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Silversong_eq
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 Painted Perfection
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Selling 400 leveled geldings. Most are level 2 or higher. Priced 1k per level

I need them gone desperately! Please and thank you!!
Stellar Performance
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SHLB WWW stallion needs bred!
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Artemis Ridge
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Two WWW Freshies for testing for year 199! Both have LB sires. (EWW+ requirement. Straws are free <3)
Florestä
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Cheap WWW TBs colts & studs!! Need gone, considering any offers..
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 Moonhaven Stables
07:09:50 Estelle
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Foal auction ending in two hours! All foals start at 400 ebs and all have at least one W parent!
Ranch Lands Training
06:49:22 Lilly/PON Addict
Looking for EEE, EEW, and EWW combo mares for cheap broods
Must be under 16 HH
Silversong_eq
06:43:54 Silver
-HEE Click-
Some items still up! low prices
Green Creek Stables
06:14:20 GC
-HEE Click-
EW Combos with color!!!
Latigo
06:11:08 
-HEE Click-
Pegasus art auction, current bid 200k
-HEE Click-
Premade art/commission info
Fluffy's Cosy Home
06:09:51 Fluffy
Auction:
*Manchado
*Brindle
*World class
*EEE
*PEE
*Colour
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

 Painted Perfection
06:02:03 Selling Stuff
-HEE Click-

Selling 400 leveled geldings. Most are level 2 or higher. Priced 1k per level

I need them gone desperately! Please and thank you!!
Stellar Performance
05:57:21 Stalking Sales
-HEE Click-

SHLB WWW stallion needs bred!
Straws available!
Artemis Ridge
05:41:50 T2 Arts
-HEE Click-
Two WWW Freshies for testing for year 199! Both have LB sires. (EWW+ requirement. Straws are free <3)
Florestä
05:13:53 MBC🥸
Cheap WWW TBs colts & studs!! Need gone, considering any offers..
-HEE Click-

WWW TB embryos available can be pulled today
-HEE Click-

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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