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Wolf Dancer
03:15:02 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Ven
That would be so funny xD
SwankPony
03:12:25 Swanky
It is prob if they are still in game or not. I have horses from over a year ago I can still make memorial for.
The Joker
03:12:06 Ari <3
Ok but YHH memorial art would be so funny, just a funeral pyre with insert horse here
Motonemi
03:10:31 AL, mum to Nemi
That part cant be correct cause I have horses on the list of possible memorables from my first playing years
The Joker
03:10:29 Ari <3
I would actually cackle over that Ven
Ellsworths Eden
03:10:19 
@Stormsong

I absolutely adore it XD
Stormsong Manor
03:10:07 Ven
In the middle of entering shows? Too bad. Horse on fire
Minerva
03:10:03 Min
Full support xD
Stormsong Manor
03:09:29 Ven
We need an option for viking funerals. You pay 1m per horse and the entire site freezes out and makes you watch an animation of the horse sailing away in flames
Bioshock Manor
03:06:17 Storm
Yes. Can only put in a memorial for up to a week after they die
Blossom Baskets
03:05:53 Aurora/rora
hii
Motonemi
03:04:52 AL, mum to Nemi
And also, some horses are not possible to put in memorial since game deletes them
Bioshock Manor
03:03:43 Storm
Pasture has to be empty at first to chsnge it to a memorial
Bioshock Manor
03:03:17 Storm
There's an option to change to memorial. It's not reversible though
Dakota Lodge
03:02:27 
If I buy a pasture and put a horse I would love to have a memorial for him. How do I do it?
Bioshock Manor
02:44:28 Storm
Just watched a 30 min video on 'things children do not need to know' in microbio. Was interesting at least. got a 92 on that exam
Kiss Of Life
02:36:05 Dae
Athena thats wild 0.0 Pretty girl too
Sunset River Arabian
02:35:29 Athena - AAs
What the fuck?! You're a pasture baby. You're supposed to be like EEE
-HEE Click-
MPWTS EQUINES
02:26:52 Lunar/luna
Y'all I just got cheetah spots on my horse from the reroll so damn lucky!!!!!!
Tenebris Hollow
02:18:13 Aris/Quinn
Anyone down to help me stock hunt. Lol

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Wolf Dancer
03:15:02 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Ven
That would be so funny xD
SwankPony
03:12:25 Swanky
It is prob if they are still in game or not. I have horses from over a year ago I can still make memorial for.
The Joker
03:12:06 Ari <3
Ok but YHH memorial art would be so funny, just a funeral pyre with insert horse here
Motonemi
03:10:31 AL, mum to Nemi
That part cant be correct cause I have horses on the list of possible memorables from my first playing years
The Joker
03:10:29 Ari <3
I would actually cackle over that Ven
Ellsworths Eden
03:10:19 
@Stormsong

I absolutely adore it XD
Stormsong Manor
03:10:07 Ven
In the middle of entering shows? Too bad. Horse on fire
Minerva
03:10:03 Min
Full support xD
Stormsong Manor
03:09:29 Ven
We need an option for viking funerals. You pay 1m per horse and the entire site freezes out and makes you watch an animation of the horse sailing away in flames
Bioshock Manor
03:06:17 Storm
Yes. Can only put in a memorial for up to a week after they die
Blossom Baskets
03:05:53 Aurora/rora
hii
Motonemi
03:04:52 AL, mum to Nemi
And also, some horses are not possible to put in memorial since game deletes them
Bioshock Manor
03:03:43 Storm
Pasture has to be empty at first to chsnge it to a memorial
Bioshock Manor
03:03:17 Storm
There's an option to change to memorial. It's not reversible though
Dakota Lodge
03:02:27 
If I buy a pasture and put a horse I would love to have a memorial for him. How do I do it?
Bioshock Manor
02:44:28 Storm
Just watched a 30 min video on 'things children do not need to know' in microbio. Was interesting at least. got a 92 on that exam
Kiss Of Life
02:36:05 Dae
Athena thats wild 0.0 Pretty girl too
Sunset River Arabian
02:35:29 Athena - AAs
What the fuck?! You're a pasture baby. You're supposed to be like EEE
-HEE Click-
MPWTS EQUINES
02:26:52 Lunar/luna
Y'all I just got cheetah spots on my horse from the reroll so damn lucky!!!!!!
Tenebris Hollow
02:18:13 Aris/Quinn
Anyone down to help me stock hunt. Lol

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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