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Arvalon Studs
04:30:28 Tosk's KNN
And she's Prlprl!!
Wolf Dancer
04:30:25 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tosk
Holy! You could do AD+B with her!!! I have a WWE-W KNN straw from a while back lol
Arvalon Studs
04:29:38 Tosk's KNN
Ohhhh the wild WWW is WC bravery!
Wolf Dancer
04:29:13 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tosk
I know lol glad I listened to you lol
Arvalon Studs
04:28:43 Tosk's KNN
I saw that one! Out of the mare you wanted to cancel :P
Narran Park
04:28:37 Sting
I am waiting on a straw for a top match…1st one was an EEE though
Wolf Dancer
04:27:34 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tosk
Lol my KNN matches went to heck here lol I did get a WWW KNN last RO though so I'm happy about that lol
Arvalon Studs
04:27:28 Tosk's KNN
I had the issue on most accounts too :/
ZequineZ
04:27:22 ZEZ - ZZ
Yeah after last RO I only did my 3 EWW mares and a bravery one and I’m honestly tempted to just not breed the rest myself
Arvalon Studs
04:27:10 Tosk's KNN
7 wild WWW KNN so far.
Fairytale Paints
04:27:02 Im Elf
Court
Ouch
I'm sorry
Stone Haven Farm
04:26:38 Court
Not a single match went well .___.
Narran Park
04:25:31 Sting
I am so so sorry Court!
Seems like quite a few had that issue. Even someone had a P somewhere!
Arvalon Studs
04:25:27 Tosk's KNN
Kind of, when it comes to KNN :P
Wolf Dancer
04:24:49 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Dang Tosk! I can see you still have your capture luck lol
Stone Haven Farm
04:24:44 Court
-HEE Click- never wasting money on stupid svens again
Skye's Paradise
04:18:45 Pickle
Congrats Tosk!
Arvalon Studs
04:18:35 Tosk's KNN
Didn't expect to capture a WWW today.
Shadowscape Eventing
04:18:21 Shadow/Bluey
-HEE Click-

Finally my WWW stallion gave me a WWW
Drafty Acres
04:18:12 Mo
Nice one Tosk!!

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Arvalon Studs
04:30:28 Tosk's KNN
And she's Prlprl!!
Wolf Dancer
04:30:25 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tosk
Holy! You could do AD+B with her!!! I have a WWE-W KNN straw from a while back lol
Arvalon Studs
04:29:38 Tosk's KNN
Ohhhh the wild WWW is WC bravery!
Wolf Dancer
04:29:13 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tosk
I know lol glad I listened to you lol
Arvalon Studs
04:28:43 Tosk's KNN
I saw that one! Out of the mare you wanted to cancel :P
Narran Park
04:28:37 Sting
I am waiting on a straw for a top match…1st one was an EEE though
Wolf Dancer
04:27:34 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Tosk
Lol my KNN matches went to heck here lol I did get a WWW KNN last RO though so I'm happy about that lol
Arvalon Studs
04:27:28 Tosk's KNN
I had the issue on most accounts too :/
ZequineZ
04:27:22 ZEZ - ZZ
Yeah after last RO I only did my 3 EWW mares and a bravery one and I’m honestly tempted to just not breed the rest myself
Arvalon Studs
04:27:10 Tosk's KNN
7 wild WWW KNN so far.
Fairytale Paints
04:27:02 Im Elf
Court
Ouch
I'm sorry
Stone Haven Farm
04:26:38 Court
Not a single match went well .___.
Narran Park
04:25:31 Sting
I am so so sorry Court!
Seems like quite a few had that issue. Even someone had a P somewhere!
Arvalon Studs
04:25:27 Tosk's KNN
Kind of, when it comes to KNN :P
Wolf Dancer
04:24:49 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Dang Tosk! I can see you still have your capture luck lol
Stone Haven Farm
04:24:44 Court
-HEE Click- never wasting money on stupid svens again
Skye's Paradise
04:18:45 Pickle
Congrats Tosk!
Arvalon Studs
04:18:35 Tosk's KNN
Didn't expect to capture a WWW today.
Shadowscape Eventing
04:18:21 Shadow/Bluey
-HEE Click-

Finally my WWW stallion gave me a WWW
Drafty Acres
04:18:12 Mo
Nice one Tosk!!

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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