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so should I assign them different rider?
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pretty much
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what void said
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it means the horse is a higher level than the rider
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less ka-ching but if they're green they'll get you a bag ;)
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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 10:06 AM


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Chapters posted: 26 / 26

This book was self-published in Hungary, 7 years ago, when I was 17. The publisher has no problem with me translating it into English and sharing it online. That being said the translation is far from perfect, and there might be certain lines in there that work for me (because I see it in Hungarian also) but won't work for native English speakers. (I'd be more than happy if these were pointed out by the way.)

The book is more like a self-healing story than directed at the general public. It's also kind of like a diary from that time while I was writing. Many real life events are placed into it with a few twists. The story is about a 17 year-old girl, in high school, who has a fear of crowds and social anxiety. She's a gamer, spends most of her time alone trying to be as invisible as possible, until a certain person suddenly enters her life and turns it upside down. The book shows her struggle against her fears and emotions, with a touch of fantasy.

Since this is a completely finished work which is well in my past I am not looking for critisism of any kind. You're more than welcome to share your opinion though!

I will try my best to update regularly. I have to go through the translation one more time before posting to check for errors and to make the formatting in the Google doc. I will post here when a new chapter is up.


Edited at May 21, 2021 01:14 PM by HRS
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 11:17 AM


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ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 12:23 PM


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Yay, I'm glad you like it! :D

Thistleberry Farm said:
ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!


The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 04:29 PM

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 06:17 PM


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Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3

Edited at April 18, 2021 06:17 PM by FirstLightFarms
The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:08 AM


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I'm happy to hear you like it ^^ Thank you for reading <3

FirstLightFarms said:
Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3


The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:31 AM


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I added 3 more chapters :D
The Soul of Music April 22, 2021 08:50 AM


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I added 2 more chapers.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 11:04 AM


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New chapters added.
At the time I was writing I didn't notice that the number 9 was skipped at numbering the chapters, and the book was published without a chapter 9 as well. So I kept this little twist here too. Don't worry, nothing is missing from the story, the only thing that was skipped is the chapter number.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 05:29 PM


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I really like how these plots are starting to get twisted around each other!

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