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MakeEm Fancy
11:21:34 Ally 💜
Geld or keep for quests?
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Glacier Bay Cove
11:20:54 Arctic Katz
Hummer, I would
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:32 Bird
I'm seriously ready to cut off contact with my brother after hearing this.
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:09 Bird
It did deserve better. My mom says it is the girlfriend's fault, but I think my brother is just as much as fault since he is the one who started locking him in a room in the first place.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:19:17 Arctic Katz
SAY WHAT, now I am PISSED, the cat didn't deserve that, it deserves better
Hummingbird Meadows
11:17:53 Bird
I'm pissed. Earlier I mentioned that my brother broke up with his girlfriend and that my Mom was bringing his cat home so we could rehome it. Turns out the thing has been getting neglected. It was locked in a room with little food and water and no litter box.
Hyrule Camp
11:17:41 Ryan
RP anyone pm me
Glacier Bay Cove
11:17:23 Arctic Katz
Okay I will be saving up for the October capture party
Cadence Farms
11:16:44 evebot
This month, then October.
KPH Equestrian
11:16:17 Rapcoon | Jester
glacier
next one's in 2 weeks, the one after is in october :)
Glacier Bay Cove
11:11:50 Arctic Katz
Will the next capture party be in November or December
Glacier Bay Cove
11:10:34 Arctic Katz
Okay capture party broke, looks like I will be sitting in the bleachers this time
MC Ace
11:08:04 McFossil
Oh I feel that. I was gone for a few years. Happy to be back
The_MaD_HaTtEr
10:56:35 
ive been awol on this site for so long just checking in enough to keep my accounts open im looking forward to trying to get back into it.
MC Ace
10:55:51 McFossil
Nice! Always a good feeling getting that upgrade
The_MaD_HaTtEr
10:51:24 
all my accounts are broke but hopefully by the morning all will have their upgrades
MC Ace
10:38:44 McFossil
Thanks! We are having a great time. This trip kinda messed up my RO. I missed a few straws and picked them up late and missed some futurity babies, but I’ll be back at it again for next year 🥳
Cadence Farms
10:36:38 evebot
Wow! That sounds amazing! I know you will have a blast. Camping is so fun.
MC Ace
10:35:34 McFossil
Yes Ma’m taking out the new to us RV for its first trip. You know the traditional “Hey Mom and Dad let me trial run this new one for you before you guys go on a trip.”

Yeah we made it. Now me and my cousin fixed the breaker issue for tonight, but we’ll actually fix it tomorrow morning when all the components cool off.
Cadence Farms
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MakeEm Fancy
11:21:34 Ally 💜
Geld or keep for quests?
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
11:20:54 Arctic Katz
Hummer, I would
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:32 Bird
I'm seriously ready to cut off contact with my brother after hearing this.
Hummingbird Meadows
11:20:09 Bird
It did deserve better. My mom says it is the girlfriend's fault, but I think my brother is just as much as fault since he is the one who started locking him in a room in the first place.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:19:17 Arctic Katz
SAY WHAT, now I am PISSED, the cat didn't deserve that, it deserves better
Hummingbird Meadows
11:17:53 Bird
I'm pissed. Earlier I mentioned that my brother broke up with his girlfriend and that my Mom was bringing his cat home so we could rehome it. Turns out the thing has been getting neglected. It was locked in a room with little food and water and no litter box.
Hyrule Camp
11:17:41 Ryan
RP anyone pm me
Glacier Bay Cove
11:17:23 Arctic Katz
Okay I will be saving up for the October capture party
Cadence Farms
11:16:44 evebot
This month, then October.
KPH Equestrian
11:16:17 Rapcoon | Jester
glacier
next one's in 2 weeks, the one after is in october :)
Glacier Bay Cove
11:11:50 Arctic Katz
Will the next capture party be in November or December
Glacier Bay Cove
11:10:34 Arctic Katz
Okay capture party broke, looks like I will be sitting in the bleachers this time
MC Ace
11:08:04 McFossil
Oh I feel that. I was gone for a few years. Happy to be back
The_MaD_HaTtEr
10:56:35 
ive been awol on this site for so long just checking in enough to keep my accounts open im looking forward to trying to get back into it.
MC Ace
10:55:51 McFossil
Nice! Always a good feeling getting that upgrade
The_MaD_HaTtEr
10:51:24 
all my accounts are broke but hopefully by the morning all will have their upgrades
MC Ace
10:38:44 McFossil
Thanks! We are having a great time. This trip kinda messed up my RO. I missed a few straws and picked them up late and missed some futurity babies, but I’ll be back at it again for next year 🥳
Cadence Farms
10:36:38 evebot
Wow! That sounds amazing! I know you will have a blast. Camping is so fun.
MC Ace
10:35:34 McFossil
Yes Ma’m taking out the new to us RV for its first trip. You know the traditional “Hey Mom and Dad let me trial run this new one for you before you guys go on a trip.”

