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Gemstone Stable
05:58:59 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

OK! I wish you the best!
Gemstone Stable
05:57:31 Snow❆Gem
A+? lol

-HEE Click-
Mythological
05:57:30 Crowley | Krampus
Oh lol She hasn't decided to run me over yet...
Requiem
05:56:52 Dimmed
Okay gotta close up the store and clock out then I can finish and rate. I'll be back in maybe half an hour!
Gemstone Stable
05:56:51 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

;P
Mythological
05:56:50 Crowley | Krampus
Lilly
He's destroyed a pail and took the string off another pail. xD
Ranch Lands Training
05:55:59 Lilly/PON Addict
Horse* jeez
Ranch Lands Training
05:55:50 Lilly/PON Addict
Love a good chaotic dog
Mythological
05:55:09 Crowley | Krampus
Lilly
She has too much energy right now lol
Ranch Lands Training
05:54:26 Lilly/PON Addict
Myth - everything is striving for chaos right now 😂 Cow took me out at work because the vibe felt right or something

How's May?
Requiem
05:52:55 Dimmed
LOL Gem 😂 I was typing a PM while you sent that
Requiem
05:51:24 Dimmed
Ooh Rabicano!
Gemstone Stable
05:51:09 Snow❆Gem
SEP boy is my best so far...

-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
05:51:00 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

Oops, I had did and extra one I guess... He's lovely! XD
Requiem
05:50:03 Dimmed
Oop he only had two LC left lol. Got a EEE colt off him!
-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
05:49:14 Snow❆Gem
Only one A+ PON foal so far... lol
Mythological
05:47:35 Crowley | Krampus
Well my one dog has been living for chaos lol You?
Gemstone Stable
05:47:20 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

lol :D
Ranch Lands Training
05:46:39 Lilly/PON Addict
How's it been going?
Golden Rose
05:45:10 Rose
This was meant to be a SD foal + XC med... lol -HEE Click-

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Gemstone Stable
05:58:59 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

OK! I wish you the best!
Gemstone Stable
05:57:31 Snow❆Gem
A+? lol

-HEE Click-
Mythological
05:57:30 Crowley | Krampus
Oh lol She hasn't decided to run me over yet...
Requiem
05:56:52 Dimmed
Okay gotta close up the store and clock out then I can finish and rate. I'll be back in maybe half an hour!
Gemstone Stable
05:56:51 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

;P
Mythological
05:56:50 Crowley | Krampus
Lilly
He's destroyed a pail and took the string off another pail. xD
Ranch Lands Training
05:55:59 Lilly/PON Addict
Horse* jeez
Ranch Lands Training
05:55:50 Lilly/PON Addict
Love a good chaotic dog
Mythological
05:55:09 Crowley | Krampus
Lilly
She has too much energy right now lol
Ranch Lands Training
05:54:26 Lilly/PON Addict
Myth - everything is striving for chaos right now 😂 Cow took me out at work because the vibe felt right or something

How's May?
Requiem
05:52:55 Dimmed
LOL Gem 😂 I was typing a PM while you sent that
Requiem
05:51:24 Dimmed
Ooh Rabicano!
Gemstone Stable
05:51:09 Snow❆Gem
SEP boy is my best so far...

-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
05:51:00 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

Oops, I had did and extra one I guess... He's lovely! XD
Requiem
05:50:03 Dimmed
Oop he only had two LC left lol. Got a EEE colt off him!
-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
05:49:14 Snow❆Gem
Only one A+ PON foal so far... lol
Mythological
05:47:35 Crowley | Krampus
Well my one dog has been living for chaos lol You?
Gemstone Stable
05:47:20 Snow❆Gem
@dimmed

lol :D
Ranch Lands Training
05:46:39 Lilly/PON Addict
How's it been going?
Golden Rose
05:45:10 Rose
This was meant to be a SD foal + XC med... lol -HEE Click-

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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