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Nightfall Dressage
11:59:14 Witchy
Not too shabbty
W/W/W: 1
E/E/W: 1
W/E/E: 3
P/E/W: 1
P/W/E: 2
E/E/E: 12
S/W/E: 1
S/E/W: 1
W/P/S: 1
A/E/W: 8
S/P/E: 1
A/P/W: 2
W/S/A: 2
S/P/P: 3
Sub/P/W: 4
Sub/W/S: 1
Sub/S/W: 1
E/S/A: 1
S/S/S: 1
W/A/Sub: 11
E/A/Sub: 1
W/Sub/Sub: 16
Glacier Bay Cove
11:58:07 Glacier Kittens
Also curious about how she is doing, Witchy
Nightfall Dressage
11:57:00 Witchy
I wonder how Thunda is doing
Comanche Stables
11:28:31 
ohh okay thank you!
Bignus Bognus
11:26:22 literally bingus
The full watch list report is a premium feature, but free stables can see who they're watching through the breeding center > match maker :)
Comanche Stables
11:24:53 
how do you see the horses your watching?
Bignus Bognus
11:22:44 literally bingus
hmm yeah, I guess sven is the only way to get both the int and spd ^^;

watch me get another roan SH colt though lol
The Undercity
11:21:05 Dory
I mean the sven would cover all stats and the med looks like it would only cover 1 of the stats that are pretty low
Nightingales Ridge
11:17:19 𔓘 Issy
Bingus...hmmm that int is pretty low
Nightingales Ridge
11:10:21 𔓘 Issy
Oohhhhh okay buzzy I didn't know that
Bignus Bognus
11:03:31 literally bingus
They don't match, but the colour potential is way too tempting lmao... -HEE Click-
XC med or sven?
ShiningStar Stables
10:59:53 Chey / Star
Apr 8, 2026 22:58:16 You entered 491 horses into reg. shows for 459600.

My fingers are so happy to be done lol
full moon
10:56:44 usagi
(its boom baby)
full moon
10:56:31 usagi
my stallion is featured!
full moon
10:41:41 usagi
thanks!
full moon
10:41:36 usagi
yes
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:29:15 Gladius
nice catch too!
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:28:56 Gladius
issy - raptor is just another name for the classification of predatory birds, such as the ones void said

usagi - oh man that's awesome. who needs a guard dog when you have a horse xD
full moon
10:25:11 usagi
2nd?!! wow!!
-HEE Click-
The Old Gods
10:22:59 Void Malign
owls, hawks, and eagles are considered raptors

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Nightfall Dressage
11:59:14 Witchy
Not too shabbty
W/W/W: 1
E/E/W: 1
W/E/E: 3
P/E/W: 1
P/W/E: 2
E/E/E: 12
S/W/E: 1
S/E/W: 1
W/P/S: 1
A/E/W: 8
S/P/E: 1
A/P/W: 2
W/S/A: 2
S/P/P: 3
Sub/P/W: 4
Sub/W/S: 1
Sub/S/W: 1
E/S/A: 1
S/S/S: 1
W/A/Sub: 11
E/A/Sub: 1
W/Sub/Sub: 16
Glacier Bay Cove
11:58:07 Glacier Kittens
Also curious about how she is doing, Witchy
Nightfall Dressage
11:57:00 Witchy
I wonder how Thunda is doing
Comanche Stables
11:28:31 
ohh okay thank you!
Bignus Bognus
11:26:22 literally bingus
The full watch list report is a premium feature, but free stables can see who they're watching through the breeding center > match maker :)
Comanche Stables
11:24:53 
how do you see the horses your watching?
Bignus Bognus
11:22:44 literally bingus
hmm yeah, I guess sven is the only way to get both the int and spd ^^;

watch me get another roan SH colt though lol
The Undercity
11:21:05 Dory
I mean the sven would cover all stats and the med looks like it would only cover 1 of the stats that are pretty low
Nightingales Ridge
11:17:19 𔓘 Issy
Bingus...hmmm that int is pretty low
Nightingales Ridge
11:10:21 𔓘 Issy
Oohhhhh okay buzzy I didn't know that
Bignus Bognus
11:03:31 literally bingus
They don't match, but the colour potential is way too tempting lmao... -HEE Click-
XC med or sven?
ShiningStar Stables
10:59:53 Chey / Star
Apr 8, 2026 22:58:16 You entered 491 horses into reg. shows for 459600.

My fingers are so happy to be done lol
full moon
10:56:44 usagi
(its boom baby)
full moon
10:56:31 usagi
my stallion is featured!
full moon
10:41:41 usagi
thanks!
full moon
10:41:36 usagi
yes
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:29:15 Gladius
nice catch too!
Gaelic Gladiacres
10:28:56 Gladius
issy - raptor is just another name for the classification of predatory birds, such as the ones void said

usagi - oh man that's awesome. who needs a guard dog when you have a horse xD
full moon
10:25:11 usagi
2nd?!! wow!!
-HEE Click-
The Old Gods
10:22:59 Void Malign
owls, hawks, and eagles are considered raptors

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Im writing a story (Most likely trash) December 19, 2020 08:38 PM

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This story is about a 12-year-old human-animal hybrid (called an Animorphi) named Auburn, her roommates, and an evil force planning to destroy the human population and let the Animorph rise to greatness. Here's the document, for those who wish to read:
(I changed the settings, it should work)
Any ideas? Comments? Constructive criticism?
PLEASE don't edit the document, leave comments instead!
Im writing a story (Most likely trash) December 20, 2020 02:34 PM

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hi! i didn't read it all through yet, but I definitely have some tips for you c:

-try not to infodump, especially at the beginning of the story. this can definitely deter readers and makes establishing a clear voice difficult. reveal things the POV character knows over time, or more subtly to make it feel more natural, especially when writing in first person.

-try to write numbers and such out in words, this makes the flow seem much less choppy. when listing things that the character is thinking about try to go train of thought and not do a)this and b) this. It doesn't flow very nicely

-with dialogue, especially when it's going fast-paced, you don't need to tag every line if it is clear who's talking! (ex. "woah," she said) it can slow things down and make the dialogue unrealistic.

that's all I have after kinda skimming the first few pages. You're doing a good job! Creating a consistent writing style just takes time! You'll get there eventually, keep it up <3
Im writing a story (Most likely trash) December 20, 2020 02:37 PM

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High Altitude Horses said:
hi! i didn't read it all through yet, but I definitely have some tips for you c:

-try not to infodump, especially at the beginning of the story. this can definitely deter readers and makes establishing a clear voice difficult. reveal things the POV character knows over time, or more subtly to make it feel more natural, especially when writing in first person.

-try to write numbers and such out in words, this makes the flow seem much less choppy. when listing things that the character is thinking about try to go train of thought and not do a)this and b) this. It doesn't flow very nicely

-with dialogue, especially when it's going fast-paced, you don't need to tag every line if it is clear who's talking! (ex. "woah," she said) it can slow things down and make the dialogue unrealistic.

that's all I have after kinda skimming the first few pages. You're doing a good job! Creating a consistent writing style just takes time! You'll get there eventually, keep it up <3


Thank you! I've been going through and deleting all the unnecessary information

Edited at December 20, 2020 02:38 PM by SweetFire Fields

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