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Dash and Duchess
10:49:50 DD (#2)
I always get colts unless I use a filly item >.<
Rising Stars Stable
10:49:00 Willow or Star
All of my AAs gave me fillies this year, But KNNs on my main gave me two fillies out of 10 foals
Angels angels
10:48:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Thanks! Too bad he is a colt, but because of his color he is acceptable lol
Embervale Acres
10:48:21 Solar Phoenix
why do I have better luck with colts? XD
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Dash and Duchess
10:48:11 DD (#2)
Willow, yeah her mom unfortunately has roan but she was a good girl and hid from it XD
Rising Stars Stable
10:47:36 Willow or Star
Angels
Nice! Congrats!
Wynn Talli
10:47:32 Jokers Hideyrock
Filly, not colt
Wynn Talli
10:47:26 Jokers Hideyrock
Yes, I just wish it was a colt 😂
Rising Stars Stable
10:47:19 Willow or Star
DD
Oh, Nevermind, lol
Rising Stars Stable
10:47:00 Willow or Star
DD
?
Angels angels
10:46:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Yessss
Rising Stars Stable
10:46:40 Willow or Star
Jokers
At least it's a WWE! Still pretty good <3
Dash and Duchess
10:46:28 DD (#2)
Willow, same XD im just glad my new filly didn't catch it from her mom lol >.<
Wynn Talli
10:43:58 Jokers Hideyrock
Dang it, should've saved for a Sven <,<
-HEE Click-
Willow Grove
10:43:32 Stalker of Chat
Roan is slowly creeping its way into my barns because of Stormrage XP
Hopefully I can breed it out lol
Kryptonic Warmbloods
10:41:22 Blue/FHANA/BlueRidge
Willow,
I have several babies that I bred from her...
Rising Stars Stable
10:40:05 Willow or Star
-HEE Click-
I love Glass Prairie
Willow Gate Farm
10:38:48 willow ~ KNNs
Angel
Good luck!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:37:20 Lily Lilac🐈
Now to save up for another barn
Angels angels
10:33:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Doing some mass breeding. Lets see if I can get a brindle

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Dash and Duchess
10:49:50 DD (#2)
I always get colts unless I use a filly item >.<
Rising Stars Stable
10:49:00 Willow or Star
All of my AAs gave me fillies this year, But KNNs on my main gave me two fillies out of 10 foals
Angels angels
10:48:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Thanks! Too bad he is a colt, but because of his color he is acceptable lol
Embervale Acres
10:48:21 Solar Phoenix
why do I have better luck with colts? XD
-HEE Click-
Dash and Duchess
10:48:11 DD (#2)
Willow, yeah her mom unfortunately has roan but she was a good girl and hid from it XD
Rising Stars Stable
10:47:36 Willow or Star
Angels
Nice! Congrats!
Wynn Talli
10:47:32 Jokers Hideyrock
Filly, not colt
Wynn Talli
10:47:26 Jokers Hideyrock
Yes, I just wish it was a colt 😂
Rising Stars Stable
10:47:19 Willow or Star
DD
Oh, Nevermind, lol
Rising Stars Stable
10:47:00 Willow or Star
DD
?
Angels angels
10:46:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Yessss
Rising Stars Stable
10:46:40 Willow or Star
Jokers
At least it's a WWE! Still pretty good <3
Dash and Duchess
10:46:28 DD (#2)
Willow, same XD im just glad my new filly didn't catch it from her mom lol >.<
Wynn Talli
10:43:58 Jokers Hideyrock
Dang it, should've saved for a Sven <,<
-HEE Click-
Willow Grove
10:43:32 Stalker of Chat
Roan is slowly creeping its way into my barns because of Stormrage XP
Hopefully I can breed it out lol
Kryptonic Warmbloods
10:41:22 Blue/FHANA/BlueRidge
Willow,
I have several babies that I bred from her...
Rising Stars Stable
10:40:05 Willow or Star
-HEE Click-
I love Glass Prairie
Willow Gate Farm
10:38:48 willow ~ KNNs
Angel
Good luck!
Glacier Bay Cove
10:37:20 Lily Lilac🐈
Now to save up for another barn
Angels angels
10:33:58 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Doing some mass breeding. Lets see if I can get a brindle

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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