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Nightingales Ridge

11:36:09 𔓘 Issy

What

Whitewolf

11:36:04 Fang

Also frozen bread? Yet to try that but it sounds painful on the teeth

Whitewolf

11:35:30 Fang

A couch* not a coin 🤣

Massbay

11:35:22 MB

Issy,
A couch with only like two cusions

Whitewolf

11:35:19 Fang

Issy, you dont know what those are? It’s like a coin but one cushion smaller (so just 2 cushions)

Grimm Acres

11:35:19 Grimmi

DD, out of stock i hope if theyre gone gone im gonna cry, im about to just order them LOL

Nightingales Ridge

11:34:45 𔓘 Issy

The heck is a love seat

Dash and Duchess

11:34:35 DD | ~Squizard~

Grimmi, Oh no! just out of stock or gone gone? ToT

Nightingales Ridge

11:34:06 𔓘 Issy

My friend used sometimes munch frozen bread. I don't know why you reminded me of that ahahah

Grimm Acres

11:33:52 Grimmi

DD, see you guys win :3 got all the snacks. also i went to get some smore oreos earlier and they are now gone T-T

Nightingales Ridge

11:33:21 𔓘 Issy

Ahaha oh

Whitewolf

11:32:00 Fang

My phone fell down the loveseat earlier and scratched the case deep all across my screen. Very annoying

Whitewolf

11:31:23 Fang

Issy I just needed to “water the flowers” lol and I got some bread so it’ll help

Dash and Duchess

11:30:39 DD | ~Squizard~

Grimmi, you got a point xD we have snack reserves now lol

Nightingales Ridge

11:29:34 𔓘 Issy

Sheesh when I was a teenager sometimes I'd physically roll out of my bed to get up

Nightingales Ridge

11:28:55 𔓘 Issy

Go go go

Nightingales Ridge

11:28:37 𔓘 Issy

Awww fang lol

Whitewolf

11:28:30 Fang

So comfy - but I have to

Whitewolf

11:28:08 Fang

Needing to get out of bed makes me want to cry lol

Grimm Acres

11:27:55 Grimmi

DD, cause 40+ is good you can have some now and later i always get 40 chicken nuggets xD

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Nightingales Ridge

11:36:09 𔓘 Issy

What

Whitewolf

11:36:04 Fang

Also frozen bread? Yet to try that but it sounds painful on the teeth

Whitewolf

11:35:30 Fang

A couch* not a coin 🤣

Massbay

11:35:22 MB

Issy,
A couch with only like two cusions

Whitewolf

11:35:19 Fang

Issy, you dont know what those are? It’s like a coin but one cushion smaller (so just 2 cushions)

Grimm Acres

11:35:19 Grimmi

DD, out of stock i hope if theyre gone gone im gonna cry, im about to just order them LOL

Nightingales Ridge

11:34:45 𔓘 Issy

The heck is a love seat

Dash and Duchess

11:34:35 DD | ~Squizard~

Grimmi, Oh no! just out of stock or gone gone? ToT

Nightingales Ridge

11:34:06 𔓘 Issy

My friend used sometimes munch frozen bread. I don't know why you reminded me of that ahahah

Grimm Acres

11:33:52 Grimmi

DD, see you guys win :3 got all the snacks. also i went to get some smore oreos earlier and they are now gone T-T

Nightingales Ridge

11:33:21 𔓘 Issy

Ahaha oh

Whitewolf

11:32:00 Fang

My phone fell down the loveseat earlier and scratched the case deep all across my screen. Very annoying

Whitewolf

11:31:23 Fang

Issy I just needed to “water the flowers” lol and I got some bread so it’ll help

Dash and Duchess

11:30:39 DD | ~Squizard~

Grimmi, you got a point xD we have snack reserves now lol

Nightingales Ridge

11:29:34 𔓘 Issy

Sheesh when I was a teenager sometimes I'd physically roll out of my bed to get up

Nightingales Ridge

11:28:55 𔓘 Issy

Go go go

Nightingales Ridge

11:28:37 𔓘 Issy

Awww fang lol

Whitewolf

11:28:30 Fang

So comfy - but I have to

Whitewolf

11:28:08 Fang

Needing to get out of bed makes me want to cry lol

Grimm Acres

11:27:55 Grimmi

DD, cause 40+ is good you can have some now and later i always get 40 chicken nuggets xD

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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