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Ravenwood Farm
04:23:24 Raven
Oooh congrats Court!
Dash and Duchess
04:22:26 DD | ~Squizard~
Ash, thank you lol! xD I think I might have to soon, though hopefully flipping between reading and art will help lol!
Morning Glory Farms
04:22:23 Terici/Dino/Trish
Im waiting to hopefully grab a Rune LC for my mare lol I should have planned better for her but oh well
Legacy Leagues
04:22:17 Alyssa ♡
Court
Oh I'm jelly
Hickory Park Farm
04:21:39 Stone Haven/Court
-HEE Click- :O
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:21:13 Ash
Aww DD, maybe make yourself a nice coffee or tea and/or splash a bit of cold water on your face, you got this 💪
Dash and Duchess
04:19:43 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm just waiting for LCs xD hoping I'll be able to stay awake >.>
Ravenwood Farm
04:19:33 Raven
Thank you Ash
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:18:17 Ash
Oooh good luck Raven!

Lily, least we’re in the same boat. Hope they arrive swiftly for you!
Two Trees Stables
04:17:37 Willow ~ TB Breeder
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another one? :D
Ravenwood Farm
04:17:06 Raven
I feel you Ash. I'm waiting for a straw that I don't know if I'll get or not, since I only made the wait list. And it's for what's probably the best match I have ever put together lol
Fire and Ice
04:16:10 
Oh my gosh he is beautiful
-HEE Click-
Legacy Leagues
04:15:58 Alyssa ♡
*make apricot frame babies
Jericho Stables
04:15:47 
He’s stunning Kuewi
Legacy Leagues
04:15:18 Alyssa ♡
-HEE Click-

I just realized I can easily make her apricot frame <.<
HermitAcres
04:14:45 Hermit
-HEE Click- my 2nd WWW this RO!
Alpine Acres
04:14:45 Lily
I feel your pain Ash xD
Two Trees Stables
04:14:32 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Sweet
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:13:24 Ash
Waiting for straws for your top matches on RO is such a torment xD
Santana Rising
04:13:12 San
He's only getting wormy apples!

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Ravenwood Farm
04:23:24 Raven
Oooh congrats Court!
Dash and Duchess
04:22:26 DD | ~Squizard~
Ash, thank you lol! xD I think I might have to soon, though hopefully flipping between reading and art will help lol!
Morning Glory Farms
04:22:23 Terici/Dino/Trish
Im waiting to hopefully grab a Rune LC for my mare lol I should have planned better for her but oh well
Legacy Leagues
04:22:17 Alyssa ♡
Court
Oh I'm jelly
Hickory Park Farm
04:21:39 Stone Haven/Court
-HEE Click- :O
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:21:13 Ash
Aww DD, maybe make yourself a nice coffee or tea and/or splash a bit of cold water on your face, you got this 💪
Dash and Duchess
04:19:43 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm just waiting for LCs xD hoping I'll be able to stay awake >.>
Ravenwood Farm
04:19:33 Raven
Thank you Ash
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:18:17 Ash
Oooh good luck Raven!

Lily, least we’re in the same boat. Hope they arrive swiftly for you!
Two Trees Stables
04:17:37 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
another one? :D
Ravenwood Farm
04:17:06 Raven
I feel you Ash. I'm waiting for a straw that I don't know if I'll get or not, since I only made the wait list. And it's for what's probably the best match I have ever put together lol
Fire and Ice
04:16:10 
Oh my gosh he is beautiful
-HEE Click-
Legacy Leagues
04:15:58 Alyssa ♡
*make apricot frame babies
Jericho Stables
04:15:47 
He’s stunning Kuewi
Legacy Leagues
04:15:18 Alyssa ♡
-HEE Click-

I just realized I can easily make her apricot frame <.<
HermitAcres
04:14:45 Hermit
-HEE Click- my 2nd WWW this RO!
Alpine Acres
04:14:45 Lily
I feel your pain Ash xD
Two Trees Stables
04:14:32 Willow ~ TB Breeder
-HEE Click-
Sweet
Ashcroft Park Stud
04:13:24 Ash
Waiting for straws for your top matches on RO is such a torment xD
Santana Rising
04:13:12 San
He's only getting wormy apples!

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Ranch Lands Training
 
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I suck at writing emails and letters. I get all my thoughts all over the place and tend just not make any sense. If you guys don't mind maybe just having a quick read to see if this is actually useable? My vet asked for some suggestions about topics she could talk about.

Thank you so much for asking me about what I would be interested in learning. I am sorry for such a delayed response but I did come up with some topics that I would love to learn about.


I always hear about navicular but I am unsure what it really is. I would be interested in learning what navicular is and how a horse can develop navicular. I would also be interested in learning how to treat and rehab navicular. I would love to know more about abscesses. How do horses get abscesses, how do identify abscesses, and how to treat an abscess.I would also love to know what some common problems that different breeds have with their feet.


Nutrition is something that I would love to know more about. How does a horse's diet contribute to their health and performance? What is laminitas, how can it be prevented, and what connection does it have to their diet? Ulcers is something I would also be interested in learning more about. I never really heard about ulcers until recently and would love to find more about it.


Another topic could possibly be horse growth and joints. I am very interested in how horses grow and what rate. Is there any benefit or harm to joints to riding a young horse. How does growth differ from breed to breed. Why do some horses get arthritis at younger ages than others? I would also be interested in learning about how foals grow and straighten out. What should be concerning when a foal is straightening out, and at what age should a foal have straightened out?


Lastly I find dental very interesting. An example could be how and over bite and under bite can affect a horse. What are wolf teeth and how do they affect a horse. What are some common problems that different breeds have with teeth? I would also love to know how to assess when a horse would need their teeth done. For example, what are common signs?


Thanks so much for doing these talks. The breeding seminar over winter helped a whole bunch and answered so many questions.


Edited at July 22, 2020 04:35 PM by Ranch Lands Training
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FirstLightFarms

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This is such a neat topic! The only things I can really see is that I would put 'navicular' and 'abscesses' into two different paragraphs, so it's easier to read. There are also a few sentences where you ask a question but end it with a . instead of a ?
Otherwise, very concisely written!
Proof Read July 22, 2020 04:37 PM


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FirstLightFarms said:
This is such a neat topic! The only things I can really see is that I would put 'navicular' and 'abscesses' into two different paragraphs, so it's easier to read. There are also a few sentences where you ask a question but end it with a . instead of a ?
Otherwise, very concisely written!


Mmmk thank you so much. Nobody in my fmaily are really writers so I usally avoid writing big emails or letters with at least a few people reading it.
Proof Read July 23, 2020 12:29 PM


EmeraldHillsFarm
 
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This is definitely useable. In your last paragraph though, I would say "dental problems" instead of just "dental". You also misspelled "laminitis" in your second paragraph. There are also a couple spots where you leave out a "the" or use "an" when you should use "a", but those are just little typos.
Proof Read July 25, 2020 09:22 PM


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I think that looks super good. The only thing, but this is just me. You specified navicular, why not all unsoundnesses or a little bit more specific, unsoundnesses that occur in the front legs or the hind legs. If it's only navicular your interested in learning about, then your set.

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