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Namerik Stables
02:37:59 Rose
My mum used to put the bit in our mouths if we tugged on the horses mouth too hard
Greenheart Stables
02:19:28 Green|Gren|Grenlin
Yeah I need to give Mass Effect (the game) a break if im starting to have my dreams themed around it 😭, that was one hellava nightmare
Transformers Acres
01:31:00 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

My dad isn't the greatest, he ain't perfect. But yet, he knows the difference between abuse and proper discipline. So does my mom.
ghost light stables
01:29:34 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
Good for him ^^ your dad is such a mood XD
Transformers Acres
01:27:33 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I had a neighbor who owned horses, five to be exact. My dad would whoop my ass if I even accidentally hurt any future horse.
ghost light stables
01:25:08 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
I feel like your dad would be one to slap someone for using a spade bit 😭 -Click-
I ride my geling in a chicken choker and I get so much hate for it lmao
Transformers Acres
01:20:22 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

He hates how the Amish treat their horses. I'm not saying all Amish people do it, but a majority of them do.
ghost light stables
01:19:29 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
Good to know your dad's humane enough to have that mindset. I wish more people though like that
Transformers Acres
01:18:34 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

I agree. I asked my dad, who grew up, and owned a horse, if he ever did that. He said he'd never hurt his mare, because, despite not liking horses much, he still knows they're living beings.
ghost light stables
01:17:22 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
Their is very very very little laws against livestock abuse horses don't count as pets they fall into the same category as sheep and cows. If the law payed morse attention to the abuse in the horse industry the horse industry would be so much better to
Transformers Acres
01:15:20 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

Agreed. I have seen worse, and better. What really pisses me off, however, is Amish people abusing their horses, and the law doesn't go after them.
KPH Equestrian
01:15:13 Rapcoon | Jester
Ok I actually need to go to bed now xD
KPH Equestrian
01:14:41 Rapcoon | Jester
Geek
Yes exactly that! He's just so aggressive for no reason. It may work with some horses but its not a one size fits all thing
ghost light stables
01:13:55 Ghost rapcoon(the og
I've definitely seen worse people then Clinton but I've also seen better so 🤷🏼‍♀️
Dash Warmbloods
01:13:31 
-HEE Click- This amuses me
Transformers Acres
01:13:12 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

I mean, I don't know him, so I also can't say he abuses them indefinitely. However, I strongly hate his training methods.
Morning Glory Farms
01:12:32 Terici/Dino/Trish
Youre not spamming chat youre fine, its stable > stable activities > set stable colours
KPH Equestrian
01:11:49 Rapcoon | Jester
Geek
I dont particularly like him. There's one gross video on his channel where he works with a blind horse. The horses owner did way better with him than Clinton did
ghost light stables
01:11:38 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
He can be fun to talk too though decently nice guy when he doesn't piss himself off
Dash Warmbloods
01:11:32 
76 repeated horses in 10 generations: 🤣

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Namerik Stables
02:37:59 Rose
My mum used to put the bit in our mouths if we tugged on the horses mouth too hard
Greenheart Stables
02:19:28 Green|Gren|Grenlin
Yeah I need to give Mass Effect (the game) a break if im starting to have my dreams themed around it 😭, that was one hellava nightmare
Transformers Acres
01:31:00 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

My dad isn't the greatest, he ain't perfect. But yet, he knows the difference between abuse and proper discipline. So does my mom.
ghost light stables
01:29:34 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
Good for him ^^ your dad is such a mood XD
Transformers Acres
01:27:33 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I had a neighbor who owned horses, five to be exact. My dad would whoop my ass if I even accidentally hurt any future horse.
ghost light stables
01:25:08 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
I feel like your dad would be one to slap someone for using a spade bit 😭 -Click-
I ride my geling in a chicken choker and I get so much hate for it lmao
Transformers Acres
01:20:22 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

He hates how the Amish treat their horses. I'm not saying all Amish people do it, but a majority of them do.
ghost light stables
01:19:29 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
Good to know your dad's humane enough to have that mindset. I wish more people though like that
Transformers Acres
01:18:34 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

I agree. I asked my dad, who grew up, and owned a horse, if he ever did that. He said he'd never hurt his mare, because, despite not liking horses much, he still knows they're living beings.
ghost light stables
01:17:22 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
Their is very very very little laws against livestock abuse horses don't count as pets they fall into the same category as sheep and cows. If the law payed morse attention to the abuse in the horse industry the horse industry would be so much better to
Transformers Acres
01:15:20 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

