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 Jericho Stables
06:04:34 
Today is my Saturday to work (I only work one Saturday every 6-ish weeks). And after the week I had it better be a quiet day XD
All Breeds
04:44:05 Fawn
I've had the most luck with capturing X or WB for a white horse
Phantom Echoes
04:32:20 Win | Mar
Shit, what's wrong with his rating? he's such a pretty baby - -HEE Click-

Thanks!
Ravenwood Farm
04:29:54 
I'd also go for a breed that doesn't have as many patterns, like TB. But honestly if it's for a quest, it's probably not worth it
Minerva
04:28:30 Min
Capture on the beach or with a patterned horse token
Phantom Echoes
04:25:43 Win | Mar
I have to catch a white horse, anyone got suggestions on how?
Transformers Acres
03:09:16 Geek, Greek Yogurt
On the bright side, she's doing very well with being on a leash. She doesn't mind it now!
Transformers Acres
03:07:08 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Boulder

Thank you!
Boulder Creek
03:06:42 
Petsmart has a private 30-minute session for $45

If push comes to shove, you can always go down the YT Dog Trainer rabbit hole. But that could cost you the sanity of your dog.
SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:05:28 
is asking for help 'whining' ? (asking for a friend) ok, thank you. I really, truly appreciate all of your help. blessed holiday cheer all around. thank you.
Transformers Acres
03:04:30 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Noki

I will do that, thank you!
Boulder Creek
03:03:03 
Summer - while whining doesn't help,
I can understand the problem better.

When you configure your Barn and go to Change Barn Compound Image, Can you set it to Default? This should set it back to the Red Barn Color
Kanenoki Estate
03:03:01 Noki
Reach out to your local shelters and see if they can point you in the right direction. Depending on where you live, some councils (or equivalent) offer free or low cost training seminars to teach people the basics of training and canine body language
Transformers Acres
03:00:49 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I would get a professional trainer, if we could afford it. My rent is 1900 a month, plus other basic bills, barely any food stamps. Most trainers near me are 1,000 dollars, or more, for one session.
Boulder Creek
02:58:58 
HEE isn't a great place to get advice especially for training dogs, as everyone has their own ideas. It's best to have a toolbox full of techniques which can be gained through professionals.
A good obedience class makes for a lifelong good dog. There are Canine Good Citizen tests.
Puppy classes will give great advice when dealing with the stages of growing up and socialization that puppies need.
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:58:36 
ok well i guess i only have the bleu barn and YES I appreciate the help I have been given, I DO. I am not asking for help ever again. sorry to bother you Boulder Creek. somehow i ended up with a rd annex that i never had before.
Kanenoki Estate
02:57:57 Noki
Get a trainer who can help you figure it out and assess your dog in person. Not a wise idea to trust randoms on the internet with training advice with a dog they haven't seen or met lol
Transformers Acres
02:54:00 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Hey, dog owners on here. Am I able to lightly tap my puppy, if she misbehaves? I've tried positive reinforcement training, tried verbal training. She's not responding to either, not even with treats. I have no idea what else to do, and I don't really like physical discipline, as I don't want to be accused of abuse, which is why I'm asking y'all.
The Joker
02:53:24 Ari <3
Oh my gosh I just found freeze dried yogurt coated cranberries *-*
Wild River Run Farm
02:53:22 WRR
they are a bit difficult when you are first trying to figure it out but youll figure it out!

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 Jericho Stables
06:04:34 
Today is my Saturday to work (I only work one Saturday every 6-ish weeks). And after the week I had it better be a quiet day XD
All Breeds
04:44:05 Fawn
I've had the most luck with capturing X or WB for a white horse
Phantom Echoes
04:32:20 Win | Mar
Shit, what's wrong with his rating? he's such a pretty baby - -HEE Click-

Thanks!
Ravenwood Farm
04:29:54 
I'd also go for a breed that doesn't have as many patterns, like TB. But honestly if it's for a quest, it's probably not worth it
Minerva
04:28:30 Min
Capture on the beach or with a patterned horse token
Phantom Echoes
04:25:43 Win | Mar
I have to catch a white horse, anyone got suggestions on how?
Transformers Acres
03:09:16 Geek, Greek Yogurt
On the bright side, she's doing very well with being on a leash. She doesn't mind it now!
Transformers Acres
03:07:08 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Boulder

Thank you!
Boulder Creek
03:06:42 
Petsmart has a private 30-minute session for $45

If push comes to shove, you can always go down the YT Dog Trainer rabbit hole. But that could cost you the sanity of your dog.
SUMMER OF PEARLS
03:05:28 
is asking for help 'whining' ? (asking for a friend) ok, thank you. I really, truly appreciate all of your help. blessed holiday cheer all around. thank you.
Transformers Acres
03:04:30 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Noki

I will do that, thank you!
Boulder Creek
03:03:03 
Summer - while whining doesn't help,
I can understand the problem better.

