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 River
12:03:19 ♡ River
Fern
Online art stuff can be a bitch sometimes, I'm so sorry! hopefully it doesn't happen again. :/
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:03:19 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
all that because of wings I swear xD well, guess that was fate's way of saying it's too early to start on valentine's art lmao
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:02:17 K/Mini Boyd Martin
I'm sorry :(
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:02:04 K/Mini Boyd Martin
Oh no fern
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:01:28 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
actually fuck my life just spent over an hour making the best piece I've made to date and I literally saved it then went to grab wings from my downloads and couldn't see them, powered off my computer, turned it back off, and it decided it was going to turn every single layer clear with zero chance of getting it back. great. 2026 is starting off fantastic.
MC Ace
11:56:57 McFossil
Green
Go Dionysis~ Yeah I just keep my boys for myself. It's easier. Straws available whenever necessary.
Greenheart Stables
11:53:12 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Thyrus might has some problems himself, Dionysus is climbing again 🙈, but I am going to start limiting his use for myself or else im not going to have any clean-ish lines lol
MC Ace
11:51:23 McFossil
Green
Nice! I have a sire and his son dueling it out over the WB Dressage top ten. I love it!
Greenheart Stables
11:49:46 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
They're good! Im excited to see how Baccus foals do come the monday next
Wolf Dancer
11:48:38 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Good Night Kirp don't let the wolfie's bite!
Bug in a Rug
11:48:05 Bug | Flea | KPH
awww lol<3

i gotta be off to bed, g'night, dont let the fleas or carps bite<3
MC Ace
11:47:41 McFossil
Green
It's so annoying. How are your CC babies doing?
Wolf Dancer
11:46:28 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Kirph I have no clue what he sees in me, but even if we just stay friends he's the most sweet friend ever!
Bug in a Rug
11:46:00 Bug | Flea | KPH
awwww my goodness wilf hes too cute 🥺
Bug in a Rug
11:45:43 Bug | Flea | KPH
59 Ws
43 Es
not terrible
Greenheart Stables
11:44:45 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Same boat bere unfortunately, though I'm more upset about the SH lol
Wolf Dancer
11:44:44 Wolf Burger (Leg)
It's not just good night, its good night, hope you sleep well, that God blesses your dreams and gives you deep sleep etc 🥺
Bug in a Rug
11:43:55 Bug | Flea | KPH
ooh WWolf that'd fit her color too 👀 lettuce will have to be a nickname lol


wilf
awwww omg 🥺
MC Ace
11:43:17 McFossil
UGH So many colts
*weeps*
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:16 Glacier Kittens
Name her Iceberg Lettuce Shadows

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 River
12:03:19 ♡ River
Fern
Online art stuff can be a bitch sometimes, I'm so sorry! hopefully it doesn't happen again. :/
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:03:19 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
all that because of wings I swear xD well, guess that was fate's way of saying it's too early to start on valentine's art lmao
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:02:17 K/Mini Boyd Martin
I'm sorry :(
Pacific Ridge Stable
12:02:04 K/Mini Boyd Martin
Oh no fern
RFS Thoroughbreds
12:01:28 Fern/Fref/Ferf/fih
actually fuck my life just spent over an hour making the best piece I've made to date and I literally saved it then went to grab wings from my downloads and couldn't see them, powered off my computer, turned it back off, and it decided it was going to turn every single layer clear with zero chance of getting it back. great. 2026 is starting off fantastic.
MC Ace
11:56:57 McFossil
Green
Go Dionysis~ Yeah I just keep my boys for myself. It's easier. Straws available whenever necessary.
Greenheart Stables
11:53:12 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Thyrus might has some problems himself, Dionysus is climbing again 🙈, but I am going to start limiting his use for myself or else im not going to have any clean-ish lines lol
MC Ace
11:51:23 McFossil
Green
Nice! I have a sire and his son dueling it out over the WB Dressage top ten. I love it!
Greenheart Stables
11:49:46 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
They're good! Im excited to see how Baccus foals do come the monday next
Wolf Dancer
11:48:38 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Good Night Kirp don't let the wolfie's bite!
Bug in a Rug
11:48:05 Bug | Flea | KPH
awww lol<3

i gotta be off to bed, g'night, dont let the fleas or carps bite<3
MC Ace
11:47:41 McFossil
Green
It's so annoying. How are your CC babies doing?
Wolf Dancer
11:46:28 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Kirph I have no clue what he sees in me, but even if we just stay friends he's the most sweet friend ever!
Bug in a Rug
11:46:00 Bug | Flea | KPH
awwww my goodness wilf hes too cute 🥺
Bug in a Rug
11:45:43 Bug | Flea | KPH
59 Ws
43 Es
not terrible
Greenheart Stables
11:44:45 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
@MC
Same boat bere unfortunately, though I'm more upset about the SH lol
Wolf Dancer
11:44:44 Wolf Burger (Leg)
It's not just good night, its good night, hope you sleep well, that God blesses your dreams and gives you deep sleep etc 🥺
Bug in a Rug
11:43:55 Bug | Flea | KPH
ooh WWolf that'd fit her color too 👀 lettuce will have to be a nickname lol


wilf
awwww omg 🥺
MC Ace
11:43:17 McFossil
UGH So many colts
*weeps*
Glacier Bay Cove
11:43:16 Glacier Kittens
Name her Iceberg Lettuce Shadows

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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