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 Boulder Creek
08:22:34 
At least you found the one @Tasi - congratulations!!!

Whoa @Atlantic. That major sucks.
Boulder Creek
08:21:26 
I think I keep looking for the person who would fill my last partner's shoes. He was a gentleman, he was an engineer nerd, and we had great chemistry.

Then he moved away.
Atlantic Sport Horse
08:20:31 
At least you didn't lose your boyfriend of 4 years to heart attack....
MakeEm Fancy
08:18:42 Ally 💜
I went on a date a few years back and it was awful. The guy wanted to talk the whole time about his psychotic ex girlfriend and the kid they had together....He asked to go on another date and I said heck no.
Spirtasi Whims
08:15:49 Tasi / Chat Killer
Oh my god Boulder. That sounds insane
SwankPony
08:14:36 Swanky
That sounds awful.
Tenebris Hollow
08:12:15 Aris/Quinn
Genuinely what the fuck boulder 😭😭😭
Boulder Creek
08:10:51 
A couple nights ago I met up with a guy who gave me flowers.
He was also a hundred pounds at least heavier than his pictures. And was proud of having a picture on his ig with five pounds of marijuana. He spent 99% of the time talking..9% was eating ice cream. .1% was me trying to say anything.
SwankPony
08:07:15 Swanky
Was that better or worse then the date in the park?
Hummingbird Meadows
08:00:58 Bird
@Boulder, sounds like most of the dates I've been on. >.<
Boulder Creek
08:00:08 
Adventures in Online Dating:
Met up with a guy who was 5 years younger than me - he was over half an hour late.
He could not make any converstation.

His opening line:
Did you have VHS?
The Old Gods
07:59:33 Void Malign
Honestly, the nice thing about getting sous vide chicken, is that I can just throw it in the microwave to thaw it and it's ready when the veggies are done
PK Rescue Stable
07:59:05 Fossil-sore
almost makes her bay
Cloud Peak Stables
07:58:42 Cloud
Such pretty sooty too!
PK Rescue Stable
07:55:20 Fossil-sore
put a little brightness in my day for sure
MakeEm Fancy
07:54:26 Ally 💜
Dang PK
PK Rescue Stable
07:53:56 Fossil-sore
Holy Crap!!
-HEE Click-
Lambda Estates
07:53:40 Eps RID
.. The disappointment 😭
-HEE Click-
Aussie Wattles
07:48:41 Aussie
thanks!!
~Savy~
07:43:43 Sav
Lp is appaloosa, PATN shows an actual pattern in combination with appy

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 Boulder Creek
08:22:34 
At least you found the one @Tasi - congratulations!!!

Whoa @Atlantic. That major sucks.
Boulder Creek
08:21:26 
I think I keep looking for the person who would fill my last partner's shoes. He was a gentleman, he was an engineer nerd, and we had great chemistry.

Then he moved away.
Atlantic Sport Horse
08:20:31 
At least you didn't lose your boyfriend of 4 years to heart attack....
MakeEm Fancy
08:18:42 Ally 💜
I went on a date a few years back and it was awful. The guy wanted to talk the whole time about his psychotic ex girlfriend and the kid they had together....He asked to go on another date and I said heck no.
Spirtasi Whims
08:15:49 Tasi / Chat Killer
Oh my god Boulder. That sounds insane
SwankPony
08:14:36 Swanky
That sounds awful.
Tenebris Hollow
08:12:15 Aris/Quinn
Genuinely what the fuck boulder 😭😭😭
Boulder Creek
08:10:51 
A couple nights ago I met up with a guy who gave me flowers.
He was also a hundred pounds at least heavier than his pictures. And was proud of having a picture on his ig with five pounds of marijuana. He spent 99% of the time talking..9% was eating ice cream. .1% was me trying to say anything.
SwankPony
08:07:15 Swanky
Was that better or worse then the date in the park?
Hummingbird Meadows
08:00:58 Bird
@Boulder, sounds like most of the dates I've been on. >.<
Boulder Creek
08:00:08 
Adventures in Online Dating:
Met up with a guy who was 5 years younger than me - he was over half an hour late.
He could not make any converstation.

His opening line:
Did you have VHS?
The Old Gods
07:59:33 Void Malign
Honestly, the nice thing about getting sous vide chicken, is that I can just throw it in the microwave to thaw it and it's ready when the veggies are done
PK Rescue Stable
07:59:05 Fossil-sore
almost makes her bay
Cloud Peak Stables
07:58:42 Cloud
Such pretty sooty too!
PK Rescue Stable
07:55:20 Fossil-sore
put a little brightness in my day for sure
MakeEm Fancy
07:54:26 Ally 💜
Dang PK
PK Rescue Stable
07:53:56 Fossil-sore
Holy Crap!!
-HEE Click-
Lambda Estates
07:53:40 Eps RID
.. The disappointment 😭
-HEE Click-
Aussie Wattles
07:48:41 Aussie
thanks!!
~Savy~
07:43:43 Sav
Lp is appaloosa, PATN shows an actual pattern in combination with appy

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


 Darley Heights
 
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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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