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Cappuccino
05:51:24 Heyy it's Capp
My island, maybe 7m hahaha
Cappuccino
05:51:06 Heyy it's Capp
LOL girl I live in the Bahamas, the highest point in the whole country is like 25m LOL
Vancouver
05:48:20 Ana / Van
Oh congrats! And be prepared for the flattest country ever lol :)
Seagrape Stables
05:43:54 Secret Capp
lmao! Also my brother is marrying a Dutch lady in Oct! So get to go visit!! Super excited
Vancouver
05:43:10 Ana / Van
Thanks <3
I finally figured out the smudge brush, I used to use Blur because in Dutch the smudge brush is called Wet Finger so it never came up in my mind to use that xD
Ponies heaven
05:43:09 Pera/ peral
@Ana
Damn, I disappear for a while and come back to these gorgeous pieces? Dang- I need more ebs
Seagrape Stables
05:41:17 Secret Capp
Thats lovely *.* so nice and soft <3
Vancouver
05:40:39 Ana / Van
Thank you! Here is the finished one :) -Click-
I made it for my friend <3
Cappuccino
05:38:19 Heyy it's Capp
Very nice!!
Vancouver
04:49:38 Ana / Van
Almost finished ^^
-Click-
Sagruesal
04:38:58 Ru
Tobi
Good filly! Should be able to produce a W
Cozmic Elite
04:27:45 
-Click-
And now to slowly start Goose.
starmutt
04:23:55 marsh 🌈
new art type unlocked -Click-
Bioshock Manor
04:22:00 Storm
Oh congrats.
Skyward Stud
04:21:08 
-HEE Click- oh. my god????
Neverhof Palace
04:09:01 
Come on West Team! We got this! Whoop!
Golden Rose
02:53:00 Rose/Goldy
Bay booty -HEE Click-
MK Sport Horse Yard
02:33:05 
Yay I made my banner :)
Tobiano Lady
02:10:43 Tobi | Nix
-HEE Click-
first wk3 up2 on a Dressage SD :P
Pegasus Lane
02:04:56 Peggy (or) Peg
Omg 5 years on HEE

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Cappuccino
05:51:24 Heyy it's Capp
My island, maybe 7m hahaha
Cappuccino
05:51:06 Heyy it's Capp
LOL girl I live in the Bahamas, the highest point in the whole country is like 25m LOL
Vancouver
05:48:20 Ana / Van
Oh congrats! And be prepared for the flattest country ever lol :)
Seagrape Stables
05:43:54 Secret Capp
lmao! Also my brother is marrying a Dutch lady in Oct! So get to go visit!! Super excited
Vancouver
05:43:10 Ana / Van
Thanks <3
I finally figured out the smudge brush, I used to use Blur because in Dutch the smudge brush is called Wet Finger so it never came up in my mind to use that xD
Ponies heaven
05:43:09 Pera/ peral
@Ana
Damn, I disappear for a while and come back to these gorgeous pieces? Dang- I need more ebs
Seagrape Stables
05:41:17 Secret Capp
Thats lovely *.* so nice and soft <3
Vancouver
05:40:39 Ana / Van
Thank you! Here is the finished one :) -Click-
I made it for my friend <3
Cappuccino
05:38:19 Heyy it's Capp
Very nice!!
Vancouver
04:49:38 Ana / Van
Almost finished ^^
-Click-
Sagruesal
04:38:58 Ru
Tobi
Good filly! Should be able to produce a W
Cozmic Elite
04:27:45 
-Click-
And now to slowly start Goose.
starmutt
04:23:55 marsh 🌈
new art type unlocked -Click-
Bioshock Manor
04:22:00 Storm
Oh congrats.
Skyward Stud
04:21:08 
-HEE Click- oh. my god????
Neverhof Palace
04:09:01 
Come on West Team! We got this! Whoop!
Golden Rose
02:53:00 Rose/Goldy
Bay booty -HEE Click-
MK Sport Horse Yard
02:33:05 
Yay I made my banner :)
Tobiano Lady
02:10:43 Tobi | Nix
-HEE Click-
first wk3 up2 on a Dressage SD :P
Pegasus Lane
02:04:56 Peggy (or) Peg
Omg 5 years on HEE

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The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 01:40 PM

Former Stable
 
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@HRS
Thank you for the help!
The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 02:18 PM


Wintergreen Gardens
 
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This is a WIP but i need some tips, also I have no idea what background I should use XD ( WIP)
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The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 02:29 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Thoughts on this WIP? Had to paint 3 of 4 hooves...
Still need to do hair, shadows on horse, eyes, and lighting. Other than that is it missing anything?

