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Angels angels
06:57:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol a refund
Fairytale Paints
06:53:01 Im Elf
I am so over whatever stomach bug is going around

I want a refund
The Old Gods
06:41:55 Void Malign
O_o
Glacier Bay Cove
06:41:41 Glacier Kittens
Oh my, it’s a yawning Storm, run everybody, lol
The Fallen Rulers
06:39:51 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Yawn
Latigo
06:37:39 
Thanks you two ^^ <3
Glacier Bay Cove
06:36:41 Glacier Kittens
Incredible amazing work, Latigo
Castle Creek Stable
06:36:27 CC
oh wow latigo that's a fabulous piece!
Latigo
06:35:19 
-Click-
Just finished this :D Now for the evil waiting period between finishing a piece and waiting for the motivation to start a new one…
Golden Rose
06:34:26 Rose
Thank you both :D

Love the dapples!
Embervale Acres
06:33:17 Solar Phoenix
Nice catch!

Sparkly girl lol
-HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
06:32:33 Em
Why did RO come so fast lol I feel like it only just happened
Montana
06:31:39 Tana, Kae 2.0
Ooh nice
Golden Rose
06:30:19 Rose
not bad from a +10 map -HEE Click-
Montana
06:29:43 Tana, Kae 2.0
Welp
Looks like I killed chat :|
Montana
06:23:47 Tana, Kae 2.0
Raid anyone?
Embervale Acres
06:20:18 Solar Phoenix
Definitely! Love blood bay, and I think that's one of the new sabinos lol
Fossil's Dreams
06:16:29 PK or Fossil
ah well still a heck of a looker!
Embervale Acres
06:16:05 Solar Phoenix
Nope lol
Embervale Acres
06:15:30 Solar Phoenix
I don't think so?

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Angels angels
06:57:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol a refund
Fairytale Paints
06:53:01 Im Elf
I am so over whatever stomach bug is going around

I want a refund
The Old Gods
06:41:55 Void Malign
O_o
Glacier Bay Cove
06:41:41 Glacier Kittens
Oh my, it’s a yawning Storm, run everybody, lol
The Fallen Rulers
06:39:51 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Yawn
Latigo
06:37:39 
Thanks you two ^^ <3
Glacier Bay Cove
06:36:41 Glacier Kittens
Incredible amazing work, Latigo
Castle Creek Stable
06:36:27 CC
oh wow latigo that's a fabulous piece!
Latigo
06:35:19 
-Click-
Just finished this :D Now for the evil waiting period between finishing a piece and waiting for the motivation to start a new one…
Golden Rose
06:34:26 Rose
Thank you both :D

Love the dapples!
Embervale Acres
06:33:17 Solar Phoenix
Nice catch!

Sparkly girl lol
-HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
06:32:33 Em
Why did RO come so fast lol I feel like it only just happened
Montana
06:31:39 Tana, Kae 2.0
Ooh nice
Golden Rose
06:30:19 Rose
not bad from a +10 map -HEE Click-
Montana
06:29:43 Tana, Kae 2.0
Welp
Looks like I killed chat :|
Montana
06:23:47 Tana, Kae 2.0
Raid anyone?
Embervale Acres
06:20:18 Solar Phoenix
Definitely! Love blood bay, and I think that's one of the new sabinos lol
Fossil's Dreams
06:16:29 PK or Fossil
ah well still a heck of a looker!
Embervale Acres
06:16:05 Solar Phoenix
Nope lol
Embervale Acres
06:15:30 Solar Phoenix
I don't think so?

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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