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12:50:44 Pure

diva

okay i can get that instead :)

Moonrose Magic

12:50:42 🎀 Diva

that mares dam is mine lol

Moonrose Magic

12:50:13 🎀 Diva

i would use Dressage medallion

Purestables

12:48:04 Pure

what about this one different mare different stud haha

-HEE Click- + sven

Moonrose Magic

12:46:59 🎀 Diva

i really wouldnt sven her right now, i would try her 1st with glasses and see if she likes item and throws at least WW, then upgrade to medallion, if she pops like 2 - 3 www, i consider sven

Ambrosia

12:46:45 Amb

Kind of but again, not a strong stud at all.

Purestables

12:46:12 Pure

does he match her

-HEE Click-

Moonrose Magic

12:45:56 🎀 Diva

Mistwood, please spell out all your words properly

Purestables

12:45:40 Pure

diva

would you not sven her then as id rather sven my matches or no items as items dont really work for me haha

Ambrosia

12:45:05 Amb

Maybe if they're top 50 but the matches you're posting also just don't... match lol

Mistwood Farm

12:44:58

gng idk what im doing help

Purestables

12:44:33 Pure

amb

some of the straws i have are former ABLB boys if that counts haha

Moonrose Magic

12:44:17 🎀 Diva

again, if you are going for certain colour or lines - use a glass or such, not sven - unless you got couple millions to waste out of boredom

Ambrosia

12:44:03 Amb

Only ABLB boys or don't use a sven. Such a waste

Ambrosia

12:43:48 Amb

The foal would in fact not be really good lol

Purestables

12:43:47 Pure

amb

im trying to match her to some straws i have or do you think i should just do ABLB boys

Mistwood Farm

12:43:20

bro pure do it i bet the foal would be really good

Ambrosia

12:42:49 Amb

That stud is even worse. Don't breed a decent mare to a shit stud. Go find something top 50 ABLB that actually matches

Purestables

12:42:01 Pure

what about this

-HEE Click- + sven

Moonrose Magic

12:41:56 🎀 Diva

for giggles use a glass or medallion 1st and see how mare produces a couple times first

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Purestables

12:50:44 Pure

diva

okay i can get that instead :)

Moonrose Magic

12:50:42 🎀 Diva

that mares dam is mine lol

Moonrose Magic

12:50:13 🎀 Diva

i would use Dressage medallion

Purestables

12:48:04 Pure

what about this one different mare different stud haha

-HEE Click- + sven

Moonrose Magic

12:46:59 🎀 Diva

i really wouldnt sven her right now, i would try her 1st with glasses and see if she likes item and throws at least WW, then upgrade to medallion, if she pops like 2 - 3 www, i consider sven

Ambrosia

12:46:45 Amb

Kind of but again, not a strong stud at all.

Purestables

12:46:12 Pure

does he match her

-HEE Click-

Moonrose Magic

12:45:56 🎀 Diva

Mistwood, please spell out all your words properly

Purestables

12:45:40 Pure

diva

would you not sven her then as id rather sven my matches or no items as items dont really work for me haha

Ambrosia

12:45:05 Amb

Maybe if they're top 50 but the matches you're posting also just don't... match lol

Mistwood Farm

12:44:58

gng idk what im doing help

Purestables

12:44:33 Pure

amb

some of the straws i have are former ABLB boys if that counts haha

Moonrose Magic

12:44:17 🎀 Diva

again, if you are going for certain colour or lines - use a glass or such, not sven - unless you got couple millions to waste out of boredom

Ambrosia

12:44:03 Amb

Only ABLB boys or don't use a sven. Such a waste

Ambrosia

12:43:48 Amb

The foal would in fact not be really good lol

Purestables

12:43:47 Pure

amb

im trying to match her to some straws i have or do you think i should just do ABLB boys

Mistwood Farm

12:43:20

bro pure do it i bet the foal would be really good

Ambrosia

12:42:49 Amb

That stud is even worse. Don't breed a decent mare to a shit stud. Go find something top 50 ABLB that actually matches

Purestables

12:42:01 Pure

what about this

-HEE Click- + sven

Moonrose Magic

12:41:56 🎀 Diva

for giggles use a glass or medallion 1st and see how mare produces a couple times first

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

Darley Heights

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

Former Stable

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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