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 Ashcroft Park Stud
05:09:21 Ash
Why are the pretty ones fated to have the most bizarre/bad training ;_; -HEE Click-
Guard Horseman Gang
05:04:07 GHG
im logging out for a bit but i shall return later
Guard Horseman Gang
04:56:38 GHG
the link to the horse is at the bottom of the blog post where it says memorial horse
Guard Horseman Gang
04:56:00 GHG
ok you can find the one I'm talking about under memorial project- Sr. Corporal Micheal Spr
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:54:20 Ash
Will check it out! Doing blogs about your horses is a good idea - might try it too, since blogs don’t get deleted like forum threads
Guard Horseman Gang
04:44:11 GHG
I do and just posted the tribute in my blog, i do lowkey stalk Minerva's horses
Guard Horseman Gang
04:42:22 GHG
I think i have a horse bred by minerva that is a part of my memorial project actually
 Ashcroft Park Stud
04:34:06 Ash
Oooh super pretty, Min!
Guard Horseman Gang
04:32:13 GHG
*grabby hands for minerva's horsie*
Minerva
04:26:48 Min
-HEE Click-

Blimey, wasnt expecting this to rate as a keeper! Very nice colour catch lol
Phenix
04:05:21 
Ok thanks^^
Westeros Livery
04:04:38 Khaleesi
looks like it depends on the group, might want to look into it and read and see which one youre looking for :)
 Phenix
03:59:14 
Question on group RP is it the riders who talk or the horses or both?
Twin Flames
03:38:32 Blaze
you're cool -HEE Click-
Moonrose Magic
03:05:24 🎀 Diva
Yes
Unicorn Academy
03:00:38 D Time/Wildstar
Can I buy an arena and host shows even if I do not have a premium account?
Please DM me for the answer. I need to go to bed. For an entire month, I've been sleeping 4 hours a day.
Raptor pen
02:59:17 
holy wow is that irish pretty
Unicorn Academy
02:55:29 D Time/Wildstar
It's very beautiful, Val!
Vahana
02:54:59 Val
-HEE Click-

I think I am enjoying quest breeding more than my actual breeding programs lol.
Unicorn Academy
02:54:32 D Time/Wildstar
Good Night, Everyone!

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 Ashcroft Park Stud
05:09:21 Ash
Why are the pretty ones fated to have the most bizarre/bad training ;_; -HEE Click-
Guard Horseman Gang
05:04:07 GHG
im logging out for a bit but i shall return later
Guard Horseman Gang
04:56:38 GHG
the link to the horse is at the bottom of the blog post where it says memorial horse
Guard Horseman Gang
04:56:00 GHG
ok you can find the one I'm talking about under memorial project- Sr. Corporal Micheal Spr
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:54:20 Ash
Will check it out! Doing blogs about your horses is a good idea - might try it too, since blogs don’t get deleted like forum threads
Guard Horseman Gang
04:44:11 GHG
I do and just posted the tribute in my blog, i do lowkey stalk Minerva's horses
Guard Horseman Gang
04:42:22 GHG
I think i have a horse bred by minerva that is a part of my memorial project actually
 Ashcroft Park Stud
04:34:06 Ash
Oooh super pretty, Min!
Guard Horseman Gang
04:32:13 GHG
*grabby hands for minerva's horsie*
Minerva
04:26:48 Min
-HEE Click-

Blimey, wasnt expecting this to rate as a keeper! Very nice colour catch lol
Phenix
04:05:21 
Ok thanks^^
Westeros Livery
04:04:38 Khaleesi
looks like it depends on the group, might want to look into it and read and see which one youre looking for :)
 Phenix
03:59:14 
Question on group RP is it the riders who talk or the horses or both?
Twin Flames
03:38:32 Blaze
you're cool -HEE Click-
Moonrose Magic
03:05:24 🎀 Diva
Yes
Unicorn Academy
03:00:38 D Time/Wildstar
Can I buy an arena and host shows even if I do not have a premium account?
Please DM me for the answer. I need to go to bed. For an entire month, I've been sleeping 4 hours a day.
Raptor pen
02:59:17 
holy wow is that irish pretty
Unicorn Academy
02:55:29 D Time/Wildstar
It's very beautiful, Val!
Vahana
02:54:59 Val
-HEE Click-

I think I am enjoying quest breeding more than my actual breeding programs lol.
Unicorn Academy
02:54:32 D Time/Wildstar
Good Night, Everyone!

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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