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11:40:06 Trigger 🐾

Training going well for my little rescue baby. She halters easy now and let me put a fly sheet on her.

-Click-

Greenheart Stables

11:39:22 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-Click-
I just wanna share the snakes revamped enclosures, super proud of it even if he did have a party last night

The Pearl gates

11:38:16

Janna, Thank youu I was hoping for another 1/1 so I just bred one of my others w someone elses 1/1 lol

11:36:07 Nayoung ⛥

Finally got Ibis paint, can't wait to start making art.

Royale Equestria

11:33:10 Janna

Tha Pearl Gates, She's gorgeouss 😍

The Pearl gates

11:31:44

Just bred this 1 of 1 !! -HEE Click-

Campbell Equestrian

11:31:41 Hails

I just need a jumping medallion 😅😭

Dawnmist Stables

11:31:12

Thanks! One of my horses got one and I had no idea from where XD

Jericho Stables

11:30:22

You can find the update here
-HEE Click-

11:30:04 AL, mum to Nemi

Dawnmist, its a title from showing

Jericho Stables

11:29:57

It is part of the update that added showing titles

Dawnmist Stables

11:29:29

Where's this "Reserve Grand Champion" title come from?

11:23:30 Fang

It is how I feel outside on a windy day with all of my critters lol

Glacier Bay Cove

11:22:35 Glacier Kittens

lol, I have feathers in my hair, wearing buckskin clothes and have wild animal friends

11:19:49 Fang

Now I have the Colors of the Wind song stuck in my head. Thanks Pocahontas

11:18:29 Fang

Gone with the wind 💨

Calela Eventing

11:17:56 Cali

Having the best dinner, roast chicken breasts, butter carrots, rice with soy sauce and potatoes. I'm on my 3rd bowl already lol

Glacier Bay Cove

11:16:58 Glacier Kittens

And she’s gone

Royale Equestria

11:16:54 Janna

7 hours shopping 😵‍💫
-Click-
+a bra that cost 20 €
And my sister spent 180 € on shoes +5 € on a shirt

Glacier Bay Cove

11:16:34 Glacier Kittens

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11:40:06 Trigger 🐾

Training going well for my little rescue baby. She halters easy now and let me put a fly sheet on her.

-Click-

Greenheart Stables

11:39:22 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-Click-
I just wanna share the snakes revamped enclosures, super proud of it even if he did have a party last night

The Pearl gates

11:38:16

Janna, Thank youu I was hoping for another 1/1 so I just bred one of my others w someone elses 1/1 lol

11:36:07 Nayoung ⛥

Finally got Ibis paint, can't wait to start making art.

Royale Equestria

11:33:10 Janna

Tha Pearl Gates, She's gorgeouss 😍

The Pearl gates

11:31:44

Just bred this 1 of 1 !! -HEE Click-

Campbell Equestrian

11:31:41 Hails

I just need a jumping medallion 😅😭

Dawnmist Stables

11:31:12

Thanks! One of my horses got one and I had no idea from where XD

Jericho Stables

11:30:22

You can find the update here
-HEE Click-

11:30:04 AL, mum to Nemi

Dawnmist, its a title from showing

Jericho Stables

11:29:57

It is part of the update that added showing titles

Dawnmist Stables

11:29:29

Where's this "Reserve Grand Champion" title come from?

11:23:30 Fang

It is how I feel outside on a windy day with all of my critters lol

Glacier Bay Cove

11:22:35 Glacier Kittens

lol, I have feathers in my hair, wearing buckskin clothes and have wild animal friends

11:19:49 Fang

Now I have the Colors of the Wind song stuck in my head. Thanks Pocahontas

11:18:29 Fang

Gone with the wind 💨

Calela Eventing

11:17:56 Cali

Having the best dinner, roast chicken breasts, butter carrots, rice with soy sauce and potatoes. I'm on my 3rd bowl already lol

Glacier Bay Cove

11:16:58 Glacier Kittens

And she’s gone

Royale Equestria

11:16:54 Janna

7 hours shopping 😵‍💫
-Click-
+a bra that cost 20 €
And my sister spent 180 € on shoes +5 € on a shirt

Glacier Bay Cove

11:16:34 Glacier Kittens

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 17, 2019 12:51 PM

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Eurynome said:

Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.

Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".

Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.

Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes

November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:

Main Character: Words

Other Character: Words

Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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