This story that I am writing is going off of a dream I recently had. The editing/format is terrible because I am currently trying to get out what I remember from the dream before I forget, so please excuse that, but please give me some suggestions on it. Please bear in mind that I am still writing it. Link to the story https://docs.google.com/document/d/1unYXIyv7W4GA0cqo5pRkaqGswAQnJE8Ty0VxCoUydFQ/edit