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Cwoissant

07:27:13 Liz

Guys what are your login streaks

Wisteria Run Farm

07:08:15 Solar/Ria

Brat
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Hy Brasil

07:07:44 Croft

they are show stallions so they level slower.

Legacy Leagues

07:07:35 Alyssa ♡

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Hehe

Ashcroft Park Stud

07:05:05 Ash

Yeah if you even put them up for stud at a minimal amount (e.g. 2k) they would earn far more than a show gelding

Hy Brasil

07:04:44 Croft

I have so many useless WWW TB studs here they just show really

Motonemi

07:03:37 AL, mum to Nemi

Its also the fact that even though the www's might not be useful to their owners they can useful for others (and therefore give a little bit of income)

Dash and Duchess

07:02:26 DD | ~Squizard~

couldn't go all up? >.<
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Ashcroft Park Stud

07:02:18 Ash

People dont really seem to geld WWW boys, I guess they are always useful for quest foals and gelding makers

Hy Brasil

07:02:14 Croft

also I do not care about breeding apricot he is here to make me furious

Ladys Syable

07:02:12

wtf

Hy Brasil

07:01:14 Croft

secretly I hate him lol

Valhalla Acreage

07:01:10 Eivor/ Rumi

Sure but why have mid when there are already LB studs who can give Apricots

Hy Brasil

07:00:35 Croft

but he is supposed to be fabulous for apricot abilities lol

Valhalla Acreage

06:59:56 Eivor/ Rumi

Oof that training he would be a gelding

Hy Brasil

06:58:29 Croft

meanwhile a WWW
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this game is whack

Hy Brasil

06:56:50 Croft

suspicious -HEE Click-

Silver Melody Acres

06:55:25 Solar - KNNs

I'm happy with you because my other girl hurts my heart :(
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But yay!
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Stabulum Equorum

06:48:51

Ima take that
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Ashcroft Park Stud

06:48:48 Ash

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Her being au makes my 3 flopped svens from 201 feel… better. Her damline also makes me feel emotions 😂

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Cwoissant

07:27:13 Liz

Guys what are your login streaks

Wisteria Run Farm

07:08:15 Solar/Ria

Brat
-HEE Click-

Hy Brasil

07:07:44 Croft

they are show stallions so they level slower.

Legacy Leagues

07:07:35 Alyssa ♡

-HEE Click-
Hehe

Ashcroft Park Stud

07:05:05 Ash

Yeah if you even put them up for stud at a minimal amount (e.g. 2k) they would earn far more than a show gelding

Hy Brasil

07:04:44 Croft

I have so many useless WWW TB studs here they just show really

Motonemi

07:03:37 AL, mum to Nemi

Its also the fact that even though the www's might not be useful to their owners they can useful for others (and therefore give a little bit of income)

Dash and Duchess

07:02:26 DD | ~Squizard~

couldn't go all up? >.<
-HEE Click-

Ashcroft Park Stud

07:02:18 Ash

People dont really seem to geld WWW boys, I guess they are always useful for quest foals and gelding makers

Hy Brasil

07:02:14 Croft

also I do not care about breeding apricot he is here to make me furious

Ladys Syable

07:02:12

wtf

Hy Brasil

07:01:14 Croft

secretly I hate him lol

Valhalla Acreage

07:01:10 Eivor/ Rumi

Sure but why have mid when there are already LB studs who can give Apricots

Hy Brasil

07:00:35 Croft

but he is supposed to be fabulous for apricot abilities lol

Valhalla Acreage

06:59:56 Eivor/ Rumi

Oof that training he would be a gelding

Hy Brasil

06:58:29 Croft

meanwhile a WWW
-HEE Click-
this game is whack

Hy Brasil

06:56:50 Croft

suspicious -HEE Click-

Silver Melody Acres

06:55:25 Solar - KNNs

I'm happy with you because my other girl hurts my heart :(
-HEE Click-

But yay!
-HEE Click-

Stabulum Equorum

06:48:51

Ima take that
-HEE Click-

Ashcroft Park Stud

06:48:48 Ash

-HEE Click-

Her being au makes my 3 flopped svens from 201 feel… better. Her damline also makes me feel emotions 😂

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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