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Ellsworths Eden
05:49:59 
My roommate has hip and back problems (they gave me permission to talk about it) so I help them get up and move.
BlackRose
05:48:09 Stella
@ Ally

It’s so terrifying I always feel like my hip is gonna break.
BlackRose
05:47:47 Stella
Thank you magic!
Alaska Ridge Stables
05:47:09 Ally
@Stella Same thing happens to my back. Worse pain ever
Magic Horses
05:47:09 Magic
Stella
Two elites could, not two subs
BlackRose
05:42:57 Stella
Can two Elite or two subs produce premium?
BlackRose
05:38:39 Stella
I got so worried it wouldn’t click and would just pop out the socket… everytime I tried to move the pain got worse oh that was scary..
Glacier Bay Cove
05:36:20 Glacier Kittens
Ouch
BlackRose
05:36:01 Stella
My hip got stiff and it was so sore I thought it was gonna come out the joint 😭 I didn’t move for like 15 mins xD
Glacier Bay Cove
05:31:28 Glacier Kittens
What happened, Stella
Beltane Eventers
05:30:07 Bel - BB
W/W/W: 1
E/W/W: 1
W/E/E: 1
E/E/W: 2
E/W/E: 7
P/W/E: 1
P/E/W: 2
E/E/E: 32
E/P/E: 1
E/E/P: 9
P/E/E: 33
ive been on a roll with EEE's this year
BlackRose
05:18:33 Stella
Oh my gosh I had an 90 year old moment and it was terrifying xD
The Old Gods
05:17:31 Void Malign
There. Horses fed, hayed, and dressed for the cold. Except Denali since she's secretly 3 minis in a horse suit.
Ashcroft Park Stud
05:11:02 Ash
All types of Sven in store, if anyone’s after them
DSD Training Center
04:59:02 Spring <3
Ok, bye!
Hobo Queens Farm
04:58:48 Her Majesty
Oh, my premium ran out, surprise, oops.
Wraithcry Farm
04:58:48 Trigger 🐾
Some here have the jalapeños 😭
But I gotta dip and go do an interview with someone.
So I will talk to you later!
Hobo Queens Farm
04:57:33 Her Majesty
I've been gone all day, what happened to the Specialty Clinics link?
DSD Training Center
04:53:01 Spring <3
Oh no 😭 The ones in my state, Washington, are just pure cheese sauce
SillyBilly Farm
04:52:45 Possum
Wrangler, I'm not very good at that, but it looks great!

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Ellsworths Eden
05:49:59 
My roommate has hip and back problems (they gave me permission to talk about it) so I help them get up and move.
BlackRose
05:48:09 Stella
@ Ally

It’s so terrifying I always feel like my hip is gonna break.
BlackRose
05:47:47 Stella
Thank you magic!
Alaska Ridge Stables
05:47:09 Ally
@Stella Same thing happens to my back. Worse pain ever
Magic Horses
05:47:09 Magic
Stella
Two elites could, not two subs
BlackRose
05:42:57 Stella
Can two Elite or two subs produce premium?
BlackRose
05:38:39 Stella
I got so worried it wouldn’t click and would just pop out the socket… everytime I tried to move the pain got worse oh that was scary..
Glacier Bay Cove
05:36:20 Glacier Kittens
Ouch
BlackRose
05:36:01 Stella
My hip got stiff and it was so sore I thought it was gonna come out the joint 😭 I didn’t move for like 15 mins xD
Glacier Bay Cove
05:31:28 Glacier Kittens
What happened, Stella
Beltane Eventers
05:30:07 Bel - BB
W/W/W: 1
E/W/W: 1
W/E/E: 1
E/E/W: 2
E/W/E: 7
P/W/E: 1
P/E/W: 2
E/E/E: 32
E/P/E: 1
E/E/P: 9
P/E/E: 33
ive been on a roll with EEE's this year
BlackRose
05:18:33 Stella
Oh my gosh I had an 90 year old moment and it was terrifying xD
The Old Gods
05:17:31 Void Malign
There. Horses fed, hayed, and dressed for the cold. Except Denali since she's secretly 3 minis in a horse suit.
Ashcroft Park Stud
05:11:02 Ash
All types of Sven in store, if anyone’s after them
DSD Training Center
04:59:02 Spring <3
Ok, bye!
Hobo Queens Farm
04:58:48 Her Majesty
Oh, my premium ran out, surprise, oops.
Wraithcry Farm
04:58:48 Trigger 🐾
Some here have the jalapeños 😭
But I gotta dip and go do an interview with someone.
So I will talk to you later!
Hobo Queens Farm
04:57:33 Her Majesty
I've been gone all day, what happened to the Specialty Clinics link?
DSD Training Center
04:53:01 Spring <3
Oh no 😭 The ones in my state, Washington, are just pure cheese sauce
SillyBilly Farm
04:52:45 Possum
Wrangler, I'm not very good at that, but it looks great!

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I'm Writing a Thing December 18, 2020 04:39 PM


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Pandora Creek said:

If the other workers are acting like this is normal and she's surprised maybe make this her first week on the job? Also if there's an elevator but no warning not to take it maybe taking the elevator is a test for people? Also how does the murderer leave if the body slumps right as it opens on the third floor?

Some of your word choices made me have to reread the sentence but it's pretty good. "too-late paramedics" feels particularly clumsy in the sentence.



The idea is that she's kind of isolated from what's going on (doesn't really pay much attention to the news, etc) and the behavior that's been spreading has been kind of normalized violence, justified by "laziness". She's not aware of it. I haven't figured out much of her backstory yet, but the fact that using elevators is generally frowned on (and in her place of work, responsible resource use is especially important) might contribute to why she hasn't witnessed this before.
And I never said which floor the elevator started from xD
Yep! This is only a first draft, I'll look into changing that sentence.

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