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Maple Tree Eventing
04:01:12 Lydia <3
bought a mare for a quest and then got a breed a spl quest right after, not complaining at all LOL -HEE Click-
Oakmoss Stud
03:50:59 Oak
Oh that's gorgeous! The background work is lovely, and your lighting is so good

Haha yeah! I only started playing with them fairly recently, but it's less intimidating making them for your own use than it is for someone else xD
Bermuda Estate
03:46:53 Mew | Juno
-Click-
This is the one I’m working. It was MEANT to be a seller but I can’t bring my self to it 😭 it’s the best bg work I’ve ever done and I’m a bit selfish lol
Bermuda Estate
03:44:41 Mew | Juno
Oak
You’re NEW to Manips!! That looks so good omg

Val
I don’t know how you could possibly hate your art, is gorgeous
Oakmoss Stud
03:09:50 Oak
I'm new to art (this is like my, 5th manip?) so because I'm seeing improvements every time, I get emotionally attached xD I'm sure I'll plateau and stop caring as much soon lmao, it'll make it easier!
Oakmoss Stud
03:08:42 Oak
Honestly lol, but I have a chronic mare hoarding issue entirely self inflicted xD

-Click- it was my first time playing with feather/chonkiness <3 (not an ad, piece is sold)
Vahana
03:07:58 Val
You guys get that? xD I hate 95% of my art, and I even have to stop myself from auctioning off my current set because I just don't like it that much, LOL.
Bermuda Estate
03:06:22 Mew | Juno
Oak
Oh noooo :( it’s such a shame when we actually need the ebs lol
Oakmoss Stud
02:59:54 Oak
Story of my life Juno :') I forced myself to auction the one I made last night in prep for RO, but I would have loved to keep it
Bermuda Estate
02:58:40 Mew | Juno
Working on a Manip and I’ve been hit with the “I want to use this myself” curse
Coruscant Farm
02:50:17 
Thank you! Yeah I got lucky, she's shiny :)
FlyingVictoryStables
02:49:39 Kidara
Shes going to be gorgeous
Coruscant Farm
02:45:59 
whoa, so that just happened. Only my fourth in the game, ever!
-HEE Click-
Kk shows
02:27:30 
By guys
Daydream
02:22:42 Win | ISH
Moody
Your stable set is gorgeous!
Morning Glory Farms
02:19:15 Terici/Dino/Trish
Correct, you cant bump up old sales posts and thats just because the new ones will get lost
Motonemi
02:18:23 AL, mum to Nemi
I think only rule is to not bump up posts?
SavageMare
02:12:53 Moody
What is wrong with commenting in an old thread?
Morning Glory Farms
01:55:17 Terici/Dino/Trish
There is not
Cataclysm
01:14:48 Maple Syrup ✨
Isn't there?

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Maple Tree Eventing
04:01:12 Lydia <3
bought a mare for a quest and then got a breed a spl quest right after, not complaining at all LOL -HEE Click-
Oakmoss Stud
03:50:59 Oak
Oh that's gorgeous! The background work is lovely, and your lighting is so good

Haha yeah! I only started playing with them fairly recently, but it's less intimidating making them for your own use than it is for someone else xD
Bermuda Estate
03:46:53 Mew | Juno
-Click-
This is the one I’m working. It was MEANT to be a seller but I can’t bring my self to it 😭 it’s the best bg work I’ve ever done and I’m a bit selfish lol
Bermuda Estate
03:44:41 Mew | Juno
Oak
You’re NEW to Manips!! That looks so good omg

Val
I don’t know how you could possibly hate your art, is gorgeous
Oakmoss Stud
03:09:50 Oak
I'm new to art (this is like my, 5th manip?) so because I'm seeing improvements every time, I get emotionally attached xD I'm sure I'll plateau and stop caring as much soon lmao, it'll make it easier!
Oakmoss Stud
03:08:42 Oak
Honestly lol, but I have a chronic mare hoarding issue entirely self inflicted xD

