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Angels angels
03:50:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
So excited for him *-*
Hopefully my e prl WB filly will match him when she is old enough
Glacier Bay Cove
03:47:32 Glacier Kittens
I WILL complete this quest even if it kills me
Willow Wood Stable
03:47:26 Lo
Thanks Min! Might actually start taking his breeding seriously now 😂
Glacier Bay Cove
03:46:37 Glacier Kittens
Reward: 5,000 Eden Bucks 5,000Store Credits 1Frontier Map 1Map Of Secrets
Santana Rising
03:45:58 San
That's a new quest. What's the reward, Glacier? Didn't encounter that one before.
Bioshock Manor
03:45:40 Storm
We really need some tracker for training, saw over half with no training at 2 years on TB colts...
E.T. Eventing
03:45:19 Zrek
Claire - Sorry to hear that. It has been a struggle trying to force myself to complete work I don't believe in. It feels like I'm actively destroying myself. I hope you find some change soon.
Minerva
03:45:14 Min
Glacier if you do a few map captures you'll probably get a P brave before too long
Minerva
03:44:55 Min
Ayyy nice one Lo!!!
Glacier Bay Cove
03:44:26 Glacier Kittens
Impossible quest Go Exploring and have a horse earn a Premium bravery rating
Willow Wood Stable
03:44:05 Lo
-HEE Click-

Finally bravery-rated him 😍
Santana Rising
03:44:03 San
I made a bug post about that on Dec 16th last year. With screen shots and all. Never got any response.
Claire´s Kingdom
03:42:08 
I understand you completley-same thing with me :(
Minerva
03:42:05 Min
It's been known about for a while Ari so I wouldn't hold your breath unfortunately
The Joker
03:41:18 Ari <3
Oh weird, hopefully they fix it soon
E.T. Eventing
03:39:56 Zrek
Hey y'all, have any of you struggled feeling trapped by school? Currently feeling as though I want to move forward into who I am now that I have a better understanding, but I feel that school is actively blocking that ability (through the constant information overload leading to lack of clarity and constant stress). It just feels like something is wrong, and I wanted to know if any of you had experience with what helped.
Neverfade Manor
03:37:39 
They didn't disappear, just couldn't be used :(
Neverfade Manor
03:37:16 
I had the stud dead and the mare was deleted, so that is why I couldn't use it
The Joker
03:36:48 Ari <3
Do embryos disappear if both parents are dead?
Jericho Stables
03:35:35 
No one is in charge of dead horses. It is code that just happens automatically

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Angels angels
03:50:57 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
So excited for him *-*
Hopefully my e prl WB filly will match him when she is old enough
Glacier Bay Cove
03:47:32 Glacier Kittens
I WILL complete this quest even if it kills me
Willow Wood Stable
03:47:26 Lo
Thanks Min! Might actually start taking his breeding seriously now 😂
Glacier Bay Cove
03:46:37 Glacier Kittens
Reward: 5,000 Eden Bucks 5,000Store Credits 1Frontier Map 1Map Of Secrets
Santana Rising
03:45:58 San
That's a new quest. What's the reward, Glacier? Didn't encounter that one before.
Bioshock Manor
03:45:40 Storm
We really need some tracker for training, saw over half with no training at 2 years on TB colts...
E.T. Eventing
03:45:19 Zrek
Claire - Sorry to hear that. It has been a struggle trying to force myself to complete work I don't believe in. It feels like I'm actively destroying myself. I hope you find some change soon.
Minerva
03:45:14 Min
Glacier if you do a few map captures you'll probably get a P brave before too long
Minerva
03:44:55 Min
Ayyy nice one Lo!!!
Glacier Bay Cove
03:44:26 Glacier Kittens
Impossible quest Go Exploring and have a horse earn a Premium bravery rating
Willow Wood Stable
03:44:05 Lo
-HEE Click-

Finally bravery-rated him 😍
Santana Rising
03:44:03 San
I made a bug post about that on Dec 16th last year. With screen shots and all. Never got any response.
Claire´s Kingdom
03:42:08 
I understand you completley-same thing with me :(
Minerva
03:42:05 Min
It's been known about for a while Ari so I wouldn't hold your breath unfortunately
The Joker
03:41:18 Ari <3
Oh weird, hopefully they fix it soon
E.T. Eventing
03:39:56 Zrek
Hey y'all, have any of you struggled feeling trapped by school? Currently feeling as though I want to move forward into who I am now that I have a better understanding, but I feel that school is actively blocking that ability (through the constant information overload leading to lack of clarity and constant stress). It just feels like something is wrong, and I wanted to know if any of you had experience with what helped.
Neverfade Manor
03:37:39 
They didn't disappear, just couldn't be used :(
Neverfade Manor
03:37:16 
I had the stud dead and the mare was deleted, so that is why I couldn't use it
The Joker
03:36:48 Ari <3
Do embryos disappear if both parents are dead?
Jericho Stables
03:35:35 
No one is in charge of dead horses. It is code that just happens automatically

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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