Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 199   Season: Spring   
$: 0
Forecast: Evening Thunderstorms, Hail Possible
Forecast:
Tue 04:55am  
Stables Online:  61 
Chatbox
Minerva
04:52:16 Min
Good luck Ash! That week 10 is incredible 👀
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:31:21 Ash
Really hope this doesn’t flop tomorrow 🫣 Her week 10 at least showed why her Storm Cat baby didn’t work out: -HEE Click-
Minerva
04:28:00 Min
RIP
Twin Flames
04:20:14 Blaze
You know what... I am going to THROW my brain cells (if any) out the window and set them alight because how did I forget about this guy -HEE Click-
Vahana
04:18:03 Val
-HEE Click-

Such a pretty gurl!
Greenheart Stables
03:53:17 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
It tickles me when I hop on and see 30 breeding notifications lol
Phantom Echoes
03:52:51 Win | Mar
Mew
Same! I have some gorgeous ideas I need to transfer into RL stuff
Bermuda Estate
03:51:47 Mew | Juno
Damn I need to book my ideas up and learn how to do palettes
Thicc Acres
03:13:15 
Thanks Maco <3
Maco Stables
03:12:15 Maco
@Thicc Acres
Your palette is very cool!
Thicc Acres
03:09:40 
Finally got the new stable set on :3
Maco Stables
02:57:49 Maco
74
Maco Stables
02:57:33 Maco
At the moment there are 75 users online
fire
02:54:36 
any one online
fire
02:53:00 
-HEE Click- hello little one
fire
02:51:56 
hi
Bluegrass Racing
02:41:30 Blue
Girl, stop overachieving... You arent trained... 2 full explores and half a run on the first
-HEE Click-
Thicc Acres
02:39:58 
I am so excited for it 👀
Minerva
02:29:51 Min
Hehe thats so fun! I wonder what it will be 👀
Thicc Acres
02:28:01 
Here is her comment
-HEE Click-

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.



Rules   Hide
You are in: Main Chat
View Sales Chat
Quests

Embark on a Quest.

Horse Eden Eventing Game
Chatbox
Minerva
04:52:16 Min
Good luck Ash! That week 10 is incredible 👀
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:31:21 Ash
Really hope this doesn’t flop tomorrow 🫣 Her week 10 at least showed why her Storm Cat baby didn’t work out: -HEE Click-
Minerva
04:28:00 Min
RIP
Twin Flames
04:20:14 Blaze
You know what... I am going to THROW my brain cells (if any) out the window and set them alight because how did I forget about this guy -HEE Click-
Vahana
04:18:03 Val
-HEE Click-

Such a pretty gurl!
Greenheart Stables
03:53:17 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
It tickles me when I hop on and see 30 breeding notifications lol
Phantom Echoes
03:52:51 Win | Mar
Mew
Same! I have some gorgeous ideas I need to transfer into RL stuff
Bermuda Estate
03:51:47 Mew | Juno
Damn I need to book my ideas up and learn how to do palettes
Thicc Acres
03:13:15 
Thanks Maco <3
Maco Stables
03:12:15 Maco
@Thicc Acres
Your palette is very cool!
Thicc Acres
03:09:40 
Finally got the new stable set on :3
Maco Stables
02:57:49 Maco
74
Maco Stables
02:57:33 Maco
At the moment there are 75 users online
fire
02:54:36 
any one online
fire
02:53:00 
-HEE Click- hello little one
fire
02:51:56 
hi
Bluegrass Racing
02:41:30 Blue
Girl, stop overachieving... You arent trained... 2 full explores and half a run on the first
-HEE Click-
Thicc Acres
02:39:58 
I am so excited for it 👀
Minerva
02:29:51 Min
Hehe thats so fun! I wonder what it will be 👀
Thicc Acres
02:28:01 
Here is her comment
-HEE Click-

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






Refresh


Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following

Forums > Rider's Lounge > Writer's Nook
   1    2 

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


Darley Heights
 
Posts: 806
#490425
Give Award


Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable
 
Posts: 0
#498865
Give Award
This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

Forums > Rider's Lounge > Writer's Nook
   1    2 

Refresh