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Red Hill Hollow

04:08:34 Red, Hollow

Thanks min 😊

Minerva

04:07:26 Min

Ooh lovely Red!

Red Hill Hollow

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First fantasy piece I’ve done in ages. Super happy with it so far! Ken to colour it :)

Touya

03:13:13 Burnt Chickie Nuggie

my cat just brought me a nail..... like the metal one

03:09:40 🛸Divaaa

I want this one in W version
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03:02:40

It is hope I get some more gorgeous ones like her

Nightingales Ridge

02:55:02 𔓘 Issy

Aw bugger

02:54:03

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I was sooo hoping you would at least have EE t.t

02:17:17 Diva's pawsickles

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Nightingales Ridge

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Gaelic Gladiacres

12:42:34 Gladius

Oh nice, classic really. We watched the movie for sixth grade Latin class

MC Ace

12:41:15 McFossil

I'm lost in the sauce. Last book I read was Ben-Hur

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:41:06 Gladius

Oh I never said I would hahaha xD

Maple Tree Eventing

12:40:40 Lydia <3

LOLLL I live in those trenches for real, don't save me I'm right where I wanna be

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:40:25 Gladius

Now the original FMA... -grimace- I'm sorry I know lots of people love it but it departed so viscerally from the manga I just couldn't

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:39:38 Gladius

LOL Lydia. The vast reaches and unfathomable depths of anime xD incredible

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:39:06 Gladius

Yeah from what I saw of the anime I would agree, still entertaining enough at least

Maple Tree Eventing

12:38:35 Lydia <3

Bliss indeed, I love staying unbothered and reading yaoi

MC Ace

12:37:40 McFossil

Anime didn't do Claymore justice, but it was still good. They don't make anime like that anymore.

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Red Hill Hollow

04:08:34 Red, Hollow

Thanks min 😊

Minerva

04:07:26 Min

Ooh lovely Red!

Red Hill Hollow

04:06:32 Red, Hollow

-Click-
First fantasy piece I’ve done in ages. Super happy with it so far! Ken to colour it :)

Touya

03:13:13 Burnt Chickie Nuggie

my cat just brought me a nail..... like the metal one

03:09:40 🛸Divaaa

I want this one in W version
-HEE Click-

03:02:40

It is hope I get some more gorgeous ones like her

Nightingales Ridge

02:55:02 𔓘 Issy

Aw bugger

02:54:03

-HEE Click-
I was sooo hoping you would at least have EE t.t

02:17:17 Diva's pawsickles

Cute
-HEE Click-

Nightingales Ridge

02:02:21 𔓘 Issy

Congratulations Mew!

01:50:29 Mew | Juno

-HEE Click-
My WWW baby was all up for week 4 !!!

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:42:34 Gladius

Oh nice, classic really. We watched the movie for sixth grade Latin class

MC Ace

12:41:15 McFossil

I'm lost in the sauce. Last book I read was Ben-Hur

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:41:06 Gladius

Oh I never said I would hahaha xD

Maple Tree Eventing

12:40:40 Lydia <3

LOLLL I live in those trenches for real, don't save me I'm right where I wanna be

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:40:25 Gladius

Now the original FMA... -grimace- I'm sorry I know lots of people love it but it departed so viscerally from the manga I just couldn't

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:39:38 Gladius

LOL Lydia. The vast reaches and unfathomable depths of anime xD incredible

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:39:06 Gladius

Yeah from what I saw of the anime I would agree, still entertaining enough at least

Maple Tree Eventing

12:38:35 Lydia <3

Bliss indeed, I love staying unbothered and reading yaoi

MC Ace

12:37:40 McFossil

Anime didn't do Claymore justice, but it was still good. They don't make anime like that anymore.

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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