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Year: 196   Season: Winter   
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Painted Perfection
10:29:29 Luna
Oooo and sooty
Guard Horseman Gang
10:29:13 GHG
well hello -HEE Click-
Painted Perfection
10:27:15 Luna
I need capture passes with specific colours XD like Blood bay XD or Buttermilk
MakeEm Fancy
10:25:20 Ally 💜
I have a chiweenie on my lap <3
Guard Horseman Gang
10:24:43 GHG
got another white knn filly -HEE Click-
BlackRose
10:23:12 Stella
I completely forgot that you can’t rate horses consistently without an upgrade 😭
Painted Perfection
10:20:02 Luna
I thought so too
Angels angels
10:19:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh he will be cute when you do
Guard Horseman Gang
10:19:29 GHG
1 of 2 chocolate palomino tobiano splash white appaloosa i just bred -HEE Click-
Painted Perfection
10:19:27 Luna
-HEE Click-

Planning on rerolling him too
Oakmoss Stud
10:18:16 Oak
Exactly, my theory is always they can run around to get warm, but can't do anything about overheating!
Painted Perfection
10:18:00 Luna
I will eventually
Angels angels
10:17:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Reroll
Painted Perfection
10:17:19 Luna
-HEE Click-

Sorta disappointed hes going to varnish
Minerva
10:16:58 Min
Nice one Cali!

Yeah Oak that's what I'm thinking too. The lowest it's forecast to be for the next week or so is 2 and that's only once so I think I'll just see how he gets on and give him a rainsheet if it's looking to do more than shower
MakeEm Fancy
10:16:20 Ally 💜
I have 3 dogs attacking me lol help XD
DSD Training Center
10:14:06 Spring <3
And this is why I clean Sophies hooves morning and night. No idea how it fit in there. She's a rather small mare (14.2), and has small hooves. This thing was at least an inch wide.
-Click-
Oakmoss Stud
10:13:18 Oak
Ooh Cali that's so exciting!
Calela Eventing
10:12:36 Cali
Dying of excitement! Took my horse to the farm down from us where we used to stable him since we're really good friends with the owner and like hanging out there. She had a new pony in called Roy who was super skinny, shy and had just recovered from ringworm. Fell in love with him like i never have. Owner asked me if i could fix his flymask but warned me he was super faceshy. Managed to sort that out and literally spent the whole time with him. Got a text today asking if i'd like to work with him so i'm going over tommorow!
Painted Perfection
10:12:32 Luna
I want to live in a perfect environment.

65- 70 is great not too hot not too cold

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Painted Perfection
10:29:29 Luna
Oooo and sooty
Guard Horseman Gang
10:29:13 GHG
well hello -HEE Click-
Painted Perfection
10:27:15 Luna
I need capture passes with specific colours XD like Blood bay XD or Buttermilk
MakeEm Fancy
10:25:20 Ally 💜
I have a chiweenie on my lap <3
Guard Horseman Gang
10:24:43 GHG
got another white knn filly -HEE Click-
BlackRose
10:23:12 Stella
I completely forgot that you can’t rate horses consistently without an upgrade 😭
Painted Perfection
10:20:02 Luna
I thought so too
Angels angels
10:19:49 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh he will be cute when you do
Guard Horseman Gang
10:19:29 GHG
1 of 2 chocolate palomino tobiano splash white appaloosa i just bred -HEE Click-
Painted Perfection
10:19:27 Luna
-HEE Click-

Planning on rerolling him too
Oakmoss Stud
10:18:16 Oak
Exactly, my theory is always they can run around to get warm, but can't do anything about overheating!
Painted Perfection
10:18:00 Luna
I will eventually
Angels angels
10:17:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Reroll
Painted Perfection
10:17:19 Luna
-HEE Click-

Sorta disappointed hes going to varnish
Minerva
10:16:58 Min
Nice one Cali!

Yeah Oak that's what I'm thinking too. The lowest it's forecast to be for the next week or so is 2 and that's only once so I think I'll just see how he gets on and give him a rainsheet if it's looking to do more than shower
MakeEm Fancy
10:16:20 Ally 💜
I have 3 dogs attacking me lol help XD
DSD Training Center
10:14:06 Spring <3
And this is why I clean Sophies hooves morning and night. No idea how it fit in there. She's a rather small mare (14.2), and has small hooves. This thing was at least an inch wide.
-Click-
Oakmoss Stud
10:13:18 Oak
Ooh Cali that's so exciting!
Calela Eventing
10:12:36 Cali
Dying of excitement! Took my horse to the farm down from us where we used to stable him since we're really good friends with the owner and like hanging out there. She had a new pony in called Roy who was super skinny, shy and had just recovered from ringworm. Fell in love with him like i never have. Owner asked me if i could fix his flymask but warned me he was super faceshy. Managed to sort that out and literally spent the whole time with him. Got a text today asking if i'd like to work with him so i'm going over tommorow!
Painted Perfection
10:12:32 Luna
I want to live in a perfect environment.

65- 70 is great not too hot not too cold

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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