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The Undercity
02:14:15 Dory
Peggy
I would say yes🤷‍♀️ just in case
Rubygem
02:14:02 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
Well now I'm going to go have fun bye(:
BlackRose
02:13:17 Stella
:)
Rubygem
02:13:15 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
And strong so the PPP rating makes it better
The Undercity
02:12:56 Dory
Angel
I honestly might just for the hell of it cause I got no other items and I know its not gonna take much off but if I get something decently short with tobi I will call it a win
Rubygem
02:12:48 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
That's blue
Rubygem
02:12:39 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
:D now he is named after one of my favourite characters from my show
Pegasus Lane
02:11:46 Peggy (or) Peg
Hm maybe a j med to cover the hrt/scp
BlackRose
02:10:52 Stella
Much welcome! I would’ve gave you the first one but he didn’t have any ratings. The second one is PPP so he may be useful as well as being pretty!
Angels angels
02:10:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Dory
If you aren't using any other items go for it lol
Rubygem
02:09:47 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
Thank you stella (:
The Undercity
02:09:43 Dory
What if just for funsies I add a - height med to this
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
02:08:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sting
Depends on for what lol
Narran Park
02:07:54 Sting
To buy a Sven...or to NOT buy a Sven...
SwankPony
02:07:17 Swanky
Such a procrasinator. Waiting last minute to track my training for the week.
BlackRose
02:07:15 Stella
I got one for you to help you out :)
Rubygem
02:06:29 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
You don't have to give it to me if you don't want to I don't mind
Rubygem
02:05:55 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
No
BlackRose
02:05:44 Stella
Is it for a quest?
Rubygem
02:05:12 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
And my grandpa sent me 250 dollars for Christmas which was a surprise

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The Undercity
02:14:15 Dory
Peggy
I would say yes🤷‍♀️ just in case
Rubygem
02:14:02 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
Well now I'm going to go have fun bye(:
BlackRose
02:13:17 Stella
:)
Rubygem
02:13:15 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
And strong so the PPP rating makes it better
The Undercity
02:12:56 Dory
Angel
I honestly might just for the hell of it cause I got no other items and I know its not gonna take much off but if I get something decently short with tobi I will call it a win
Rubygem
02:12:48 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
That's blue
Rubygem
02:12:39 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
:D now he is named after one of my favourite characters from my show
Pegasus Lane
02:11:46 Peggy (or) Peg
Hm maybe a j med to cover the hrt/scp
BlackRose
02:10:52 Stella
Much welcome! I would’ve gave you the first one but he didn’t have any ratings. The second one is PPP so he may be useful as well as being pretty!
Angels angels
02:10:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Dory
If you aren't using any other items go for it lol
Rubygem
02:09:47 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
Thank you stella (:
The Undercity
02:09:43 Dory
What if just for funsies I add a - height med to this
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
02:08:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Sting
Depends on for what lol
Narran Park
02:07:54 Sting
To buy a Sven...or to NOT buy a Sven...
SwankPony
02:07:17 Swanky
Such a procrasinator. Waiting last minute to track my training for the week.
BlackRose
02:07:15 Stella
I got one for you to help you out :)
Rubygem
02:06:29 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
You don't have to give it to me if you don't want to I don't mind
Rubygem
02:05:55 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
No
BlackRose
02:05:44 Stella
Is it for a quest?
Rubygem
02:05:12 Asha ~ Ruby girl :D
And my grandpa sent me 250 dollars for Christmas which was a surprise

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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