Edited at July 17, 2020 02:31 PM by Breezie Rose
The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 06:33 PM


Gem
 
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@PRR
I really like this piece, very natural. My first recommendation is to take a look at body prep. Currently, the horse's body is actually somewhat streaky. Try to smooth that out, maybe use a different brush. My second reccomendationis to look at the tail. For lack of better word, it looks somewhat 'sharp'. The flyaways are very unnatural just due to their sharp corners rather than being flowy. The hair overall, in my opinion, just needs more strands.
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@Diamond
There isn't really a clear light source in this image (i.e. the sun, something glowing, etc). Therefore, by looking at the background, we assume the light source is in the sky. This means that the top of the horse will be lighter and the bottom will be darker.
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@Snowmass
I'm not seeing or thinking of anything that would be missing from the side of the image unless you would want the horse to be looking at something such as a frog on a lily pad. What I do notice is the horse's reflection. The reflection of the trees is very sharp and precise while the horse's is blurred. This doesn't quite make sense to me. Other than that, add some ripples around the horses legs and it's perfect. Very beautiful and very natural <3
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@Cat
Once again, I step into the role of lighting critic. The light source in this image would be the sunset in the background. Because of this, the part of the bridge that the viewer can see should be darker because it would be in shadow. Upping the contrast would help the natural aspect as well. Well done on the appy pattern <3
The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 06:38 PM


Gem
 
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@Wintergreen
Beautiful pattern, fits very nicely. Wings also look very natural. I have to say that I like the tail more than I like the mane. The mane seems rather blocky and pinched. Try letting the strands go a little wild. Let the viewer see the end of the mane. Great job using different colors on the strands. Other tip, take a small eraser and be a little pickier cutting out the horse. This will give it a more refined, finished look. Background wise, I personally thing a sunset near a body of water would look pretty awesome.
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@Breezie
Looking good so far! Only thing I can say at this point is maybe considering blurring the background a little to bring more attention to the horse. Excited to see the finished result! <3
Edit: Breezie, just noticed the little cactus on its face. So cute!!!

Edited at July 17, 2020 06:46 PM by Gem
The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 06:41 PM


Gem
 
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Looking for critique/tips/suggestions on this piece. Rip it apart if necessary, I do reccomend viewing it with your screen on max brightness <3
Edit: Ack! I had the layer with the foal's tail hidden 😜
Edit 2: This piece as well please <3 (Contest entry)

Edited at July 17, 2020 11:29 PM by Gem
The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 06:53 PM


Snowmass Horses
 
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@Gem
thank you! With the trees reflection it was already like that on the image stock but I can blur it out a little bit! I was going for a more natural looking piece since I haven't done one in a while! <3
The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 06:57 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Thanks Gem!
Do you think the horse is dark enough for the background before lighting? I think that's usually something I struggle with.
The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 07:50 PM


Ranch Lands Training
 
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@Gem I love it! I do have my brightness up but I still find it quiet dark. I am still very new to art so I don't really have any useful critiques, sorry.
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109954977-587158762193561-7035523585878998456-n.jpg I added the photo I tried to draw. I have to do some playing around because when I am on my phone the edit looks great, but on my computer all my photos look increadbly darker. If anybody knows how to fix tat that would be great.
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Also how much do you guys think I should charge for art like this? Right now a photo like above is 10k and it goes down to 6500.

Edited at July 17, 2020 08:03 PM by Ranch Lands Training
The Official Art Critique Forum July 17, 2020 08:04 PM


Gem
 
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@Snowmass
No problem! Glad I could help <3
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@Breezie
The horse looks good to me, it's the white legs you might run into difficulty with though.
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@Ranch Lands Trainimg
Thanks! I definitely think 10k is a fair price because being able to draw photos (and do it so well) is a super cool skill and very unique.

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