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Wild Oakley Ranch
08:38:33 
hey! just wondering if there's a way you can check show results from a few days ago?
Majestic Sanctuary
08:37:45 
Granny- yes I have done extensive research and looked through many genetic tests and found the majority have ee/aa, ee/Aa, Ea/aa, Ea/Aa. Haven’t found many with the Ata variant.
Rosevale Crest
08:36:01 Aris/Quinn | i/sh
I genuinely think this person has beef against me
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:34:47 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
lmao
Tenebris Hollow
08:34:35 Aris/Quinn
I know like sir just this once:')
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:34:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
oh yuck
Tenebris Hollow
08:33:38 Aris/Quinn
Lol very slick XD. Currently trying to win an auction
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:32:53 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Quinn! how you been?
(ay that rhymed)
Tenebris Hollow
08:31:20 Aris/Quinn
Fref! Long time no see :)
Circle Star RIDs
08:28:43 Granny C
Majestic - I've only seen them with ee & aa, never anything else.
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:27:38 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
anytime my sister tries to boss me while we're cooking I just remind her of when she tried to crack an egg on a pan, and instead of It going in the pan, she hit it too hard and it went on the counter. she shuts up real quick lol
Campbell Equestrian
08:27:14 Hails
Chestnuts can only be ee. Ee and EE are bay or black (depending on their agouti)
Hummingbird Meadows
08:26:37 Bird
I have family members who are great cooks and act like Gordon Ramsey in the kitchen and it has kind of turned me off cooking. Being yelled at when your just learning how to cook doesn't boost your confidence.
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:25:39 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
but pasta and pasta sauces? mhm, even my dad likes it so that's how I know its good because either you get a 'wow, this is great! what's the recipe?' or a 'hm, it's good, yeah.' there is no in between with him xD
Majestic Sanctuary
08:24:37 
Black chestnuts have combination of either ee or Ee never EE. And aa, Aa and Ata. All I have seen have PrlPrl.
Hummingbird Meadows
08:23:53 Bird
I bake better than I cook.
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:23:20 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
the other day I burnt box mix muffins
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:23:13 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I can cook I just can't bake
River
08:22:25 ♡ River
Bird
Haha, I'd be one of those neighbors, can't cook for the life of me ;)
Hummingbird Meadows
08:19:00 Bird
@River, that's nice! I've never enjoyed the baked goods my neighbors have brought. 😆 I have had multiple neighbors and none of them can bake despite their best efforts or well meaning wishes.

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Wild Oakley Ranch
08:38:33 
hey! just wondering if there's a way you can check show results from a few days ago?
Majestic Sanctuary
08:37:45 
Granny- yes I have done extensive research and looked through many genetic tests and found the majority have ee/aa, ee/Aa, Ea/aa, Ea/Aa. Haven’t found many with the Ata variant.
Rosevale Crest
08:36:01 Aris/Quinn | i/sh
I genuinely think this person has beef against me
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:34:47 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
lmao
Tenebris Hollow
08:34:35 Aris/Quinn
I know like sir just this once:')
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:34:02 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
oh yuck
Tenebris Hollow
08:33:38 Aris/Quinn
Lol very slick XD. Currently trying to win an auction
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:32:53 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
Quinn! how you been?
(ay that rhymed)
Tenebris Hollow
08:31:20 Aris/Quinn
Fref! Long time no see :)
Circle Star RIDs
08:28:43 Granny C
Majestic - I've only seen them with ee & aa, never anything else.
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:27:38 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
anytime my sister tries to boss me while we're cooking I just remind her of when she tried to crack an egg on a pan, and instead of It going in the pan, she hit it too hard and it went on the counter. she shuts up real quick lol
Campbell Equestrian
08:27:14 Hails
Chestnuts can only be ee. Ee and EE are bay or black (depending on their agouti)
Hummingbird Meadows
08:26:37 Bird
I have family members who are great cooks and act like Gordon Ramsey in the kitchen and it has kind of turned me off cooking. Being yelled at when your just learning how to cook doesn't boost your confidence.
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:25:39 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
but pasta and pasta sauces? mhm, even my dad likes it so that's how I know its good because either you get a 'wow, this is great! what's the recipe?' or a 'hm, it's good, yeah.' there is no in between with him xD
Majestic Sanctuary
08:24:37 
Black chestnuts have combination of either ee or Ee never EE. And aa, Aa and Ata. All I have seen have PrlPrl.
Hummingbird Meadows
08:23:53 Bird
I bake better than I cook.
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:23:20 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
the other day I burnt box mix muffins
RFS Thoroughbreds
08:23:13 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I can cook I just can't bake
River
08:22:25 ♡ River
Bird
Haha, I'd be one of those neighbors, can't cook for the life of me ;)
Hummingbird Meadows
08:19:00 Bird
@River, that's nice! I've never enjoyed the baked goods my neighbors have brought. 😆 I have had multiple neighbors and none of them can bake despite their best efforts or well meaning wishes.

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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