Agreed. I have seen worse, and better. What really pisses me off, however, is Amish people abusing their horses, and the law doesn't go after them.
KPH Equestrian
01:15:13 Rapcoon | Jester
Ok I actually need to go to bed now xD
KPH Equestrian
01:14:41 Rapcoon | Jester
Geek
Yes exactly that! He's just so aggressive for no reason. It may work with some horses but its not a one size fits all thing
ghost light stables
01:13:55 Ghost rapcoon(the og
I've definitely seen worse people then Clinton but I've also seen better so 🤷🏼‍♀️
Dash Warmbloods
01:13:31 
-HEE Click- This amuses me
Transformers Acres
01:13:12 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Rapcoon

I mean, I don't know him, so I also can't say he abuses them indefinitely. However, I strongly hate his training methods.
Morning Glory Farms
01:12:32 Terici/Dino/Trish
Youre not spamming chat youre fine, its stable > stable activities > set stable colours
KPH Equestrian
01:11:49 Rapcoon | Jester
Geek
I dont particularly like him. There's one gross video on his channel where he works with a blind horse. The horses owner did way better with him than Clinton did
ghost light stables
01:11:38 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Greek
He can be fun to talk too though decently nice guy when he doesn't piss himself off
Dash Warmbloods
01:11:32 
76 repeated horses in 10 generations: 🤣

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So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:06 AM


Cherry River Elites
 
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Long ago, it was prophecised that Auspren would fall, become but a whisper of ashes on the wind, nothing but a shadow.
It was at this moment that Lady Ellia, Hand to Queen Layla Briareigh of Auspren, kicked the star reader out of the palace.
"And don't come back," she snarled, silver locks flying, the moonlight shining on the sharp, wickedly beautiful lines of her face.
Being Fae, Lady Ellia had seen many centuries. She had been one of the founders of Auspren, along with the queen and a small group of loner Fae, whom she and Layla had lost contact with. Ellia assumed they had simply erased all traces of their identity, though it was a possibility they were dead. She shuddered at the thought.
Ellia did wonder for a minute if what the star reader said was true. No. Layla was a strong queen, Auspren was a strong country, and on top of that, they had a few million soldiers simply waiting for a battle.
Which was why it was an enormous shock when, two centuries later, Auspren was shaken to the ground in a single night.
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So I wrote a prologue for my new book.
Two assassins, Rowan and Rhiannon Evangeline, are the daughters of a lost kingdom. They only know of it from stories. It was prophecised that they would be the ones to bring it back.
When Lielle, their mother, dies, they decide, hey, why not? All the Vaenian nobles already hate us, so let's go for it.
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Characters (names subject to change):
Emberlyn Starbough (phoenix)
Melanie Kortez (courtesan)
Arahan Hantemira (heir of Hantemira witches)
Emmaren Corverra (heir of Corverra witches)
Clara Corverra (Corverra witch)
Ren Gaevil (Lord of Sunlake)
Sylon Meradon (Lady of Eadlyn)
Lexren Emaratin (Lord of Evelly)
Talina Emaratin (Daughter of Lord of Evelly)
Skylen Aratoridin (Lady of Rosehill)
Ashlyn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Amryn Aratoridin (Daughter of Lady of Rosehill)
Azyah Zellenian (Queen of Djinn)
Archen and Acorn Thornfye (human siblings, trained to fight)
Sarlena Ansel (Soul Catcher)
Lainee Ansel (Daughter of the Soul Catcher)
Layla Briareigh (first Queen of Auspren)
Ellia Evangeline (Hand to the first queen of Auspren)
Lielle Evangeline (Mother of Rowan & Rhiannon)
Rowan Evangelin (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
Rhiannon Evangeline (Assassin, princess of Auspren)
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Extra Stuff:
There is one phoenix every thousand years. When a new phoenix is born, the old one dies.
The Witch Kingdom is going to be called Cormira.
Sprytes are mischevious creatures that cause trouble. They mostly live in Sprytewood.
Arah is named after the Ocean of Arahan.
Infinity Wood causes anyone not Fae or with Fae to go insane, lose all sense of direction, and eventually die.
So far there are four territories in Auspren- Eadlyn, Evelly, Sunlake, and Rosehill.
Auspren is bordered by Amenrey, Vaenia, Hartlen, and the Ocean of Arahan.
The capital of Auspren is Starfell.
The largest kingdom in the continent of Amethia is Elitenn, and it is bordered by Sprytewood, the mountains, the swamps, Hartlen, and Vaenia.
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So. Thoughts?
This all came from a dream I had. I don't even remember the dream. But I guess it was pretty good.
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 09:14 AM

Former Stable
 
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It's AMAZING! It takes utterly refined sensibilities to use such form of creativity! Good job!
So I'm doing a thing here May 20, 2021 12:02 PM


Tanglewood
 
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Absolutely adore the concept so far! One thing that confused me a tad was the prologue's length - it's a large amount of information in very few words, so I'd suggest bulking it up a little. But that's up to you, just my opinion <3

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