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Sweet Valley
11:33:53 Anna/Jewel
Hi Aris
Tenebris Hollow
11:28:49 Aris/Quinn
Hello guys!
Rubygem-Chenya
11:18:02 Ruby/Cheshire
Anyways, bye
Rubygem-Chenya
11:17:50 Ruby/Cheshire
I might just send it to you via game mail Glacier, since I'll be done it today or so.
Rubygem-Chenya
11:17:08 Ruby/Cheshire
All*
Rubygem-Chenya
11:16:28 Ruby/Cheshire
So I have left to do it a hand, outlining and coloring.
Rubygem-Chenya
11:16:05 Ruby/Cheshire
Umm that might not happen I'm still deciding if I wanna show it
Glacier Bay Cove
11:14:51 Glacier Kittens
Looking forward to seeing it when you finish it, Ruby
Rubygem-Chenya
11:12:41 Ruby/Cheshire
I'm going to go finish a drawing that I might regret drawing oh well bye
Rubygem-Chenya
11:11:56 Ruby/Cheshire
Ah
Glacier Bay Cove
11:11:42 Glacier Kittens
Yes it does
Glacier Bay Cove
11:11:33 Glacier Kittens
As soon as my horses earn more Ebs I can gene test them
Rubygem-Chenya
11:11:07 Ruby/Cheshire
I don't see the snowflake does the white hide it?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:10:29 Glacier Kittens
White varnish snowflake -HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
11:08:38 Ruby/Cheshire
-HEE Click-
This one is the whitest grey I have
Glacier Bay Cove
11:07:51 Glacier Kittens
That might be hiding colors
Glacier Bay Cove
11:07:27 Glacier Kittens
I have some grey horses and some white horses
Rubygem-Chenya
11:06:36 Ruby/Cheshire
I have Grey's that look white
Glass Arrow Acres
11:05:59 Grace
He's the closest to white that I have
-HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
11:05:49 Ruby/Cheshire
I mean in real life I love white horses on here mm

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Sweet Valley
11:33:53 Anna/Jewel
Hi Aris
Tenebris Hollow
11:28:49 Aris/Quinn
Hello guys!
Rubygem-Chenya
11:18:02 Ruby/Cheshire
Anyways, bye
Rubygem-Chenya
11:17:50 Ruby/Cheshire
I might just send it to you via game mail Glacier, since I'll be done it today or so.
Rubygem-Chenya
11:17:08 Ruby/Cheshire
All*
Rubygem-Chenya
11:16:28 Ruby/Cheshire
So I have left to do it a hand, outlining and coloring.
Rubygem-Chenya
11:16:05 Ruby/Cheshire
Umm that might not happen I'm still deciding if I wanna show it
Glacier Bay Cove
11:14:51 Glacier Kittens
Looking forward to seeing it when you finish it, Ruby
Rubygem-Chenya
11:12:41 Ruby/Cheshire
I'm going to go finish a drawing that I might regret drawing oh well bye
Rubygem-Chenya
11:11:56 Ruby/Cheshire
Ah
Glacier Bay Cove
11:11:42 Glacier Kittens
Yes it does
Glacier Bay Cove
11:11:33 Glacier Kittens
As soon as my horses earn more Ebs I can gene test them
Rubygem-Chenya
11:11:07 Ruby/Cheshire
I don't see the snowflake does the white hide it?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:10:29 Glacier Kittens
White varnish snowflake -HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
11:08:38 Ruby/Cheshire
-HEE Click-
This one is the whitest grey I have
Glacier Bay Cove
11:07:51 Glacier Kittens
That might be hiding colors
Glacier Bay Cove
11:07:27 Glacier Kittens
I have some grey horses and some white horses
Rubygem-Chenya
11:06:36 Ruby/Cheshire
I have Grey's that look white
Glass Arrow Acres
11:05:59 Grace
He's the closest to white that I have
-HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
11:05:49 Ruby/Cheshire
I mean in real life I love white horses on here mm

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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