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Dimmed
11:36:14 Dimmy
Trish e.e
Morning Glory Farms
11:31:08 Dino/Digital Tyrant
Yes, but only minimally
Narran Park
11:30:43 Sting
are the chances of a better capture changed as well? like for capture day?
fire
11:05:55 
slay lets play
Two Trees Stables
11:05:24 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Fire
I can
fire
11:04:32 
any one up for a satble raid
Two Trees Stables
11:02:18 Willow ~ TB Breeder
I think TB captures are 1k instead of 2k
full moon
11:02:08 usagi
night
full moon
11:02:03 usagi
pm me with the answer.
full moon
10:58:09 usagi
what is the Kentucky derby capture event?
Two Trees Stables
10:48:30 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
I need to cut back on the amount of mares I breed every year. This isn't even including the color project ones
full moon
10:42:24 usagi
good match?
-HEE Click-
full moon
10:41:49 usagi
yes!
Rising Stars Stable
10:35:34 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
Should I do embryos with her this coming month?
full moon
10:26:25 usagi
boulder, they are adorable!
SUMMER OF PEARLS
10:25:39 
boulder creek are they in the snow?
full moon
10:23:07 usagi
I'm specially picky
Echo Creek
10:22:39 Echo | River
Usagi
How come you rerolled her? she was stunning before :>
full moon
10:21:33 usagi
I wasted so many rerolls on my girl.
Boulder Creek
10:20:42 
And suddenly out of the darkness appeared
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Dimmed
11:36:14 Dimmy
Trish e.e
Morning Glory Farms
11:31:08 Dino/Digital Tyrant
Yes, but only minimally
Narran Park
11:30:43 Sting
are the chances of a better capture changed as well? like for capture day?
fire
11:05:55 
slay lets play
Two Trees Stables
11:05:24 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Fire
I can
fire
11:04:32 
any one up for a satble raid
Two Trees Stables
11:02:18 Willow ~ TB Breeder
I think TB captures are 1k instead of 2k
full moon
11:02:08 usagi
night
full moon
11:02:03 usagi
pm me with the answer.
full moon
10:58:09 usagi
what is the Kentucky derby capture event?
Two Trees Stables
10:48:30 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
I need to cut back on the amount of mares I breed every year. This isn't even including the color project ones
full moon
10:42:24 usagi
good match?
-HEE Click-
full moon
10:41:49 usagi
yes!
Rising Stars Stable
10:35:34 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
Should I do embryos with her this coming month?
full moon
10:26:25 usagi
boulder, they are adorable!
SUMMER OF PEARLS
10:25:39 
boulder creek are they in the snow?
full moon
10:23:07 usagi
I'm specially picky
Echo Creek
10:22:39 Echo | River
Usagi
How come you rerolled her? she was stunning before :>
full moon
10:21:33 usagi
I wasted so many rerolls on my girl.
Boulder Creek
10:20:42 
And suddenly out of the darkness appeared
-Click-

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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