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Black Rock Studs

01:52:24 Celeste

Guys I just bred my first EWE

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Santana Rising

01:27:11 San

Oh yes I think he looks wonderful! Love the homo dun and the little white spots on him.

Acavallo

01:21:04 Vanora

I actually think this horse is quite cute
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GHOSTMANE

01:15:14 Ghost

Oh yeah... he looks GOOD
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Pegasus Lane

01:11:55 Peggy (or) Peg

My house duck in her diaper never fails to make me giggle. She's just so darn cute in it 😍😍

Mara Jade

01:04:28

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Why couldn't you be a filly

Namerik Stables

12:48:24 Rose

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Ahhhh!! OMG a brindle and somewhat good ratings good girl fire

Vahana

12:47:07 Val

Dec 4, 2025 15:57:10 You entered 160 horses into reg. shows for 56100.
Dec 5, 2025 00:16:46 You had 160 horses compete in reg. shows earning 98992.

The numbers are slowly increasing and I am so happy :D

Wolf Dancer

12:42:47 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Still can't get over the fact she bummed mom +55 on the ISHLB 😲
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Lucky

12:32:48 luvky

I like the colour potential though :0

Lucky

12:32:19 luvky

Ari, it's not bad... my judgement entirely depends on how many straws to him you have left lol

Calela Eventing

12:21:47 Cali

Quite like it Ari!
Stolas is quite a fickle stud so defintly sven it if you can

The Joker

12:19:09 Ari <3

Thoughts on this match?
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Hyrule_Stables

12:18:41 CIA/Burrito/Lumpy B

Ohh hello handsome :)
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Calela Eventing

12:12:16 Cali

Holy hell! Just completed a quest 've been busy with for the past 2 weeks

Stellar Performance

12:04:06 Luna

Thanks XD

Stellar Performance

12:03:57 Luna

Im actually not mad at that lol

Crescent Estate

12:03:44 River / Crescent

Luna
PPP! nice ^^

Stellar Performance

12:03:03 Luna

Rating her now

Glacier Bay Cove

12:02:52 Glacier Kittens

I will check on her tomorrow and see what she rates as, Luna

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Black Rock Studs

01:52:24 Celeste

Guys I just bred my first EWE

-HEE Click-

Santana Rising

01:27:11 San

Oh yes I think he looks wonderful! Love the homo dun and the little white spots on him.

Acavallo

01:21:04 Vanora

I actually think this horse is quite cute
-HEE Click-

GHOSTMANE

01:15:14 Ghost

Oh yeah... he looks GOOD
-HEE Click-

Pegasus Lane

01:11:55 Peggy (or) Peg

My house duck in her diaper never fails to make me giggle. She's just so darn cute in it 😍😍

Mara Jade

01:04:28

-HEE Click-

Why couldn't you be a filly

Namerik Stables

12:48:24 Rose

-HEE Click-
Ahhhh!! OMG a brindle and somewhat good ratings good girl fire

Vahana

12:47:07 Val

Wolf Dancer

12:42:47 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Still can't get over the fact she bummed mom +55 on the ISHLB 😲
-HEE Click-

Lucky

12:32:48 luvky

I like the colour potential though :0

Lucky

12:32:19 luvky

Ari, it's not bad... my judgement entirely depends on how many straws to him you have left lol

Calela Eventing

12:21:47 Cali

Quite like it Ari!
Stolas is quite a fickle stud so defintly sven it if you can

The Joker

12:19:09 Ari <3

Thoughts on this match?
-HEE Click-

Hyrule_Stables

12:18:41 CIA/Burrito/Lumpy B

Ohh hello handsome :)
-HEE Click-

Calela Eventing

12:12:16 Cali

Holy hell! Just completed a quest 've been busy with for the past 2 weeks

Stellar Performance

12:04:06 Luna

Thanks XD

Stellar Performance

12:03:57 Luna

Im actually not mad at that lol

Crescent Estate

12:03:44 River / Crescent

Luna
PPP! nice ^^

Stellar Performance

12:03:03 Luna

Rating her now

Glacier Bay Cove

12:02:52 Glacier Kittens

I will check on her tomorrow and see what she rates as, Luna

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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