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Glacier Bay Cove
11:21:06 Glacier Kittens
Oh I can’t wait to see it when it’s finished, Anna
Gem Queens Estate
11:16:37 Snow❆Gem
@bunny

lol Thanks! ;P
Sweet Valley
11:15:21 Anna/Jewel
There we go. Entered Gem's art giveaway XD. While I was on the teacher art roll.
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What's this? The new teacher is a horse? But it's true! There is a horse at the teachers desk, his thick mane resting on the desk and his tail on the floor. He has a vest and a tie, and those round old spectacles over his eyes. He has a chalk pencil in his mouth, and his hoof on the desk, and on a blackboard he has written, "Mr. World Class as your new teacher."
The light above is a chandelier and the whole room is vintage-themed.
The horse's vest is of a deep blue and his tie is a light blue bowtie.
The color of his coat is a light chestnut, and his thick, full mane and tail is creamy colored.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:13:36 Glacier Kittens
*Running to the store to get some more art supplies, and ideas for future art projects
Two Trees Stables
11:11:42 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Glacier
XD
Looking Glass Stable
11:11:11 IA Glass 👋
Lol. Love that, Glacier.
Palomino Paridise
11:08:11 
im proud xD
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
11:07:41 Glacier Kittens
Introducing the accountant pirate -Click-
Palomino Paridise
11:07:23 
i just bred all of my mares lol
Midnight Manor
11:05:46 Bunny ♡
Gem
Its absolutely beautiful
Two Trees Stables
11:05:07 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Claire
Sounds amazing! but without the wings, they don't do too much for me personally
Nirvany
11:04:13 Ari
Heya y'all!
Two Trees Stables
11:04:01 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Anna
Lol
Gem Queens Estate
11:03:49 Snow❆Gem
@bunny

Yes I did! ;P
Midnight Manor
11:03:35 Bunny ♡
Willow
<333
Midnight Manor
11:03:24 Bunny ♡
Gem
Oh my gosh did you make that-?! 😭🤣
Two Trees Stables
11:03:10 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Bunny
I was thinking more formal.
Ooh, I know what to ask for now
Claire´s Kingdom
11:03:02 Claire
A pegasus in the woods. The wings are very white, and so is the horse. The forest is filled with purple wildflowers. Maybe a fox in the corner?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:03:01 Glacier Kittens
And a coffee cup on his desk, with a globe in the corner of the room
Gem Queens Estate
11:02:13 Snow❆Gem
@willow

Something like this?! LMAO XD

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Glacier Bay Cove
11:21:06 Glacier Kittens
Oh I can’t wait to see it when it’s finished, Anna
Gem Queens Estate
11:16:37 Snow❆Gem
@bunny

lol Thanks! ;P
Sweet Valley
11:15:21 Anna/Jewel
There we go. Entered Gem's art giveaway XD. While I was on the teacher art roll.
~
~
What's this? The new teacher is a horse? But it's true! There is a horse at the teachers desk, his thick mane resting on the desk and his tail on the floor. He has a vest and a tie, and those round old spectacles over his eyes. He has a chalk pencil in his mouth, and his hoof on the desk, and on a blackboard he has written, "Mr. World Class as your new teacher."
The light above is a chandelier and the whole room is vintage-themed.
The horse's vest is of a deep blue and his tie is a light blue bowtie.
The color of his coat is a light chestnut, and his thick, full mane and tail is creamy colored.
Glacier Bay Cove
11:13:36 Glacier Kittens
*Running to the store to get some more art supplies, and ideas for future art projects
Two Trees Stables
11:11:42 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Glacier
XD
Looking Glass Stable
11:11:11 IA Glass 👋
Lol. Love that, Glacier.
Palomino Paridise
11:08:11 
im proud xD
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
11:07:41 Glacier Kittens
Introducing the accountant pirate -Click-
Palomino Paridise
11:07:23 
i just bred all of my mares lol
Midnight Manor
11:05:46 Bunny ♡
Gem
Its absolutely beautiful
Two Trees Stables
11:05:07 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Claire
Sounds amazing! but without the wings, they don't do too much for me personally
Nirvany
11:04:13 Ari
Heya y'all!
Two Trees Stables
11:04:01 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Anna
Lol
Gem Queens Estate
11:03:49 Snow❆Gem
@bunny

Yes I did! ;P
Midnight Manor
11:03:35 Bunny ♡
Willow
<333
Midnight Manor
11:03:24 Bunny ♡
Gem
Oh my gosh did you make that-?! 😭🤣
Two Trees Stables
11:03:10 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Bunny
I was thinking more formal.
Ooh, I know what to ask for now
Claire´s Kingdom
11:03:02 Claire
A pegasus in the woods. The wings are very white, and so is the horse. The forest is filled with purple wildflowers. Maybe a fox in the corner?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:03:01 Glacier Kittens
And a coffee cup on his desk, with a globe in the corner of the room
Gem Queens Estate
11:02:13 Snow❆Gem
@willow

Something like this?! LMAO XD

-HEE Click-

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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