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Wynter's WB|TB
07:28:39 
-HEE Click-
Clear out sale!
Lots of color PPP+ rated
Silver, splash white, tobiano, Sabine, rabicano, and more!
Mostly TB and WB
Also includes some trained bravery horses
All with a 500ebs starting bid!
Eclair
07:22:37 
-HEE Click-
Gem
07:21:35 Tier 1 Artist
RID Giveaway!!
-HEE Click-
Splinter Stable
07:17:12 Splint
-HEE Click- broods!
Port Royal Equines
07:15:36 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
EEE mares for brood! 4k. Some are W producers.
Blossy
06:53:17 Coco
-HEE Click-
Young EWW stallion with a 1 of 3 color rarity for sale!
$100k
Lightning L Ranch
06:33:31 
-HEE Click-
Auction!
Alsike Equestrian
06:15:26 Ally
Cheap horses of all breed for sale:
-HEE Click-

ITEM SHOP, heavily discounted prices:
-HEE Click-

MAP AUCTION, only a few bids, ending in 4 days: -HEE Click-
Angels angels
06:10:42 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
EEE foal + EWE TB/AA mare auction!

-HEE Click-
WB and PON 196 brood auction

-HEE Click-
WWW SH mare 196 embryo auction
The Joker
06:06:21 Ari <3
Retired ABLB Stolas straw auction!
-HEE Click-

Embryo auction to only WWW SH apricot mare in game!
-HEE Click-

Shiny broods to rare colours, EWW combos up to LB and ABLBs with tons of patterns and shine!
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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor

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