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Port Royal Equines

01:29:46 Elfie

-HEE Click-
She's so cute. *-*

Whitewolf

01:29:01 Fang

XD let’s hope it means it’s a sweet horse that produces lots of WWWs

Glacier Bay Cove

01:28:40 Glacier Kittens

Good idea, Zen

Centralia Farms

01:26:33 Zen's KNNs

Oooh maybe I should start a ratings + bravery program -HEE Click-

Oak River Farms

01:26:30 Oakie

Fang, that's gonna be an awesome horse name xD

Whitewolf

01:21:19 Fang

Foreshadowing sugar

Jericho Stables

01:20:16

HEE doing me a solid lol. I found packet of sugar then had a quest to fetch sugar packets lol

Glacier Bay Cove

01:19:37 Glacier Kittens

Now almost ready for RO, and the capture party

Chat

01:15:09 Tzeentch

-HEE Click- that's a fun look

Astray

01:09:45 Stay |

Looking for a roleplay partner for an Idol x Idol idea I've had. PM me!

Statesman

01:09:20 Sun's Spl TB's

I feel that Ven.

SandWitch Arabians

01:07:33 Witchypoo

Lux - if it was my call, I'd go with a Dressage Med.

Embervale Acres

01:02:33 Solar/Ria

I don't believe so

Storybrooke Hollow

12:57:30 Equilleon

Ello!
Srry had a quick question, is it possible to exclude more than one coat color, when searching for horses?

Lunar Wilds

12:53:15 Lux - AAs

Does this match with a green glass make sense?
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

12:44:25 Glacier Kittens

That sounds like a good confusion

Magpie Ridge

12:41:31 Ven | RID

ADHD is great because what do you mean I spent a ton of time putting things into my shop this morning only to have every one of them sell and confuse me with the income when I login again

Glacier Bay Cove

12:36:53 Glacier Kittens

Under stable activities, manage your hay

Briar Thorn Ranch

12:36:28 Rowena/Ro

ah darn, but fair enough, in that case I either have wayyyy to many bales or I've done my maths wildly incorrectly (apparently I have enough for 103 real life years... I think I've done the maths wildly incorrectly)

Nanami

12:35:53

Service>store>store hay you can see what you got i think

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Port Royal Equines

01:29:46 Elfie

-HEE Click-
She's so cute. *-*

Whitewolf

01:29:01 Fang

XD let’s hope it means it’s a sweet horse that produces lots of WWWs

Glacier Bay Cove

01:28:40 Glacier Kittens

Good idea, Zen

Centralia Farms

01:26:33 Zen's KNNs

Oooh maybe I should start a ratings + bravery program -HEE Click-

Oak River Farms

01:26:30 Oakie

Fang, that's gonna be an awesome horse name xD

Whitewolf

01:21:19 Fang

Foreshadowing sugar

Jericho Stables

01:20:16

HEE doing me a solid lol. I found packet of sugar then had a quest to fetch sugar packets lol

Glacier Bay Cove

01:19:37 Glacier Kittens

Now almost ready for RO, and the capture party

Chat

01:15:09 Tzeentch

-HEE Click- that's a fun look

Astray

01:09:45 Stay |

Looking for a roleplay partner for an Idol x Idol idea I've had. PM me!

Statesman

01:09:20 Sun's Spl TB's

I feel that Ven.

SandWitch Arabians

01:07:33 Witchypoo

Lux - if it was my call, I'd go with a Dressage Med.

Embervale Acres

01:02:33 Solar/Ria

I don't believe so

Storybrooke Hollow

12:57:30 Equilleon

Ello!
Srry had a quick question, is it possible to exclude more than one coat color, when searching for horses?

Lunar Wilds

12:53:15 Lux - AAs

Does this match with a green glass make sense?
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

12:44:25 Glacier Kittens

That sounds like a good confusion

Magpie Ridge

12:41:31 Ven | RID

ADHD is great because what do you mean I spent a ton of time putting things into my shop this morning only to have every one of them sell and confuse me with the income when I login again

Glacier Bay Cove

12:36:53 Glacier Kittens

Under stable activities, manage your hay

Briar Thorn Ranch

12:36:28 Rowena/Ro

Nanami

12:35:53

Service>store>store hay you can see what you got i think

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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