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Ashcroft Park Stud
10:12:45 Ash
I kinda like that the horses pop from the backgrounds/environment
Royal Rein
10:12:45 Royal
Lily
Yeah, gotta work on placement more.
Sunfeather Stables
10:12:40 SF
Aww nice arts everyone. I'm waiting for this uni term to end so I can maybe get one or two done lol
Alpine Acres
10:11:58 Lily/Alpine
Royal
they're gorgeous, and you've really got the mane and tail down. But I do agree with Cali, try to ground the horses a bit more :)
Royal Rein
10:11:50 Royal
What teir do you guys think?
Glacier Bay Cove
10:11:40 Glacier Katz
Okay I need to do some art work too
Royal Rein
10:11:23 Royal
Thanks guys <3
Glacier Bay Cove
10:10:57 Glacier Katz
Royal, I LOVE the second and third ones, Amazing work
Palomino Star Valley
10:10:48 Sasha / Mira
i love the stary night one royal!
Ashcroft Park Stud
10:10:38 Ash
Love the third one, Royal
Calela Eventing
10:10:18 Cali
I like them Royal but the horses tend to look a bit out of place.
Loved the first one, giving off sassy mare vibes
Bioshock Manor
10:10:08 Storm
first one looks like it's in pain and suffering.....
Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:46 Glacier Katz
Excited to see your artwork, Royal
Royal Rein
10:09:29 Royal
-Click-
-Click-
-Click-
Heres 3 of my pieces (:
Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:00 Glacier Katz
I like it, Storm, but the horse is the same color as the water in the waterfall. It would stand out better if it was a different color, maybe
Bioshock Manor
10:08:24 Storm
no option to zoom
Lavender Hollow
10:08:20 ⁕ ivy ⁕
royal

go ahead
Royal Rein
10:08:07 Royal
I have a few pieces too if you guys don't mind.
Calela Eventing
10:07:48 Cali
Storm,
you can zoom in?
Bioshock Manor
10:07:02 Storm
so small it's hard to see

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Ashcroft Park Stud
10:12:45 Ash
I kinda like that the horses pop from the backgrounds/environment
Royal Rein
10:12:45 Royal
Lily
Yeah, gotta work on placement more.
Sunfeather Stables
10:12:40 SF
Aww nice arts everyone. I'm waiting for this uni term to end so I can maybe get one or two done lol
Alpine Acres
10:11:58 Lily/Alpine
Royal
they're gorgeous, and you've really got the mane and tail down. But I do agree with Cali, try to ground the horses a bit more :)
Royal Rein
10:11:50 Royal
What teir do you guys think?
Glacier Bay Cove
10:11:40 Glacier Katz
Okay I need to do some art work too
Royal Rein
10:11:23 Royal
Thanks guys <3
Glacier Bay Cove
10:10:57 Glacier Katz
Royal, I LOVE the second and third ones, Amazing work
Palomino Star Valley
10:10:48 Sasha / Mira
i love the stary night one royal!
Ashcroft Park Stud
10:10:38 Ash
Love the third one, Royal
Calela Eventing
10:10:18 Cali
I like them Royal but the horses tend to look a bit out of place.
Loved the first one, giving off sassy mare vibes
Bioshock Manor
10:10:08 Storm
first one looks like it's in pain and suffering.....
Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:46 Glacier Katz
Excited to see your artwork, Royal
Royal Rein
10:09:29 Royal
-Click-
-Click-
-Click-
Heres 3 of my pieces (:
Glacier Bay Cove
10:09:00 Glacier Katz
I like it, Storm, but the horse is the same color as the water in the waterfall. It would stand out better if it was a different color, maybe
Bioshock Manor
10:08:24 Storm
no option to zoom
Lavender Hollow
10:08:20 ⁕ ivy ⁕
royal

go ahead
Royal Rein
10:08:07 Royal
I have a few pieces too if you guys don't mind.
Calela Eventing
10:07:48 Cali
Storm,
you can zoom in?
Bioshock Manor
10:07:02 Storm
so small it's hard to see

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The Official Art Critique Forum May 13, 2020 03:53 PM


White Oak Manor
 
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Gem said:
This is very nice! I love the eyes and the mane. I would recommend taking a look at lighting. It's pretty clear from your background that your horse is standing in a shadow. The issue is that you can't tell from looking at your horse that your horse is standing in a shadow. <3



Sunset Grove Farm said:
The hair and prep that you've done is great purple, but as gen as said I'd focus on lighting
Since the lighting is behind/ahove the horse, the horse would have lighting around the rim and some of its back. There would also be shadows where the light doesn't hit the horse


Thanks peeps. <3
The Official Art Critique Forum May 13, 2020 04:09 PM


Gem
 
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No problem <3
The Official Art Critique Forum May 13, 2020 04:12 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Yeetz - Cali's Quarantine Contest - What can I do better?
The Official Art Critique Forum May 13, 2020 04:14 PM


Memory Lane Equine
 
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Updated 'Pink Pony' Version. Thoughts? Personally, I love it.
The Official Art Critique Forum May 13, 2020 04:14 PM


Memory Lane Equine
 
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But now the tail is really hard to see >.<
The Official Art Critique Forum May 14, 2020 10:09 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Untitled-2.png
This is quite obviously a work in progress, but I was curious to see what you all think? I've never done hair this long, so I know that'll be a struggle. I just started painting the hair, so I haven't "trimmed" it up yet lol

I'm looking for tips with painting long hair and lighting mainly :D

Link for BIG PIC


Edited at May 14, 2020 10:11 PM by Breezie Rose
The Official Art Critique Forum May 15, 2020 07:13 AM


Gem
 
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I'm stuck XD
Any suggestions/critique/help is much appreciated <3
The Official Art Critique Forum May 16, 2020 09:30 AM

Former Stable
 
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Gem said:
I'm stuck XD
Any suggestions/critique/help is much appreciated <3


The main thing I see here is the hair,it has rather thick strands instead of thin ones
I suggest using a 1-3px brush for finer hair
The Official Art Critique Forum May 16, 2020 09:37 AM


Gem
 
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Thank you but that's what I've been doing; 1.7-.8 px
The Official Art Critique Forum May 17, 2020 03:18 AM

Former Stable
 
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Are you using ibispaint?

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