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11:58:18 usagi

oof, did you know that he eats only mcdonald's most of the time?

Transformers Acres

11:57:05 Geek, Greek Yogurt

usagi

This straight from a site, and I quote, "Donald Trump's niece, clinical psychologist Mary Trump, describes him as a deeply narcissistic, cruel, and psychologically damaged individual who is incapable of leading, citing his behavior as a product of a toxic family environment where his father favored him and modeled bullying, with his fragile ego requiring constant bolstering. She claims he exhibits characteristics of narcissistic personality disorder, antisocial personality disorder, and possibly dependent personality disorder, and believes his inability to evolve makes him dangerous and unfit for office."

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11:55:49 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Off topic, but my mom bought Dunkin Donuts for breakfast, and I got an iced coffee. :)

11:55:10 usagi

do you know how many illness he has?

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11:54:42 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Cali

There's rumors he's going to get impeached, for good this time.

11:54:26 usagi

yesss

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11:49:45 Cali

Geek
Ooh, politics my favorite
Agreed though, would be great to get Trump off everyones asses

11:48:10 usagi

ohh good one

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11:44:15 Geek, Greek Yogurt

usagi

No, that's just a waste of resources, and space, and far too generous for him.

11:42:50 usagi

He should go to a mental Institute

11:40:43 usagi

yes please!

11:40:31 usagi

I am so sorry!

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11:40:17 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Witchy

Sometime yesterday, I think.

usagi

Literally. Can Trump and his family be deported too, since they're immigrants?

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11:39:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt

My brother has to walk to his bus stop every morning, and ICE has "detained" 170 US citizens. So, now I'm gonna fucking worry.

11:39:11 usagi

thanks to our perfect perfect presdent

(dripping with sarcasm)

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11:38:54 Witchy

Geek
Jesus. Just now?

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11:38:42 Glacier Kittens

Oh no that’s horrible

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11:36:59 Solar - KNNs

That's horrible

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11:36:36 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Glacier

Too late for that, they unalived somebody already.

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11:35:54 Glacier Kittens

Hopefully nothing serious will happen, Geek

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11:58:18 usagi

oof, did you know that he eats only mcdonald's most of the time?

Transformers Acres

11:57:05 Geek, Greek Yogurt

usagi

This straight from a site, and I quote, "Donald Trump's niece, clinical psychologist Mary Trump, describes him as a deeply narcissistic, cruel, and psychologically damaged individual who is incapable of leading, citing his behavior as a product of a toxic family environment where his father favored him and modeled bullying, with his fragile ego requiring constant bolstering. She claims he exhibits characteristics of narcissistic personality disorder, antisocial personality disorder, and possibly dependent personality disorder, and believes his inability to evolve makes him dangerous and unfit for office."

Transformers Acres

11:55:49 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Off topic, but my mom bought Dunkin Donuts for breakfast, and I got an iced coffee. :)

11:55:10 usagi

do you know how many illness he has?

Transformers Acres

11:54:42 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Cali

There's rumors he's going to get impeached, for good this time.

11:54:26 usagi

yesss

Calela Eventing

11:49:45 Cali

Geek
Ooh, politics my favorite
Agreed though, would be great to get Trump off everyones asses

11:48:10 usagi

ohh good one

Transformers Acres

11:44:15 Geek, Greek Yogurt

usagi

No, that's just a waste of resources, and space, and far too generous for him.

11:42:50 usagi

He should go to a mental Institute

11:40:43 usagi

yes please!

11:40:31 usagi

I am so sorry!

Transformers Acres

11:40:17 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Witchy

Sometime yesterday, I think.

usagi

Literally. Can Trump and his family be deported too, since they're immigrants?

Transformers Acres

11:39:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt

My brother has to walk to his bus stop every morning, and ICE has "detained" 170 US citizens. So, now I'm gonna fucking worry.

11:39:11 usagi

thanks to our perfect perfect presdent

(dripping with sarcasm)

Nightfall Dressage

11:38:54 Witchy

Geek
Jesus. Just now?

Glacier Bay Cove

11:38:42 Glacier Kittens

Oh no that’s horrible

Silver Melody Acres

11:36:59 Solar - KNNs

That's horrible

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11:36:36 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Glacier

Too late for that, they unalived somebody already.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:35:54 Glacier Kittens

Hopefully nothing serious will happen, Geek

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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