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Gemstone Stable
08:31:31 Snow❆Gem
@skid

Yup. ;P

@hannah

No shopping for you! hehe!
The Lone Star
08:30:48 
Oh wow. I skipped the "rate a world class bravery" quest because I was like there's no way my leftover captures from capture day have world class. Skipped it, continued to bravery rate and.. the next one is world class.
Deez Nuts Stables
08:30:21 hannah
Transferred lots of ebs to savings and currently chuckling at the humble 4 ebs I have out
SKIBIDITOILETIDK
08:30:09 
your tablet is warm
Snow Stable
08:23:14 Snow❆Gem
@jericho

Its not a tablet, its a heating pad...
Jericho Stables
08:20:34 
Why is it every time I go to do art I have a cat insist on laying down on my tablet?
DearBorn Ranch
08:19:18 Louise
if this guy is any good I will be shocked
-HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
08:13:07 Em
Can this cough please go away my throat is raw
MakeEm Fancy
08:09:58 Ally 💜
My favorite RO baby
-HEE Click-
Looking Glass Stable
08:06:29 IA Glass 👋
Thats how I play as well Opal (: its quite peaceful ♡
Tamarack Mountain
08:00:12 Opal
I guess I am done trying to figure out how to get top LB horses, going to be playing in my own sandbox over here just to pass time in the morning while I drink my coffee
Embervale Acres
07:57:50 Solar/Ria
RF also sucks ass lol
Embervale Acres
07:54:36 Solar/Ria
Opal
Ah...your freshie?
Minerva
07:51:49 Min
-HEE Click-

Ahh good- another reminder why self control is a good idea
Tamarack Mountain
07:50:19 Opal
evidently fantastic training means nothing
Embervale Acres
07:49:24 Solar/Ria
Yeah...lately I've had luck with getting WWWs, but training wise they've been lacking. I feel like my AAs are just getting weaker
DearBorn Ranch
07:48:27 Louise
she just runs through fences instead of jumping lol
-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
07:43:47 Snow❆Gem
I'll be back in a bit...
Gemstone Stable
07:43:23 Snow❆Gem
I did get a WWW filly, but she flopped in training. >.<
Gemstone Stable
07:42:56 Snow❆Gem
@storm

I feel you. That's my RID program...

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Gemstone Stable
08:31:31 Snow❆Gem
@skid

Yup. ;P

@hannah

No shopping for you! hehe!
The Lone Star
08:30:48 
Oh wow. I skipped the "rate a world class bravery" quest because I was like there's no way my leftover captures from capture day have world class. Skipped it, continued to bravery rate and.. the next one is world class.
Deez Nuts Stables
08:30:21 hannah
Transferred lots of ebs to savings and currently chuckling at the humble 4 ebs I have out
SKIBIDITOILETIDK
08:30:09 
your tablet is warm
Snow Stable
08:23:14 Snow❆Gem
@jericho

Its not a tablet, its a heating pad...
Jericho Stables
08:20:34 
Why is it every time I go to do art I have a cat insist on laying down on my tablet?
DearBorn Ranch
08:19:18 Louise
if this guy is any good I will be shocked
-HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
08:13:07 Em
Can this cough please go away my throat is raw
MakeEm Fancy
08:09:58 Ally 💜
My favorite RO baby
-HEE Click-
Looking Glass Stable
08:06:29 IA Glass 👋
Thats how I play as well Opal (: its quite peaceful ♡
Tamarack Mountain
08:00:12 Opal
I guess I am done trying to figure out how to get top LB horses, going to be playing in my own sandbox over here just to pass time in the morning while I drink my coffee
Embervale Acres
07:57:50 Solar/Ria
RF also sucks ass lol
Embervale Acres
07:54:36 Solar/Ria
Opal
Ah...your freshie?
Minerva
07:51:49 Min
-HEE Click-

Ahh good- another reminder why self control is a good idea
Tamarack Mountain
07:50:19 Opal
evidently fantastic training means nothing
Embervale Acres
07:49:24 Solar/Ria
Yeah...lately I've had luck with getting WWWs, but training wise they've been lacking. I feel like my AAs are just getting weaker
DearBorn Ranch
07:48:27 Louise
she just runs through fences instead of jumping lol
-HEE Click-
Gemstone Stable
07:43:47 Snow❆Gem
I'll be back in a bit...
Gemstone Stable
07:43:23 Snow❆Gem
I did get a WWW filly, but she flopped in training. >.<
Gemstone Stable
07:42:56 Snow❆Gem
@storm

I feel you. That's my RID program...

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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