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Angels angels
08:25:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Interesting
SwankPony
08:25:25 Swanky
Its a song about space... at least I first heard it on How The Universe Works.
Eaglecrest Orchard
08:25:01 Warrior
-HEE Click- did not exspect him
Angels angels
08:23:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sounds... inappropriate xD
SwankPony
08:23:13 Swanky
It is honestly a song name. XD
Angels angels
08:22:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Well that was an interesting thing to log in and read
SwankPony
08:21:44 Swanky
Wild
Vibrational ecstasy.
MakeEm Fancy
08:21:42 Ally 💜
Im so tired of not being able to sleep :/ this sucks
Wild Hills Stables
08:20:28 
Thank you for the name suggestions
Hobo Queens Farm
08:19:20 Her Majesty
I'd name him "Meta Morpheus" he looks like he's metamorphizing into white from brown or the other way around.
Tenebris Hollow
08:18:40 Aris/Quinn
Wild
WHS Justified
WHS Double Down
WHS WildWind
Painted Perfection
08:17:38 Luna
Oooo shinyy
Painted Perfection
08:17:20 Luna
O.o
Wild Hills Stables
08:17:16 
i need name suggestions for him
-HEE Click-
KPH Equestrian
08:16:09 Rapcoon | Jester
Ooh hill hes SplSpl *-*
Wild Hills Stables
08:14:48 
@minx
he is the first one i ever bred
Moonstone River Lodg
08:10:36 Minx
Wild Hills his amazing!!
Tenebris Hollow
08:10:21 Aris/Quinn
Oh wait hold up Luna I got something to show you on my apricot account

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Angels angels
08:25:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Interesting
SwankPony
08:25:25 Swanky
Its a song about space... at least I first heard it on How The Universe Works.
Eaglecrest Orchard
08:25:01 Warrior
-HEE Click- did not exspect him
Angels angels
08:23:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sounds... inappropriate xD
SwankPony
08:23:13 Swanky
It is honestly a song name. XD
Angels angels
08:22:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Well that was an interesting thing to log in and read
SwankPony
08:21:44 Swanky
Wild
Vibrational ecstasy.
MakeEm Fancy
08:21:42 Ally 💜
Im so tired of not being able to sleep :/ this sucks
Wild Hills Stables
08:20:28 
Thank you for the name suggestions
Hobo Queens Farm
08:19:20 Her Majesty
I'd name him "Meta Morpheus" he looks like he's metamorphizing into white from brown or the other way around.
Tenebris Hollow
08:18:40 Aris/Quinn
Wild
WHS Justified
WHS Double Down
WHS WildWind
Painted Perfection
08:17:38 Luna
Oooo shinyy
Painted Perfection
08:17:20 Luna
O.o
Wild Hills Stables
08:17:16 
i need name suggestions for him
-HEE Click-
KPH Equestrian
08:16:09 Rapcoon | Jester
Ooh hill hes SplSpl *-*
Wild Hills Stables
08:14:48 
@minx
he is the first one i ever bred
Moonstone River Lodg
08:10:36 Minx
Wild Hills his amazing!!
Tenebris Hollow
08:10:21 Aris/Quinn
Oh wait hold up Luna I got something to show you on my apricot account

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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