-Click- it was my first time playing with feather/chonkiness <3 (not an ad, piece is sold)
Vahana
03:07:58 Val
You guys get that? xD I hate 95% of my art, and I even have to stop myself from auctioning off my current set because I just don't like it that much, LOL.
Bermuda Estate
03:06:22 Mew | Juno
Oak
Oh noooo :( it’s such a shame when we actually need the ebs lol
Oakmoss Stud
02:59:54 Oak
Story of my life Juno :') I forced myself to auction the one I made last night in prep for RO, but I would have loved to keep it
Bermuda Estate
02:58:40 Mew | Juno
Working on a Manip and I’ve been hit with the “I want to use this myself” curse
Coruscant Farm
02:50:17 
Thank you! Yeah I got lucky, she's shiny :)
FlyingVictoryStables
02:49:39 Kidara
Shes going to be gorgeous
Coruscant Farm
02:45:59 
whoa, so that just happened. Only my fourth in the game, ever!
-HEE Click-
Kk shows
02:27:30 
By guys
Daydream
02:22:42 Win | ISH
Moody
Your stable set is gorgeous!
Morning Glory Farms
02:19:15 Terici/Dino/Trish
Correct, you cant bump up old sales posts and thats just because the new ones will get lost
Motonemi
02:18:23 AL, mum to Nemi
I think only rule is to not bump up posts?
SavageMare
02:12:53 Moody
What is wrong with commenting in an old thread?
Morning Glory Farms
01:55:17 Terici/Dino/Trish
There is not
Cataclysm
01:14:48 Maple Syrup ✨
Isn't there?

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The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:13 AM

Former Stable
 
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Joe the horse doesn't match the baclground
There are plenty of tutorials on deviant art to help you but from what I'm able to do-

Duplicate the background layer, put it on a clipping mask to the horse layer and blur so its just blobs of colour, then switch this layer to one of the following
Soft.light
Overlay
Colour

Then mess with the opacity. If it still looks a little out of place dupliactae the horse layer so you have backup then bead with brightness and contrast and/or colour change
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:23 AM


Lambo Farms
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:44 AM by Lambo Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:47 AM

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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/jj7CCRB9/Untitled375-1.jpg
thoughts on this?


That is gorgeous!! I love the mane and the background choice is beautiful. The only thing I can see is the hooves are obviously blurred. Try making it seem like they're under the water by playing with the different colors and brushes.

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:48 AM by White Forest Farms
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:50 AM


Trillium Acres
 
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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/jj7CCRB9/Untitled375-1.jpg
thoughts on this? I have not finished the tail yet.



Hey!

To start off, the hooves are very blurry. Try finding some water splash stock and putting over the hooves (adjust the opacity of the splash layer if it looks funny).

Next... The horse doesn't really match the background. They are two different lightings- Warm and cool[er] (The horse is warm and the background is too cool for it to look realistic with the horse.) If you dont want to replace the background, I would play around with hues and balance on the horse and bg. You could also blur the bg a little if you want to draw more attention to the horse.

The mane and tail look fine, but I would add some shadows and a [few] harsh highlights (with the layer set to overlay). Apply the highlights all over the body\wherever you want the viewer to focus.

One last thing... The credits are a bit hard to read due to the trees in the background. Maybe try moving the credits to the bottom or another place where they are more visible :P

Hope this makes sense and helps :D

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:51 AM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:51 AM

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This peice is great

Some pointers

-the tail wouldn't be so thick and straight, try adding some curve near the bottom in the opposite direction

-as stated ahive the hooves are blurred, when it comes to situations like these the hooves would be covered by water but not completely
~to do this dupliactate the horse layer, erase some of the hooves on one layer and lower the opacity of the other layer

-try blurring some of the bg to add more focus to the subject [the horse]

-the horse would have more green and cyan hues, try messing around with the colour change option

For the tailill do a quick red pen for the image now

Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?



The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 11:54 AM


Trillium Acres
 
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Sunset Grove Farm said:

-the tail wouldn't be so thick and straight, try adding some curve near the bottom in the opposite direction



I agree with Sunset on this. I hadn't even thought about it lol!
Thank you for making a red pen :)
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 12:30 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/HLkTdZtk/Untitled291.png
Here ya are

Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?



The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 05:02 PM


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https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<

Edited at October 13, 2019 05:03 PM by Captain Marvel
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 05:09 PM


Lambo Farms
 
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Captain Marvel said:
https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<


I would say to blend the feet in the ground and the end of the tail spreads kinda of funny.
The Official Art Critique Forum October 13, 2019 05:12 PM


Caprina Springs
 
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Lambo Farms said:


Captain Marvel said:
https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<


I would say to blend the feet in the ground and the end of the tail spreads kinda of funny.


well i would have blended feet and paid more attention to the tail but it is supposed to be made into a set and i only had 3 days to complete. i will take extra precaution to this next time though, thank you!

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