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 Glacier Bay Cove
11:58:34 Glacier Kittens
Oh, crap, I am so very sorry to hear that
Transformers Acres
11:55:36 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Glacier

Yesterday was my paternal grandfather's 75th birthday, but Friday will be the 1 year anniversary of his death. He died three days after his birthday.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:54:18 Glacier Kittens
Oh no, what happened, Geek
Transformers Acres
11:53:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Yesterday was a bad day for me, and Friday's gonna be an even worse day for me.


Rip my pillows, they finna be soaked from crying.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:50:53 Glacier Kittens
Hopefully I will have it done by Friday or Saturday night
Elite Equine Stables
11:45:32 Honey
Geek

Ok! I will...
Transformers Acres
11:44:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Chira

As he should.

Honey

Do itttt
Hellion Ridge
11:41:57 Chiral | ToTo Chaser
Michael Crichton is spinning in his grave
Elite Equine Stables
11:41:29 Honey
Geek

I'll have to look into it!
Transformers Acres
11:40:31 Geek, Greek Yogurt
And Ben. I like Ben.
Transformers Acres
11:40:21 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Honey

It's just my opinion, you might like it. :)

The only thing I liked was the dinosaurs/prehistoric creatures.
Elite Equine Stables
11:40:04 Honey
Fern
Very lucky!
Elite Equine Stables
11:39:39 Honey
Geek

Oh no! Sounds not too good!
Glacier Bay Cove
11:39:33 Glacier Kittens
Wish me luck, I’m attempting to draw/paint a Tobiano horse now
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:37:56 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
honey
lol random ass match xD
Transformers Acres
11:37:51 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Honey

Kenji and Brooklynn annoyed the fuck out of me, Darius acted like a wannabe (in my opinion), Yaz was too competitive, and Sammy did what? Emotional support? They all ignored poor Ben, treated the dinos/creatures like shit.
Elite Equine Stables
11:37:37 Honey
Cool fern!
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:36:52 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
ayyy
-HEE Click-
lets goo
Elite Equine Stables
11:35:57 Honey
Oh no! Greek, I like Jurrasic stuff!
Transformers Acres
11:30:42 Geek, Greek Yogurt
So, y'all Jurassic fans, I watched Camp Cretaceous and Chaos Theory.





I was disappointed. Severely.

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 Glacier Bay Cove
11:58:34 Glacier Kittens
Oh, crap, I am so very sorry to hear that
Transformers Acres
11:55:36 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Glacier

Yesterday was my paternal grandfather's 75th birthday, but Friday will be the 1 year anniversary of his death. He died three days after his birthday.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:54:18 Glacier Kittens
Oh no, what happened, Geek
Transformers Acres
11:53:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Yesterday was a bad day for me, and Friday's gonna be an even worse day for me.


Rip my pillows, they finna be soaked from crying.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:50:53 Glacier Kittens
Hopefully I will have it done by Friday or Saturday night
Elite Equine Stables
11:45:32 Honey
Geek

Ok! I will...
Transformers Acres
11:44:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Chira

As he should.

Honey

Do itttt
Hellion Ridge
11:41:57 Chiral | ToTo Chaser
Michael Crichton is spinning in his grave
Elite Equine Stables
11:41:29 Honey
Geek

I'll have to look into it!
Transformers Acres
11:40:31 Geek, Greek Yogurt
And Ben. I like Ben.
Transformers Acres
11:40:21 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Honey

It's just my opinion, you might like it. :)

The only thing I liked was the dinosaurs/prehistoric creatures.
Elite Equine Stables
11:40:04 Honey
Fern
Very lucky!
Elite Equine Stables
11:39:39 Honey
Geek

Oh no! Sounds not too good!
Glacier Bay Cove
11:39:33 Glacier Kittens
Wish me luck, I’m attempting to draw/paint a Tobiano horse now
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:37:56 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
honey
lol random ass match xD
Transformers Acres
11:37:51 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Honey

Kenji and Brooklynn annoyed the fuck out of me, Darius acted like a wannabe (in my opinion), Yaz was too competitive, and Sammy did what? Emotional support? They all ignored poor Ben, treated the dinos/creatures like shit.
Elite Equine Stables
11:37:37 Honey
Cool fern!
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:36:52 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
ayyy
-HEE Click-
lets goo
Elite Equine Stables
11:35:57 Honey
Oh no! Greek, I like Jurrasic stuff!
Transformers Acres
11:30:42 Geek, Greek Yogurt
So, y'all Jurassic fans, I watched Camp Cretaceous and Chaos Theory.





I was disappointed. Severely.

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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