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KPH Equestrian
12:04:00 Rapcoon | Jester
lmao river you're evil😭😂
River
12:03:51 ♡ River
Geek
Oooh how come?
Elite Equine Stables
12:03:38 Honey
Lol river
Wolf Dancer
12:03:38 Wolf Burger (Leg)
I like kids when I work with them then get to say goodbye after a couple of hours xD
River
12:03:07 ♡ River
KPH
Samee, my little brother doesn't know how to tell time yet so when he asks to play for half an hour I set a timer for 15 minutes >:D
Elite Equine Stables
12:02:44 Honey
Jester lol
Transformers Acres
12:02:42 Geek, Greek Yogurt
River

When I was born, my birth was in my town's newspaper, with my name, my parents name.
Elite Equine Stables
12:02:06 Honey
@lucky

Me,too. But some can be quite the stinkers...
SUMMER OF PEARLS
12:02:02 
myfolks did not want any so of course ended up with 8
KPH Equestrian
12:01:41 Rapcoon | Jester
kids are delightful. babies not so much xD but I love telling kids the most random bullshit lmao
TopGun Elites
12:01:34 mav/maverick
we met the FIRST time in august when i needed an air check at discount tire.
then he won the adult calf scramble at a rodeo i was working in september.
then i went to his house for a bonfire after senior HoCo.
then we hung out more and more then made it official nov 9!
Elite Equine Stables
12:01:19 Honey
Lol river
Lucky Ranch
12:00:57 luhckeigh
honestly i love kids theyre the bomb
River
12:00:05 ♡ River
My dad really wanted kids, it was his dream to be a dad, so when he got me and my little brother he couldn't stop crying, when I was born they literally had just won the state championship for football (he was a coach) so I was in the newspaper :P
TopGun Elites
11:59:08 mav/maverick
lucky

thats what i said. i also suggested adopting...he said he wants a “mini-me and twins”
Elite Equine Stables
11:59:06 Honey
LOL mav... Mine hasnt said anything yyyeeettt... we metrecently though!
KPH Equestrian
11:58:59 Rapcoon | Jester
my cousin left me with her small infant the other day and it started crying, and my expertise is with kids age 2+, and the only thing that made it stop crying was talking to it like wallace from wallace and grommit😭 i dont want that full-time even if its only for a few years lmao
Wolf Dancer
11:58:56 Wolf Burger (Leg)
We should be like seahorses and make the men carry the babys.
Transformers Acres
11:58:48 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Maverick

Neither am I. I'll be the nonbinary/demi family member, who's financially responsible.
TopGun Elites
11:57:44 mav/maverick
im NOT meant to be a momma😭

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KPH Equestrian
12:04:00 Rapcoon | Jester
lmao river you're evil😭😂
River
12:03:51 ♡ River
Geek
Oooh how come?
Elite Equine Stables
12:03:38 Honey
Lol river
Wolf Dancer
12:03:38 Wolf Burger (Leg)
I like kids when I work with them then get to say goodbye after a couple of hours xD
River
12:03:07 ♡ River
KPH
Samee, my little brother doesn't know how to tell time yet so when he asks to play for half an hour I set a timer for 15 minutes >:D
Elite Equine Stables
12:02:44 Honey
Jester lol
Transformers Acres
12:02:42 Geek, Greek Yogurt
River

When I was born, my birth was in my town's newspaper, with my name, my parents name.
Elite Equine Stables
12:02:06 Honey
@lucky

Me,too. But some can be quite the stinkers...
SUMMER OF PEARLS
12:02:02 
myfolks did not want any so of course ended up with 8
KPH Equestrian
12:01:41 Rapcoon | Jester
kids are delightful. babies not so much xD but I love telling kids the most random bullshit lmao
TopGun Elites
12:01:34 mav/maverick
we met the FIRST time in august when i needed an air check at discount tire.
then he won the adult calf scramble at a rodeo i was working in september.
then i went to his house for a bonfire after senior HoCo.
then we hung out more and more then made it official nov 9!
Elite Equine Stables
12:01:19 Honey
Lol river
Lucky Ranch
12:00:57 luhckeigh
honestly i love kids theyre the bomb
River
12:00:05 ♡ River
My dad really wanted kids, it was his dream to be a dad, so when he got me and my little brother he couldn't stop crying, when I was born they literally had just won the state championship for football (he was a coach) so I was in the newspaper :P
TopGun Elites
11:59:08 mav/maverick
lucky

thats what i said. i also suggested adopting...he said he wants a “mini-me and twins”
Elite Equine Stables
11:59:06 Honey
LOL mav... Mine hasnt said anything yyyeeettt... we metrecently though!
KPH Equestrian
11:58:59 Rapcoon | Jester
my cousin left me with her small infant the other day and it started crying, and my expertise is with kids age 2+, and the only thing that made it stop crying was talking to it like wallace from wallace and grommit😭 i dont want that full-time even if its only for a few years lmao
Wolf Dancer
11:58:56 Wolf Burger (Leg)
We should be like seahorses and make the men carry the babys.
Transformers Acres
11:58:48 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Maverick

Neither am I. I'll be the nonbinary/demi family member, who's financially responsible.
TopGun Elites
11:57:44 mav/maverick
im NOT meant to be a momma😭

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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