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 BlackRose
05:07:29 Stella
@glacier

I love spicy food and I’m hoping that’s what’s making me feel a bit ill the spice and not the food itself…
Gemstone Stable
05:07:25 Snow❆Gem
@willow

Oh dear, new too! I hope you never have to do that again. *hugs*
MakeEm Fancy
05:06:51 Ally 💜
My husband does 3 day 12-16 hour weeks every other week.
Willow Grove
05:04:49 Stalker of Chat
Gem
I think I was just very unlucky for when I started. I just got that job last week so I didnt get a day off until today. Should be doing normal 5 day weeks after that. Hopefully.
Willow Grove
05:03:13 Stalker of Chat
My entire morning was spent catching up on sleep and chores, it was definitely needed lol
Wild River Run Farm
05:02:41 WRR
can someone join the race please i need the quest
Gemstone Stable
05:02:40 Snow❆Gem
I can't wait to get more hours, but that's just unreasonable! O.o
Glacier Bay Cove
04:58:59 Glacier Kittens
I love food things @Ally
I can’t eat spicy foods either @ Stella
Dash and Duchess
04:54:51 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, Oh my gosh that sounds like an actual nightmare! you deserve that day off lol
Willow Grove
04:52:49 Stalker of Chat
DD
That we do lol. Had me doing 8 hour shifts 7 days in a row x.x that was fun
BlackRose
04:51:47 Stella
I keep finding horses with tack missing and I’m like “oh so you were that alert. Okay gotcha”
Dash and Duchess
04:51:44 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, Oh that's awesome! we love days off around here lol xD
Willow Grove
04:50:48 Stalker of Chat
Im doing alright too! Finally got a day off work so thats been nice lol
TopGun Elites
04:50:34 mav/maverick
oh dear old chat >.>
BlackRose
04:50:12 Stella
I felt so nauseous a second ago I’m hoping it’s passed. I ate spicy food and I definitely don’t want that coming back up…
TopGun Elites
04:49:57 mav/maverick
jeri

wait whaaat? thats actually so cool that you can see linked accounts..
Dash and Duchess
04:49:10 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, heya! And i'm doing pretty goos lol, very tired >.< how about you?
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Stella, join the AAs!
BlackRose
04:49:09 Stella
I got some lovely AAs and it’s making me want an AA colony xD
Willow Grove
04:48:37 Stalker of Chat
Stella
Yess.. join us..
Willow Grove
04:48:23 Stalker of Chat
Also hi DD! Howve you been?

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 BlackRose
05:07:29 Stella
@glacier

I love spicy food and I’m hoping that’s what’s making me feel a bit ill the spice and not the food itself…
Gemstone Stable
05:07:25 Snow❆Gem
@willow

Oh dear, new too! I hope you never have to do that again. *hugs*
MakeEm Fancy
05:06:51 Ally 💜
My husband does 3 day 12-16 hour weeks every other week.
Willow Grove
05:04:49 Stalker of Chat
Gem
I think I was just very unlucky for when I started. I just got that job last week so I didnt get a day off until today. Should be doing normal 5 day weeks after that. Hopefully.
Willow Grove
05:03:13 Stalker of Chat
My entire morning was spent catching up on sleep and chores, it was definitely needed lol
Wild River Run Farm
05:02:41 WRR
can someone join the race please i need the quest
Gemstone Stable
05:02:40 Snow❆Gem
I can't wait to get more hours, but that's just unreasonable! O.o
Glacier Bay Cove
04:58:59 Glacier Kittens
I love food things @Ally
I can’t eat spicy foods either @ Stella
Dash and Duchess
04:54:51 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, Oh my gosh that sounds like an actual nightmare! you deserve that day off lol
Willow Grove
04:52:49 Stalker of Chat
DD
That we do lol. Had me doing 8 hour shifts 7 days in a row x.x that was fun
BlackRose
04:51:47 Stella
I keep finding horses with tack missing and I’m like “oh so you were that alert. Okay gotcha”
Dash and Duchess
04:51:44 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, Oh that's awesome! we love days off around here lol xD
Willow Grove
04:50:48 Stalker of Chat
Im doing alright too! Finally got a day off work so thats been nice lol
TopGun Elites
04:50:34 mav/maverick
oh dear old chat >.>
BlackRose
04:50:12 Stella
I felt so nauseous a second ago I’m hoping it’s passed. I ate spicy food and I definitely don’t want that coming back up…
TopGun Elites
04:49:57 mav/maverick
jeri

wait whaaat? thats actually so cool that you can see linked accounts..
Dash and Duchess
04:49:10 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, heya! And i'm doing pretty goos lol, very tired >.< how about you?
-
Stella, join the AAs!
BlackRose
04:49:09 Stella
I got some lovely AAs and it’s making me want an AA colony xD
Willow Grove
04:48:37 Stalker of Chat
Stella
Yess.. join us..
Willow Grove
04:48:23 Stalker of Chat
Also hi DD! Howve you been?

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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