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Transformers Acres
12:53:16 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

I'll try it. :)
DSD Training Center
12:53:13 Spring <3
Geek,
no prob! :)
DSD Training Center
12:52:54 Spring <3
And I mean like just a tiny bit.
Transformers Acres
12:52:51 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Ally

Yeah, it didn't work.

Spring

I'll try it. Thanks. :)
DSD Training Center
12:52:01 Spring <3
Geek,
You could try like a spray bottle with water. Just spray her in the face. It worked at least on a nasty wether goat we had bc he kept headbutting. lol.
MakeEm Fancy
12:51:16 Ally 💜
Have you tried saying no and redirecting her with a toy? That seems to help with my puppy
Transformers Acres
12:49:41 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

Yeah. And I don't want to have to use physical discipline, but she's not responsive to verbal cues.
Aura Show Horses
12:48:38 pea/ brindle buddie
Hmmm
DSD Training Center
12:48:04 Spring <3
Geek,
Yikes.
Transformers Acres
12:47:30 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

I can't get her to stop either. :/
DSD Training Center
12:46:47 Spring <3
Geek,
Oh, gosh. I'm lucky I've never had a dog that chewed. Though, they've had their other problems.
Quartz Hill
12:46:24 
When will the next capture party be?
Transformers Acres
12:45:36 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

Oh Molly's the sweetest. I just have issues with her biting me during playtime, and her chewing my chargers. She chewed five of my brand new chargers, I'm on my last one.
DSD Training Center
12:42:34 Spring <3
Geek,
aww they sound sweet. My great pyr x is the goofiest guy. He's huge, just turned 7 a month ago, and still acts like a puppy some days. We like to call him a Funny looking pointer bc once a guy pointed that out and it just stuck. He really does look like a pointer, though, minus the skin and jowls
Fantasy Horses
12:40:57 Fanta | Mort
aloha I'm back
Transformers Acres
12:39:59 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Glacier

Agreed. I miss my dead cats. :(
Transformers Acres
12:39:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

I agree. We once had some mixed dog that my grandpa took in, named Teddy Bear. Loveable goof, springs for legs. He died at our old house, and got buried outside my bedroom window. He was just the most loveable guy.

They also had a German Shepherd mixed with something else, named Roscoe. Friendliest dog, except for when he was eating. He got pretty old, we had to put him down.
MakeEm Fancy
12:39:33 Ally 💜
I have a black lab mix :) he is so funny.
DSD Training Center
12:39:03 Spring <3
Geek,
Beagles are really sweet.
Glacier Bay Cove
12:38:54 Glacier Kittens
And some cats can never be replaced either

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Transformers Acres
12:53:16 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

I'll try it. :)
DSD Training Center
12:53:13 Spring <3
Geek,
no prob! :)
DSD Training Center
12:52:54 Spring <3
And I mean like just a tiny bit.
Transformers Acres
12:52:51 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Ally

Yeah, it didn't work.

Spring

I'll try it. Thanks. :)
DSD Training Center
12:52:01 Spring <3
Geek,
You could try like a spray bottle with water. Just spray her in the face. It worked at least on a nasty wether goat we had bc he kept headbutting. lol.
MakeEm Fancy
12:51:16 Ally 💜
Have you tried saying no and redirecting her with a toy? That seems to help with my puppy
Transformers Acres
12:49:41 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

Yeah. And I don't want to have to use physical discipline, but she's not responsive to verbal cues.
Aura Show Horses
12:48:38 pea/ brindle buddie
Hmmm
DSD Training Center
12:48:04 Spring <3
Geek,
Yikes.
Transformers Acres
12:47:30 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

I can't get her to stop either. :/
DSD Training Center
12:46:47 Spring <3
Geek,
Oh, gosh. I'm lucky I've never had a dog that chewed. Though, they've had their other problems.
Quartz Hill
12:46:24 
When will the next capture party be?
Transformers Acres
12:45:36 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

Oh Molly's the sweetest. I just have issues with her biting me during playtime, and her chewing my chargers. She chewed five of my brand new chargers, I'm on my last one.
DSD Training Center
12:42:34 Spring <3
Geek,
aww they sound sweet. My great pyr x is the goofiest guy. He's huge, just turned 7 a month ago, and still acts like a puppy some days. We like to call him a Funny looking pointer bc once a guy pointed that out and it just stuck. He really does look like a pointer, though, minus the skin and jowls
Fantasy Horses
12:40:57 Fanta | Mort
aloha I'm back
Transformers Acres
12:39:59 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Glacier

Agreed. I miss my dead cats. :(
Transformers Acres
12:39:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Spring

I agree. We once had some mixed dog that my grandpa took in, named Teddy Bear. Loveable goof, springs for legs. He died at our old house, and got buried outside my bedroom window. He was just the most loveable guy.

