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Nightingales Ridge
12:33:19 Issy
Quest breed a premium rating...oh easy say less...*breeds SEE* oh
ArcticLights
12:17:08 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Alrighty, have a nice work day :)
Deep Ocean
12:15:30 ♘Tosk
That's awesome!

Alright time for work ^^
ArcticLights
12:10:10 Ceci / (Call me) AL
And a champagne wub
ArcticLights
12:09:46 Ceci / (Call me) AL
No, really happy with a grey rid
Deep Ocean
12:07:36 ♘Tosk
That's not too bad
ArcticLights
12:02:17 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I had a very decent ro. One www on eachof my accounts
Black Meadow Estate
11:55:48 Meadow
-HEE Click-
My Maiden with my own stud gave her
Deep Ocean
11:55:36 ♘Tosk
Of course. Gonna have a German cheesecake party
Deep Ocean
11:53:35 ♘Tosk
How did your RO go, AL?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:53:17 Glacier Kittens
Can I try some German cheesecake too
ArcticLights
11:50:43 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Ok deal :)
Deep Ocean
11:50:21 ♘Tosk
Of course xD
ArcticLights
11:48:30 Ceci / (Call me) AL
So if I come visit you will share some cheesecake with me Tosk?
Deep Ocean
11:48:27 ♘Tosk
About the only cheesecake I like
Dash and Duchess
11:48:17 DD | ~Squizard~
Tosk, I'm going to steal her omg! 👀
Deep Ocean
11:47:24 ♘Tosk
German*
Deep Ocean
11:47:18 ♘Tosk
There's one Germa Cheesecake that's not too heavy actually. It's called "Tränchenkuchen", so basically "teary cake "
ArcticLights
11:46:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Cheesecake is good in small amounts
Deep Ocean
11:45:34 ♘Tosk
Also..
-HEE Click-

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Nightingales Ridge
12:33:19 Issy
Quest breed a premium rating...oh easy say less...*breeds SEE* oh
ArcticLights
12:17:08 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Alrighty, have a nice work day :)
Deep Ocean
12:15:30 ♘Tosk
That's awesome!

Alright time for work ^^
ArcticLights
12:10:10 Ceci / (Call me) AL
And a champagne wub
ArcticLights
12:09:46 Ceci / (Call me) AL
No, really happy with a grey rid
Deep Ocean
12:07:36 ♘Tosk
That's not too bad
ArcticLights
12:02:17 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I had a very decent ro. One www on eachof my accounts
Black Meadow Estate
11:55:48 Meadow
-HEE Click-
My Maiden with my own stud gave her
Deep Ocean
11:55:36 ♘Tosk
Of course. Gonna have a German cheesecake party
Deep Ocean
11:53:35 ♘Tosk
How did your RO go, AL?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:53:17 Glacier Kittens
Can I try some German cheesecake too
ArcticLights
11:50:43 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Ok deal :)
Deep Ocean
11:50:21 ♘Tosk
Of course xD
ArcticLights
11:48:30 Ceci / (Call me) AL
So if I come visit you will share some cheesecake with me Tosk?
Deep Ocean
11:48:27 ♘Tosk
About the only cheesecake I like
Dash and Duchess
11:48:17 DD | ~Squizard~
Tosk, I'm going to steal her omg! 👀
Deep Ocean
11:47:24 ♘Tosk
German*
Deep Ocean
11:47:18 ♘Tosk
There's one Germa Cheesecake that's not too heavy actually. It's called "Tränchenkuchen", so basically "teary cake "
ArcticLights
11:46:00 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Cheesecake is good in small amounts
Deep Ocean
11:45:34 ♘Tosk
Also..
-HEE Click-

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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