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-Starlight Haven-
11:24:04 Star or Shark <3
Nightfall
I figured it was grain, still, absolutely gorgeous!
Nightfall Dressage
11:21:59 Witchy
Star
Its dapple grain! She's an EWW/W so she deserves to be pretty
-Starlight Haven-
11:18:28 Star or Shark <3
Nightfall
Stunning! I have actually never seen a dapple Flaxen Chestnut, so pretty! <3
fire
11:05:42 
relised my boy friend text and i didnt see
and we had a fight 2 days ago
Solaris
11:05:33 Sol | PONs
Fire
For me yeah, hopefully I can compete in districts this year, my coach said if I can get to 20
fire
11:05:00 
yayayayayayayayayayaya
fire
11:04:46 
sol is that good
Solaris
11:04:46 Sol | PONs
super proud of myself, shaved 3 seconds off and got a new PR!
fire
11:04:33 
voild lol
Solaris
11:04:28 Sol | PONs
I ran a 21.73 in hurdles today!
The Old Gods
11:02:29 Void Malign
no, just you
fire
11:02:15 
any one online
Wrangler Ranch
10:39:20 Wrangler
-HEE Click-

Why...
fire
10:35:51 
love you too
fire
10:35:46 
-HEE Click-
fire
10:35:40 
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:31:23 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
gost!!
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:30:18 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
I am surrounded by idiots.
-HEE Click-
ghost light stables
10:28:13 Toaster rapcoon
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-Starlight Haven-
11:24:04 Star or Shark <3
Nightfall
I figured it was grain, still, absolutely gorgeous!
Nightfall Dressage
11:21:59 Witchy
Star
Its dapple grain! She's an EWW/W so she deserves to be pretty
-Starlight Haven-
11:18:28 Star or Shark <3
Nightfall
Stunning! I have actually never seen a dapple Flaxen Chestnut, so pretty! <3
fire
11:05:42 
relised my boy friend text and i didnt see
and we had a fight 2 days ago
Solaris
11:05:33 Sol | PONs
Fire
For me yeah, hopefully I can compete in districts this year, my coach said if I can get to 20
fire
11:05:00 
yayayayayayayayayayaya
fire
11:04:46 
sol is that good
Solaris
11:04:46 Sol | PONs
super proud of myself, shaved 3 seconds off and got a new PR!
fire
11:04:33 
voild lol
Solaris
11:04:28 Sol | PONs
I ran a 21.73 in hurdles today!
The Old Gods
11:02:29 Void Malign
no, just you
fire
11:02:15 
any one online
Wrangler Ranch
10:39:20 Wrangler
-HEE Click-

Why...
fire
10:35:51 
love you too
fire
10:35:46 
-HEE Click-
fire
10:35:40 
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:31:23 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
gost!!
RFS Thoroughbreds
10:30:18 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
I am surrounded by idiots.
-HEE Click-
ghost light stables
10:28:13 Toaster rapcoon
Breed*

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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