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Nordic Designs
09:53:40 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
lol what fawn?
Jazzyb23
09:53:09 
thanks cloud!
Jazzyb23
09:51:33 
like it is honestly crazy how many im finding out are not nearly as good as i thought
Cloud Peak Stables
09:51:07 Cloud
I do love amber cremes. He's very pretty :)
Jazzyb23
09:48:34 
sadly he would probably still be my best even then haha but yeah i will watch
Cloud Peak Stables
09:47:12 Cloud
Pretty boy Jazzy. See if he gets to level 2 this week. If he stays at level 1 and keeps the same bars on week 7 though, he's no good.
Lumeer Arts
09:46:40 Brooke | KNN
oooh he’s purdy
Glacier Bay Cove
09:46:29 Glacier Kittens
Spam exploring every time I can
Jazzyb23
09:46:07 
also quite a shiny man
Jazzyb23
09:45:50 
-HEE Click- this is the boy i mentioned
All Breeds
09:44:55 Fawn
Keo, I have my hoard on of SD Xs xD
The Fallen Rulers
09:44:31 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Yawn
Cloud Peak Stables
09:44:30 Cloud
That one with two stats up might be a good one.
Jazzyb23
09:43:06 
oh wow
Jazzyb23
09:42:51 
also have one currently that has 2 stats halfway to 2 at 6 trainings
Nordic Designs
09:42:25 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
Cloud and I are pretty prevalent on the SD LB's for PON
Jazzyb23
09:41:39 
wow see i always have thought i was lucky just to have all up at that point
Jazzyb23
09:40:54 
buttt most of mine are bred up from my orignal bad stat horses and i also cant match to save my soul
Jazzyb23
09:40:08 
i rarely get that
Nordic Designs
09:40:02 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
I dont keep stallions that arent like that at minimun wk6

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Nordic Designs
09:53:40 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
lol what fawn?
Jazzyb23
09:53:09 
thanks cloud!
Jazzyb23
09:51:33 
like it is honestly crazy how many im finding out are not nearly as good as i thought
Cloud Peak Stables
09:51:07 Cloud
I do love amber cremes. He's very pretty :)
Jazzyb23
09:48:34 
sadly he would probably still be my best even then haha but yeah i will watch
Cloud Peak Stables
09:47:12 Cloud
Pretty boy Jazzy. See if he gets to level 2 this week. If he stays at level 1 and keeps the same bars on week 7 though, he's no good.
Lumeer Arts
09:46:40 Brooke | KNN
oooh he’s purdy
Glacier Bay Cove
09:46:29 Glacier Kittens
Spam exploring every time I can
Jazzyb23
09:46:07 
also quite a shiny man
Jazzyb23
09:45:50 
-HEE Click- this is the boy i mentioned
All Breeds
09:44:55 Fawn
Keo, I have my hoard on of SD Xs xD
The Fallen Rulers
09:44:31 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Yawn
Cloud Peak Stables
09:44:30 Cloud
That one with two stats up might be a good one.
Jazzyb23
09:43:06 
oh wow
Jazzyb23
09:42:51 
also have one currently that has 2 stats halfway to 2 at 6 trainings
Nordic Designs
09:42:25 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
Cloud and I are pretty prevalent on the SD LB's for PON
Jazzyb23
09:41:39 
wow see i always have thought i was lucky just to have all up at that point
Jazzyb23
09:40:54 
buttt most of mine are bred up from my orignal bad stat horses and i also cant match to save my soul
Jazzyb23
09:40:08 
i rarely get that
Nordic Designs
09:40:02 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
I dont keep stallions that arent like that at minimun wk6

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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