Yeah we made it. Now me and my cousin fixed the breaker issue for tonight, but we’ll actually fix it tomorrow morning when all the components cool off.
Cadence Farms
10:34:53 evebot
Thanks!

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Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 04:56 AM


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Hello Writers of HEE,

I kinda had this idea after going on a teen fiction reading spree. As a reader or a writer, what overused tropes, stereotypes or anything you find commonly appearing in fiction works annoy the hell out of you?

Mine:
Teen main characters with ridiculous names (with the exception of fantasy characters) or normal names that are just spelt differently. Example; Pietyr (Peter. It's spelt Peter for godsake). Now, this is all well and good if the character is very well written, dimensional and dynamic, however, if a name is unique with the sole purpose of emphasising MY CHARACTER IS UNIQUE it makes me not like said character. They're usually Mary Sue characters too.

Mary Sue characters. Need I say more?

I'll probably add more later lol.

I want to hear your pet peeves! Share your woes!
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:00 AM


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Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:07 AM


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Moonlight Stud said:
Oh I've got a few but the ones that I hate the most are love triangles and the always cringey moment when the main character is introduced to the supernatural / magic world.

Love triangles with a "average", "boring" teen girl in between two of the sexiest boys on the planet.

Or, poor romance subplots wherein which the love interest is very clearly a toxic person, but the writer is attempting to encourage us to like them.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 05:23 AM


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Common in fan fiction:

Original character (usually female), is either tough as nails, non nonsense badass who inexplicably falls for Hot Canon Guy (HCG) and becomes a gushy, mess in a complete shift in personality.

Original Character (usually female), is horrible abused, meek, and shy. Only HCG can bring her out of her shell.

Original Character is the sister/daughter/cousin/adopted daughter of Important Canon Character (ICC), has special powers out the bum, and is currently being lusted over HCG1 and HCG2, but is actually interested in HCG3 which eventually causes a fight between all three (even if said 3 are the bestest of friends, canonly). Did I mention she's best friends since childhood with ICC2?

I wish I could slam male OC characters but they're basically unicorns in the fandoms I exist in. I've literally seen one and the story was honestly just..."Meh".

Which brings me to the Reader Insert, first person, type stories. They're all universally bad if they're not written as a sort of character's recollection/diary.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 06:35 AM

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First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 09:44 AM


FirstLightFarms

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Mary Sues that are clumsy- no, your otherwise perfect character who trips a lot is not "well rounded" or "flawed", she's annoying.
Also, super angsty brooding bad boys who are super great fighters. Bonus points if it's a male writer- just go ahead and say it's a self insert. We know you wish you were badass.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 14, 2019 08:59 PM


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When people write with text speak or use the wrong form of you, there, etc excessively

Ex: person 1: "I hope u had a gr8 day"
person 2: "thx u to"
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:14 PM


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I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 15, 2019 07:34 PM


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Equine Stables said:
I hate it when the main character falls in love with someone who everyone else avoids because he is gloomy, sarcastic, and tough, and the main character is the only one that knows his "good" side.


Hilariously, that's an entirely plausible thing. People aren't "what you see is what you get".
Writing Pet Peeves And Exasperating Tropes November 17, 2019 11:02 AM

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Kirralee said:
First person stories annoy me or stories that switch between third and first person

That's just not good writing. XD

I think one of my biggest pet peeves is when the character just completely does a personality 180 when falling in love with someone.

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