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The Old Gods
11:43:19 Void Malign
I'm not buying one lol
lilly fields
11:42:49 Lilly
Void
Choose one that will stand out in your tank (dark tank, bright fish. Bright tank, dark fish)
Rubygem-Chenya
11:39:43 Ruby/Cheshire
Pretty foal
Wild Island PONs
11:39:20 Ly/Lyra
hopefully this link works
-HEE Click-
The Old Gods
11:39:18 Void Malign
why are bettas so pretty? It doesn't make picking a color pattern easy lol
Rubygem-Chenya
11:38:27 Ruby/Cheshire
Ly
Broken link
Shamrock Equines
11:38:07 Crowley
Snip snip
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Wild Island PONs
11:36:52 Ly/Lyra
you had to be a colt.

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Rubygem-Chenya
11:35:49 Ruby/Cheshire
Hi Ari!
Myrtle Shorelines
11:35:31 Ari / Myrtle
Heyy
Mythological
11:35:30 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Yes Ruby
Rubygem-Chenya
11:34:41 Ruby/Cheshire
-HEE Click-
Is this a AD filly?
Mythological
11:34:37 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Ida was born in September.
Insignia Elites
11:34:13 Em
Aweeee
Rubygem-Chenya
11:33:49 Ruby/Cheshire
Our Highland is pregnant so we're gonna have a baby in September sometime.
Insignia Elites
11:33:15 Em
I always wanted a highland cow
Mythological
11:32:42 RIP-Tim:2016-26
I wish I got a AD filly this month.
Rubygem-Chenya
11:32:35 Ruby/Cheshire
We have a white Highland Cow ( who looks cream colored)
Mythological
11:31:58 RIP-Tim:2016-26
The cows here are solid black.
Rubygem-Chenya
11:31:16 Ruby/Cheshire
He looks like a cow

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The Old Gods
11:43:19 Void Malign
I'm not buying one lol
lilly fields
11:42:49 Lilly
Void
Choose one that will stand out in your tank (dark tank, bright fish. Bright tank, dark fish)
Rubygem-Chenya
11:39:43 Ruby/Cheshire
Pretty foal
Wild Island PONs
11:39:20 Ly/Lyra
hopefully this link works
-HEE Click-
The Old Gods
11:39:18 Void Malign
why are bettas so pretty? It doesn't make picking a color pattern easy lol
Rubygem-Chenya
11:38:27 Ruby/Cheshire
Ly
Broken link
Shamrock Equines
11:38:07 Crowley
Snip snip
-HEE Click-
Wild Island PONs
11:36:52 Ly/Lyra
you had to be a colt.

-HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
11:35:49 Ruby/Cheshire
Hi Ari!
Myrtle Shorelines
11:35:31 Ari / Myrtle
Heyy
Mythological
11:35:30 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Yes Ruby
Rubygem-Chenya
11:34:41 Ruby/Cheshire
-HEE Click-
Is this a AD filly?
Mythological
11:34:37 RIP-Tim:2016-26
Ida was born in September.
Insignia Elites
11:34:13 Em
Aweeee
Rubygem-Chenya
11:33:49 Ruby/Cheshire
Our Highland is pregnant so we're gonna have a baby in September sometime.
Insignia Elites
11:33:15 Em
I always wanted a highland cow
Mythological
11:32:42 RIP-Tim:2016-26
I wish I got a AD filly this month.
Rubygem-Chenya
11:32:35 Ruby/Cheshire
We have a white Highland Cow ( who looks cream colored)
Mythological
11:31:58 RIP-Tim:2016-26
The cows here are solid black.
Rubygem-Chenya
11:31:16 Ruby/Cheshire
He looks like a cow

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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