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08:22:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I want to keep going but I know nothing good will come out of it so I will stop lol

Silver Melody Acres

08:21:13 Solar - KNNs

Oh wow, Apples jumped up since yesterday!

I think I'm done now, though lol gotta have enough for paying riders and entering shows XD

Minerva

08:20:55 Min

Lol Cali- mine was only saved by his love potion last night. He's sobbing his little heart out now

Minerva

08:20:28 Min

3 of my sides are carrots so Ive been actively working against myself apparently 🤣🤣

Calela Eventing

08:19:20 Cali

RIP accountant

Calela Eventing

08:19:11 Cali

Min
Hah! Take that xD

08:18:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oooo Apples is close
Will this be the first time in 12 years my team wins something? lol

I love my horses

08:18:43

I just set her free

Minerva

08:18:36 Min

We've well lost it at this point lol- over 5k behind the top 2

Snitches' Stitches

08:18:24 Snitch

buckskin snowflake appaloosa would be 1/359, so do with that what you will lol

I love my horses

08:17:47

I'm trying to

Minerva

08:17:28 Min

Some slackers over here in sugar cubes- get spending money peoples 🤣🤣🤣

I love my horses

08:16:42

I can only rate one horse with a premium account.

08:15:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel

You can't really go just on color it depends on the ratings

I love my horses

08:15:21

do I keep the snowflake appy?

Sunfeather Stables

08:12:20 Fea

Thank you :) I'm hoping something good comes from them. If not, I have an exciting ToTo x ToTo match that (fingers crossed) will do well!

I love my horses

08:12:02

colorwise

I love my horses

08:11:49

what do you think?
-HEE Click-

08:10:54 Dae

Congrats Fea!!! Ive had some wilds do crazy well so fingers crossed for their training!

Sunfeather Stables

08:10:20 Fea

Wow, 6! I managed to get two with maps. Super happy though, I have been waiting around for WW fillies lol.

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08:22:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I want to keep going but I know nothing good will come out of it so I will stop lol

Silver Melody Acres

08:21:13 Solar - KNNs

Oh wow, Apples jumped up since yesterday!

I think I'm done now, though lol gotta have enough for paying riders and entering shows XD

Minerva

08:20:55 Min

Lol Cali- mine was only saved by his love potion last night. He's sobbing his little heart out now

Minerva

08:20:28 Min

3 of my sides are carrots so Ive been actively working against myself apparently 🤣🤣

Calela Eventing

08:19:20 Cali

RIP accountant

Calela Eventing

08:19:11 Cali

Min
Hah! Take that xD

08:18:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oooo Apples is close
Will this be the first time in 12 years my team wins something? lol

I love my horses

08:18:43

I just set her free

Minerva

08:18:36 Min

We've well lost it at this point lol- over 5k behind the top 2

Snitches' Stitches

08:18:24 Snitch

buckskin snowflake appaloosa would be 1/359, so do with that what you will lol

I love my horses

08:17:47

I'm trying to

Minerva

08:17:28 Min

Some slackers over here in sugar cubes- get spending money peoples 🤣🤣🤣

I love my horses

08:16:42

I can only rate one horse with a premium account.

08:15:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel

You can't really go just on color it depends on the ratings

I love my horses

08:15:21

do I keep the snowflake appy?

Sunfeather Stables

08:12:20 Fea

Thank you :) I'm hoping something good comes from them. If not, I have an exciting ToTo x ToTo match that (fingers crossed) will do well!

I love my horses

08:12:02

colorwise

I love my horses

08:11:49

what do you think?
-HEE Click-

08:10:54 Dae

Congrats Fea!!! Ive had some wilds do crazy well so fingers crossed for their training!

Sunfeather Stables

08:10:20 Fea

Wow, 6! I managed to get two with maps. Super happy though, I have been waiting around for WW fillies lol.

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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