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Jericho Stables

02:11:19

Jungle woman lmao

Nightfall Dressage

02:11:01 Witchy

Fawn
Nice!! I haven't been involved with snakes for a while so I'm not as good as spotting out morphs as I used to be lol

All Breeds

02:08:33 Fawn

Jungle woma*

All Breeds

02:08:20 Fawn

Super enchi, jungle woman, orange dream, vanilla and pos het pied

Nightfall Dressage

02:07:20 Witchy

Fawn
Ooo what morph is he?

All Breeds

02:05:37 Fawn

I love his eyes so much. They're green and around the pupil is yellow. He has a lot of freckles as well. Super chill and curious

Jericho Stables

02:01:39

Aww look at that cute little face

All Breeds

01:58:50 Fawn

He will be a breeder eventually <3 We've had a successful clutch from our female and wanted to try some new genes as well :)

Greenheart Stables

01:56:42 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Fawn
Pretty boy! Is he going to be a breeder or just a pet?

All Breeds

01:55:24 Fawn

Yes I do :D Haven't decided on a name for him yet
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Greenheart Stables

01:54:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Peggy
I will say the most daunting thing for me is eyeshadow and eyeliner, I've kinda got everything else down

Vixen Creek

01:54:42 Vixie

feel free to reach out if you have any questions, I might be able to help :)

Greenheart Stables

01:53:34 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Fawn
Ooh any pictures

Pegasus Lane

01:53:18 Peggy (or) Peg

Well, I haven't gone in myself. I'm a bit of a whimp, but I have heard horror stories. 😅😅
There's also no store near me, I'd have to drive 3-4 hours lmao

Cadence Farms

01:52:51 evebot

It gets down to the 30's here. I kind of want him in the house, I just don't want my dog chasing him.

All Breeds

01:52:34 Fawn

Oh I also just got a new ball python <3

Vixen Creek

01:52:17 Vixie

Damn peggy, when that was my job I would always ask what the budget was

All Breeds

01:52:05 Fawn

Depends on the temps in your area Eve. If it gets to cold at night I'd say you have a bug catching lizard in your house xD

Greenheart Stables

01:51:38 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Peggy
Yeah, customer service in retail IS predatory when it's company owned

Vixen Creek

01:50:30 Vixie

I love makeup and I think I'm decent at it, I just don't have time to wear it anymore :')

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Jericho Stables

02:11:19

Jungle woman lmao

Nightfall Dressage

02:11:01 Witchy

Fawn
Nice!! I haven't been involved with snakes for a while so I'm not as good as spotting out morphs as I used to be lol

All Breeds

02:08:33 Fawn

Jungle woma*

All Breeds

02:08:20 Fawn

Super enchi, jungle woman, orange dream, vanilla and pos het pied

Nightfall Dressage

02:07:20 Witchy

Fawn
Ooo what morph is he?

All Breeds

02:05:37 Fawn

I love his eyes so much. They're green and around the pupil is yellow. He has a lot of freckles as well. Super chill and curious

Jericho Stables

02:01:39

Aww look at that cute little face

All Breeds

01:58:50 Fawn

He will be a breeder eventually <3 We've had a successful clutch from our female and wanted to try some new genes as well :)

Greenheart Stables

01:56:42 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Fawn
Pretty boy! Is he going to be a breeder or just a pet?

All Breeds

01:55:24 Fawn

Yes I do :D Haven't decided on a name for him yet
-Click-

Greenheart Stables

01:54:47 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Peggy
I will say the most daunting thing for me is eyeshadow and eyeliner, I've kinda got everything else down

Vixen Creek

01:54:42 Vixie

feel free to reach out if you have any questions, I might be able to help :)

Greenheart Stables

01:53:34 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Fawn
Ooh any pictures

Pegasus Lane

01:53:18 Peggy (or) Peg

Well, I haven't gone in myself. I'm a bit of a whimp, but I have heard horror stories. 😅😅
There's also no store near me, I'd have to drive 3-4 hours lmao

Cadence Farms

01:52:51 evebot

It gets down to the 30's here. I kind of want him in the house, I just don't want my dog chasing him.

All Breeds

01:52:34 Fawn

Oh I also just got a new ball python <3

Vixen Creek

01:52:17 Vixie

Damn peggy, when that was my job I would always ask what the budget was

All Breeds

01:52:05 Fawn

Depends on the temps in your area Eve. If it gets to cold at night I'd say you have a bug catching lizard in your house xD

Greenheart Stables

01:51:38 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Peggy
Yeah, customer service in retail IS predatory when it's company owned

Vixen Creek

01:50:30 Vixie

I love makeup and I think I'm decent at it, I just don't have time to wear it anymore :')

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I'm Writing a Thing

December 18, 2020 04:39 PM

TenaciTea

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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.

The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.

And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD

Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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