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 Poppy Land
08:02:32 Poppy
*I don't know how
Poppy Land
08:02:19 Poppy
Thank you, idk how I missed his int
Bioshock Manor
08:02:14 Storm
Definitely 😂
Ranch Lands Training
08:01:57 Lilly/PON Addict
Storm - Please update us when you hit 20mil
Bignus Bognus
08:01:31 literally bingus
Poppy, they match pretty well already, just something to boost int I think
Willow Grove
08:01:01 Stalker of Chat
I love when the coworker who doesnt do half her job lectures me on my sloppy close because she wasnt helping 🙃
Papyrus
08:01:01 
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Hmmm, geld and show? Or let them keep their jewels 'til they're freshies?
Poppy Land
08:00:11 Poppy
-HEE Click-

What item would you put on this?
rumi+jinu
07:59:59 usagi
does anyone know where the forum is where you enter the horse that you put blue tack on? its a contest
Bioshock Manor
07:57:33 Storm
Ooh haha. I like it.
Greenheart Stables
07:56:54 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Storm
20mil
Ranch Lands Training
07:55:58 Lilly/PON Addict
Uh no, that's unfortunate
Bioshock Manor
07:55:36 Storm
I need a high number to strive for ebs wise. I like challenges and I feel unmotivated XD
Bignus Bognus
07:55:20 literally bingus
They're not online but I PM'd them explaining why they're a little richer now lmao

I said they could keep it if they wanted, it's my mistake and it was a giveaway prize anywho so I guess I'm just giving away an extra 200k ^^;
Pentagram Stables
07:53:40 Penta - KNNs
oh no...did you get it back ?
Bignus Bognus
07:51:26 literally bingus
literally just sent 200k to the wrong person I really need a nap :')
Sunfeather Stables
07:42:31 Fea
Hi bingus!
rumi+jinu
07:42:29 usagi
hi
Bignus Bognus
07:41:57 literally bingus
hello everyone!
Mythological
07:29:35 Crowley | Krampus
Nice

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 Poppy Land
08:02:32 Poppy
*I don't know how
Poppy Land
08:02:19 Poppy
Thank you, idk how I missed his int
Bioshock Manor
08:02:14 Storm
Definitely 😂
Ranch Lands Training
08:01:57 Lilly/PON Addict
Storm - Please update us when you hit 20mil
Bignus Bognus
08:01:31 literally bingus
Poppy, they match pretty well already, just something to boost int I think
Willow Grove
08:01:01 Stalker of Chat
I love when the coworker who doesnt do half her job lectures me on my sloppy close because she wasnt helping 🙃
Papyrus
08:01:01 
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Hmmm, geld and show? Or let them keep their jewels 'til they're freshies?
Poppy Land
08:00:11 Poppy
-HEE Click-

What item would you put on this?
rumi+jinu
07:59:59 usagi
does anyone know where the forum is where you enter the horse that you put blue tack on? its a contest
Bioshock Manor
07:57:33 Storm
Ooh haha. I like it.
Greenheart Stables
07:56:54 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Storm
20mil
Ranch Lands Training
07:55:58 Lilly/PON Addict
Uh no, that's unfortunate
Bioshock Manor
07:55:36 Storm
I need a high number to strive for ebs wise. I like challenges and I feel unmotivated XD
Bignus Bognus
07:55:20 literally bingus
They're not online but I PM'd them explaining why they're a little richer now lmao

I said they could keep it if they wanted, it's my mistake and it was a giveaway prize anywho so I guess I'm just giving away an extra 200k ^^;
Pentagram Stables
07:53:40 Penta - KNNs
oh no...did you get it back ?
Bignus Bognus
07:51:26 literally bingus
literally just sent 200k to the wrong person I really need a nap :')
Sunfeather Stables
07:42:31 Fea
Hi bingus!
rumi+jinu
07:42:29 usagi
hi
Bignus Bognus
07:41:57 literally bingus
hello everyone!
Mythological
07:29:35 Crowley | Krampus
Nice

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 12:51 PM


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Eurynome said:


Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".


Of course not. What I meant was the main character is the only one that can get through to him and understand him.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 30, 2019 12:04 PM

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This mostly just happens in places like Wattpad, but when instead of dialogue, they go:
Main Character: Words
Other Character: Words
Is it that hard to write proper dialogue? It’s a weird pet peeve but if I see that in a book, I will definitely not be finishing it.

Edited at November 30, 2019 12:04 PM by Glass Rose

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