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Ugh, I want to match with Jon Snow but he doesn't have any tracked training

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Ohh it's her last RO :(
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I can't decide whether I want to send her to her son or back to Jon with a sven

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Dang champagne and pearl! Pretty girl Eyrie 😁

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Ooh Tosk looks like he'd be a good match for this girl of mine
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Ohh good luck!!! I need to gene test my wild girls to see if I have any Ee Prlprl girls at all >.> Otherwise we are stuck breeding up from PEP xD

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She will be seeing him
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Wolf
I'll PM you!

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Chey
Yes?

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01:53:48 Tosk's KNN

That's what I am hoping for, Wolf. Gonna try for apricot

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01:53:46 Chey / Star

Does anyone breed ISH? I have a question lol

Wolf Dancer

01:51:46 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Ohh good luck Tosk! I'm going to have to steal a straw to try for apricot with him *_* I want to start apricot KNN xD

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01:51:43 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Love me some splashies

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Storm
Shiney *-*

Arvalon Studs

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Pretty boy better gives me some pearl
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Shinny

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If there is a mod lurking somewhere, could we get some assistance in sales? Lol

moon stable

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usagi

Calela Eventing

01:24:42 Cali

I'm thinking of FN names because of the Dora but my brain is blank 😭

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Oh it's a filly lol

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Ranch Lands Training

02:05:27 Lilly/PON Addict

Ugh, I want to match with Jon Snow but he doesn't have any tracked training

Wolf Dancer

02:04:38 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Ohh it's her last RO :(
-HEE Click-

Arvalon Studs

02:03:19 Tosk's KNN

I can't decide whether I want to send her to her son or back to Jon with a sven

-HEE Click-

Arvalon Studs

02:00:51 Tosk's KNN

Dang champagne and pearl! Pretty girl Eyrie 😁

Eyrie of the Stars

01:58:30 Eyrie

Ooh Tosk looks like he'd be a good match for this girl of mine
-HEE Click-

Wolf Dancer

01:57:19 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Tosky
Ohh good luck!!! I need to gene test my wild girls to see if I have any Ee Prlprl girls at all >.> Otherwise we are stuck breeding up from PEP xD

Arvalon Studs

01:55:39 Tosk's KNN

She will be seeing him
-HEE Click-

ShiningStar Stables

01:54:45 Chey / Star

Wolf
I'll PM you!

Wolf Dancer

01:54:11 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Chey
Yes?

Arvalon Studs

01:53:48 Tosk's KNN

That's what I am hoping for, Wolf. Gonna try for apricot

ShiningStar Stables

01:53:46 Chey / Star

Does anyone breed ISH? I have a question lol

Wolf Dancer

01:51:46 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Ohh good luck Tosk! I'm going to have to steal a straw to try for apricot with him *_* I want to start apricot KNN xD

The Fallen Rulers

01:51:43 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Love me some splashies

Wolf Dancer

01:51:12 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Storm
Shiney *-*

Arvalon Studs

01:51:04 Tosk's KNN

Pretty boy better gives me some pearl
-HEE Click-

The Fallen Rulers

01:49:05 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Shinny

-HEE Click-

Angels angels

01:48:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel

If there is a mod lurking somewhere, could we get some assistance in sales? Lol

moon stable

01:25:20

usagi

Calela Eventing

01:24:42 Cali

I'm thinking of FN names because of the Dora but my brain is blank 😭

Tenebris Hollow

01:24:36 Aris/Quinn

Oh it's a filly lol

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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