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SwankPony
02:23:36 Swanky
PETA going to come for us all. T.T
Executive Stables
02:16:28 Executive/Lyssa
Ghost
Lmao
ghost light stables
02:15:28 Ghost-rapcoon
Lmao our poor hee horses all probably have hock and stifle problems from being in stalls all week besides their one day of training and our geldings three days of showing XDD
Ashcroft Park Stud
02:12:17 Ash
I kinda want to get some pastures purely to pretend my pixel ponies get turnout rather than being permanently imprisoned in stables lol x)
The Joker
02:09:15 Ari <3
I need to get some hay pastures but I'm forcing myself to sort my barns first XD
Painted Perfection
01:49:29 Luna
Also it depends on what sizes youre looking at getting because 1 pasture could be 25 acre, 50 acre or 100 acre and theyre all different prices. Same with barns
Blue Page Farms
01:48:41 
Imperial Warmbloods, may we start our roleplay now?
Painted Perfection
01:48:25 Luna
Fire kinda confused what you mean by white barn?
CrimsonValleyEstate
01:37:11 Crimson
Serenity
Sterling Solstice
Everlasting Echo
Memory Mirage
Echoing Eclipse
Woven Whisper
Luminous Liberty
Celestial Cascade
Fire_Rescue
01:33:18 Rescue/Rookie
so if I were to buy 2 Show areas
1 White barn
4 Crop Fields
1 Pasture
how much ebs would I need?
Serenity Stables
01:31:30 Serenity / Rain
Crimson
Not really, but the horse is a black Sabino if that helps. I like names that sound like real horse registered names, and are long

Glacier kittens
Thank you!
Someday Farm
01:28:26 
Well I just broke my brain over the spelling of “thankful”. Like I know there is only one L, but a tiny part of my brain said “maybe there is two Ls and you have been looking like a fool this whole time”. So happy google sorted me out 😅
The Joker
01:27:43 Ari <3
I need to get me a Christmas art set 👀
Glacier Bay Cove
01:23:03 Glacier Kittens
I like the art on your stable page, Serenity
CrimsonValleyEstate
01:22:46 Crimson
Serenity
Is there any theme you need the names to follow?
Aspen Valley Stables
01:21:37  Aspen🦊
Ok I kinda like how you switched them around but I would have liked you to ask but thanks!
Glacier Bay Cove
01:21:11 Glacier Kittens
Lemon Drop is also a nice name for a horse
Glacier Bay Cove
01:20:44 Glacier Kittens
I made slight changes to them, and I like the suggestions you made as well, Aspen
Ledgeview Farms
01:17:12 LV
Lemon Drop is cute for a pally
Aspen Valley Stables
01:14:16  Aspen🦊
Glacier Kittens those were my names I came up with, please don't copy me

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SwankPony
02:23:36 Swanky
PETA going to come for us all. T.T
Executive Stables
02:16:28 Executive/Lyssa
Ghost
Lmao
ghost light stables
02:15:28 Ghost-rapcoon
Lmao our poor hee horses all probably have hock and stifle problems from being in stalls all week besides their one day of training and our geldings three days of showing XDD
Ashcroft Park Stud
02:12:17 Ash
I kinda want to get some pastures purely to pretend my pixel ponies get turnout rather than being permanently imprisoned in stables lol x)
The Joker
02:09:15 Ari <3
I need to get some hay pastures but I'm forcing myself to sort my barns first XD
Painted Perfection
01:49:29 Luna
Also it depends on what sizes youre looking at getting because 1 pasture could be 25 acre, 50 acre or 100 acre and theyre all different prices. Same with barns
Blue Page Farms
01:48:41 
Imperial Warmbloods, may we start our roleplay now?
Painted Perfection
01:48:25 Luna
Fire kinda confused what you mean by white barn?
CrimsonValleyEstate
01:37:11 Crimson
Serenity
Sterling Solstice
Everlasting Echo
Memory Mirage
Echoing Eclipse
Woven Whisper
Luminous Liberty
Celestial Cascade
Fire_Rescue
01:33:18 Rescue/Rookie
so if I were to buy 2 Show areas
1 White barn
4 Crop Fields
1 Pasture
how much ebs would I need?
Serenity Stables
01:31:30 Serenity / Rain
Crimson
Not really, but the horse is a black Sabino if that helps. I like names that sound like real horse registered names, and are long

Glacier kittens
Thank you!
Someday Farm
01:28:26 
Well I just broke my brain over the spelling of “thankful”. Like I know there is only one L, but a tiny part of my brain said “maybe there is two Ls and you have been looking like a fool this whole time”. So happy google sorted me out 😅
The Joker
01:27:43 Ari <3
I need to get me a Christmas art set 👀
Glacier Bay Cove
01:23:03 Glacier Kittens
I like the art on your stable page, Serenity
CrimsonValleyEstate
01:22:46 Crimson
Serenity
Is there any theme you need the names to follow?
Aspen Valley Stables
01:21:37  Aspen🦊
Ok I kinda like how you switched them around but I would have liked you to ask but thanks!
Glacier Bay Cove
01:21:11 Glacier Kittens
Lemon Drop is also a nice name for a horse
Glacier Bay Cove
01:20:44 Glacier Kittens
I made slight changes to them, and I like the suggestions you made as well, Aspen
Ledgeview Farms
01:17:12 LV
Lemon Drop is cute for a pally
Aspen Valley Stables
01:14:16  Aspen🦊
Glacier Kittens those were my names I came up with, please don't copy me

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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