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Santana Rising
06:42:41 San
Hiding silver too, Lyssa! Nice. His TB grandsire is one of my boys.
Ravenwood Farm
06:11:59 Raven
Morning :)
Executive Stables
06:03:26 Exec/Lyssa
Morning yall!
Executive Stables
06:02:37 Exec/Lyssa
Cute quest foal:D P rated appy and apricot
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Asgard
05:52:48 :)
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What
Sagewind Hollow
05:24:03 
Good night all
Sagewind Hollow
05:22:13 
Ah ok
Figtree Stud
05:21:02 Fig
Also this is the same person lol
Figtree Stud
05:20:49 Fig
Winter Seeds
Sagewind Hollow
05:20:21 
Hmmm Winter Apple maybe?
Figtree Stud
05:20:19 Fig
Maybe Seeds
Sagewind Hollow
05:19:50 
To me he looked like Apple seeds :D but i had already named one Apple Seeds on a different account
Thunderbolt Park
05:19:06 Bolt
Winter
Thunderbolt Park
05:18:59 Bolt
Or maybe Wintet
Thunderbolt Park
05:18:36 Bolt
He reminds me of a mountain
Sagewind Hollow
05:18:35 
Bolt
Thank you
Thunderbolt Park
05:17:22 Bolt
Snowcap Mountain
Thunderbolt Park
05:13:14 Bolt
Links broken
Sagewind Hollow
05:10:19 
Good early morning chat, what should I name him?
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Santana Rising
06:42:41 San
Hiding silver too, Lyssa! Nice. His TB grandsire is one of my boys.
Ravenwood Farm
06:11:59 Raven
Morning :)
Executive Stables
06:03:26 Exec/Lyssa
Morning yall!
Executive Stables
06:02:37 Exec/Lyssa
Cute quest foal:D P rated appy and apricot
-HEE Click-
Asgard
05:52:48 :)
-HEE Click-
What
Sagewind Hollow
05:24:03 
Good night all
Sagewind Hollow
05:22:13 
Ah ok
Figtree Stud
05:21:02 Fig
Also this is the same person lol
Figtree Stud
05:20:49 Fig
Winter Seeds
Sagewind Hollow
05:20:21 
Hmmm Winter Apple maybe?
Figtree Stud
05:20:19 Fig
Maybe Seeds
Sagewind Hollow
05:19:50 
To me he looked like Apple seeds :D but i had already named one Apple Seeds on a different account
Thunderbolt Park
05:19:06 Bolt
Winter
Thunderbolt Park
05:18:59 Bolt
Or maybe Wintet
Thunderbolt Park
05:18:36 Bolt
He reminds me of a mountain
Sagewind Hollow
05:18:35 
Bolt
Thank you
Thunderbolt Park
05:17:22 Bolt
Snowcap Mountain
Thunderbolt Park
05:13:14 Bolt
Links broken
Sagewind Hollow
05:10:19 
Good early morning chat, what should I name him?
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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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