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Blackthorne Acres
06:49:12 Paradox Elites
ugh Ice cream...which I forgot to order with my groceries
Elephant Walk Stable
06:49:06 Chey
I really hope this match is good for next RO.

-HEE Click-
Nightingales Ridge
06:48:49 𔓘 Issy
Chey, I'm glad you made the day special.

Paradox mmmmhm mhm haha
Elephant Walk Stable
06:48:24 Chey
Tell me about it!
Nightingales Ridge
06:48:03 𔓘 Issy
Chey you're an ice-cream addict ahahaha
Nightingales Ridge
06:47:35 𔓘 Issy
Em maybe Dressage if you're thinking for a med
Elephant Walk Stable
06:47:33 Chey
Doin pretty good. Mom loved her $200 flowers. Which was all I wanted for today. I just finished up my Chinese food, and am almost done with my mountain dew. I should be all good to play for another 2 hours before my ice cream craving starts to kick in!
Blackthorne Acres
06:46:51 Paradox Elites
feel that 100% Issy
Nightingales Ridge
06:45:39 𔓘 Issy
Haha many things but itl be okay. I am blessed in many ways I just need go remember that. How are you?
Insignia Elites
06:41:06 Em
Should I add an item?
Elephant Walk Stable
06:39:31 Chey
Im sorry Issy! What's wrong?
Nightingales Ridge
06:39:08 𔓘 Issy
Not ideal Chey but I'm breathing so it's not terrible lol
MC Ace
06:37:51 McFossil
I like Malbeth he's jiving.
Elephant Walk Stable
06:37:46 Chey
How is today? I hope mothers day is going well for y'all!
MC Ace
06:37:25 McFossil
Man I am so impatient
Nightingales Ridge
06:36:43 𔓘 Issy
Mm I was looking at Malbeth a minute ago for you potentially
lilly fields
06:35:53 Lilly
My cat is wearing a bow tie for Mother’s Day, he is so cute!
Cappuccino
06:35:42 Heyy it's Capp
Malbeth!
Insignia Elites
06:35:09 Em
I wanted to look at options for another stud for this mare -HEE Click-

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Blackthorne Acres
06:49:12 Paradox Elites
ugh Ice cream...which I forgot to order with my groceries
Elephant Walk Stable
06:49:06 Chey
I really hope this match is good for next RO.

-HEE Click-
Nightingales Ridge
06:48:49 𔓘 Issy
Chey, I'm glad you made the day special.

Paradox mmmmhm mhm haha
Elephant Walk Stable
06:48:24 Chey
Tell me about it!
Nightingales Ridge
06:48:03 𔓘 Issy
Chey you're an ice-cream addict ahahaha
Nightingales Ridge
06:47:35 𔓘 Issy
Em maybe Dressage if you're thinking for a med
Elephant Walk Stable
06:47:33 Chey
Doin pretty good. Mom loved her $200 flowers. Which was all I wanted for today. I just finished up my Chinese food, and am almost done with my mountain dew. I should be all good to play for another 2 hours before my ice cream craving starts to kick in!
Blackthorne Acres
06:46:51 Paradox Elites
feel that 100% Issy
Nightingales Ridge
06:45:39 𔓘 Issy
Haha many things but itl be okay. I am blessed in many ways I just need go remember that. How are you?
Insignia Elites
06:41:06 Em
Should I add an item?
Elephant Walk Stable
06:39:31 Chey
Im sorry Issy! What's wrong?
Nightingales Ridge
06:39:08 𔓘 Issy
Not ideal Chey but I'm breathing so it's not terrible lol
MC Ace
06:37:51 McFossil
I like Malbeth he's jiving.
Elephant Walk Stable
06:37:46 Chey
How is today? I hope mothers day is going well for y'all!
MC Ace
06:37:25 McFossil
Man I am so impatient
Nightingales Ridge
06:36:43 𔓘 Issy
Mm I was looking at Malbeth a minute ago for you potentially
lilly fields
06:35:53 Lilly
My cat is wearing a bow tie for Mother’s Day, he is so cute!
Cappuccino
06:35:42 Heyy it's Capp
Malbeth!
Insignia Elites
06:35:09 Em
I wanted to look at options for another stud for this mare -HEE Click-

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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