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11:17:43 Ari <3

When are the pumpkins due?

11:13:32

I need help coming up with a theme for my pumpkin this year.

I've had an idea to do a Vanner in motion with all the hoof floof - but I think it will be a major challenge making it look right; carving the tiny details might blur.

A sliding horse might be possible, but it's not a discipline I'm knowledgeable about.

Any ideas please!

11:12:44 Rapcoon | Jester

dory
PM it to me? would love to help ^^

Hallween Raccoon

11:05:23

Oh OK thanks gypsy

11:04:54 Dory

I am so close to scrapping this piece

Hallween Raccoon

11:04:06

Do we even have a game menu

Gypsy Family Farm

11:02:51

The game giude?

-HEE Click-

Gypsy Family Farm

11:02:17

Raccoon, did you mean the help menu?

11:02:00 Peggy (or) Peg

Dare I say I'm getting better at background merging? 👀
-Click-

Hallween Raccoon

11:01:43

Never mind I skipped it

Gypsy Family Farm

11:01:00

Hit me. Two of my many minors were British literature to 1650 and British History to 1650.

Hallween Raccoon

11:00:30

Cause I have to do that for my quest

Hallween Raccoon

11:00:01

I have a question where is the game menu

10:57:55 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Gypsy
It's for Ap Language and Composition!
And I would love that I'll pm you!

Gypsy Family Farm

10:57:24

Also my happy ass lives for alliteration.

Gypsy Family Farm

10:56:33

And I can kenning in my sleep.

Hallween Raccoon

10:56:26

How is everyone doing

Gypsy Family Farm

10:53:48

I can probably help you with the tetrameter.

Gypsy Family Farm

10:52:57

Wolf; damn, that's a brute of an assignment. What class?

10:48:21 Kelan/Rain

I at least know what tetrameter is though thanks to Emily Dickinson, but I am definitely not the right person to help

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11:17:43 Ari <3

When are the pumpkins due?

11:13:32

I need help coming up with a theme for my pumpkin this year.

I've had an idea to do a Vanner in motion with all the hoof floof - but I think it will be a major challenge making it look right; carving the tiny details might blur.

A sliding horse might be possible, but it's not a discipline I'm knowledgeable about.

Any ideas please!

11:12:44 Rapcoon | Jester

dory
PM it to me? would love to help ^^

Hallween Raccoon

11:05:23

Oh OK thanks gypsy

11:04:54 Dory

I am so close to scrapping this piece

Hallween Raccoon

11:04:06

Do we even have a game menu

Gypsy Family Farm

11:02:51

The game giude?

-HEE Click-

Gypsy Family Farm

11:02:17

Raccoon, did you mean the help menu?

11:02:00 Peggy (or) Peg

Dare I say I'm getting better at background merging? 👀
-Click-

Hallween Raccoon

11:01:43

Never mind I skipped it

Gypsy Family Farm

11:01:00

Hit me. Two of my many minors were British literature to 1650 and British History to 1650.

Hallween Raccoon

11:00:30

Cause I have to do that for my quest

Hallween Raccoon

11:00:01

I have a question where is the game menu

10:57:55 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Gypsy
It's for Ap Language and Composition!
And I would love that I'll pm you!

Gypsy Family Farm

10:57:24

Also my happy ass lives for alliteration.

Gypsy Family Farm

10:56:33

And I can kenning in my sleep.

Hallween Raccoon

10:56:26

How is everyone doing

Gypsy Family Farm

10:53:48

I can probably help you with the tetrameter.

Gypsy Family Farm

10:52:57

Wolf; damn, that's a brute of an assignment. What class?

10:48:21 Kelan/Rain

I at least know what tetrameter is though thanks to Emily Dickinson, but I am definitely not the right person to help

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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