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Mythological
10:37:19 Crowley | Krampus
Wooohooo no internet 😭😂
CrimsonValleyEstate
10:36:36 Crimson
thanks!
ArcticLights
10:35:30 Ceci / (Call me) AL
No Crimson, they only stop when they hit level 10 in all disiplines
CrimsonValleyEstate
10:34:55 Crimson
Do horses stop showing as seniors?
Campbell Equestrian
10:28:07 Hails
It took me until this minute that the design of TB on here is cross-cantering lol
Sinister Ranch
10:12:21 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder
@san thank you, that shows you how long away i have not been paying attention LOL
Sinister Ranch
10:11:31 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder
@Lilly name the colt Tow Mayter
Santana Rising
10:11:17 San
Sinn, that's the 'new' sooty which is already 2 or 3 years old at this point I think 😉
ArcticLights
10:11:02 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Sinn, a heavy sooty
Rubygem-Chenya
10:10:43 Asha-Star
-HEE Click-

I like what i did to my avatar (:
Santana Rising
10:10:23 San
And there should be some extra if you gained gingerbread men for the 4 additional gifts.
Sinister Ranch
10:09:59 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder
-HEE Click-
What in the world.... is this something new-
@San okay I will see into that, also I recently got back into HE so I am trying to remember everything
Komorebi
10:08:28 Jazz
oooh ok thanks
ArcticLights
10:07:50 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Jazz, go to accountant. We got 10k
Komorebi
10:06:59 Jazz
how do you find out what you got "under the christmas tree"?
Santana Rising
10:05:56 San
This doesn't look like a homo sabi to me, Sinn. Homo dun though - which I consider the opposite of a problem
Ranch Lands Training
10:04:57 Lilly/PON Addict
Cutie -HEE Click-
Sinister Ranch
10:03:09 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder
-HEE Click-
Idek if I should give this one away bcni always end up getting a gru sab all the time.
Santana Rising
09:57:51 San
Some greya in the gane actually do already look like they have static as foals, but mist are just their base colour as foals. And some red greys still look like red roans when they are adults
Arabs of the Anglos
09:56:34 
I usually avoid breeding greys. Kindof a love/hate relationship. They're pretty but I hate when my super pretty foals turn out to be greys.

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Mythological
10:37:19 Crowley | Krampus
Wooohooo no internet 😭😂
CrimsonValleyEstate
10:36:36 Crimson
thanks!
ArcticLights
10:35:30 Ceci / (Call me) AL
No Crimson, they only stop when they hit level 10 in all disiplines
CrimsonValleyEstate
10:34:55 Crimson
Do horses stop showing as seniors?
Campbell Equestrian
10:28:07 Hails
It took me until this minute that the design of TB on here is cross-cantering lol
Sinister Ranch
10:12:21 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder
@san thank you, that shows you how long away i have not been paying attention LOL
Sinister Ranch
10:11:31 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder
@Lilly name the colt Tow Mayter
Santana Rising
10:11:17 San
Sinn, that's the 'new' sooty which is already 2 or 3 years old at this point I think 😉
ArcticLights
10:11:02 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Sinn, a heavy sooty
Rubygem-Chenya
10:10:43 Asha-Star
-HEE Click-

I like what i did to my avatar (:
Santana Rising
10:10:23 San
And there should be some extra if you gained gingerbread men for the 4 additional gifts.
Sinister Ranch
10:09:59 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder
-HEE Click-
What in the world.... is this something new-
@San okay I will see into that, also I recently got back into HE so I am trying to remember everything
Komorebi
10:08:28 Jazz
oooh ok thanks
ArcticLights
10:07:50 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Jazz, go to accountant. We got 10k
Komorebi
10:06:59 Jazz
how do you find out what you got "under the christmas tree"?
Santana Rising
10:05:56 San
This doesn't look like a homo sabi to me, Sinn. Homo dun though - which I consider the opposite of a problem
Ranch Lands Training
10:04:57 Lilly/PON Addict
Cutie -HEE Click-
Sinister Ranch
10:03:09 SINN~ ISH/SH Breeder
-HEE Click-
Idek if I should give this one away bcni always end up getting a gru sab all the time.
Santana Rising
09:57:51 San
Some greya in the gane actually do already look like they have static as foals, but mist are just their base colour as foals. And some red greys still look like red roans when they are adults
Arabs of the Anglos
09:56:34 
I usually avoid breeding greys. Kindof a love/hate relationship. They're pretty but I hate when my super pretty foals turn out to be greys.

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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