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 HartwickHerd
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Sunni
12:24:00 Sunni bunny
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Check out my auction it ends soon.
Lots of colorful EEE mares.
Pons, sh, wb, ish, and more.
2 WWW
And lots of low color rarity.
 Thunder Song Stable
12:12:29 Hawk
Looking for a mare to breed with that is WWW and has produced WW. Breed does not matter. Parents must be WWW.

Please private message me links to your mares.
Oasis Ridge Farms
11:55:27 Dandy
ISO 1 month premium upgrade
Birch Creek
11:54:34 Em
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any SD breeders want her for free before I FR her? she's such a pretty girl
Midnight Vale
11:46:57 Kore/Vale
- MVP Sleep Token - WWW TB Stallion straws available (5) for 15,500 ebs each in the store
- (1) PPP TB and multiple EEE TBs for sale -HEE Click-
- ISO Palette Art - Please send a DM with your shop link
MakeEm Fancy
11:24:50 Ally 💜
EEE WB mare
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Taiga Stables
10:37:46 
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HUGE TB production auction, from EE up to 2 WWWs- one colt one mare! lots of colour thrown in!
Green Creek Stables
10:36:33 GC
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WW & 1 of 1 auction!
Ends Sunday!

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 HartwickHerd
12:43:43 
ISO 3mo upgrade
Daybreak
12:25:05 Day
-HEE Click- TB auction
Sunni
12:24:00 Sunni bunny
-HEE Click-
Check out my auction it ends soon.
Lots of colorful EEE mares.
Pons, sh, wb, ish, and more.
2 WWW
And lots of low color rarity.
 Thunder Song Stable
12:12:29 Hawk
Looking for a mare to breed with that is WWW and has produced WW. Breed does not matter. Parents must be WWW.

Please private message me links to your mares.
Oasis Ridge Farms
11:55:27 Dandy
ISO 1 month premium upgrade
Birch Creek
11:54:34 Em
-HEE Click-

any SD breeders want her for free before I FR her? she's such a pretty girl
Midnight Vale
11:46:57 Kore/Vale
- MVP Sleep Token - WWW TB Stallion straws available (5) for 15,500 ebs each in the store
- (1) PPP TB and multiple EEE TBs for sale -HEE Click-
- ISO Palette Art - Please send a DM with your shop link
MakeEm Fancy
11:24:50 Ally 💜
EEE WB mare
-HEE Click-
Taiga Stables
10:37:46 
-HEE Click-

HUGE TB production auction, from EE up to 2 WWWs- one colt one mare! lots of colour thrown in!
Green Creek Stables
10:36:33 GC
-HEE Click-
WW & 1 of 1 auction!
Ends Sunday!

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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