Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


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 Lumin-Essence Eq
10:53:13 Lumin
okay that makes so much more sense, wow, thank you, i dont know why i didnt know that
KPH Equestrian
10:52:45 Rapcoon | Jester
Mares and stallions of breeding age in a pasture together can breed on their own lol
Lumin-Essence Eq
10:52:03 Lumin
does anyone else get random foals they never actually bred just appear .. ?
KPH Equestrian
10:51:47 Rapcoon | Jester
I will never get over my art being on a top 20 ABLB stud 😭🫶
The Undercity
10:43:31 Dory
Or maybe him now I am not sure which ever one I pick though I will put an item
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
10:37:09 Glacier Kittens
I would go with the second match, Dory
The Undercity
10:26:07 Dory
Hm I am not sure what one to pick I like the first match because the stud is prlprl but they are both Ee so 50% chance is EE then the second match I like cause he is ee so only a chance of Ee but also a chance of no prl...
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
Nordic Designs
10:13:38 Keonah
Oh well I guess if she was already deceased when he was produced I guess that makes sense but dang that's a bummer you cant go back and check
Nordic Designs
10:11:37 Keonah
hes just in her offspring list.. thats so weird???
Nordic Designs
10:08:46 Keonah
hmmm I cant remember if I used a sven on him or not and since he's not in his dams breeding history its not showing what was used......
Nordic Designs
10:04:18 Keonah
Completely forgotten was such a fluke too XD hes so far behind on training hahhaha
Wizard Flowers
10:03:22 Flowers
Nordic
One can only hope, I HATE having my teeth even looked at haha
The Black
10:03:08 Fawn
Thank you guys! Very happy as my first WWW on that account, her grand dam, just past away yesterday ;-;
Nordic Designs
10:01:04 Keonah
Congrats fawn!
Nordic Designs
10:00:49 Keonah
Oh holy poop thats my grandbaby!
Nordic Designs
10:00:25 Keonah
Good luck flowers I hope they stay put XD
The Joker
09:59:14 Ari <3
Yesss
-HEE Click-
Jericho Stables
09:59:12 
Do not talk about other games please.
Narran Park
09:57:23 Sting
Fawn! Yay for EE too! Love seeing some Black horses
FirstLightFarms
09:57:04 puck
omg fawn yay 👀

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 Lumin-Essence Eq
10:53:13 Lumin
okay that makes so much more sense, wow, thank you, i dont know why i didnt know that
KPH Equestrian
10:52:45 Rapcoon | Jester
Mares and stallions of breeding age in a pasture together can breed on their own lol
Lumin-Essence Eq
10:52:03 Lumin
does anyone else get random foals they never actually bred just appear .. ?
KPH Equestrian
10:51:47 Rapcoon | Jester
I will never get over my art being on a top 20 ABLB stud 😭🫶
The Undercity
10:43:31 Dory
Or maybe him now I am not sure which ever one I pick though I will put an item
-HEE Click-
Glacier Bay Cove
10:37:09 Glacier Kittens
I would go with the second match, Dory
The Undercity
10:26:07 Dory
Hm I am not sure what one to pick I like the first match because the stud is prlprl but they are both Ee so 50% chance is EE then the second match I like cause he is ee so only a chance of Ee but also a chance of no prl...
-HEE Click-

-HEE Click-
Nordic Designs
10:13:38 Keonah
Oh well I guess if she was already deceased when he was produced I guess that makes sense but dang that's a bummer you cant go back and check
Nordic Designs
10:11:37 Keonah
hes just in her offspring list.. thats so weird???
Nordic Designs
10:08:46 Keonah
hmmm I cant remember if I used a sven on him or not and since he's not in his dams breeding history its not showing what was used......
Nordic Designs
10:04:18 Keonah
Completely forgotten was such a fluke too XD hes so far behind on training hahhaha
Wizard Flowers
10:03:22 Flowers
Nordic
One can only hope, I HATE having my teeth even looked at haha
The Black
10:03:08 Fawn
Thank you guys! Very happy as my first WWW on that account, her grand dam, just past away yesterday ;-;
Nordic Designs
10:01:04 Keonah
Congrats fawn!
Nordic Designs
10:00:49 Keonah
Oh holy poop thats my grandbaby!
Nordic Designs
10:00:25 Keonah
Good luck flowers I hope they stay put XD
The Joker
09:59:14 Ari <3
Yesss
-HEE Click-
Jericho Stables
09:59:12 
Do not talk about other games please.
Narran Park
09:57:23 Sting
Fawn! Yay for EE too! Love seeing some Black horses
FirstLightFarms
09:57:04 puck
omg fawn yay 👀

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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