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Jericho Stables

09:24:55

Well. It is a tomorrow me problem lol. I am exhausted and I think that is the issue. I only got about five hours sleep last night and I’ve been up since 5 this morning. Time for bed

River

09:12:02 ♡ River

Can someone please send me some frontward facing horse stock? something with not that much drastic lighting, I want to practice myself

KPH Equestrian

09:03:10 Rapcoon | Jester

i feel like she'd absolutely rock this look🙂‍↕️ xD
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Gem Queens Estate

08:56:32 Snow❆Gem

@dory

:D Well, I have to go now. Have a good night! I wish two you and the mare that best!

Jericho Stables

08:56:16

You sure? Don't you want to go with a half bob look? XD

KPH Equestrian

08:55:49 Rapcoon | Jester

jeri
i mean, penny doesnt NEED a tail.... xD

The Undercity

08:55:40 Dory

Gem
oh yea but I have the rest of the year with her and the best partner to help me with her

Glacier Bay Cove

08:55:23 Glacier Kittens

Ooh, I want some Jericho art

Gem Queens Estate

08:54:21 Snow❆Gem

@dory

Oh good! I bet it will take a long while but will take off eventually. *hugs*

Idle Lane Farms

08:53:27 Mera

I've got to get my hands on some of your work one day

~Savy~

08:53:05 Sav

Aw, very cute Gem! :D

Jericho Stables

08:52:26

Thanks :D

The Undercity

08:52:09 Dory

Gem
That's what I have ben doing even with the littlest things she seems to really love positive reinforcement

Idle Lane Farms

08:51:55 Mera

Holy smokes Jeri that pattern work is insane. Tough tail for sure

Jericho Stables

08:51:47

I've deleted it and redrawn it a solid 7.5 times (.5 because I just erased half lol)

Gem Queens Estate

08:51:03 Snow❆Gem

@sav

Got 7 minutes? :D

-YT Click-

Jericho Stables

08:50:55

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Gem Queens Estate

08:50:44 Snow❆Gem

@dory

Sounds like she needs some love and hugs. Like to know someone has her back.

~Savy~

08:49:32 Sav

Finals week has me dead

Idle Lane Farms

08:49:19 Mera

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Jericho Stables

09:24:55

Well. It is a tomorrow me problem lol. I am exhausted and I think that is the issue. I only got about five hours sleep last night and I’ve been up since 5 this morning. Time for bed

River

09:12:02 ♡ River

Can someone please send me some frontward facing horse stock? something with not that much drastic lighting, I want to practice myself

KPH Equestrian

09:03:10 Rapcoon | Jester

i feel like she'd absolutely rock this look🙂‍↕️ xD
-Click-

Gem Queens Estate

08:56:32 Snow❆Gem

@dory

:D Well, I have to go now. Have a good night! I wish two you and the mare that best!

Jericho Stables

08:56:16

You sure? Don't you want to go with a half bob look? XD

KPH Equestrian

08:55:49 Rapcoon | Jester

jeri
i mean, penny doesnt NEED a tail.... xD

The Undercity

08:55:40 Dory

Gem
oh yea but I have the rest of the year with her and the best partner to help me with her

Glacier Bay Cove

08:55:23 Glacier Kittens

Ooh, I want some Jericho art

Gem Queens Estate

08:54:21 Snow❆Gem

@dory

Oh good! I bet it will take a long while but will take off eventually. *hugs*

Idle Lane Farms

08:53:27 Mera

I've got to get my hands on some of your work one day

~Savy~

08:53:05 Sav

Aw, very cute Gem! :D

Jericho Stables

08:52:26

Thanks :D

The Undercity

08:52:09 Dory

Gem
That's what I have ben doing even with the littlest things she seems to really love positive reinforcement

Idle Lane Farms

08:51:55 Mera

Holy smokes Jeri that pattern work is insane. Tough tail for sure

Jericho Stables

08:51:47

I've deleted it and redrawn it a solid 7.5 times (.5 because I just erased half lol)

Gem Queens Estate

08:51:03 Snow❆Gem

@sav

Got 7 minutes? :D

-YT Click-

Jericho Stables

08:50:55

-Click-

Gem Queens Estate

08:50:44 Snow❆Gem

@dory

Sounds like she needs some love and hugs. Like to know someone has her back.

~Savy~

08:49:32 Sav

Finals week has me dead

Idle Lane Farms

08:49:19 Mera

Do show, Jeri

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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