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Josephine's Stable

02:39:11

my cat is sooo offended i wont let him lay between me and the computer

Varina

02:29:57

jousting has slowed down loads :(

MC Ace

02:25:26 McFossil

It is tiresome Night.

Nightingales Ridge

02:23:37 𔓘 Issy

Oh lucky!

02:13:17 Night

What a rude mare, McFossil

02:03:24 Night

I got the wolf first try weirdly enough. Been struggling to get other things though

MC Ace

02:02:37 McFossil

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This ho....

Nightingales Ridge

01:48:15 𔓘 Issy

And really want the wolf from the jungle but never get it upon turning it in

Nightingales Ridge

01:45:54 𔓘 Issy

Neat**

Nightingales Ridge

01:45:46 𔓘 Issy

Oo the desert is nest :) I just got the long horn

01:43:01 Night

I'm eager to reach the desert. It's the next biome I have to unlock. I'm a goblin for exploring haha

Nightingales Ridge

01:38:26 𔓘 Issy

I'm excited for the mountains

01:35:15 Night

You're telling me, Issy. It's not even rated that damn high in the forest to top it all off

Nightingales Ridge

01:32:02 𔓘 Issy

Wowwww what a little shit haha

01:31:22 Night

Yes! Issy, my horses kept spooking at the trout or the trout just wouldn't show up at all. It was ridiculous

01:30:10 Night

Stupid fish took so such a long time to get a photo of. I got all the other fish except the trout. I'm so relieved to get it after so long

Nightingales Ridge

01:29:03 𔓘 Issy

Loool has it really taken that long?!

01:27:09 Night

One year later, I've finally got the stupid rainbow trout in the forest explore section. Hallelujah

Nightingales Ridge

01:25:55 𔓘 Issy

Oo he's only been shown at level 9?

Nightfall Dressage

01:11:36 Witchy

Old man is about to hit two years old
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Josephine's Stable

02:39:11

my cat is sooo offended i wont let him lay between me and the computer

Varina

02:29:57

jousting has slowed down loads :(

MC Ace

02:25:26 McFossil

It is tiresome Night.

Nightingales Ridge

02:23:37 𔓘 Issy

Oh lucky!

02:13:17 Night

What a rude mare, McFossil

02:03:24 Night

I got the wolf first try weirdly enough. Been struggling to get other things though

MC Ace

02:02:37 McFossil

-HEE Click-

This ho....

Nightingales Ridge

01:48:15 𔓘 Issy

And really want the wolf from the jungle but never get it upon turning it in

Nightingales Ridge

01:45:54 𔓘 Issy

Neat**

Nightingales Ridge

01:45:46 𔓘 Issy

Oo the desert is nest :) I just got the long horn

01:43:01 Night

I'm eager to reach the desert. It's the next biome I have to unlock. I'm a goblin for exploring haha

Nightingales Ridge

01:38:26 𔓘 Issy

I'm excited for the mountains

01:35:15 Night

You're telling me, Issy. It's not even rated that damn high in the forest to top it all off

Nightingales Ridge

01:32:02 𔓘 Issy

Wowwww what a little shit haha

01:31:22 Night

Yes! Issy, my horses kept spooking at the trout or the trout just wouldn't show up at all. It was ridiculous

01:30:10 Night

Stupid fish took so such a long time to get a photo of. I got all the other fish except the trout. I'm so relieved to get it after so long

Nightingales Ridge

01:29:03 𔓘 Issy

Loool has it really taken that long?!

01:27:09 Night

One year later, I've finally got the stupid rainbow trout in the forest explore section. Hallelujah

Nightingales Ridge

01:25:55 𔓘 Issy

Oo he's only been shown at level 9?

Nightfall Dressage

01:11:36 Witchy

Old man is about to hit two years old
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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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