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At Wit's End

07:05:56 Gosky

Because color has become more prominent on the LBs and people go for that rather than the plain looking mediocre ones, Capps :(

Vancouver

07:04:49 Ana / Van

Thanks Jeri!

Dunhill Farms

07:03:39 Colorful Capp

But man oh man I need more strong boys. The mid boys don't pull their weight like back in the day :(

Jericho Stables

07:03:33

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Sharing is caring if anyone wants a Google Sheets spreadsheet for breeding plans. Just make a copy (file --> Duplicate)

At Wit's End

07:02:37 Gosky

Looking at the amount of www you get every month ... xD Can't be that bad.

Rainview

07:01:18 Irish Capp

I don't necessarily make the best ebs decisions lmfaoooo

Jericho Stables

07:01:06

Sure. One second

At Wit's End

07:00:54 Gosky

Crazy.

At Wit's End

07:00:44 Gosky

ohhhh, you're right! Perfect match there

Vancouver

07:00:33 Ana / Van

I think Skydive could work too

Dunhill Farms

06:59:42 Colorful Capp

Thunderstruck, Tosk!

No Ive got 6 Svens, 1 med and a glass XD

At Wit's End

06:58:58 Gosky

All with svens? Gheezus Capps. I am struggling to even afford a top boy on most xD

At Wit's End

06:58:30 Gosky

any ideas for this girl?
-HEE Click-

Asfamoth

06:57:53 Asfa

A WWW boy was all I wanted. I got some WWE combos and I'm crossing my fingers they're good... none managed W bravery though.

Vancouver

06:57:52 Ana / Van

God Jeri any chance I can have an empty copy?? :O

Cappuccino

06:57:16 Heyy it's Capp

Here.

Cappuccino

06:57:11 Heyy it's Capp

Ummm so at this rate I have 8 matches x.x

Vancouver

06:56:26 Ana / Van

I love excel *-*

Cappuccino

06:56:17 Heyy it's Capp

Yeah. There were quite a few that seemed to go for that same price form quiet accounts

Jericho Stables

06:56:13

-Click-

Really zoomed out to fit everything in XD
But that is my breeding plans spread sheet

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At Wit's End

07:05:56 Gosky

Because color has become more prominent on the LBs and people go for that rather than the plain looking mediocre ones, Capps :(

Vancouver

07:04:49 Ana / Van

Thanks Jeri!

Dunhill Farms

07:03:39 Colorful Capp

But man oh man I need more strong boys. The mid boys don't pull their weight like back in the day :(

Jericho Stables

07:03:33

-Click-

Sharing is caring if anyone wants a Google Sheets spreadsheet for breeding plans. Just make a copy (file --> Duplicate)

At Wit's End

07:02:37 Gosky

Looking at the amount of www you get every month ... xD Can't be that bad.

Rainview

07:01:18 Irish Capp

I don't necessarily make the best ebs decisions lmfaoooo

Jericho Stables

07:01:06

Sure. One second

At Wit's End

07:00:54 Gosky

Crazy.

At Wit's End

07:00:44 Gosky

ohhhh, you're right! Perfect match there

Vancouver

07:00:33 Ana / Van

I think Skydive could work too

Dunhill Farms

06:59:42 Colorful Capp

Thunderstruck, Tosk!

No Ive got 6 Svens, 1 med and a glass XD

At Wit's End

06:58:58 Gosky

All with svens? Gheezus Capps. I am struggling to even afford a top boy on most xD

At Wit's End

06:58:30 Gosky

any ideas for this girl?
-HEE Click-

Asfamoth

06:57:53 Asfa

A WWW boy was all I wanted. I got some WWE combos and I'm crossing my fingers they're good... none managed W bravery though.

Vancouver

06:57:52 Ana / Van

God Jeri any chance I can have an empty copy?? :O

Cappuccino

06:57:16 Heyy it's Capp

Here.

Cappuccino

06:57:11 Heyy it's Capp

Ummm so at this rate I have 8 matches x.x

Vancouver

06:56:26 Ana / Van

I love excel *-*

Cappuccino

06:56:17 Heyy it's Capp

Yeah. There were quite a few that seemed to go for that same price form quiet accounts

Jericho Stables

06:56:13

-Click-

Really zoomed out to fit everything in XD
But that is my breeding plans spread sheet

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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