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WhizBar Eventing
10:47:43 Toto
Thank you guys!!<3
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:47:36 Gladius
oh gosh, yes. nightynight nightingale ;)
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:47:13 Gladius
xD beat me to it haha
Whitewolf
10:47:08 Fang 🐺
Goodnight Issy <3
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:47:03 Gladius
but I suppose that's already a possibility anyway lol
Whitewolf
10:47:00 Fang 🐺
Gladius but it would happen anyways if you were sitting there pondering so 🤷‍♀️ snooze you lose lol
Red Moon Stables
10:46:51 Moon/Dutch/Remi/Ren
Fang, thank you
Nightingales Ridge
10:46:47 𔓘 Issy
Alright let's see if I can get more hours of sleep. 0346 let's hope so. Byeee
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:46:31 Gladius
fang - true, although I loathe to think of the heartbreak when you spend 5 minutes agonizing over a purchase and the one you really want got yoinked from under you because someone's ping was faster (assuming they click around the same time as you)
Whitewolf
10:46:22 Fang 🐺
Moon he is handsome.
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:45:27 Gladius
not gonna lie could maybe add a barn view for purchasing and just tick a radio box next to the horse's name/stats then submit?
Nightingales Ridge
10:45:18 𔓘 Issy
Beeeeautiful Toto
Red Moon Stables
10:45:01 Moon/Dutch/Remi/Ren
-HEE Click- I like his color
Whitewolf
10:44:58 Fang 🐺
If one sells before you get it it should just automatically be left out of your purchase and not charge ya for it.
Someone put it in suggestions and I will support it if it isn’t already XD
Minerva
10:44:57 Min
Presumably it would just go to whoever clicked pay first. Same as if two people were trying to buy the same individual horse now
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:44:23 Gladius
issy - congrats!
Nightingales Ridge
10:44:03 𔓘 Issy
But even on the buy page there's a drop down confirm, then you scroll through with ease
Chateau Montelena
10:43:46 Monty
If there's another rumble this year when would it happen?
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:43:42 Gladius
issy - yeaaaah I could see that being difficult to deconflict if multiple people put the same horse in their batch at once
Whitewolf
10:43:32 Fang 🐺
Toto that is gorgeous

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WhizBar Eventing
10:47:43 Toto
Thank you guys!!<3
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:47:36 Gladius
oh gosh, yes. nightynight nightingale ;)
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:47:13 Gladius
xD beat me to it haha
Whitewolf
10:47:08 Fang 🐺
Goodnight Issy <3
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:47:03 Gladius
but I suppose that's already a possibility anyway lol
Whitewolf
10:47:00 Fang 🐺
Gladius but it would happen anyways if you were sitting there pondering so 🤷‍♀️ snooze you lose lol
Red Moon Stables
10:46:51 Moon/Dutch/Remi/Ren
Fang, thank you
Nightingales Ridge
10:46:47 𔓘 Issy
Alright let's see if I can get more hours of sleep. 0346 let's hope so. Byeee
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:46:31 Gladius
fang - true, although I loathe to think of the heartbreak when you spend 5 minutes agonizing over a purchase and the one you really want got yoinked from under you because someone's ping was faster (assuming they click around the same time as you)
Whitewolf
10:46:22 Fang 🐺
Moon he is handsome.
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:45:27 Gladius
not gonna lie could maybe add a barn view for purchasing and just tick a radio box next to the horse's name/stats then submit?
Nightingales Ridge
10:45:18 𔓘 Issy
Beeeeautiful Toto
Red Moon Stables
10:45:01 Moon/Dutch/Remi/Ren
-HEE Click- I like his color
Whitewolf
10:44:58 Fang 🐺
If one sells before you get it it should just automatically be left out of your purchase and not charge ya for it.
Someone put it in suggestions and I will support it if it isn’t already XD
Minerva
10:44:57 Min
Presumably it would just go to whoever clicked pay first. Same as if two people were trying to buy the same individual horse now
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:44:23 Gladius
issy - congrats!
Nightingales Ridge
10:44:03 𔓘 Issy
But even on the buy page there's a drop down confirm, then you scroll through with ease
Chateau Montelena
10:43:46 Monty
If there's another rumble this year when would it happen?
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:43:42 Gladius
issy - yeaaaah I could see that being difficult to deconflict if multiple people put the same horse in their batch at once
Whitewolf
10:43:32 Fang 🐺
Toto that is gorgeous

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 10:06 AM


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Chapters posted: 26 / 26

This book was self-published in Hungary, 7 years ago, when I was 17. The publisher has no problem with me translating it into English and sharing it online. That being said the translation is far from perfect, and there might be certain lines in there that work for me (because I see it in Hungarian also) but won't work for native English speakers. (I'd be more than happy if these were pointed out by the way.)

The book is more like a self-healing story than directed at the general public. It's also kind of like a diary from that time while I was writing. Many real life events are placed into it with a few twists. The story is about a 17 year-old girl, in high school, who has a fear of crowds and social anxiety. She's a gamer, spends most of her time alone trying to be as invisible as possible, until a certain person suddenly enters her life and turns it upside down. The book shows her struggle against her fears and emotions, with a touch of fantasy.

Since this is a completely finished work which is well in my past I am not looking for critisism of any kind. You're more than welcome to share your opinion though!

I will try my best to update regularly. I have to go through the translation one more time before posting to check for errors and to make the formatting in the Google doc. I will post here when a new chapter is up.


Edited at May 21, 2021 01:14 PM by HRS
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 11:17 AM


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ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 12:23 PM


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Yay, I'm glad you like it! :D

Thistleberry Farm said:
ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!


The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 04:29 PM

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 06:17 PM


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Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3

Edited at April 18, 2021 06:17 PM by FirstLightFarms
The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:08 AM


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I'm happy to hear you like it ^^ Thank you for reading <3

FirstLightFarms said:
Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3


The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:31 AM


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I added 3 more chapters :D
The Soul of Music April 22, 2021 08:50 AM


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I added 2 more chapers.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 11:04 AM


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New chapters added.
At the time I was writing I didn't notice that the number 9 was skipped at numbering the chapters, and the book was published without a chapter 9 as well. So I kept this little twist here too. Don't worry, nothing is missing from the story, the only thing that was skipped is the chapter number.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 05:29 PM


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I really like how these plots are starting to get twisted around each other!

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