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Indiana Peaches
08:06:18 Indi
I do this thing where I paste the message in an old open tab that is in sales chat, but something about logging in in a new tab switches the old one to main chat when it refreshes & posts, so I need to stop doing that lol
Autumn Leaf
08:05:59 Win | 🪽
Snitch !

How are you?
Indiana Peaches
08:04:33 Indi
I see that now lol. Sorry guys.
Snitches' Stitches
08:03:52 Snitch
Indi
wrong chat lol
Autumn Leaf
08:00:16 Win | 🪽
Angel

*offers her a chip*
Angels angels
07:56:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have classes so I can't get food for another 4.5 hours
Autumn Leaf
07:55:31 Win | 🪽
Angel

Same. I hadn't had a meal since yesterday. Just grabbing my chips currently
Angels angels
07:54:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Hungry
Crestwood Eq.
07:45:38 Ivy / poison ivy
hi lily
Crestwood Eq.
07:44:59 Ivy / poison ivy
i use gifyu, hazel
Glowing Pines
07:34:15 Howl | Hazel
Ohh okay. I'll try that
And thank you both ^^
Alpine Acres
07:21:18 Lily/Alpine
Hazel
just remember that postimages is no longer allowed <3
Amethyst Ranch
07:15:02 Echo <3
When you copy the link, you need to click copy image address and then put that link in <3
Crestwood Eq.
07:14:45 Ivy / poison ivy
god i get too attached to my horses
Glowing Pines
07:12:45 Howl | Hazel
Anyone know how to post an image in a thread? I see the insert and then image part, but I can't figure out what to do for the link. I have a link from postimg but I don't know if I just put that in the box that says source or if I'm doing it wrong.
Minerva
06:09:19 Min
Angel- Im more pleased with the EEE with W bravery to be honest haha!! Didnt get the quest done but ive no complaints
Angels angels
05:58:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Roll over is om the first of every month.. and a new day starts at midnight GT. Some codes like shows don't run until like 2 am though
Jezarae
05:57:33 
It crashed for me. I wondered if it was roll over or something. Because I have no idea when this site starts the n3w day
Angels angels
05:55:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Min
Oh the EWE is nice though *-*
Calela Eventing
05:54:07 Cali
Server keeps crashing for me? Anyone else?

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Indiana Peaches
08:06:18 Indi
I do this thing where I paste the message in an old open tab that is in sales chat, but something about logging in in a new tab switches the old one to main chat when it refreshes & posts, so I need to stop doing that lol
Autumn Leaf
08:05:59 Win | 🪽
Snitch !

How are you?
Indiana Peaches
08:04:33 Indi
I see that now lol. Sorry guys.
Snitches' Stitches
08:03:52 Snitch
Indi
wrong chat lol
Autumn Leaf
08:00:16 Win | 🪽
Angel

*offers her a chip*
Angels angels
07:56:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have classes so I can't get food for another 4.5 hours
Autumn Leaf
07:55:31 Win | 🪽
Angel

Same. I hadn't had a meal since yesterday. Just grabbing my chips currently
Angels angels
07:54:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Hungry
Crestwood Eq.
07:45:38 Ivy / poison ivy
hi lily
Crestwood Eq.
07:44:59 Ivy / poison ivy
i use gifyu, hazel
Glowing Pines
07:34:15 Howl | Hazel
Ohh okay. I'll try that
And thank you both ^^
Alpine Acres
07:21:18 Lily/Alpine
Hazel
just remember that postimages is no longer allowed <3
Amethyst Ranch
07:15:02 Echo <3
When you copy the link, you need to click copy image address and then put that link in <3
Crestwood Eq.
07:14:45 Ivy / poison ivy
god i get too attached to my horses
Glowing Pines
07:12:45 Howl | Hazel
Anyone know how to post an image in a thread? I see the insert and then image part, but I can't figure out what to do for the link. I have a link from postimg but I don't know if I just put that in the box that says source or if I'm doing it wrong.
Minerva
06:09:19 Min
Angel- Im more pleased with the EEE with W bravery to be honest haha!! Didnt get the quest done but ive no complaints
Angels angels
05:58:59 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Roll over is om the first of every month.. and a new day starts at midnight GT. Some codes like shows don't run until like 2 am though
Jezarae
05:57:33 
It crashed for me. I wondered if it was roll over or something. Because I have no idea when this site starts the n3w day
Angels angels
05:55:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Min
Oh the EWE is nice though *-*
Calela Eventing
05:54:07 Cali
Server keeps crashing for me? Anyone else?

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I'm Writing a Thing December 17, 2020 04:30 PM


TenaciTea
 
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For those of you who don't know me, hi. I exist. *waves awkwardly*
I wrote a story last summer, submitted it to an anthology, and it got published (I have a link to the google doc containing that short story on my profile page :D)
This year, I wrote something in a free write for AP Literature that I've decided is an idea worth exploring. The free write itself is in my blog somewhere, in case you want to check it out (it's not polished at all)
So I decided- I'm going to write a medium length story about it!
As of this post:
-I haven't exactly settled on the plot. There are a handful of concrete ideas I have picked out, and they have to do with making the story as eerie as possible.
-Characters I am still working on.
-I've got a kind of "prologue" finished, and I would love any thoughts or insight into what I've done so far. Critique is welcome. As are questions.
This is the link to what I've got so far:
(the name is not final and I am open to suggestions)
I'm Writing a Thing December 17, 2020 04:41 PM


Lucky Ranch
 
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O.O I exist too. Omg-
I'm Writing a Thing December 17, 2020 04:53 PM


Savannah Stables
 
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O i exist too
I'm Writing a Thing December 17, 2020 05:43 PM

Former Stable
 
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Hey, Tea! Love the title, already has me thinking "What in the world?"
Awesome job!
I'm Writing a Thing December 17, 2020 09:37 PM


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SweetFire Fields said:
Hey, Tea! Love the title, already has me thinking "What in the world?"
Awesome job!


I aspire to inspire confused horror. :D
I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 12:44 PM


Darkside Dreams
 
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Oh my god I LOVE IT.
I don't really have any critiques, you're doing great so far! Honestly for your first draft, get words on paper and worry about grammar and word choice later. Write the story. Write it your way. After that's finished, take a step back and look at it objectively. Get some other people to read it and suggest, read it out loud, and that's when you get the flamethrowers out and burn the thing to pieces before stitching it back together into a final draft.
Tl;dr: write the damn thing and edit it into a real book later.

It looks awesome so far!

I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 12:46 PM


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Sunshine Jumpers said:
Oh my god I LOVE IT.
I don't really have any critiques, you're doing great so far! Honestly for your first draft, get words on paper and worry about grammar and word choice later. Write the story. Write it your way. After that's finished, take a step back and look at it objectively. Get some other people to read it and suggest, read it out loud, and that's when you get the flamethrowers out and burn the thing to pieces before stitching it back together into a final draft.
Tl;dr: write the damn thing and edit it into a real book later.

It looks awesome so far!



Thank you! :D
I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 12:53 PM


Broadway
 
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That was amazing! The word choice is perfect and really gets the story across well! You have to let us know when this is finished because it is something I would love to read!
I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 01:01 PM


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Birch Wood Barns said:
That was amazing! The word choice is perfect and really gets the story across well! You have to let us know when this is finished because it is something I would love to read!


Aww thank you!
I'm glad you all seem to like my elevator murder weirdness xD
I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:30 PM

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If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.


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