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Gem Queens Estate
08:41:22 Snow❆Gem
Well, you're a future show/quest mare. lol PPW KNN gal

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Seafleurs
08:40:05 Skye
How do you guys decide if it's worth creating embryos from a mare vs just breeding from her that year? Embryos weren't a thing the last time I played!
Ranch Lands Training
08:36:46 Lilly/PON Addict
Angles - I think I sold you me last brindle because she was a flop. I surely thought one show gelding would have been one
Angels angels
08:36:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have mine go into a sort barn
Solran
08:34:46 
I'm on a binge, so im gonna have a lotta horses coming in, so I'll find out how to move them around
Shady Tree Farm
08:33:42 Shady (RRR Side)
That's where I (and quite a few other players) have a barn called Arriving, so everybody new shows up there lol
Angels angels
08:33:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah you can move them around now
Solran
08:33:25 
Dang. But thanks! I'll slap a 1 in front of it or somethin
Silver Melody Acres
08:33:15 Solar - KNNs
Well then...you're a decent surprise while being useless here XD
-HEE Click-
Shady Tree Farm
08:32:48 Shady (RRR Side)
It's just whatever your first barn is. Used to be it had to be the top of the alphabet, but I think you can move them around now with the updates
The Pirate King
08:32:13 The Armada
unfortunately no
Solran
08:31:56 
Quick question. Is there a way to make a barn the primary barn? So like, when you buy a horse, it'll go into s certain barn instead of into the first available stall?
Shady Tree Farm
08:30:49 Shady (RRR Side)
Thanks! I was going to get into RID lightly since I'm a free account over here, then he happened xD
Gem Queens Estate
08:30:00 Snow❆Gem
Nice grullo WWW RID boy! :D
Angels angels
08:29:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Stella
Of course!

Also Lilly
That is unacceptable, we must change that lol
Gem Queens Estate
08:29:25 Snow❆Gem
@angels

lol I bet! ;P
BlackRose
08:29:11 Stella
Angel, can I pm you quickly? I have a few questions
Angels angels
08:27:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel
We need to bring back the work from home for news anchors specifically for the pet bloopers (mainly cats)
Shady Tree Farm
08:27:36 Shady (RRR Side)
I'm really curious to see his training and how he tests... He put his dam on the LB at #68 *.*
-HEE Click-
Ranch Lands Training
08:22:40 Lilly/PON Addict
Ya know I just realized I have over 600 horses and not a single brindle

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Gem Queens Estate
08:41:22 Snow❆Gem
Well, you're a future show/quest mare. lol PPW KNN gal

-HEE Click-
Seafleurs
08:40:05 Skye
How do you guys decide if it's worth creating embryos from a mare vs just breeding from her that year? Embryos weren't a thing the last time I played!
Ranch Lands Training
08:36:46 Lilly/PON Addict
Angles - I think I sold you me last brindle because she was a flop. I surely thought one show gelding would have been one
Angels angels
08:36:05 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have mine go into a sort barn
Solran
08:34:46 
I'm on a binge, so im gonna have a lotta horses coming in, so I'll find out how to move them around
Shady Tree Farm
08:33:42 Shady (RRR Side)
That's where I (and quite a few other players) have a barn called Arriving, so everybody new shows up there lol
Angels angels
08:33:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah you can move them around now
Solran
08:33:25 
Dang. But thanks! I'll slap a 1 in front of it or somethin
Silver Melody Acres
08:33:15 Solar - KNNs
Well then...you're a decent surprise while being useless here XD
-HEE Click-
Shady Tree Farm
08:32:48 Shady (RRR Side)
It's just whatever your first barn is. Used to be it had to be the top of the alphabet, but I think you can move them around now with the updates
The Pirate King
08:32:13 The Armada
unfortunately no
Solran
08:31:56 
Quick question. Is there a way to make a barn the primary barn? So like, when you buy a horse, it'll go into s certain barn instead of into the first available stall?
Shady Tree Farm
08:30:49 Shady (RRR Side)
Thanks! I was going to get into RID lightly since I'm a free account over here, then he happened xD
Gem Queens Estate
08:30:00 Snow❆Gem
Nice grullo WWW RID boy! :D
Angels angels
08:29:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Stella
Of course!

Also Lilly
That is unacceptable, we must change that lol
Gem Queens Estate
08:29:25 Snow❆Gem
@angels

lol I bet! ;P
BlackRose
08:29:11 Stella
Angel, can I pm you quickly? I have a few questions
Angels angels
08:27:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel
We need to bring back the work from home for news anchors specifically for the pet bloopers (mainly cats)
Shady Tree Farm
08:27:36 Shady (RRR Side)
I'm really curious to see his training and how he tests... He put his dam on the LB at #68 *.*
-HEE Click-
Ranch Lands Training
08:22:40 Lilly/PON Addict
Ya know I just realized I have over 600 horses and not a single brindle

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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