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 Westeros Livery
02:46:44 Khaleesi
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going for a SBSB/SBsb, way overcaught!! yay random brindles!
Vahana
02:43:14 Val
Stable > Stable Activities > Retrieve from Free Range (under Stable Activity)
Caaldir Equestrian
02:42:22 Caal/Deor/Trash Rat
Does anyone know how to retrieve a horse? Can't remember lol
Thornwood Manor
02:36:05 
Ah yes Appaloosa lol
Sunni
02:32:49 Sunni bunny
I hate this, feeling sick I haven't slept in 2 days haven't ate in 3 or 4.
Vahana
02:31:16 Val
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This is such a pretty grullo :3
Transformers Acres
02:20:24 Geek, Greek Yogurt
My new chestnut Appy.

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The Unknown
02:15:26 Unknown | Dark
I'm pissed. I've been trying to code for the past few days but my head is killing me and has been on and off for like a week
Asfamoth
02:05:41 Asfa
Capturing is being funky. Yesterday they were mostly grullos, now they're mostly blacks.
Stargazer
01:41:02 Star - RID|KNN
Considering you dodged sabino, you look SbSb
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Lucky
01:15:35 luvky
Hey chat!
Greenheart Stables
12:59:00 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Monty
Yeah I trust them, been using them for a while now. Chicks are fatter then the rats and ASFs I feed them, so it be more a treat. I just want to try birds like chickens and quail to add some extra enrichment and to see if my pickier snake might like something new.
I just wanted a second opinion. Thanks!
Chateau Montelena
12:55:51 Monty
Gren
As long as you know where the birds are supplied from, i.e not wild, I would say it's safe. The main concern being that birds are prone to carrying parasites and diseases in the wild, so if you trust the supplier then I'd say go for it. I have heard it's not good to rely on them as their only food though
Greenheart Stables
12:52:21 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Monty
Thoughts on throwing froze thawed chicks into a Ball pythons diet? The supplier who I get Rodents from offer chicks and quails and wanted thoughts since birds do make up a apart the ball pythons natural diet. And I know 2 of the one's I got will eat if offered
Chateau Montelena
12:47:15 Monty
What's the question, Gren?
 Greenheart Stables
12:37:03 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Preferably of the pythons
Greenheart Stables
12:33:09 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Anyone on a snake owner I got a really weird question lol
BlackRose
12:27:39 Stella
Oh woah, it sounds like she has a good little side thing going there I’m sure people in the area would buy cups of roaches for their reptiles or animals
The Old Gods
12:26:38 Void Malign
No, no...The colony is probably a couple hundred at this point.
BlackRose
12:26:15 Stella
90% popcorn 10% roaches xD oh the image I got in my head of a little roach pressed against the glass and popcorn just all in the tank xD

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 Westeros Livery
02:46:44 Khaleesi
-HEE Click-

going for a SBSB/SBsb, way overcaught!! yay random brindles!
Vahana
02:43:14 Val
Stable > Stable Activities > Retrieve from Free Range (under Stable Activity)
Caaldir Equestrian
02:42:22 Caal/Deor/Trash Rat
Does anyone know how to retrieve a horse? Can't remember lol
Thornwood Manor
02:36:05 
Ah yes Appaloosa lol
Sunni
02:32:49 Sunni bunny
I hate this, feeling sick I haven't slept in 2 days haven't ate in 3 or 4.
Vahana
02:31:16 Val
-HEE Click-

This is such a pretty grullo :3
Transformers Acres
02:20:24 Geek, Greek Yogurt
My new chestnut Appy.

-HEE Click-
The Unknown
02:15:26 Unknown | Dark
I'm pissed. I've been trying to code for the past few days but my head is killing me and has been on and off for like a week
Asfamoth
02:05:41 Asfa
Capturing is being funky. Yesterday they were mostly grullos, now they're mostly blacks.
Stargazer
01:41:02 Star - RID|KNN
Considering you dodged sabino, you look SbSb
-HEE Click-
Lucky
01:15:35 luvky
Hey chat!
Greenheart Stables
12:59:00 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Monty
Yeah I trust them, been using them for a while now. Chicks are fatter then the rats and ASFs I feed them, so it be more a treat. I just want to try birds like chickens and quail to add some extra enrichment and to see if my pickier snake might like something new.
I just wanted a second opinion. Thanks!
Chateau Montelena
12:55:51 Monty
Gren
As long as you know where the birds are supplied from, i.e not wild, I would say it's safe. The main concern being that birds are prone to carrying parasites and diseases in the wild, so if you trust the supplier then I'd say go for it. I have heard it's not good to rely on them as their only food though
Greenheart Stables
12:52:21 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@Monty
Thoughts on throwing froze thawed chicks into a Ball pythons diet? The supplier who I get Rodents from offer chicks and quails and wanted thoughts since birds do make up a apart the ball pythons natural diet. And I know 2 of the one's I got will eat if offered
Chateau Montelena
12:47:15 Monty
What's the question, Gren?
 Greenheart Stables
12:37:03 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Preferably of the pythons
Greenheart Stables
12:33:09 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Anyone on a snake owner I got a really weird question lol
BlackRose
12:27:39 Stella
Oh woah, it sounds like she has a good little side thing going there I’m sure people in the area would buy cups of roaches for their reptiles or animals
The Old Gods
12:26:38 Void Malign
No, no...The colony is probably a couple hundred at this point.
BlackRose
12:26:15 Stella
90% popcorn 10% roaches xD oh the image I got in my head of a little roach pressed against the glass and popcorn just all in the tank xD

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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