Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Year: 199   Season: Spring   
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All Breeds
12:07:25 Fawn
So far my Dressage babies are loving me!
-HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
12:06:49 Solar - KNNs
Cute!
All Breeds
12:03:54 Fawn
Oooh wasn't expecting Apricot!
-HEE Click-
Ravenwood Farm
12:02:51 Raven
-HEE Click-
This guy turned out cute
Angels angels
11:58:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Not that I can see
Portrait Paints Stud
11:57:33 Dulcie Is Painting
Took a nap
Has the new gene arrived yet?
Ravenwood Farm
11:52:01 Raven
Oh lol I completely forgot I have an EWW freshie to test, until I stumbled over him now while doing last week's tracking. I need to get my shit together lol
Painted Perfection
11:52:01 Luna
Ive been culling so ive still got a ton of breeding to do
Gem
11:49:59 Gem
I've barely done any AD so my SD haven't even been touched yet loll. Fingers crossed though for some equally pretty shinies
Painted Perfection
11:49:40 Luna
Oh Im super excited now 🥰
Lambda Estates
11:48:57 Eps RID
I’ve gotten a ton of shinies for the SD this month <.< Especially the XC bois
Gem
11:48:51 Gem
Would be a shame if I... *taked* her...
Gem
11:48:23 Gem
UwU she's so pretty Eps!
Lambda Estates
11:47:44 Eps RID
Eyeliner on point
-HEE Click-
Sunni
11:47:18 Sunni bunny
Sick again, I just left work.
I feel like total crud.
Calela Eventing
11:46:45 Cali
You're still sick Sunni?
All Breeds
11:46:20 Fawn
Jeri what can I say xD
Jericho Stables
11:45:51 
Jimmies have been rustled lmao
Sunni
11:45:39 Sunni bunny
So exhausted of being sick.
All Breeds
11:45:05 Fawn
>.> Now my jimmies have been rustled and I'm excited

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All Breeds
12:07:25 Fawn
So far my Dressage babies are loving me!
-HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
12:06:49 Solar - KNNs
Cute!
All Breeds
12:03:54 Fawn
Oooh wasn't expecting Apricot!
-HEE Click-
Ravenwood Farm
12:02:51 Raven
-HEE Click-
This guy turned out cute
Angels angels
11:58:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Not that I can see
Portrait Paints Stud
11:57:33 Dulcie Is Painting
Took a nap
Has the new gene arrived yet?
Ravenwood Farm
11:52:01 Raven
Oh lol I completely forgot I have an EWW freshie to test, until I stumbled over him now while doing last week's tracking. I need to get my shit together lol
Painted Perfection
11:52:01 Luna
Ive been culling so ive still got a ton of breeding to do
Gem
11:49:59 Gem
I've barely done any AD so my SD haven't even been touched yet loll. Fingers crossed though for some equally pretty shinies
Painted Perfection
11:49:40 Luna
Oh Im super excited now 🥰
Lambda Estates
11:48:57 Eps RID
I’ve gotten a ton of shinies for the SD this month <.< Especially the XC bois
Gem
11:48:51 Gem
Would be a shame if I... *taked* her...
Gem
11:48:23 Gem
UwU she's so pretty Eps!
Lambda Estates
11:47:44 Eps RID
Eyeliner on point
-HEE Click-
Sunni
11:47:18 Sunni bunny
Sick again, I just left work.
I feel like total crud.
Calela Eventing
11:46:45 Cali
You're still sick Sunni?
All Breeds
11:46:20 Fawn
Jeri what can I say xD
Jericho Stables
11:45:51 
Jimmies have been rustled lmao
Sunni
11:45:39 Sunni bunny
So exhausted of being sick.
All Breeds
11:45:05 Fawn
>.> Now my jimmies have been rustled and I'm excited

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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