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All Breeds

12:18:14 Fawn

I rarely use outside studs because most of my boys are in the top 30 for their breed 💀

Greenheart Stables

12:17:38 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Fawn
Mines a merry go round at this point 😭

All Breeds

12:16:55 Fawn

I don't even want to think about the family bush/circle that is my SD horses 😂

Greenheart Stables

12:15:57 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

Thaaanks, isn't it a shame my tossed together Color PONs are way less inbred compared to my SDs lol

Guard Horseman Gang

12:15:04 GHG

Current plan is to go ahead and grab straws from ઢ Modelo WWW for -HEE Click-

and then use her sire σя Forge WWW on -HEE Click-

My currrent stable goals is EEE+ horses with color rarity 1 of less than 100

All Breeds

12:14:51 Fawn

Pretty Green!

Aura Show Horses

12:13:49 Aura /Pea

Gren
I love her!

Greenheart Stables

12:12:11 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-HEE Click-
Snowflake always makes frame so cool

Guard Horseman Gang

12:10:50 GHG

nvm im dumb

Solace

12:09:23 Lace

This on the other hand
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Solace

12:09:04 Lace

I don't even know why I got his straw xD
I doubt very much so that they match
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Guard Horseman Gang

12:08:19 GHG

the only issue is the rating requirement

Guard Horseman Gang

12:05:43 GHG

I might try switching the two sires I used to get www fillies

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:49 Glacier Kittens

Beautiful horses, GHG

All Breeds

12:04:26 Fawn

*sire

All Breeds

12:04:16 Fawn

GHG, I wouldn't recommend sending her to her site only because they can share the same weaknesses unfortunately

Guard Horseman Gang

12:02:51 GHG

forgot the link sorry -HEE Click-

Guard Horseman Gang

12:02:42 GHG

No clue who to send this one to but probably going to use her dad on her

All Breeds

12:01:15 Fawn

Still not sure who she should go to
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Guard Horseman Gang

11:54:56 GHG

I forgot these two were going to be 3 this coming RO
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All Breeds

12:18:14 Fawn

I rarely use outside studs because most of my boys are in the top 30 for their breed 💀

Greenheart Stables

12:17:38 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Fawn
Mines a merry go round at this point 😭

All Breeds

12:16:55 Fawn

I don't even want to think about the family bush/circle that is my SD horses 😂

Greenheart Stables

12:15:57 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

Thaaanks, isn't it a shame my tossed together Color PONs are way less inbred compared to my SDs lol

Guard Horseman Gang

12:15:04 GHG

All Breeds

12:14:51 Fawn

Pretty Green!

Aura Show Horses

12:13:49 Aura /Pea

Gren
I love her!

Greenheart Stables

12:12:11 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-HEE Click-
Snowflake always makes frame so cool

Guard Horseman Gang

12:10:50 GHG

nvm im dumb

Solace

12:09:23 Lace

This on the other hand
-HEE Click-

Solace

12:09:04 Lace

I don't even know why I got his straw xD
I doubt very much so that they match
-HEE Click-

Guard Horseman Gang

12:08:19 GHG

the only issue is the rating requirement

Guard Horseman Gang

12:05:43 GHG

I might try switching the two sires I used to get www fillies

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:49 Glacier Kittens

Beautiful horses, GHG

All Breeds

12:04:26 Fawn

*sire

All Breeds

12:04:16 Fawn

GHG, I wouldn't recommend sending her to her site only because they can share the same weaknesses unfortunately

Guard Horseman Gang

12:02:51 GHG

forgot the link sorry -HEE Click-

Guard Horseman Gang

12:02:42 GHG

No clue who to send this one to but probably going to use her dad on her

All Breeds

12:01:15 Fawn

Still not sure who she should go to
-HEE Click-

Guard Horseman Gang

11:54:56 GHG

I forgot these two were going to be 3 this coming RO
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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