Lily could barely speak as pain shot through her whole body. "You'll- You'll see soon." She gasped out, and then fainted.

(Chaos's POV):

Chaos stomped a hoof as the mare passed out, angered more. "Wake up, I need to ask you something else and I'm not done rebuking you!" Chaos complained, really just venting his anger. He leaned down and nipped the mare again, his ears pinned

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(West's POV):

West rounded the rise in time to see a rogue stallion nipping Lily... who was laying on the ground. His brow furrowed in anger as he pulled up in front of the stallion, shoving the male away from Lily. "What do you think you're doing? Leave!" West snapped, not in the mood to ask why Lily was knocked out

(I'm sorry, I can't help laughing at Chaos' words to Lily XD)

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Lily lie still, though she was awake, and listened to them talk. If anything started going downhill, she'd jump up and run again. Though her wounds would hate her forever more if she did.

Yeppers, that's the character I devolped in three seconds for him *cha ching* LOL))

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(Chaos's POV):

Chaos raised his head and pinned his ears, taking a step back as a stallion started yelling at him. "Aw what, is this your mare? Well she's mine now, back off buster." Chaos growled, his teeth bared

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(West's POV):

West looked even more furious at this, taking a step forward with the other stallion. "She is no ones, especially not yours. Leave or I will kick your hide off and hang it on a post. I don't have time to deal with some stupid young stallions antics." West said with a dangerously low voice, a sort of snarl rumbling deep from his chest.

(Well, you did really well for a 3-second character!)

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Lily had to smile at what West had said. He was so fierce and daring... Though so was this other stallion. Which would win her over? Lily shuddered to think about what would happen if these two started fighting. Then, realizing she had opened her eyes, Lily shut them hurriedly, hoping that no one had seen.

Thank you, madam XD. I try my hardest haha))

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(Chaos' POV):

Chaos's jaw dropped as he heard what the other stallion said. Who would ever dare to contradict him? Even if this stallion was much bigger than he was, he was still way stronger, smarter, more handsome, and way more vicious. Chaos sniffed in anger, his eyes narrowing. "Well then do it. What I see is a little puny stallion with way more bark than bite." Chaos sneered

(West's POV):

West flattened his ears further, looking annoyed. "Puny? And little? I think you are crazy, and you'll feel exactly how my bite is soon." West snarled, darting forward to ram into the smaller stallion. He then swung his neck and smashed it into the other stallions chest before taking a chunk out of the other stallions neck with his teeth.

Lily jumped up, trying to get in between Chaos and West without getting bitten. "Guys! Stop it! I don't want you to kill each other!" Lily neighed, hoping that the ferocious stallions would stop and listen to her. "You both are good fighters, I can tell that, and you both could kill each other if you really wanted to! But I don't want two stallions fighting over me like I'm an over feathered peacock!" Lily took a breath, realizing that she had actually said that, when just a minute ago she was cowering in fear.

(Chaos' POV): Chaos looked shocked for a moment as he got thrown backwards. -He is definetely as strong as he looks- Chaos thought in a panic as he got ready for his own attack. He stopped dead in his tracks when the mare just suddenly jumped up and started yelling. Chaos practically just stared at her with wide eyes and a dropped jaw

(West's POV):

West stopped as Lily spoke, tipping his head as he blew out a breath. He couldn't really decide whether to laugh, looked shocked, or look confused. His face showed a little bit of all three. West opened his mouth to say something, then closed it again. "... you're right. I'm sorry." he apologized, slowly, stepping back

Lily nodded, feeling more brave now that West had answered her. "And you?" She asked, looking at Chaos.

(Chaos' POV):

Chaos just stared at the mare for a moment. Did she dare scold... him? A mare? Telling him to do something? How rude! "And WHAT about me?" He asked, sounding infuriated. "Stallions fight! That's just what they do! I'm sure he agrees." Chaos said angrily, pointing his nose to the other stallion

(West's POV):

West arched an eyebrow, watching the stallion spew out words. "No, I don't agree. She is correct." He said flatly, backing up a little more to glance around. "So I'd better leave, and you should do the same." West said quietly, turning to go