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Year: 193   Season: Winter   
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Winter Curtain
08:25:40 Win | Water
I know right, can't wait for all the yearling to turn 3
Sweet Valley
08:25:17 Anna/Jewel
This game year is going sooo slow!
Gem Queens Estate
08:24:50 Snow❆Gem
@green

Oh no. I hope you're not sick or anything. >.<

@win

lol
Winter Curtain
08:24:12 Win | Water
That;s so pretty, anna!
Sweet Valley
08:23:32 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
awwww
Greenheart Stables
08:23:15 Green|Gren|Grenlin
Not ready for this full day shift 😭
Winter Curtain
08:23:10 Win | Water
Go exploring and successfully take a picture.

Completed: 0/20


. 2 lazy
Winter Curtain
08:21:43 Win | Water
Angel, same.
Angels angels
08:21:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
So tired
Gem Queens Estate
08:20:24 Snow❆Gem
I skipped the 300 capture quest...
Bravery
Go exploring and use all moves without spooking.
Completed: 0/3

>.<
Sweet Valley
08:20:14 Anna/Jewel
Well I am not leaving now and perchance i will be able to come back on after church so I'll see
Winter Curtain
08:19:10 Win | Water
Aw... That's sad, but it was good to hear from you.
Sweet Valley
08:18:37 Anna/Jewel
Win, I haven't talked in a couple of days cuz thursday and friday AND saturday were busy. And we gotta leave in 30 minutes for church so I only have that much time on here!
Lynx Glory
08:17:24 ⛈ whisper/lynx
thank you :D
Gem Queens Estate
08:17:15 Snow❆Gem
@skrangle

You're welcome! :)
Crestwood Eq.
08:14:56 Ivy / poison ivy
lynx

i sent your giftyyyy
Lynx Glory
08:14:17 ⛈ whisper/lynx
thank youu <3
Crestwood Eq.
08:14:06 Ivy / poison ivy
Lynx

Reallyyyy?? OMG happy birthdayyyyyyy
Crestwood Eq.
08:13:50 Ivy / poison ivy
Anna!
Lynx Glory
08:13:50 ⛈ whisper/lynx
guyss it's my birthday ❤

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Winter Curtain
08:25:40 Win | Water
I know right, can't wait for all the yearling to turn 3
Sweet Valley
08:25:17 Anna/Jewel
This game year is going sooo slow!
Gem Queens Estate
08:24:50 Snow❆Gem
@green

Oh no. I hope you're not sick or anything. >.<

@win

lol
Winter Curtain
08:24:12 Win | Water
That;s so pretty, anna!
Sweet Valley
08:23:32 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-
awwww
Greenheart Stables
08:23:15 Green|Gren|Grenlin
Not ready for this full day shift 😭
Winter Curtain
08:23:10 Win | Water
Go exploring and successfully take a picture.

Completed: 0/20


. 2 lazy
Winter Curtain
08:21:43 Win | Water
Angel, same.
Angels angels
08:21:30 [1k+ brindles] Angel
So tired
Gem Queens Estate
08:20:24 Snow❆Gem
I skipped the 300 capture quest...
Bravery
Go exploring and use all moves without spooking.
Completed: 0/3

>.<
Sweet Valley
08:20:14 Anna/Jewel
Well I am not leaving now and perchance i will be able to come back on after church so I'll see
Winter Curtain
08:19:10 Win | Water
Aw... That's sad, but it was good to hear from you.
Sweet Valley
08:18:37 Anna/Jewel
Win, I haven't talked in a couple of days cuz thursday and friday AND saturday were busy. And we gotta leave in 30 minutes for church so I only have that much time on here!
Lynx Glory
08:17:24 ⛈ whisper/lynx
thank you :D
Gem Queens Estate
08:17:15 Snow❆Gem
@skrangle

You're welcome! :)
Crestwood Eq.
08:14:56 Ivy / poison ivy
lynx

i sent your giftyyyy
Lynx Glory
08:14:17 ⛈ whisper/lynx
thank youu <3
Crestwood Eq.
08:14:06 Ivy / poison ivy
Lynx

Reallyyyy?? OMG happy birthdayyyyyyy
Crestwood Eq.
08:13:50 Ivy / poison ivy
Anna!
Lynx Glory
08:13:50 ⛈ whisper/lynx
guyss it's my birthday ❤

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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