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Embervale Acres
06:59:41 Solar Phoenix
Holy shit!! No items?? Hello baby boy!
-HEE Click-
Minerva
06:47:38 Min
Not particularly, but then I explore lots anyway
North Street
06:42:37 North
Does anyone else find Explore quests really boring. Random horse, random biome, click, click, click.
Wildflower Ridge
06:08:34 Beepers
Geld 400 stallions for 8k EBs? thats. thats more than triple my barns my dude
Minerva
05:22:39 Min
It's grey but dry currently- rain due in a couple of hours I think. Going to have a laundry day and count that as productive xD
Ashcroft Park Stud
05:13:48 Ash
Definitely the latter Min if your weather is anything like ours right now 😂
Minerva
04:58:52 Min
Oop- couldn't find the fence knocker I was supposed to be borrowing so thats my day freed up! Can't decide if Im more sad that I can't put my wooden posts in for my pen or happy that I don't fucking have to 🤣🤣🤣
Santana Rising
04:40:10 San
Too bad he skipped the dun, but great bravery - and ToTo too!
Lunalovegood
04:35:14 Loony/Loony Tune
Eve, loving the name xD
Golden Crest
04:29:41 | Eve
him * x_x
Golden Crest
04:29:29 | Eve
only just bravery tested her -HEE Click- xD
Santana Rising
03:52:25 San
So true! I'm never inclined to buy them from others since that money is better spent on upgrades in my opinion - but I do like them as a gimmick when they are gifted to me by the game 😂
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:51:10 Ash
Thanks :) will never turn down some rerolls haha
Santana Rising
03:50:30 San
And first is 10k,should have mentioned that too
Santana Rising
03:49:41 San
2nd gift is 20k ebs and the last two are rerolls, but I don't remember exactly how many. I think 5 and 10.
Asfamoth
03:49:25 Asfa
Check your events and games section on your stable page, Ash
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:49:09 Ash
Oh sorry, just seen you can see on your stable page
Santana Rising
03:48:30 San
I have 'feed horses' now. Thank goodness it's Monday tomorrow!
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:48:27 Ash
Do we know what the gifts might be? Trying to work out if it’s worth it lol
Minerva
03:47:11 Min
Mood San lol. Ive done a capture tobi, capture black and capture 50 this morning 🙈

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Embervale Acres
06:59:41 Solar Phoenix
Holy shit!! No items?? Hello baby boy!
-HEE Click-
Minerva
06:47:38 Min
Not particularly, but then I explore lots anyway
North Street
06:42:37 North
Does anyone else find Explore quests really boring. Random horse, random biome, click, click, click.
Wildflower Ridge
06:08:34 Beepers
Geld 400 stallions for 8k EBs? thats. thats more than triple my barns my dude
Minerva
05:22:39 Min
It's grey but dry currently- rain due in a couple of hours I think. Going to have a laundry day and count that as productive xD
Ashcroft Park Stud
05:13:48 Ash
Definitely the latter Min if your weather is anything like ours right now 😂
Minerva
04:58:52 Min
Oop- couldn't find the fence knocker I was supposed to be borrowing so thats my day freed up! Can't decide if Im more sad that I can't put my wooden posts in for my pen or happy that I don't fucking have to 🤣🤣🤣
Santana Rising
04:40:10 San
Too bad he skipped the dun, but great bravery - and ToTo too!
Lunalovegood
04:35:14 Loony/Loony Tune
Eve, loving the name xD
Golden Crest
04:29:41 | Eve
him * x_x
Golden Crest
04:29:29 | Eve
only just bravery tested her -HEE Click- xD
Santana Rising
03:52:25 San
So true! I'm never inclined to buy them from others since that money is better spent on upgrades in my opinion - but I do like them as a gimmick when they are gifted to me by the game 😂
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:51:10 Ash
Thanks :) will never turn down some rerolls haha
Santana Rising
03:50:30 San
And first is 10k,should have mentioned that too
Santana Rising
03:49:41 San
2nd gift is 20k ebs and the last two are rerolls, but I don't remember exactly how many. I think 5 and 10.
Asfamoth
03:49:25 Asfa
Check your events and games section on your stable page, Ash
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:49:09 Ash
Oh sorry, just seen you can see on your stable page
Santana Rising
03:48:30 San
I have 'feed horses' now. Thank goodness it's Monday tomorrow!
Ashcroft Park Stud
03:48:27 Ash
Do we know what the gifts might be? Trying to work out if it’s worth it lol
Minerva
03:47:11 Min
Mood San lol. Ive done a capture tobi, capture black and capture 50 this morning 🙈

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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