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Tenebris Hollow
10:23:17 Aris/Quinn
aww win i cant accept that
Tenebris Hollow
10:22:23 Aris/Quinn
not yet? lmao
Tenebris Hollow
10:22:13 Aris/Quinn
im struggling with art block but it sucks cause i wanna do art
Phantom Echoes
10:22:06 Win | Mar
It's okkk!! At least im not dead yet-
Rubygem-Chenya
10:21:00 Asha-Star
That sounds painful
Tenebris Hollow
10:20:28 Aris/Quinn
not the pulse ><
Phantom Echoes
10:19:42 Win | Mar
A lot of blood, and I can feel my heartbeat in my finger lol
Tenebris Hollow
10:19:20 Aris/Quinn
Ouch win that sounds like hell
Phantom Echoes
10:18:46 Win | Mar
Damn girl, you ok??
I mean.. Not the best- My horse just pulled of my skin from my finger... By biting it and then pulling, but I guess not bad xD
Tenebris Hollow
10:17:32 Aris/Quinn
and you?
Tenebris Hollow
10:17:27 Aris/Quinn
doing good but i broke my hand lol
Phantom Echoes
10:17:16 Win | Mar
How are ya??
Tenebris Hollow
10:16:48 Aris/Quinn
Windex!
Nightfall Dressage
10:16:28 Witchy
River
You get game mail :)
Phantom Echoes
10:16:27 Win | Mar
Ari Gnarly!!!
River
10:15:22 ♡ River
Is there a feature on here where you can search private sales to you?
River
10:12:58 ♡ River
Bunny
Yep! Duncanyounot
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:11:58 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
omg I love duncanyounot
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:11:47 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
no he's about to retire
T-T
-HEE Click-
Tenebris Hollow
10:11:22 Aris/Quinn
Ducanyounot?

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Tenebris Hollow
10:23:17 Aris/Quinn
aww win i cant accept that
Tenebris Hollow
10:22:23 Aris/Quinn
not yet? lmao
Tenebris Hollow
10:22:13 Aris/Quinn
im struggling with art block but it sucks cause i wanna do art
Phantom Echoes
10:22:06 Win | Mar
It's okkk!! At least im not dead yet-
Rubygem-Chenya
10:21:00 Asha-Star
That sounds painful
Tenebris Hollow
10:20:28 Aris/Quinn
not the pulse ><
Phantom Echoes
10:19:42 Win | Mar
A lot of blood, and I can feel my heartbeat in my finger lol
Tenebris Hollow
10:19:20 Aris/Quinn
Ouch win that sounds like hell
Phantom Echoes
10:18:46 Win | Mar
Damn girl, you ok??
I mean.. Not the best- My horse just pulled of my skin from my finger... By biting it and then pulling, but I guess not bad xD
Tenebris Hollow
10:17:32 Aris/Quinn
and you?
Tenebris Hollow
10:17:27 Aris/Quinn
doing good but i broke my hand lol
Phantom Echoes
10:17:16 Win | Mar
How are ya??
Tenebris Hollow
10:16:48 Aris/Quinn
Windex!
Nightfall Dressage
10:16:28 Witchy
River
You get game mail :)
Phantom Echoes
10:16:27 Win | Mar
Ari Gnarly!!!
River
10:15:22 ♡ River
Is there a feature on here where you can search private sales to you?
River
10:12:58 ♡ River
Bunny
Yep! Duncanyounot
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:11:58 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
omg I love duncanyounot
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:11:47 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
no he's about to retire
T-T
-HEE Click-
Tenebris Hollow
10:11:22 Aris/Quinn
Ducanyounot?

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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