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03:50:27 Technically Tangle

Anyone down to raid for a quest?

Lunalovegood

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MC Ace

01:44:10 McFossil

Alright I gotta turn in all, night

Transformers Acres

01:43:25 Geek, Greek Yogurt

I found a beautiful Mustang stallion, pretty palomino.

I'm broke as fuck and can't train a horse for shit, though. I'm sad now.

MC Ace

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LOL That's great Gypsy. I didn't realize they sounded better live, but I do know what you mean. Partially why I avoid concerts.

Gypsy Family Farm

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They are that kind of artists who are better live than recorded.

Also Marcus is nuts and runs around the arenas through the fans during Ditmas; he jumped on a hot dog cart when I saw him last.

MC Ace

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Nice! Looking good Trish

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-HEE Click- *phew* Just spent the last hour and a bit cleaning up the art forum and putting all the rules into one sorted post so we can actually see peoples art on the first page of the forums now! lol

MC Ace

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Aw that's awesome you got to see them live.

Gypsy Family Farm

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Rushmere (song) got me through most of this year.

Gypsy Family Farm

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I got to see them in Atlanta (fourth time) and when I tell you it was almost a spiritual experience....

MC Ace

01:26:22 McFossil

Das me. And yes it is very good on the soul.

Gypsy Family Farm

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Rats! Banjo, for whoever asked me about the Mumford and Sons song.

MC Ace

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My mare is now top 4 in most yearly points! Ya!

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Oops I missed shows x)

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Lunalovegood

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-HEE Click-

MC Ace

01:44:10 McFossil

Alright I gotta turn in all, night

Transformers Acres

01:43:25 Geek, Greek Yogurt

I found a beautiful Mustang stallion, pretty palomino.

I'm broke as fuck and can't train a horse for shit, though. I'm sad now.

MC Ace

01:42:59 McFossil

LOL That's great Gypsy. I didn't realize they sounded better live, but I do know what you mean. Partially why I avoid concerts.

Gypsy Family Farm

01:41:53

They are that kind of artists who are better live than recorded.

Also Marcus is nuts and runs around the arenas through the fans during Ditmas; he jumped on a hot dog cart when I saw him last.

MC Ace

01:41:45 McFossil

Nice! Looking good Trish

Morning Glory Farms

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MC Ace

01:33:13 McFossil

Aw that's awesome you got to see them live.

Gypsy Family Farm

01:31:25

Rushmere (song) got me through most of this year.

Gypsy Family Farm

01:31:03

I got to see them in Atlanta (fourth time) and when I tell you it was almost a spiritual experience....

MC Ace

01:26:22 McFossil

Das me. And yes it is very good on the soul.

Gypsy Family Farm

01:23:45

Rats! Banjo, for whoever asked me about the Mumford and Sons song.

MC Ace

12:32:11 McFossil

Woop top earnings in regular shows

Elite Equine Stables

12:30:37 Honey

My mare is now top 4 in most yearly points! Ya!

The Joker

12:29:47 Ari <3

Oops I missed shows x)

♦Interstellar Path

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Night!

rumi+jinu

12:00:18 usagi

night

Aura Show Horses

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Thanks (:

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Aura

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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