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The Fallen Rulers
07:54:47 Storm|RID/SD Lord
So excited for him

-HEE Click-
Sunni
07:54:11 Sunni bunny
Apollo thinks it's funny to step on my throat XD
Sunni
07:53:58 Sunni bunny
Am getting jumped by 4 dogs help
FirstLightFarms
07:41:36 puck
Then I guess that's a plan for RO. First one I've made in months 😅
ArcticLights
07:34:37 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Doesnt look horrible Puck
FirstLightFarms
07:31:40 puck
-HEE Click-

I mean, this isnt' the worst match in the world 👀
FirstLightFarms
07:27:49 puck
Oooh I have two dun girls I could start throwing at silver boys... or do I make them grullo first
Legacy Leagues
07:26:49 Alyssa ♡
AL
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She'll be a nice replacement since my girl retired a few months back :(
Glacier Bay Cove
07:26:29 Glacier Katz
Puck that mare is the bomb, I love her
FirstLightFarms
07:26:27 puck
Puck! Does! Dun!
ArcticLights
07:26:19 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck does dun LOL
FirstLightFarms
07:26:06 puck
Also what the hell I just realized I bred silver out of my bravery line
ArcticLights
07:26:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Its a very pretty wub mare
FirstLightFarms
07:25:53 puck
I love it. Yess.... this is the new plan
Legacy Leagues
07:24:48 Alyssa ♡
I want that giveaway mare <.<
ArcticLights
07:24:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

Looks good with the other grullo variation too
FirstLightFarms
07:22:42 puck
yess
ArcticLights
07:22:18 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Or a DD grullo?
FirstLightFarms
07:21:49 puck
Oh my god imagine that with the extreme leg stripes *.*
ArcticLights
07:20:43 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

I think we sign you up for silver grullos Puck LOL. This one looks darling

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The Fallen Rulers
07:54:47 Storm|RID/SD Lord
So excited for him

-HEE Click-
Sunni
07:54:11 Sunni bunny
Apollo thinks it's funny to step on my throat XD
Sunni
07:53:58 Sunni bunny
Am getting jumped by 4 dogs help
FirstLightFarms
07:41:36 puck
Then I guess that's a plan for RO. First one I've made in months 😅
ArcticLights
07:34:37 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Doesnt look horrible Puck
FirstLightFarms
07:31:40 puck
-HEE Click-

I mean, this isnt' the worst match in the world 👀
FirstLightFarms
07:27:49 puck
Oooh I have two dun girls I could start throwing at silver boys... or do I make them grullo first
Legacy Leagues
07:26:49 Alyssa ♡
AL
-HEE Click-

She'll be a nice replacement since my girl retired a few months back :(
Glacier Bay Cove
07:26:29 Glacier Katz
Puck that mare is the bomb, I love her
FirstLightFarms
07:26:27 puck
Puck! Does! Dun!
ArcticLights
07:26:19 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck does dun LOL
FirstLightFarms
07:26:06 puck
Also what the hell I just realized I bred silver out of my bravery line
ArcticLights
07:26:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Its a very pretty wub mare
FirstLightFarms
07:25:53 puck
I love it. Yess.... this is the new plan
Legacy Leagues
07:24:48 Alyssa ♡
I want that giveaway mare <.<
ArcticLights
07:24:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

Looks good with the other grullo variation too
FirstLightFarms
07:22:42 puck
yess
ArcticLights
07:22:18 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Or a DD grullo?
FirstLightFarms
07:21:49 puck
Oh my god imagine that with the extreme leg stripes *.*
ArcticLights
07:20:43 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-

I think we sign you up for silver grullos Puck LOL. This one looks darling

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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