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Savannah Stables
12:45:08 Dusty
There is no fucking gift horse to look at in any orifice
Lucky Ranch
12:43:16 luhckeigh
dont look a gift horse in the mouth...
Savannah Stables
12:38:50 Dusty
Some people are like unbelievably bad gift givers to the point they dont give it not naming any names
Lucky Ranch
12:38:02 luhckeigh
some people are terrible gift receivers. not naming any names.
Lucky Ranch
12:37:34 luhckeigh
imagine the payment was forced onto you and then they blocked you so you couldnt send it back and its really taking a toll on your mental health...
Savannah Stables
12:36:52 Dusty
Ok so answer that but consider if there was a deadline and it got pushed back multiple times and also the payment was in a way agreed upon
Lucky Ranch
12:35:05 luhckeigh
what would you guys do if you were making a gift piece of art and its taking you awhile but there was never a deadline because its a gift, and then they send you money you didnt want and are gaslighting that youre scamming them...
Touya
12:30:14 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
lucky
yeah hopefully, cant take anything for the pain cause it dont help but i just gotta deal with it for like 20 to 25 more days
Savannah Stables
12:30:02 Dusty
yeah i get to pretend im nice
Lucky Ranch
12:29:35 luhckeigh
atleast they dont have to deal with you too
Savannah Stables
12:29:22 Dusty
no they still have to deal with you lets be honest
Lucky Ranch
12:29:17 luhckeigh
if we were zoo animals doing enrichment i think i would enjoy being a seal or perhaps sea lion and i have a beach ball and i sit in fun poses and kind of wave my neck around excitedly
Lucky Ranch
12:28:23 luhckeigh
yeah its way better we have each other because then nobody else has to deal with it
Savannah Stables
12:27:27 Dusty
boulder its like enrichment for zoo animals but for us so we dont fight anyone else in chat

Lucky im so proud of them
Lucky Ranch
12:25:51 luhckeigh
no my invsible friends have issues with authority...hmm wonder who they learned that from...
Boulder Creek
12:25:22 
Your relationship is so....
Awkward and hilarious to witness.
One step away from calling Mom - I mean a Mod.
Lucky Ranch
12:25:11 luhckeigh
touya
hey silver linings i guess!
hopefully youll feel better after, once you heal up
Savannah Stables
12:24:20 Dusty
tell them to stop staring at my ass
Lucky Ranch
12:23:15 luhckeigh
my invisible friends said youre fat
Savannah Stables
12:19:50 Dusty
Did you and your invisible friends come up with that one in the hallway...

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Savannah Stables
12:45:08 Dusty
There is no fucking gift horse to look at in any orifice
Lucky Ranch
12:43:16 luhckeigh
dont look a gift horse in the mouth...
Savannah Stables
12:38:50 Dusty
Some people are like unbelievably bad gift givers to the point they dont give it not naming any names
Lucky Ranch
12:38:02 luhckeigh
some people are terrible gift receivers. not naming any names.
Lucky Ranch
12:37:34 luhckeigh
imagine the payment was forced onto you and then they blocked you so you couldnt send it back and its really taking a toll on your mental health...
Savannah Stables
12:36:52 Dusty
Ok so answer that but consider if there was a deadline and it got pushed back multiple times and also the payment was in a way agreed upon
Lucky Ranch
12:35:05 luhckeigh
what would you guys do if you were making a gift piece of art and its taking you awhile but there was never a deadline because its a gift, and then they send you money you didnt want and are gaslighting that youre scamming them...
Touya
12:30:14 Burnt Chickie Nuggie
lucky
yeah hopefully, cant take anything for the pain cause it dont help but i just gotta deal with it for like 20 to 25 more days
Savannah Stables
12:30:02 Dusty
yeah i get to pretend im nice
Lucky Ranch
12:29:35 luhckeigh
atleast they dont have to deal with you too
Savannah Stables
12:29:22 Dusty
no they still have to deal with you lets be honest
Lucky Ranch
12:29:17 luhckeigh
if we were zoo animals doing enrichment i think i would enjoy being a seal or perhaps sea lion and i have a beach ball and i sit in fun poses and kind of wave my neck around excitedly
Lucky Ranch
12:28:23 luhckeigh
yeah its way better we have each other because then nobody else has to deal with it
Savannah Stables
12:27:27 Dusty
boulder its like enrichment for zoo animals but for us so we dont fight anyone else in chat

Lucky im so proud of them
Lucky Ranch
12:25:51 luhckeigh
no my invsible friends have issues with authority...hmm wonder who they learned that from...
Boulder Creek
12:25:22 
Your relationship is so....
Awkward and hilarious to witness.
One step away from calling Mom - I mean a Mod.
Lucky Ranch
12:25:11 luhckeigh
touya
hey silver linings i guess!
hopefully youll feel better after, once you heal up
Savannah Stables
12:24:20 Dusty
tell them to stop staring at my ass
Lucky Ranch
12:23:15 luhckeigh
my invisible friends said youre fat
Savannah Stables
12:19:50 Dusty
Did you and your invisible friends come up with that one in the hallway...

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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