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Aura Show Horses
11:25:22 Aura /Pea
Holly!
Thanks! I will xD
Hot 2 Trot
11:23:20 ♡Holly♡
Oo Pea you'll have to let me know how it goes!
River
11:22:48 ♡ River
Glacier
Trying! xD I don't know why I keep doing it
Aura Show Horses
11:22:41 Aura /Pea
Bye! I'm gonna try some art before bed xD
We'll see how it goes!
Solace
11:22:19 Lace
She's pretty and bravery 🎉
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
11:22:16 Glacier Kittens
Stop holding your breath, River
River
11:21:53 ♡ River
I keep holding my breath for no reason and I need to stop-
fire
11:21:27 
i got to go now
fire
11:19:46 
i made ia bid
Hot 2 Trot
11:18:08 ♡Holly♡
Well the best rating is WWW
then it goes
EWW
then EWE
then lower so I'd say for showing it would be decent and for breeding SD but not so much AD
fire
11:18:07 
-HEE Click-
fire
11:17:22 
is that good
Hot 2 Trot
11:16:52 ♡Holly♡
He's rated EWE
fire
11:16:18 
-HEE Click-
Hot 2 Trot
11:15:21 ♡Holly♡
It may not be rated and so it be like a lucky draw for the winner
fire
11:14:26 
on the foal
fire
11:14:14 
both parents are www
Hot 2 Trot
11:14:03 ♡Holly♡
Ohh wait are you struggling to see the rating on the auction?
Hot 2 Trot
11:13:29 ♡Holly♡
You might be able to see the chance of what the foal will rate by what the parents are rated but you will never know unless you rate

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Aura Show Horses
11:25:22 Aura /Pea
Holly!
Thanks! I will xD
Hot 2 Trot
11:23:20 ♡Holly♡
Oo Pea you'll have to let me know how it goes!
River
11:22:48 ♡ River
Glacier
Trying! xD I don't know why I keep doing it
Aura Show Horses
11:22:41 Aura /Pea
Bye! I'm gonna try some art before bed xD
We'll see how it goes!
Solace
11:22:19 Lace
She's pretty and bravery 🎉
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
11:22:16 Glacier Kittens
Stop holding your breath, River
River
11:21:53 ♡ River
I keep holding my breath for no reason and I need to stop-
fire
11:21:27 
i got to go now
fire
11:19:46 
i made ia bid
Hot 2 Trot
11:18:08 ♡Holly♡
Well the best rating is WWW
then it goes
EWW
then EWE
then lower so I'd say for showing it would be decent and for breeding SD but not so much AD
fire
11:18:07 
-HEE Click-
fire
11:17:22 
is that good
Hot 2 Trot
11:16:52 ♡Holly♡
He's rated EWE
fire
11:16:18 
-HEE Click-
Hot 2 Trot
11:15:21 ♡Holly♡
It may not be rated and so it be like a lucky draw for the winner
fire
11:14:26 
on the foal
fire
11:14:14 
both parents are www
Hot 2 Trot
11:14:03 ♡Holly♡
Ohh wait are you struggling to see the rating on the auction?
Hot 2 Trot
11:13:29 ♡Holly♡
You might be able to see the chance of what the foal will rate by what the parents are rated but you will never know unless you rate

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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