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Twin Flames
03:12:56 Blaze
I support, Loony :)
Phantom Echoes
02:58:58 Win | Mar
Damn it, orange glass horse in store...
Lunalovegood
02:49:24 Loony/Loony Tune
I’d appreciate some thoughts here… -HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
02:49:21 Lily
Safe trip today Cali :)
Phantom Echoes
02:49:12 Win | Mar
Bye!
Alpine Acres
02:48:52 Lily
Good! I have to run now though, we're supposed to be leaving for New Year's Eve lunch in half an hour and I'm still in my pajamas lol
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:48:35 
i used to make that kind of stuff back in the day, but that one takes the cherry off the cake
Calela Eventing
02:48:12 Cali
Lying in wait for us to leave
Not looking forward to all the traffic though
Phantom Echoes
02:45:14 Win | Mar
How are ya?
Alpine Acres
02:44:42 Lily
Hi Win :)
Phantom Echoes
02:44:41 Win | Mar
-HEE Click-

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Alpine Acres
02:44:36 Lily
*gif
Alpine Acres
02:44:30 Lily
Summer
no it's a gift off Tenor lol
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:44:07 
is that yours, alpine?
Phantom Echoes
02:44:05 Win | Mar
Lily!
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:43:47 
river did you make that?
Alpine Acres
02:43:42 Lily
lmao Summer 🤣
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:42:49 
oh lordy lordy
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:42:33 
dear alpine lily - omg i am laughing so hard right now i could just pee. literally. that is sooo darling i just cant go on
Alpine Acres
02:31:52 Lily
Summer
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Twin Flames
03:12:56 Blaze
I support, Loony :)
Phantom Echoes
02:58:58 Win | Mar
Damn it, orange glass horse in store...
Lunalovegood
02:49:24 Loony/Loony Tune
I’d appreciate some thoughts here… -HEE Click-
Alpine Acres
02:49:21 Lily
Safe trip today Cali :)
Phantom Echoes
02:49:12 Win | Mar
Bye!
Alpine Acres
02:48:52 Lily
Good! I have to run now though, we're supposed to be leaving for New Year's Eve lunch in half an hour and I'm still in my pajamas lol
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:48:35 
i used to make that kind of stuff back in the day, but that one takes the cherry off the cake
Calela Eventing
02:48:12 Cali
Lying in wait for us to leave
Not looking forward to all the traffic though
Phantom Echoes
02:45:14 Win | Mar
How are ya?
Alpine Acres
02:44:42 Lily
Hi Win :)
Phantom Echoes
02:44:41 Win | Mar
-HEE Click-

0-0
Alpine Acres
02:44:36 Lily
*gif
Alpine Acres
02:44:30 Lily
Summer
no it's a gift off Tenor lol
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:44:07 
is that yours, alpine?
Phantom Echoes
02:44:05 Win | Mar
Lily!
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:43:47 
river did you make that?
Alpine Acres
02:43:42 Lily
lmao Summer 🤣
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:42:49 
oh lordy lordy
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:42:33 
dear alpine lily - omg i am laughing so hard right now i could just pee. literally. that is sooo darling i just cant go on
Alpine Acres
02:31:52 Lily
Summer
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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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