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Wild River Run Farm

12:54:38 WRR

okay thank you val!

River

12:53:49 ♡ River

It's only Tuesday and this week sucks already, can't wait for winter break so I can go back home to my family and friends and not be depresso expresso

Vahana

12:50:43 Val

They are usually ready when they have 2 bars for their level, WRR. So level 1 = 2 bars etc.

Wild River Run Farm

12:48:31 WRR

how do i actually know when my horses are ready to show?

Guard Horseman Gang

12:40:26 GHG

so excited for this dudes freshman year next month as well
-HEE Click-

Guard Horseman Gang

12:35:58 GHG

I have four EEE+ combo mares with color ratings 1 of 100 or less having their maiden years next year (198) and i am so excited for them

KPH Equestrian

12:35:27 Rapcoon | Jester

Ooh this week's giveaway mares is a chimmy

Sevens Haven

12:35:06 Tink

Its more about only showing when the horse is ready versus the number of horses showing.

Wild River Run Farm

12:32:00 WRR

does anyone know roughly how many horses i need showing to make a profit?

Guard Horseman Gang

12:30:40 GHG

i need to color test this one i feel like she is hiding something
-HEE Click-

Vahana

12:29:43 Val

You had 663 horses compete in reg. shows earning 394059

My little lvl 1 and 2s are improving :) *happy tears*

Sevens Haven

12:29:41 Tink

nice 1 of1!

Guard Horseman Gang

12:29:01 GHG

ooooo hello

-HEE Click-

Sevens Haven

12:26:00 Tink

that's so wild Gren, i showed 43 and feel accomplished

Greenheart Stables

12:18:36 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

Dec 16, 2025 00:17:54 You had 549 horses compete in reg. shows earning 1083967

Murphy's Elites

11:37:10 Fawn

Hmm should I use the same stud next month or try a boy that sits a little higher?
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River

11:35:13 ♡ River

It's such an awkward situation I don't want to be in, so I'm losing it :')

River

11:30:36 ♡ River

Some* not someone xD

River

11:30:21 ♡ River

I hate overthinking things, this kid at my school told me his friend liked me but it was just another girl with the same name, someone girl asked him if he liked me and he said no, the other girl. Now I'm worried that he'll ask me something and continue the conversation 😭

Gypsy Family Farm

11:28:16

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Wild River Run Farm

12:54:38 WRR

okay thank you val!

River

12:53:49 ♡ River

It's only Tuesday and this week sucks already, can't wait for winter break so I can go back home to my family and friends and not be depresso expresso

Vahana

12:50:43 Val

They are usually ready when they have 2 bars for their level, WRR. So level 1 = 2 bars etc.

Wild River Run Farm

12:48:31 WRR

how do i actually know when my horses are ready to show?

Guard Horseman Gang

12:40:26 GHG

so excited for this dudes freshman year next month as well
-HEE Click-

Guard Horseman Gang

12:35:58 GHG

I have four EEE+ combo mares with color ratings 1 of 100 or less having their maiden years next year (198) and i am so excited for them

KPH Equestrian

12:35:27 Rapcoon | Jester

Ooh this week's giveaway mares is a chimmy

Sevens Haven

12:35:06 Tink

Its more about only showing when the horse is ready versus the number of horses showing.

Wild River Run Farm

12:32:00 WRR

does anyone know roughly how many horses i need showing to make a profit?

Guard Horseman Gang

12:30:40 GHG

i need to color test this one i feel like she is hiding something
-HEE Click-

Vahana

12:29:43 Val

You had 663 horses compete in reg. shows earning 394059

My little lvl 1 and 2s are improving :) *happy tears*

Sevens Haven

12:29:41 Tink

nice 1 of1!

Guard Horseman Gang

12:29:01 GHG

ooooo hello

-HEE Click-

Sevens Haven

12:26:00 Tink

that's so wild Gren, i showed 43 and feel accomplished

Greenheart Stables

12:18:36 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

Dec 16, 2025 00:17:54 You had 549 horses compete in reg. shows earning 1083967

Murphy's Elites

11:37:10 Fawn

Hmm should I use the same stud next month or try a boy that sits a little higher?
-HEE Click-

River

11:35:13 ♡ River

It's such an awkward situation I don't want to be in, so I'm losing it :')

River

11:30:36 ♡ River

Some* not someone xD

River

11:30:21 ♡ River

Gypsy Family Farm

11:28:16

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I'm Writing a Thing

December 18, 2020 04:39 PM

TenaciTea

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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.

The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.

And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD

Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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