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 DSD Training Center
12:28:59 Spring <3
she is terrifying. You too!
JoJo Stables
12:28:02 
im gonna switch accounts and go rage at the breed approval people, have a nice day! tell your goat to not crawl through my vent shes scary sob
DSD Training Center
12:26:57 Spring <3
Yeah, mares are like that sometimes lol.
JoJo Stables
12:26:16 
yup! JoJo gets mad at tarps.. I think she thinks every tarp is out to get her, she squealed at one once and kicked it.. shes a little slow
DSD Training Center
12:25:11 Spring <3
And i'll tell her hi :)
DSD Training Center
12:24:43 Spring <3
Yeah, I do! Shes a pretty little goofball, that's for sure. I was lunging her yesterday and she got mad at her goat and decided to throw some bucks, which is rare for her.
JoJo Stables
12:22:30 
nice to see you on spring lol, I didn't know you played, I'll never get over how much of a pretty paint Sophie is tho lol, tell her I said hi!
DSD Training Center
12:21:00 Spring <3
Sophie was so mad at me. Got a cool picture though, with her eyes all lit up.
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123 I don't know
12:18:09 123
-YT Click-
Painful
SwankPony
12:13:14 Swanky
I have a love hate relationship with my accountant... I love to flirt for the gifts but all he ever gives me is breeding tokens.
123 I don't know
12:10:05 123
I'll see you tomorrow for police practice training.
QualitySH
12:10:02 
Swanky that's a good point lol
123 I don't know
12:09:41 123
Good Night!
SwankPony
12:09:37 Swanky
Or does that mean he loves silver and wants to see more of those silver beauties.
Blue Diamond
12:09:27 Bluey
Goodnight, everyone!!
Beamng
12:09:21 Beam
Good Night Everyone!
Beamng
12:09:15 Beam
I'll have to go.
QualitySH
12:08:46 
Yeah they can gift you when you flirt with them with coffee or love potions
QualitySH
12:08:06 
I used 2 love potions or maybe one was coffee lol I don't remember I was doing Quests
BMR Sporthorses
12:06:57 
accountants can gift you?? my accountant must be greedy then he's never gifted me lol

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 DSD Training Center
12:28:59 Spring <3
she is terrifying. You too!
JoJo Stables
12:28:02 
im gonna switch accounts and go rage at the breed approval people, have a nice day! tell your goat to not crawl through my vent shes scary sob
DSD Training Center
12:26:57 Spring <3
Yeah, mares are like that sometimes lol.
JoJo Stables
12:26:16 
yup! JoJo gets mad at tarps.. I think she thinks every tarp is out to get her, she squealed at one once and kicked it.. shes a little slow
DSD Training Center
12:25:11 Spring <3
And i'll tell her hi :)
DSD Training Center
12:24:43 Spring <3
Yeah, I do! Shes a pretty little goofball, that's for sure. I was lunging her yesterday and she got mad at her goat and decided to throw some bucks, which is rare for her.
JoJo Stables
12:22:30 
nice to see you on spring lol, I didn't know you played, I'll never get over how much of a pretty paint Sophie is tho lol, tell her I said hi!
DSD Training Center
12:21:00 Spring <3
Sophie was so mad at me. Got a cool picture though, with her eyes all lit up.
-Click-
123 I don't know
12:18:09 123
-YT Click-
Painful
SwankPony
12:13:14 Swanky
I have a love hate relationship with my accountant... I love to flirt for the gifts but all he ever gives me is breeding tokens.
123 I don't know
12:10:05 123
I'll see you tomorrow for police practice training.
QualitySH
12:10:02 
Swanky that's a good point lol
123 I don't know
12:09:41 123
Good Night!
SwankPony
12:09:37 Swanky
Or does that mean he loves silver and wants to see more of those silver beauties.
Blue Diamond
12:09:27 Bluey
Goodnight, everyone!!
Beamng
12:09:21 Beam
Good Night Everyone!
Beamng
12:09:15 Beam
I'll have to go.
QualitySH
12:08:46 
Yeah they can gift you when you flirt with them with coffee or love potions
QualitySH
12:08:06 
I used 2 love potions or maybe one was coffee lol I don't remember I was doing Quests
BMR Sporthorses
12:06:57 
accountants can gift you?? my accountant must be greedy then he's never gifted me lol

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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