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the Lost Mills
09:08:09 
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I got this cute filly!
Starlight Forest
08:45:10 Star✨
Same, I'm pretty excited :3
Glacier Bay Cove
08:43:21 Glacier Kittens
Can’t wait to see what future updates Eve has planned for HEE
Starlight Forest
08:41:47 Star✨
I created a race :3
Cataclysm
08:38:10 Not Cata / Cataclysm
Alright
Starlight Forest
08:37:33 Star✨
Cataclysm
Crap I forgot I entered a race with another person 0-0
AMORTENTIA.
08:37:30 
-HEE Click-
Equine Center RP <3 Spots filling up quickly, come fill in an application form!
Cataclysm
08:37:00 Not Cata / Cataclysm
Whenever you're ready ^^
Starlight Forest
08:34:00 Star✨
Star

Heheheh, I bet 100k EB that my horse will win (just kidding)
Starlight Forest
08:33:27 Star✨
Jericho

I told Blue Page Stables that she didn't have to say in the chat that they replied :3
Cataclysm
08:33:09 Not Cata / Cataclysm
Star
It should be up I think ^^
Can try to find a lower one too if that suits better :P
Jericho Stables
08:32:42 
And chat isn’t for letting someone know to check their mail. It’s in the rules ;D
Starlight Forest
08:32:37 Star✨
Cataclysm
Ooooh me please!
Cataclysm
08:32:05 Not Cata / Cataclysm
anyone wanna race?
Starlight Forest
08:28:22 Star✨
It's okay, don't apologise! :3
Blue Page Farms
08:28:01 
oh sorry sorry loll
Starlight Forest
08:27:06 Star✨
Blue Page Farms

You know you don't have to tell me every time, I get a reply when you mail me :3
Blue Page Farms
08:26:14 
I sent you a chat star!
Starlight Forest
08:22:43 Star✨
Greek Yogurt
Okay, thank you! :3
Blue Page Farms
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the Lost Mills
09:08:09 
-HEE Click-

I got this cute filly!
Starlight Forest
08:45:10 Star✨
Same, I'm pretty excited :3
Glacier Bay Cove
08:43:21 Glacier Kittens
Can’t wait to see what future updates Eve has planned for HEE
Starlight Forest
08:41:47 Star✨
I created a race :3
Cataclysm
08:38:10 Not Cata / Cataclysm
Alright
Starlight Forest
08:37:33 Star✨
Cataclysm
Crap I forgot I entered a race with another person 0-0
AMORTENTIA.
08:37:30 
-HEE Click-
Equine Center RP <3 Spots filling up quickly, come fill in an application form!
Cataclysm
08:37:00 Not Cata / Cataclysm
Whenever you're ready ^^
Starlight Forest
08:34:00 Star✨
Star

Heheheh, I bet 100k EB that my horse will win (just kidding)
Starlight Forest
08:33:27 Star✨
Jericho

I told Blue Page Stables that she didn't have to say in the chat that they replied :3
Cataclysm
08:33:09 Not Cata / Cataclysm
Star
It should be up I think ^^
Can try to find a lower one too if that suits better :P
Jericho Stables
08:32:42 
And chat isn’t for letting someone know to check their mail. It’s in the rules ;D
Starlight Forest
08:32:37 Star✨
Cataclysm
Ooooh me please!
Cataclysm
08:32:05 Not Cata / Cataclysm
anyone wanna race?
Starlight Forest
08:28:22 Star✨
It's okay, don't apologise! :3
Blue Page Farms
08:28:01 
oh sorry sorry loll
Starlight Forest
08:27:06 Star✨
Blue Page Farms

You know you don't have to tell me every time, I get a reply when you mail me :3
Blue Page Farms
08:26:14 
I sent you a chat star!
Starlight Forest
08:22:43 Star✨
Greek Yogurt
Okay, thank you! :3
Blue Page Farms
08:20:01 
I sent you the next chat star!

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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