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 NightClan
05:11:03 Night
Wolf,
Yeah I'm super excited for him! The potential for an apricot with rabi has me on my toes xD
MakeEm Fancy
05:10:23 Ally 💜
Lol
Sunset River Arabian
05:10:09 Athena - AAs
ally
I could breed your match and throw a med on for you lol
Wolf Dancer
05:09:54 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Night OMG I didn't realize he was Ee Prlprl *_*
Wolf Dancer
05:09:30 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Night Ohhh crossing my fingers!!!
Wolf Dancer
05:09:10 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Mirth felt like one 😭 And it happened in slow mo I feel like xD
NightClan
05:09:04 Night
This guy better have a good wk 7...my other www colt I had hopes for didn't lol
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
05:07:00 Ally 💜
Quest master has been stingy with medallions for me :/
Narran Park
05:06:57 Sting
interesting this boy is up on wk 10...
-HEE Click-
Sunset River Arabian
05:05:53 Athena - AAs
Speaking of...I dont know what to do with all the meds that are locked to my account. It seems such a waste to delete them. I wish I could donate them to trivia or something
Mythological
05:05:34 Crowley | Krampus
Wilf
That sounds like an animated movie... 😅😭
Wolf Dancer
05:05:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
I hope so >.> It hurt my back pretty bad though, hopefully didn't resprain it >.> But I for sure popped my hip out of alignment a bit so I'll probably need to see my chiropractor >.>
Wolf Dancer
05:04:29 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Mirth
Mr. Mustang bucked fast enough it launched me up, I was still in the air when he bucked again then hit his neck, and like front flipped to my butt/back on the ground >.> it was very dramatic and painful, then I had to get back on him for a few minutes to walk in circles because I didn't want to end with me on the ground >.< and now I don't really want to ride him for a bit >.>
Sunset River Arabian
05:04:23 Athena - AAs
lol well either way I'll be watching her. Simplying cant afford premium on so many accounts anymore since the price increase so I'm cutting it down to 2. One can be KNN and RID and this one will be the TB and AA. No more PONs for me I guess
Icewar Isles
05:03:07 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
groundwork day or two until youre ready wolf. youll get it back, youre young and still bouncy XD
Icewar Isles
05:02:01 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
It is quite pleasant.. And if she does like "me" i bet its the man she likes vs me LOL she aint ever seen the likes of him XD XD
Mythological
05:01:29 Crowley | Krampus
Moon
Go to where you want to put it and scroll all the way down.
Mythological
05:00:47 Crowley | Krampus
Wilf
I got bucked off of Ruby my crotch hit her withers...
Sunset River Arabian
04:59:35 Athena - AAs
Maybe she'll like you better than me lol
My stable set over there is of her and I'm going to miss it. I wonder if after the account is deleted if i can use it on a different one
moon stable
04:59:15 Blue
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 NightClan
05:11:03 Night
Wolf,
Yeah I'm super excited for him! The potential for an apricot with rabi has me on my toes xD
MakeEm Fancy
05:10:23 Ally 💜
Lol
Sunset River Arabian
05:10:09 Athena - AAs
ally
I could breed your match and throw a med on for you lol
Wolf Dancer
05:09:54 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Night OMG I didn't realize he was Ee Prlprl *_*
Wolf Dancer
05:09:30 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Night Ohhh crossing my fingers!!!
Wolf Dancer
05:09:10 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Mirth felt like one 😭 And it happened in slow mo I feel like xD
NightClan
05:09:04 Night
This guy better have a good wk 7...my other www colt I had hopes for didn't lol
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
05:07:00 Ally 💜
Quest master has been stingy with medallions for me :/
Narran Park
05:06:57 Sting
interesting this boy is up on wk 10...
-HEE Click-
Sunset River Arabian
05:05:53 Athena - AAs
Speaking of...I dont know what to do with all the meds that are locked to my account. It seems such a waste to delete them. I wish I could donate them to trivia or something
Mythological
05:05:34 Crowley | Krampus
Wilf
That sounds like an animated movie... 😅😭
Wolf Dancer
05:05:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Keo
I hope so >.> It hurt my back pretty bad though, hopefully didn't resprain it >.> But I for sure popped my hip out of alignment a bit so I'll probably need to see my chiropractor >.>
Wolf Dancer
05:04:29 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Mirth
Mr. Mustang bucked fast enough it launched me up, I was still in the air when he bucked again then hit his neck, and like front flipped to my butt/back on the ground >.> it was very dramatic and painful, then I had to get back on him for a few minutes to walk in circles because I didn't want to end with me on the ground >.< and now I don't really want to ride him for a bit >.>
Sunset River Arabian
05:04:23 Athena - AAs
lol well either way I'll be watching her. Simplying cant afford premium on so many accounts anymore since the price increase so I'm cutting it down to 2. One can be KNN and RID and this one will be the TB and AA. No more PONs for me I guess
Icewar Isles
05:03:07 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
groundwork day or two until youre ready wolf. youll get it back, youre young and still bouncy XD
Icewar Isles
05:02:01 Ice/ Keo/ Tiny
It is quite pleasant.. And if she does like "me" i bet its the man she likes vs me LOL she aint ever seen the likes of him XD XD
Mythological
05:01:29 Crowley | Krampus
Moon
Go to where you want to put it and scroll all the way down.
Mythological
05:00:47 Crowley | Krampus
Wilf
I got bucked off of Ruby my crotch hit her withers...
Sunset River Arabian
04:59:35 Athena - AAs
Maybe she'll like you better than me lol
My stable set over there is of her and I'm going to miss it. I wonder if after the account is deleted if i can use it on a different one
moon stable
04:59:15 Blue
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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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