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Moonlight Equestrian

12:44:21 Moon

Elfie, I think they are just a bit too white, if you played with them a bit or overlayed the background it could help! Mine are either stark white or yellow I never get the right balance at first lol

Nightingales Ridge

12:42:48 Issy

That's choice as :)

Greenheart Stables

12:38:08 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

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Port Royal Equines

12:29:49 Elfie

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Hhmmm I am not feeling the white markings.

Nightingales Ridge

12:29:48 Issy

:o what was the profit?

Nightingales Ridge

12:29:22 Issy

Goodnight :)

Montana

12:28:36 Tana, Kae 2.0

Alrighty...time for me to go to sleep XD

G'night y'all!

Greenheart Stables

12:27:48 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

Feb 17, 2026 00:18:27 You had 577 horses compete in reg. shows earning 1321902.

Niiiiice

123 I don't know

12:27:46 123/Screamin Eagle

Good Night Everyone!

full moon

12:20:19 usagi

ok.
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full moon

12:19:03 usagi

she Is SPP and 1/50

full moon

12:18:45 usagi

never mind

full moon

12:18:18 usagi

well, that was my bad match.
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Montana

12:17:43 Tana, Kae 2.0

That is the one downside of KNN...
If a colt doesn't have PATN genes, they just turn into SHs instead >_<

Nightingales Ridge

12:17:36 Issy

Missed the genes

full moon

12:16:23 usagi

well, that's not appy.
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Beamng

12:15:08 Miles Vinuline/Beam

I'll need to go to bed soon. Stayed up too late watching videos. It's crazy that I started to look back on my kids tv shows I would watch and now I want watch more.
My favorite to watch: -YT Click-

full moon

12:14:09 usagi

I'm just putting appys together and color breeding

Irish Fields

12:14:04 Fawn

She's pretty :)

Nightingales Ridge

12:13:43 Issy

Love knabbys for their spots

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Moonlight Equestrian

12:44:21 Moon

Elfie, I think they are just a bit too white, if you played with them a bit or overlayed the background it could help! Mine are either stark white or yellow I never get the right balance at first lol

Nightingales Ridge

12:42:48 Issy

That's choice as :)

Greenheart Stables

12:38:08 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@issy
645,060

Port Royal Equines

12:29:49 Elfie

-Click-
Hhmmm I am not feeling the white markings.

Nightingales Ridge

12:29:48 Issy

:o what was the profit?

Nightingales Ridge

12:29:22 Issy

Goodnight :)

Montana

12:28:36 Tana, Kae 2.0

Alrighty...time for me to go to sleep XD

G'night y'all!

Greenheart Stables

12:27:48 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

Feb 17, 2026 00:18:27 You had 577 horses compete in reg. shows earning 1321902.

Niiiiice

123 I don't know

12:27:46 123/Screamin Eagle

Good Night Everyone!

full moon

12:20:19 usagi

ok.
-HEE Click-

full moon

12:19:03 usagi

she Is SPP and 1/50

full moon

12:18:45 usagi

never mind

full moon

12:18:18 usagi

well, that was my bad match.
-HEE Click-

Montana

12:17:43 Tana, Kae 2.0

That is the one downside of KNN...
If a colt doesn't have PATN genes, they just turn into SHs instead >_<

Nightingales Ridge

12:17:36 Issy

Missed the genes

full moon

12:16:23 usagi

well, that's not appy.
-HEE Click-

Beamng

12:15:08 Miles Vinuline/Beam

I'll need to go to bed soon. Stayed up too late watching videos. It's crazy that I started to look back on my kids tv shows I would watch and now I want watch more.
My favorite to watch: -YT Click-

full moon

12:14:09 usagi

I'm just putting appys together and color breeding

Irish Fields

12:14:04 Fawn

She's pretty :)

Nightingales Ridge

12:13:43 Issy

Love knabbys for their spots

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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