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 Raptor Cross Ranch
12:57:17 Raptor
Your page is beautiful
Raptor Cross Ranch
12:56:59 Raptor
haha mine too
Dash and Duchess
12:55:25 DD | ~Squizard~
My poor accountant had another heart attack lol, but otherwise good :)
Raptor Cross Ranch
12:49:30 Raptor
How are you guys doing? :)
Dash and Duchess
12:46:59 DD | ~Squizard~
Sting, thanks! Finally snagged mine lol!
Narran Park
12:42:47 Sting
Sven & Filly Sven in Store
Raptor Cross Ranch
12:34:45 Raptor
Gren your banner is super cool!
Greenheart Stables
12:23:45 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Yikes
MC Ace
12:19:37 McFossil
Green
It's going to be so sad. When I came back to the game I used one of my old SD straws thinking it would be a fun way to start my SD lines again? I was so wrong. Poor baby never had a chance. Look at this production. Regulus was my old boy.

-HEE Click-
Dark Dream Appaloosa
12:19:17 Moon|Appaloosa Hoard
Oomph. That filly D med stung purchasing
Greenheart Stables
12:16:59 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Its crazy to think one day the top of the LB now wil be considered weak in the far future 🫢
Wolf Dancer
12:16:52 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Ohhhh interesting!!!
MC Ace
12:15:52 McFossil
Green
Eventually yes. That is what I am working towards. And we had WK3 up before the W rating was released.
Greenheart Stables
12:15:02 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Ooh think a week 2 is possible then lol
Narran Park
12:14:30 Sting
ugh, i need to overhaul my BM..she entered 11/400 horses on monday...i think SD will be better than AD
MC Ace
12:14:17 McFossil
Green is right. Man I remember when we started getting horses up WK3 in the game. That was wild.
Greenheart Stables
12:13:04 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Wk 3 = 4
Wk 6 = 7
Wk 9 = 10
And so on
Or that's how I treat it, so far its put a lot of my horses on LB and as good producers lol
Wolf Dancer
12:11:45 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Green
Oh interesting
Wolf Dancer
12:11:02 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Ohhhh huh, interesting I have SD but don't ever rember to track xD
Greenheart Stables
12:10:52 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Wolf
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 Raptor Cross Ranch
12:57:17 Raptor
Your page is beautiful
Raptor Cross Ranch
12:56:59 Raptor
haha mine too
Dash and Duchess
12:55:25 DD | ~Squizard~
My poor accountant had another heart attack lol, but otherwise good :)
Raptor Cross Ranch
12:49:30 Raptor
How are you guys doing? :)
Dash and Duchess
12:46:59 DD | ~Squizard~
Sting, thanks! Finally snagged mine lol!
Narran Park
12:42:47 Sting
Sven & Filly Sven in Store
Raptor Cross Ranch
12:34:45 Raptor
Gren your banner is super cool!
Greenheart Stables
12:23:45 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Yikes
MC Ace
12:19:37 McFossil
Green
It's going to be so sad. When I came back to the game I used one of my old SD straws thinking it would be a fun way to start my SD lines again? I was so wrong. Poor baby never had a chance. Look at this production. Regulus was my old boy.

-HEE Click-
Dark Dream Appaloosa
12:19:17 Moon|Appaloosa Hoard
Oomph. That filly D med stung purchasing
Greenheart Stables
12:16:59 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Its crazy to think one day the top of the LB now wil be considered weak in the far future 🫢
Wolf Dancer
12:16:52 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Ohhhh interesting!!!
MC Ace
12:15:52 McFossil
Green
Eventually yes. That is what I am working towards. And we had WK3 up before the W rating was released.
Greenheart Stables
12:15:02 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Ooh think a week 2 is possible then lol
Narran Park
12:14:30 Sting
ugh, i need to overhaul my BM..she entered 11/400 horses on monday...i think SD will be better than AD
MC Ace
12:14:17 McFossil
Green is right. Man I remember when we started getting horses up WK3 in the game. That was wild.
Greenheart Stables
12:13:04 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Wk 3 = 4
Wk 6 = 7
Wk 9 = 10
And so on
Or that's how I treat it, so far its put a lot of my horses on LB and as good producers lol
Wolf Dancer
12:11:45 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Green
Oh interesting
Wolf Dancer
12:11:02 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Ohhhh huh, interesting I have SD but don't ever rember to track xD
Greenheart Stables
12:10:52 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Wolf
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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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