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11:40:57 ISO Brave EWW ISH
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Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

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Proven Grullo LB WWW Sire.

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EEE+ Broodmares at 3k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.,
Thistlewood Farm
11:17:07 Thistle
Horses for sale including a 40k WWW mare im just trying to get rid of horses im accepting offers on the Mare and am willing to lower her price to 20k just dm -HEE Click-
Grimm Acres
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-HEE Click- WWW Silver tobi AA mare 800k
Thistlewood Farm
10:57:25 Thistle
Stallions for Stud (Mostly WWs but 1 brindle) -HEE Click-
Boulder Creek
10:51:16 
Take a minute to check out this great Art Contest:

Off To The Races:
Daffodil Dash
-HEE Click-

It's Color-In Lineart - so no crazy art skills needed. Anyone can submit an entry. It's super easy and fun.
Old Time Ranch
10:47:48 Gramps
ISO vanilla beans that doesn't cost a fortune
Shady Tree Farm
10:29:34 Shady
Several WC bravery TB mares up for sale :)
-HEE Click-
PoloStables
10:18:21 MightyMo
nvm i cant sell him i love him
PoloStables
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-HEE Click- WWW for sale! 150K
Boulder Creek
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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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