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SUMMER OF PEARLS

01:50:40

ooo i hope ther is a new construction for the Round Pen too--it is so plain...that would be so cool!

Transformers Acres

01:42:10 Geek, Greek Yogurt

MB

Yeah, I was looking at Megalodon/Mosasaurus/Giganotosaurus/Spinosaurus teeth and claws.

Massbay

01:37:52 MB

I had to google a fossilized claw... yeah those aren't cheap but at least they're cool

Transformers Acres

01:29:22 Geek, Greek Yogurt

I wanna buy fossilized teeth/claws. But the prices...

It's calling me broke in every language. :')

fire

01:27:28

what dose eevery one think my first art

fire

01:27:12

-HEE Click-

Wolf Dancer

12:32:01 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Listening to hype pop/club songs while tapping my ankle is a vibe lol

Massbay

12:30:26 MB

My palette crashed out due to a spelling error. looks like i need to learn how to spell "normal" again

esme equines stable

12:26:35 Sporkel

its 10:26 I never mix!!! heyooo

Nightingales Ridge

12:26:29 𔓘 Issy

Too stressed to breed right now ha

Nightingales Ridge

12:26:04 𔓘 Issy

Ughhh not paying attention to frame x frame shit

Moongold Magic

12:22:57 🍭 Diva

Chocolate ice cream with strawberries though yes

Moongold Magic

12:20:54 🍭 Diva

I don't like chocolate with strawberries, that mix just doesn't go well with me

Silver Brookside

12:19:42

Gladius!

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:00:14 Gladius

Absolutely yes bluey
River - *-*

River

11:59:10 ♡ River

-HEE Click-
Frame and wild bay 😍

Blue Diamond

11:54:50 Bluey/PM abt books^^

Anyone else sit there and eat an entire bowl of chocolate covered strawberries?

Sylvan Lake Stables

11:54:21 Tano

Yeah I remember when my full RO breeding took 3-4 days. Now I'm lucky to get it done in two weeks Dx

We'll see how my J PONs cooperate tomorrow and Friday (I'd like to get it all done tomorrow but not likely)

Blue Diamond

11:53:15 Bluey/PM abt books^^

Ferf?

Greenheart Stables

11:51:30 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Tano
Im about to have to threaten the J PONs if they dont straighten up

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SUMMER OF PEARLS

01:50:40

ooo i hope ther is a new construction for the Round Pen too--it is so plain...that would be so cool!

Transformers Acres

01:42:10 Geek, Greek Yogurt

MB

Yeah, I was looking at Megalodon/Mosasaurus/Giganotosaurus/Spinosaurus teeth and claws.

Massbay

01:37:52 MB

I had to google a fossilized claw... yeah those aren't cheap but at least they're cool

Transformers Acres

01:29:22 Geek, Greek Yogurt

I wanna buy fossilized teeth/claws. But the prices...

It's calling me broke in every language. :')

fire

01:27:28

what dose eevery one think my first art

fire

01:27:12

-HEE Click-

Wolf Dancer

12:32:01 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Listening to hype pop/club songs while tapping my ankle is a vibe lol

Massbay

12:30:26 MB

My palette crashed out due to a spelling error. looks like i need to learn how to spell "normal" again

esme equines stable

12:26:35 Sporkel

its 10:26 I never mix!!! heyooo

Nightingales Ridge

12:26:29 𔓘 Issy

Too stressed to breed right now ha

Nightingales Ridge

12:26:04 𔓘 Issy

Ughhh not paying attention to frame x frame shit

Moongold Magic

12:22:57 🍭 Diva

Chocolate ice cream with strawberries though yes

Moongold Magic

12:20:54 🍭 Diva

I don't like chocolate with strawberries, that mix just doesn't go well with me

Silver Brookside

12:19:42

Gladius!

Gaelic Gladiacres

12:00:14 Gladius

Absolutely yes bluey
River - *-*

River

11:59:10 ♡ River

-HEE Click-
Frame and wild bay 😍

Blue Diamond

11:54:50 Bluey/PM abt books^^

Anyone else sit there and eat an entire bowl of chocolate covered strawberries?

Sylvan Lake Stables

11:54:21 Tano

Blue Diamond

11:53:15 Bluey/PM abt books^^

Ferf?

Greenheart Stables

11:51:30 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Tano
Im about to have to threaten the J PONs if they dont straighten up

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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