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Aura Show Horses

11:35:54 Aura /Pea

I'm going to sleep 👋😴

Morningstar Training

11:35:22 Kay <3

I have to be up at 6am eastern. Decided to stay up for RO. Will regret it in the morning lol

Glacier Bay Cove

11:33:56 Glacier Kittens

I will be sleeping through RO

Tobiano Lady

11:24:44 Tobi | 👻

grateful for the mass name change update <33

Nightingales Ridge

11:23:55 𔓘 Issy

Aw berts already crying at my straw purchases hahaha

Nightingales Ridge

11:21:15 𔓘 Issy

I've saved decently. Hoping thatl chunk over to the following RO when I can maybe buy sven or breed to tip toppy lb stud

Aura Show Horses

11:19:26 Aura /Pea

Witchy
Me too 😵

Nightfall Dressage

11:17:53 Witchy

RO is going to make me go broke

Aura Show Horses

11:16:14 Aura /Pea

I can't wait to breed!!!! 😍

Nightingales Ridge

11:15:25 𔓘 Issy

Yessss woohoo.

Aura Show Horses

11:14:39 Aura /Pea

Great! Waiting for RO!

Nightingales Ridge

11:13:15 𔓘 Issy

Hahaha not me putting a suit on my son and thinking hmm yeah no red isn't your colour. I'm too lazy to change it though ha!

Hummingbird Meadows

11:12:00 Bird

@Issy, my standards aren't even that high. I just want a guy who wants to support a family, but evidently that's too much to ask.

Nightingales Ridge

11:11:24 𔓘 Issy

I'm good Auraaaa :D you?

Nightingales Ridge

11:11:08 𔓘 Issy

Bird LOL oh nooo

Aura Show Horses

11:09:44 Aura /Pea

Hi Issy! :D
How are you today?!

Hummingbird Meadows

11:09:26 Bird

Wow, I just got a message on my dating app that they have run out of people for me to swipe on so I need to expand my search range. That's depressing. XD

Nightingales Ridge

11:08:28 𔓘 Issy

Bye willowww.
Hi auraa

Rising Stars Stable

11:06:47 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Goodnight everyone, talk tomorrow

Aura Show Horses

11:06:41 Aura /Pea

Hiya! *_*

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Aura Show Horses

11:35:54 Aura /Pea

I'm going to sleep 👋😴

Morningstar Training

11:35:22 Kay <3

I have to be up at 6am eastern. Decided to stay up for RO. Will regret it in the morning lol

Glacier Bay Cove

11:33:56 Glacier Kittens

I will be sleeping through RO

Tobiano Lady

11:24:44 Tobi | 👻

grateful for the mass name change update <33

Nightingales Ridge

11:23:55 𔓘 Issy

Aw berts already crying at my straw purchases hahaha

Nightingales Ridge

11:21:15 𔓘 Issy

I've saved decently. Hoping thatl chunk over to the following RO when I can maybe buy sven or breed to tip toppy lb stud

Aura Show Horses

11:19:26 Aura /Pea

Witchy
Me too 😵

Nightfall Dressage

11:17:53 Witchy

RO is going to make me go broke

Aura Show Horses

11:16:14 Aura /Pea

I can't wait to breed!!!! 😍

Nightingales Ridge

11:15:25 𔓘 Issy

Yessss woohoo.

Aura Show Horses

11:14:39 Aura /Pea

Great! Waiting for RO!

Nightingales Ridge

11:13:15 𔓘 Issy

Hahaha not me putting a suit on my son and thinking hmm yeah no red isn't your colour. I'm too lazy to change it though ha!

Hummingbird Meadows

11:12:00 Bird

@Issy, my standards aren't even that high. I just want a guy who wants to support a family, but evidently that's too much to ask.

Nightingales Ridge

11:11:24 𔓘 Issy

I'm good Auraaaa :D you?

Nightingales Ridge

11:11:08 𔓘 Issy

Bird LOL oh nooo

Aura Show Horses

11:09:44 Aura /Pea

Hi Issy! :D
How are you today?!

Hummingbird Meadows

11:09:26 Bird

Wow, I just got a message on my dating app that they have run out of people for me to swipe on so I need to expand my search range. That's depressing. XD

Nightingales Ridge

11:08:28 𔓘 Issy

Bye willowww.
Hi auraa

Rising Stars Stable

11:06:47 Willow ~ AA Breeder

Goodnight everyone, talk tomorrow

Aura Show Horses

11:06:41 Aura /Pea

Hiya! *_*

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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