Banned

Equity Falls

07:36:22 Dimmed | KNN

Alright someone ban me for 20 mins so I can get to work on time 😭 I have to get dressed, put my contacts in, and fix my hair still

Ravenwood Farm

07:35:26 Raven

11 is very different from 7 though?

Pon Brats

07:35:03

But doesn't have to repeat wk 11. Any up is good

Equity Falls

07:34:57 Dimmed | KNN

Most have stopped tracking week 11

All Breeds

07:34:44 Fawn

It's to early so don't mind if I'm wrong

Pon Brats

07:34:39

Wk 14 is usually like wk 11 and 7

Equity Falls

07:34:30 Dimmed | KNN

I'm seeing it closer to 7/11 repeat with most of the high LB that have it tracked being 5/6 or 6/6. For KNN I'm seeing 2-4/6 for the top boys it looks. My boy is up 2/6

All Breeds

07:33:10 Fawn

Wk 14 I believe is Wk 6/10 repeat?

Equity Falls

07:32:13 Dimmed | KNN

Wait they should go most up week 14 apparently lol

BlackRose

07:32:02 Stella

He is pretty!

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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