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Gem said:
I'm stuck XD Any suggestions/critique/help is much appreciated <3
The problem with the hair is that it doesn't have an order and it's not dense enough. I can see through the tail and the mane the background. That shouldn't happen. The first base layer of the hair should be the darkest colour you are using and the biggest brush. Then, as you go adding layers, use lighter colours. The lighter the colour, the smaller the brush. That way you can also add lights and darks to the hair. You need to draw a lot more hair strands. On your piece I only see like a strand here and there and that's it. Well, you have to make a lot of strands more, otherwise the hair will never gain volume. |
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Ladybird Estate said:
Are you using ibispaint?
Yes |
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Use the hair brush, its somewhere near oil brushes 100% force fade 10 stabilizer,and about 20px |
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Ladybird Estate said:
Okay so, I am SO proud of this any critique welcome <3 Ps,its 113MB
Still looking for critique |
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Ladybird Estate said:
Ladybird Estate said:
Okay so, I am SO proud of this any critique welcome <3 Ps,its 113MB
Still looking for critique
I LOVE the lighting work with this! Awesome job!~ The only issue I have with this beautiful piece is the lack of normalcy when it comes to the hair. The tail and mane suggest that the horse is running fairly fast. The forelock, however, is a little off. The forelock should show as much movement as the rest of the hair. Also, don't be afraid to add more flyaway strands! ;) Great job overall! I love this piece! |
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 would love some critique on this |
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I like that very much. Extremely clean and simple yet beautiful. Everything flows very nicely. My recommendation would be to draw an iris and a reflection in the eyes to make them pop a little more <3 |
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Gem said:
I like that very much. Extremely clean and simple yet beautiful. Everything flows very nicely. My recommendation would be to draw an iris and a reflection in the eyes to make them pop a little more <3
Thank you! I'll try that now |
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