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Leaderboard studs
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Yelreb Yard
06:42:41 Yel
EEE mares for Brood - various breeds -HEE Click-
Enoki Valley
06:36:41 Enoki | Maddie
-HEE Click-
ABLB embryo available
BlueBirdFalls
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BBF's Studs are open!
LBs
Color
Wc producers
AD and SD
Freshman are 0ebs for LC for the year!
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 Teal Elites
06:06:20 Belle in disguise
Looking for 1 month upgrade!
Golden Sun Stables*
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-HEE Click-
Wild Bay RID mare!
Fluffy's Cosy Home
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*Colour
*PEE
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I have:
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*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-
 Champions Choice
04:57:35 
1 month and 3 month upgrades available, pm if interested!
Kestrel Bay Hollow
03:53:09 ↡ Twilight
WWW prl for sale:

-HEE Click-
QualitySH
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6 month upgrade 300k 1 available pm to claim

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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