They also had a German Shepherd mixed with something else, named Roscoe. Friendliest dog, except for when he was eating. He got pretty old, we had to put him down.
MakeEm Fancy
12:39:33 Ally 💜
I have a black lab mix :) he is so funny.
DSD Training Center
12:39:03 Spring <3
Geek,
Beagles are really sweet.
Glacier Bay Cove
12:38:54 Glacier Kittens
And some cats can never be replaced either

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   Evitas Story thread (THIS is where the story is) December 6, 2020 02:06 PM


Midnight Eclipse
 
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So if you haven't read the other thread I recommend doing that first it will help you understand the story and my ideas and you can give me feed back and ideas there!!!
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PLEASE NO POSTING ON HERE!!! THIS IS WHERE THE STORY IM WRITING IS AND I DONT WANT OTHERS POSTING ON THIS THREAD. IF YOU HAVE AN IDEA GO TO THE OTHER THREAD PLEASE!!!
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So yes this is where the magic will be! AGAIN NO POSTING ON HERE PLEASE. SAVE THAT FOR THE OTHER THREAD
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I think I may be creating a Rp off of this but still not sure go to other thread for more info.
Every post will be a chapter and maybe sorter or longer then the last all depends on how much time and ideas I have :)
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THE CHARECTERS AND THERE LOOKS ARE IN THE OTHER THREAD AS WELL :) (I am hosting a contest for people to post pictures (STOCK or HEE) of what they think the characters should look like, im also working on there personalitys)
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Feedback/suggestion threadd: ~Clicky~
Rp sign ups thread:!CLICKY!
Contest Thread: CLICKY DA LINKY
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Idea people:
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{THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR READING AND FEED BACK ON THE OTHER THREAD}

Edited at December 7, 2020 06:17 PM by Midnight Eclipse
   Evitas Story thread (THIS is where the story is) December 6, 2020 10:48 PM


Midnight Eclipse
 
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Chapter one
Bullet and Harper
She was nursing peacefully when she felt something knock into her side, she stoped and looked over and saw her older brother Arrow. She looked at him confused then went back to nursing just to have him say "Follow me Evita" she looked at him confused "why? I'm hungry" she complained. He pinned his ears and looked behind him obviously anxious and aware of something she didn't. "Just follow me please" she sighed and turned fully towards him, she nuzzled her mom and followed after him in a rush. She heard her mom nicker to the both of them so she turned and gave a whinny of good bye then followed after arrow.
Arrow always had that big brother personality and always did his best to protect her and make sure she was happy. Him being the oldest foal in the "herd", if you could even call what they lived in a herd. There was just two mares, Harper and Zala, and the three foals, Arrow her and Sunny, the rest of them were stallions and if seemed more stallions were coming and some always leaving.
Harper usually couldn't of had a care in the world for anyone or anything, everyone knew she hated staying in the "herd" but that confused Evita. She didn't know why Harper never left, she thinks it's cause of her and Arrow. Even though arrow was old enough to be on his own at 1 1/2 she still always made time for him. She was still only 4 months old so she stayed with her a lot more but didn't care that arrow was there, she being with her brother.
She followed after arrow not paying attention until she ran into something. She shook herself off then look up and saw Arrow standing tall with his neck arched and chest puffed, his ears were pinned and he was giving a hard glare to their father who stood in front of them. She quickly stood and got behind arrow so she was just peaking out from behind him, she was still only 4 months old so she knew she was no match for her ful-grown father. She watched as Arrow and Bullet had a mini stare down, with one last hard look from bullet he walked right past them and towards their mom.
She rushed to turn around and see what was going on but Arrow jumped to stand in her way. She didnt know what was going on only thier father was mad and going towards there mom, and she didnt like it. She kept trying to get around arrow but he wouldnt move out of the way! "Arrow move! I want to go to mom! Move!" she said but he just stayed calm and blocking her way. The two of them both froze when they head a shrill pain-filled whinny come from the direction of there mother and father. Arrow looked behind him then turned back to Evita and said, "Lets go"
He gave her a nip on the withers and she turned around and started moving in the direction they had been going. She would feel a bump or nip on the rump every now and then to remind her too keep moving. As they were walking they heard two sets of hooves running off somewhere, one was louder and belonged to a bigger horse and the other ones softer and lighter. She wanted to turn around and run back to her mom but knew Arrow wouldn't let her so she kept moving.
At one point Arrow stoped onve they were out of view and hearing range of the "herd". Arrow looked at a bush and said "hide in the bush, stay down and low until I come back for you, Okay?" she nodded and crawled into the bush and laid down. She watched as Arrow turned and took off galloping back towards the group. She still had no clue what was going on other then she needed to stay in the bush and wait for Arrow to come back.

Edited at December 7, 2020 11:18 AM by Shadow Eclipse

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