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esme equines stable
07:40:52 Sporkel
Micro's apples??

-HEE Click-
esme equines stable
07:37:31 Sporkel
aw
Whitewolf
07:36:20 Fang
Currently feeding out in the yard
Nightingales Ridge
07:35:38 𔓘 Issy
Cute fang
esme equines stable
07:35:10 Sporkel
Aww ahh so spookyyz
esme equines stable
07:34:42 Sporkel
Not the side eye lol

my fish just jumped out of his water...
Ryn Equestrian
07:34:40  ryn ୨୧
Aw
Whitewolf
07:34:19 Fang
Peekaboo
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Blacknight Legend
07:33:33 Knightie
Finally nigel the pony is clean
The Old Gods
07:28:05 Void Malign
I'mma just go back to writing out my diablo 4 build lol
Nightingales Ridge
07:27:18 𔓘 Issy
Jeez Red no let up for you and your littlies
Whitewolf
07:26:56 Fang
Red, you’re having bad luck lately but I do hope it turns around in the form of a new place of your own for you and your piggy’s <3
Painted Capricorns
07:23:12 
Me too Jeri
Painted Capricorns
07:22:05 
I’m irritated that his rating isn’t better :/
-HEE Click-
Painted Capricorns
07:20:43 
What
esme equines stable
07:19:27 Sporkel
shes lame(sob) and they didn't know I'm sorry for you hope your horse j=gets better bitsy will to wait yeah
esme equines stable
07:18:16 Sporkel
Bitsyyy
Ryn Equestrian
07:17:26  ryn ୨୧
When does she get to see the vet
Red Hill Hollow
07:17:07 Red, Hollow
I know :/ she’s been having issues for a while but it’s just suddenly gotten a lot worse

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esme equines stable
07:40:52 Sporkel
Micro's apples??

-HEE Click-
esme equines stable
07:37:31 Sporkel
aw
Whitewolf
07:36:20 Fang
Currently feeding out in the yard
Nightingales Ridge
07:35:38 𔓘 Issy
Cute fang
esme equines stable
07:35:10 Sporkel
Aww ahh so spookyyz
esme equines stable
07:34:42 Sporkel
Not the side eye lol

my fish just jumped out of his water...
Ryn Equestrian
07:34:40  ryn ୨୧
Aw
Whitewolf
07:34:19 Fang
Peekaboo
-Click-
Blacknight Legend
07:33:33 Knightie
Finally nigel the pony is clean
The Old Gods
07:28:05 Void Malign
I'mma just go back to writing out my diablo 4 build lol
Nightingales Ridge
07:27:18 𔓘 Issy
Jeez Red no let up for you and your littlies
Whitewolf
07:26:56 Fang
Red, you’re having bad luck lately but I do hope it turns around in the form of a new place of your own for you and your piggy’s <3
Painted Capricorns
07:23:12 
Me too Jeri
Painted Capricorns
07:22:05 
I’m irritated that his rating isn’t better :/
-HEE Click-
Painted Capricorns
07:20:43 
What
esme equines stable
07:19:27 Sporkel
shes lame(sob) and they didn't know I'm sorry for you hope your horse j=gets better bitsy will to wait yeah
esme equines stable
07:18:16 Sporkel
Bitsyyy
Ryn Equestrian
07:17:26  ryn ୨୧
When does she get to see the vet
Red Hill Hollow
07:17:07 Red, Hollow
I know :/ she’s been having issues for a while but it’s just suddenly gotten a lot worse

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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