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It's everywhere - the news, the video feeds (look at one pretty pony and the next is a protest march) and even in interacting with people - do they support dehumanizing people?

I wish people would leave people alone. It's not your business who they are and it's not your body/mind to control.

No matter how much love and light are spread around, the hate is determined to be louder.
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Ugh, I just want a comfy cozy movie/tv show to watch to ease my little brain - but the cat won't come up with any suggestions
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Loony lol 🤣
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Aura, Just using all my passes now, I have no self-control, Just used 35 Sherpa maps since I posted the last ,essage
Aura Show Horses
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Byeee! Gotta go!
Aura Show Horses
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Loony xD
Lunalovegood
01:49:45 Loony/Loony Tune
Might just have some fun today XD
Lunalovegood
01:48:40 Loony/Loony Tune
I can’t believe I missed all of the capture week (You know what I mean, all of the different events) Ugh
Elite Equine Stables
01:07:14 Honey
In the US
Elite Equine Stables
01:06:54 Honey
Dulcie
Sorry no
I'm in California
I'm trying to escape the weather in the east
Elite Equine Stables
01:05:56 Honey
Boulder I agree
Frog Judgment Acers
01:05:23 Dulcie/Crazy
Anyone able to help with frozen well issues?
Boulder Creek
01:05:15 
It's everywhere - the news, the video feeds (look at one pretty pony and the next is a protest march) and even in interacting with people - do they support dehumanizing people?

I wish people would leave people alone. It's not your business who they are and it's not your body/mind to control.

No matter how much love and light are spread around, the hate is determined to be louder.
Elite Equine Stables
12:59:49 Honey
Ahhh! Boulder
Boulder Creek
12:59:10 
All the bigotry that's all over my feed right now is distressing. My anxiety is really amping up and my fear response is trying to kick in - I wish I could help people but I'm not even sure I can.

Ugh, I just want a comfy cozy movie/tv show to watch to ease my little brain - but the cat won't come up with any suggestions
Aura Show Horses
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Ha! I like the suggestions!!
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I don't know-
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Aura
Twist
Sol
Lumin
Aura Show Horses
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-HEE Click- any name ideas?
Echo Creek
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Iron
Give me xD
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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 10:06 AM


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Click Here for the Google doc
Chapters posted: 26 / 26

This book was self-published in Hungary, 7 years ago, when I was 17. The publisher has no problem with me translating it into English and sharing it online. That being said the translation is far from perfect, and there might be certain lines in there that work for me (because I see it in Hungarian also) but won't work for native English speakers. (I'd be more than happy if these were pointed out by the way.)

The book is more like a self-healing story than directed at the general public. It's also kind of like a diary from that time while I was writing. Many real life events are placed into it with a few twists. The story is about a 17 year-old girl, in high school, who has a fear of crowds and social anxiety. She's a gamer, spends most of her time alone trying to be as invisible as possible, until a certain person suddenly enters her life and turns it upside down. The book shows her struggle against her fears and emotions, with a touch of fantasy.

Since this is a completely finished work which is well in my past I am not looking for critisism of any kind. You're more than welcome to share your opinion though!

I will try my best to update regularly. I have to go through the translation one more time before posting to check for errors and to make the formatting in the Google doc. I will post here when a new chapter is up.


Edited at May 21, 2021 01:14 PM by HRS
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 11:17 AM


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ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!
The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 12:23 PM


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Yay, I'm glad you like it! :D

Thistleberry Farm said:
ooh just started reading and it looks awesome!


The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 04:29 PM

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The Soul of Music April 18, 2021 06:17 PM


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Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3

Edited at April 18, 2021 06:17 PM by FirstLightFarms
The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:08 AM


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I'm happy to hear you like it ^^ Thank you for reading <3

FirstLightFarms said:
Oh I love this! I've always enjoyed reading translated books, there's a certain cadence to them that's just different than books that were just written in plain English. This one is no exception, it's such a lovely read. Thanks for sharing! <3


The Soul of Music April 19, 2021 05:31 AM


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I added 3 more chapters :D
The Soul of Music April 22, 2021 08:50 AM


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I added 2 more chapers.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 11:04 AM


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New chapters added.
At the time I was writing I didn't notice that the number 9 was skipped at numbering the chapters, and the book was published without a chapter 9 as well. So I kept this little twist here too. Don't worry, nothing is missing from the story, the only thing that was skipped is the chapter number.
The Soul of Music April 26, 2021 05:29 PM


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I really like how these plots are starting to get twisted around each other!

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