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Stone Haven Farm

09:40:07 Court

I was very tempted to do a frame x frame breeding earlier but decided against it 🥴

09:39:54 Sun/Sunny

Ahhhh. My bf 3-D printed me a dragon and it’s so cute. He’s so sweet

Stone Haven Farm

09:39:19 Court

Holy crap!!

09:38:57 Dae

Thanks LV! Ill keep him as is Rookie ^-^

09:38:43 Dory

I think his pattern would make a fun piece *.*

Stone Haven Farm

09:38:36 Court

I had a lot of boys this RO too 👀

09:38:25 Sting

Pulled out a huge risk shot with FramexFrame
Due to having a spare straw...and wow!
-HEE Click-

I love this fillies mother. Her training is amazing

09:38:21 Rescue/Rookie

Dae, No

Ledgeview Farms

09:38:16 LV

Dae, I think he’s cute!

Ledgeview Farms

09:37:32 LV

My sven was a WEW this time. I don’t get sexed Sven’s but they’re always colts out of this mare for some readonn

09:37:17 Dae

-HEE Click- Should I reroll?

Glacier Bay Cove

09:34:12 Glacier Kittens

The same thing happened to me a while back, Rose

09:34:12 Sting

EeAAPrlTo is quite nice!
Happy with that indeed. Bummer i didnt sven that cross

09:33:56

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I rarely use anything when I breed. Used a movement glass on this filly and it's still her weakest trait

Stone Haven Farm

09:33:07 Court

Oooo and no sabino :D

09:31:42 Sting

well...i did just get this colt out of the WWW Sven mare i spoke of...
-HEE Click-

Stone Haven Farm

09:31:36 Court

I tend to have better luck with the stained glasses oddly enough

09:31:06 Kiwi

My first ever Svenned foal was a WEE filly lmao. Now though, I don't do a match without one.

09:29:58 Sting

Yeah, that was my 3rd Sven.
1st was WWW,
the others are WEE.

09:29:51 Keonah

wohoo! congrats tasi

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Stone Haven Farm

09:40:07 Court

I was very tempted to do a frame x frame breeding earlier but decided against it 🥴

09:39:54 Sun/Sunny

Ahhhh. My bf 3-D printed me a dragon and it’s so cute. He’s so sweet

Stone Haven Farm

09:39:19 Court

Holy crap!!

09:38:57 Dae

Thanks LV! Ill keep him as is Rookie ^-^

09:38:43 Dory

I think his pattern would make a fun piece *.*

Stone Haven Farm

09:38:36 Court

I had a lot of boys this RO too 👀

09:38:25 Sting

Pulled out a huge risk shot with FramexFrame
Due to having a spare straw...and wow!
-HEE Click-

I love this fillies mother. Her training is amazing

09:38:21 Rescue/Rookie

Dae, No

Ledgeview Farms

09:38:16 LV

Dae, I think he’s cute!

Ledgeview Farms

09:37:32 LV

My sven was a WEW this time. I don’t get sexed Sven’s but they’re always colts out of this mare for some readonn

09:37:17 Dae

-HEE Click- Should I reroll?

Glacier Bay Cove

09:34:12 Glacier Kittens

The same thing happened to me a while back, Rose

09:34:12 Sting

EeAAPrlTo is quite nice!
Happy with that indeed. Bummer i didnt sven that cross

09:33:56

-HEE Click-

I rarely use anything when I breed. Used a movement glass on this filly and it's still her weakest trait

Stone Haven Farm

09:33:07 Court

Oooo and no sabino :D

09:31:42 Sting

well...i did just get this colt out of the WWW Sven mare i spoke of...
-HEE Click-

Stone Haven Farm

09:31:36 Court

I tend to have better luck with the stained glasses oddly enough

09:31:06 Kiwi

My first ever Svenned foal was a WEE filly lmao. Now though, I don't do a match without one.

09:29:58 Sting

Yeah, that was my 3rd Sven.
1st was WWW,
the others are WEE.

09:29:51 Keonah

wohoo! congrats tasi

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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