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Gemstone Stable
05:40:44 Snow❆Gem
@eury

lol You have ONE happy kitty! :D

@dory

Ah, OK. Maybe just surprise him with a sweet treat he likes? Or share something you like or a tradition. :)
The Undercity
05:38:48 Dory
I know one thing that he wants so imma get that but other than that he says he doesnt need anything
The Old Gods
05:38:47 Void Malign
I have important news
My cat is head butting my face and drooling on me
that is all
Gemstone Stable
05:37:30 Snow❆Gem
@dory

Oh dear! OK. :D Do you know anything that makes him feel good? That's a start.
The Undercity
05:36:13 Dory
I am so bad at shopping for gifts I dont even know what to get my boyfriend XD
Gemstone Stable
05:28:30 Snow❆Gem
@dory

Help me shop Ross Simons? Mom wants to get me a piece of jewelry from there for Xmas. But too many things to go through. lol I can give her 4 items for her to chose from, $200 is the budget tops. :D
Elite Equine Stables
05:16:59 Honey
Me too dory!
The Undercity
05:14:38 Dory
Man I am insanely bored I want to do art but at the same time I dont >.<
308 Precision
05:14:33 8
Oooh 1/1 -HEE Click-
KPH Equestrian
05:12:58 Rapcoon | Jester
ooh pretty SplSpl
-HEE Click-
Ranch Lands Training
05:11:58 Lilly/PON Addict
I think the key if you can swing it is have a mix of BM and hand entering. The BM will alway enter *some* so its a baseline. Then you can enter a few extra that you think are ready. Once I reach 400 enrolled I start to enter by hand. But max 100, or else I get overwhelmed
Arctic Dusk
05:08:04 AL - Hateful RIDs
Yeah, she likes numbers and levels from what I have seen
Minerva
05:06:53 Min
She can be a little bit unreliable, and it definitely shows more with smaller herd sizes rather than when she's got a few hundred to play with.
Wild River Run Farm
05:04:16 WRR
Im still not entirely sure how she works because she was set to competitive and only entered 1 horse when i knew a few of my others should be ready so ive been trying to hand sort them when i give them to her
Minerva
05:01:53 Min
Being set to all won't be helping you, but if your system works for you then fair play.
Elite Equine Stables
05:00:30 Honey
-HEE Click- she is gorgeous!
Wild River Run Farm
05:00:27 WRR
im training only SD at the moment lol
Wild River Run Farm
05:00:09 WRR
yes i know they are set to xc i was just losing money when they were jumping and now im making some profit
Wild River Run Farm
04:59:25 WRR
I also have enough money for the entries
Minerva
04:59:17 Min
Hmm, there are a few that are ready so she should have entered at least a couple. Are you aware that you've got everything set to only enter XC though? Including your jumping geldings lol

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Gemstone Stable
05:40:44 Snow❆Gem
@eury

lol You have ONE happy kitty! :D

@dory

Ah, OK. Maybe just surprise him with a sweet treat he likes? Or share something you like or a tradition. :)
The Undercity
05:38:48 Dory
I know one thing that he wants so imma get that but other than that he says he doesnt need anything
The Old Gods
05:38:47 Void Malign
I have important news
My cat is head butting my face and drooling on me
that is all
Gemstone Stable
05:37:30 Snow❆Gem
@dory

Oh dear! OK. :D Do you know anything that makes him feel good? That's a start.
The Undercity
05:36:13 Dory
I am so bad at shopping for gifts I dont even know what to get my boyfriend XD
Gemstone Stable
05:28:30 Snow❆Gem
@dory

Help me shop Ross Simons? Mom wants to get me a piece of jewelry from there for Xmas. But too many things to go through. lol I can give her 4 items for her to chose from, $200 is the budget tops. :D
Elite Equine Stables
05:16:59 Honey
Me too dory!
The Undercity
05:14:38 Dory
Man I am insanely bored I want to do art but at the same time I dont >.<
308 Precision
05:14:33 8
Oooh 1/1 -HEE Click-
KPH Equestrian
05:12:58 Rapcoon | Jester
ooh pretty SplSpl
-HEE Click-
Ranch Lands Training
05:11:58 Lilly/PON Addict
I think the key if you can swing it is have a mix of BM and hand entering. The BM will alway enter *some* so its a baseline. Then you can enter a few extra that you think are ready. Once I reach 400 enrolled I start to enter by hand. But max 100, or else I get overwhelmed
Arctic Dusk
05:08:04 AL - Hateful RIDs
Yeah, she likes numbers and levels from what I have seen
Minerva
05:06:53 Min
She can be a little bit unreliable, and it definitely shows more with smaller herd sizes rather than when she's got a few hundred to play with.
Wild River Run Farm
05:04:16 WRR
Im still not entirely sure how she works because she was set to competitive and only entered 1 horse when i knew a few of my others should be ready so ive been trying to hand sort them when i give them to her
Minerva
05:01:53 Min
Being set to all won't be helping you, but if your system works for you then fair play.
Elite Equine Stables
05:00:30 Honey
-HEE Click- she is gorgeous!
Wild River Run Farm
05:00:27 WRR
im training only SD at the moment lol
Wild River Run Farm
05:00:09 WRR
yes i know they are set to xc i was just losing money when they were jumping and now im making some profit
Wild River Run Farm
04:59:25 WRR
I also have enough money for the entries
Minerva
04:59:17 Min
Hmm, there are a few that are ready so she should have entered at least a couple. Are you aware that you've got everything set to only enter XC though? Including your jumping geldings lol

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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