When you configure your Barn and go to Change Barn Compound Image, Can you set it to Default? This should set it back to the Red Barn Color
Kanenoki Estate
03:03:01 Noki
Reach out to your local shelters and see if they can point you in the right direction. Depending on where you live, some councils (or equivalent) offer free or low cost training seminars to teach people the basics of training and canine body language
Transformers Acres
03:00:49 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I would get a professional trainer, if we could afford it. My rent is 1900 a month, plus other basic bills, barely any food stamps. Most trainers near me are 1,000 dollars, or more, for one session.
Boulder Creek
02:58:58 
HEE isn't a great place to get advice especially for training dogs, as everyone has their own ideas. It's best to have a toolbox full of techniques which can be gained through professionals.
A good obedience class makes for a lifelong good dog. There are Canine Good Citizen tests.
Puppy classes will give great advice when dealing with the stages of growing up and socialization that puppies need.
SUMMER OF PEARLS
02:58:36 
ok well i guess i only have the bleu barn and YES I appreciate the help I have been given, I DO. I am not asking for help ever again. sorry to bother you Boulder Creek. somehow i ended up with a rd annex that i never had before.
Kanenoki Estate
02:57:57 Noki
Get a trainer who can help you figure it out and assess your dog in person. Not a wise idea to trust randoms on the internet with training advice with a dog they haven't seen or met lol
Transformers Acres
02:54:00 Geek, Greek Yogurt

Hey, dog owners on here. Am I able to lightly tap my puppy, if she misbehaves? I've tried positive reinforcement training, tried verbal training. She's not responding to either, not even with treats. I have no idea what else to do, and I don't really like physical discipline, as I don't want to be accused of abuse, which is why I'm asking y'all.
The Joker
02:53:24 Ari <3
Oh my gosh I just found freeze dried yogurt coated cranberries *-*
Wild River Run Farm
02:53:22 WRR
they are a bit difficult when you are first trying to figure it out but youll figure it out!

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Im writing a story (Most likely trash) December 19, 2020 08:38 PM

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This story is about a 12-year-old human-animal hybrid (called an Animorphi) named Auburn, her roommates, and an evil force planning to destroy the human population and let the Animorph rise to greatness. Here's the document, for those who wish to read:
(I changed the settings, it should work)
Any ideas? Comments? Constructive criticism?
PLEASE don't edit the document, leave comments instead!
Im writing a story (Most likely trash) December 20, 2020 02:34 PM

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hi! i didn't read it all through yet, but I definitely have some tips for you c:

-try not to infodump, especially at the beginning of the story. this can definitely deter readers and makes establishing a clear voice difficult. reveal things the POV character knows over time, or more subtly to make it feel more natural, especially when writing in first person.

-try to write numbers and such out in words, this makes the flow seem much less choppy. when listing things that the character is thinking about try to go train of thought and not do a)this and b) this. It doesn't flow very nicely

-with dialogue, especially when it's going fast-paced, you don't need to tag every line if it is clear who's talking! (ex. "woah," she said) it can slow things down and make the dialogue unrealistic.

that's all I have after kinda skimming the first few pages. You're doing a good job! Creating a consistent writing style just takes time! You'll get there eventually, keep it up <3
Im writing a story (Most likely trash) December 20, 2020 02:37 PM

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High Altitude Horses said:
hi! i didn't read it all through yet, but I definitely have some tips for you c:

-try not to infodump, especially at the beginning of the story. this can definitely deter readers and makes establishing a clear voice difficult. reveal things the POV character knows over time, or more subtly to make it feel more natural, especially when writing in first person.

-try to write numbers and such out in words, this makes the flow seem much less choppy. when listing things that the character is thinking about try to go train of thought and not do a)this and b) this. It doesn't flow very nicely

-with dialogue, especially when it's going fast-paced, you don't need to tag every line if it is clear who's talking! (ex. "woah," she said) it can slow things down and make the dialogue unrealistic.

that's all I have after kinda skimming the first few pages. You're doing a good job! Creating a consistent writing style just takes time! You'll get there eventually, keep it up <3


Thank you! I've been going through and deleting all the unnecessary information

Edited at December 20, 2020 02:38 PM by SweetFire Fields

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