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07:59:43 sav

Thanks, everybody!

Wisteria Run Farm

07:55:44 Solar/Ria

Oh, happy anniversary!

Sunny Side Facility

07:54:56

16 years, wow!

07:54:11 sav

Thanks! Can’t believe I’ve been playing this long.

Star Hooves Stable

07:53:58 gen! ☆

some of yall have been playing this game for nearly as long as I've been alive and for that I salute you, that's Hella impressive

Jericho Stables

07:52:04

Happy HEEaversary Sav!

Winterfell yard

07:51:29

-HEE Click- Not to complain but to complain ;-;

07:50:43 sxdisticsoul ♱

Okay, so I have a grey Dapple capture token that I'm going to use. I have a mare and a stallion I like, my mares already been bred though. Should I get a mare for my new stallion or just get another stallion?

07:49:36 sav

It’s my HEE sweet 16 :D

Sunny Side Facility

07:46:53

Ok! Thankyou for telling me that, must've missed it in the rules. I'll read over them again.

Jericho Stables

07:46:17

Sunny Side, please spell out your words. Chat speak is not allowed.

07:44:54 sxdisticsoul ♱

Of course! I hope you enjoy HEE, I definitely grew to love it a lot.

Sunny Side Facility

07:44:29

ty!

07:43:58 sxdisticsoul ♱

Oh that's awesome, welcome! I'm still fairly new but if you have any questions or just need a friend feel free to shoot me a dm or something! ^^

Sunny Side Facility

07:43:03

I joined yesterday so IDK what imma do xD

07:42:19 sxdisticsoul ♱

I need to hurry up and buy another barn so I have space for tomorrow, my barns all filled up lol

Sunny Side Facility

07:39:57

oooo fun

07:39:19 sxdisticsoul ♱

Thursday, its when capturing horses Is free/cheaper I think, I'm still fairly new to the game

Sunny Side Facility

07:38:34

what's capture day?

Sunny Side Facility

07:38:24

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07:59:43 sav

Thanks, everybody!

Wisteria Run Farm

07:55:44 Solar/Ria

Oh, happy anniversary!

Sunny Side Facility

07:54:56

16 years, wow!

07:54:11 sav

Thanks! Can’t believe I’ve been playing this long.

Star Hooves Stable

07:53:58 gen! ☆

some of yall have been playing this game for nearly as long as I've been alive and for that I salute you, that's Hella impressive

Jericho Stables

07:52:04

Happy HEEaversary Sav!

Winterfell yard

07:51:29

-HEE Click- Not to complain but to complain ;-;

07:50:43 sxdisticsoul ♱

Okay, so I have a grey Dapple capture token that I'm going to use. I have a mare and a stallion I like, my mares already been bred though. Should I get a mare for my new stallion or just get another stallion?

07:49:36 sav

It’s my HEE sweet 16 :D

Sunny Side Facility

07:46:53

Ok! Thankyou for telling me that, must've missed it in the rules. I'll read over them again.

Jericho Stables

07:46:17

Sunny Side, please spell out your words. Chat speak is not allowed.

07:44:54 sxdisticsoul ♱

Of course! I hope you enjoy HEE, I definitely grew to love it a lot.

Sunny Side Facility

07:44:29

ty!

07:43:58 sxdisticsoul ♱

Oh that's awesome, welcome! I'm still fairly new but if you have any questions or just need a friend feel free to shoot me a dm or something! ^^

Sunny Side Facility

07:43:03

I joined yesterday so IDK what imma do xD

07:42:19 sxdisticsoul ♱

I need to hurry up and buy another barn so I have space for tomorrow, my barns all filled up lol

Sunny Side Facility

07:39:57

oooo fun

07:39:19 sxdisticsoul ♱

Thursday, its when capturing horses Is free/cheaper I think, I'm still fairly new to the game

Sunny Side Facility

07:38:34

what's capture day?

Sunny Side Facility

07:38:24

pretty

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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