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Rubygem-Chenya
09:47:53 Ruby/Cheshire
Oak
Oh that makes sense
Rubygem-Chenya
09:47:15 Ruby/Cheshire
-13° Celsius not bad
MellowMares
09:47:11 
oh i love the tack on her ruby! and the stripes on her legs <3
Oakmoss Stud
09:46:40 Oak
Ruby, look at her lens image, she's a grey but it won't show until she ages up
Rubygem-Chenya
09:46:31 Ruby/Cheshire
Let me to check the temperature
Rubygem-Chenya
09:45:59 Ruby/Cheshire
-HEE Click-
This is a grey
Jericho Stables
09:45:57 
Thank you for the prayers Angels lol. After about an hour and a half my internet is back up. No office for me.
Sandy Hill Farms
09:45:56 
Its way to cold where I am. Its been in the teens and 20s lately and everyone is basically dying lol
Angels angels
09:45:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Its pretty cold here but it is going to get worse this weekend. The feel is going to be in the negatives
Nordic Designs
09:45:51 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
That SOCAL life has its rare perks lol. Current weather situation.. perk XD
Stormsong Manor
09:45:49 Ven
That is -12 C
Stormsong Manor
09:45:33 Ven
It's 10 F where I live
Rubygem-Chenya
09:45:07 Ruby/Cheshire
It's not that cold where I live.... Yet🙃
Oakmoss Stud
09:44:45 Oak
Her sire was brown so she may well be, but I'm not bothered either way since she greys out so nicely lol
Angels angels
09:44:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah thats seal brown lol
Stormsong Manor
09:44:08 Ven
Hell no to that, Jeri. It's too cold. I almost froze and died walking from my car to my office. Don't do it
Rubygem-Chenya
09:43:13 Ruby/Cheshire
She looks seal brown
Sandy Hill Barn
09:43:11 
That transition is beautiful!
Oakmoss Stud
09:42:37 Oak
I'm excited for her to stop being a boring bay on RO xD

-HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
09:40:08 Ruby/Cheshire
I can't wait for my foals to age up(:

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Rubygem-Chenya
09:47:53 Ruby/Cheshire
Oak
Oh that makes sense
Rubygem-Chenya
09:47:15 Ruby/Cheshire
-13° Celsius not bad
MellowMares
09:47:11 
oh i love the tack on her ruby! and the stripes on her legs <3
Oakmoss Stud
09:46:40 Oak
Ruby, look at her lens image, she's a grey but it won't show until she ages up
Rubygem-Chenya
09:46:31 Ruby/Cheshire
Let me to check the temperature
Rubygem-Chenya
09:45:59 Ruby/Cheshire
-HEE Click-
This is a grey
Jericho Stables
09:45:57 
Thank you for the prayers Angels lol. After about an hour and a half my internet is back up. No office for me.
Sandy Hill Farms
09:45:56 
Its way to cold where I am. Its been in the teens and 20s lately and everyone is basically dying lol
Angels angels
09:45:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Its pretty cold here but it is going to get worse this weekend. The feel is going to be in the negatives
Nordic Designs
09:45:51 Keo/ Ice/ Tiny
That SOCAL life has its rare perks lol. Current weather situation.. perk XD
Stormsong Manor
09:45:49 Ven
That is -12 C
Stormsong Manor
09:45:33 Ven
It's 10 F where I live
Rubygem-Chenya
09:45:07 Ruby/Cheshire
It's not that cold where I live.... Yet🙃
Oakmoss Stud
09:44:45 Oak
Her sire was brown so she may well be, but I'm not bothered either way since she greys out so nicely lol
Angels angels
09:44:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah thats seal brown lol
Stormsong Manor
09:44:08 Ven
Hell no to that, Jeri. It's too cold. I almost froze and died walking from my car to my office. Don't do it
Rubygem-Chenya
09:43:13 Ruby/Cheshire
She looks seal brown
Sandy Hill Barn
09:43:11 
That transition is beautiful!
Oakmoss Stud
09:42:37 Oak
I'm excited for her to stop being a boring bay on RO xD

-HEE Click-
Rubygem-Chenya
09:40:08 Ruby/Cheshire
I can't wait for my foals to age up(:

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The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 01:05 PM

Former Stable
 
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AA Stables said:
Critique is very much appreciated


I love it so much! I would do $150K
(Do you have a shop?)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 01:44 PM

AA Stables
 
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Moon_Showing said:

AA Stables said:
Critique is very much appreciated


I love it so much! I would do $150K
(Do you have a shop?)


Yep :)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:17 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:18 PM


Moon Shadow Ranch
 
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Breezie Rose said:
https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques


I would pay 10K so Tier 3.
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:20 PM


Phantasm Farm
 
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Breezie Rose said:
https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques


Did you colour change that horse? Lemme have a shower and I'll type up a critique :)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:21 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Phantasm Farm said:

Breezie Rose said:
https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques


Did you colour change that horse? Lemme have a shower and I'll type up a critique :)


I kinda did lol. It was originally a dark bay :) https://www.deviantart.com/amoretterose/art/RQS-Clydesdale-95-630984207
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 05:41 PM


Caprina Springs
 
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Breezie Rose said:

Phantasm Farm said:

Breezie Rose said:
https://ibb.co/5kTg73C Use the link for the full picture :D
Blood-Bay-Avi.png
I'd love any kind of critique for this piece including what tier you'd put it in, and how much you would pay :D I'm quite happy with how she turned out and I think I'm continuing to pick up more techniques


Did you colour change that horse? Lemme have a shower and I'll type up a critique :)


I kinda did lol. It was originally a dark bay :) https://www.deviantart.com/amoretterose/art/RQS-Clydesdale-95-630984207


Breezie, I think the piece is very nice! But here's a few things you may want to focus on in the future:

1. Horse Anatomy, it is very very important to understand when you're making art. The lines in the stomach are very exagerated and unrealistic, now if you up the size of the brush you used and lowered the opacity, then followed the line of the belly (horizontal strokes, not vertical) and just swooped it a couple times, this piece would be absolutely stunning!

2. Cutting the Horse, I can see a few pointy and jagged lines under the belly which was probably caused by the uneven surface from the girth strap on the original stock image. Try to revise details like this and smooth them out before getting too far ahead to the point where you can't fix things like that. What I do is I cut out, color change, reduce noise, and smudge the horse at the original stock image size. I find it stupid easy to do and to keep a detailed look to the image when I put it to the size I want it at later on.

3. Hair, this detail goes for manes, tails, and floofy feets like this Clyde has (: When I do hair, I first emphasize the direction I want it to flow in (ALWAYS pay attention to the atmosphere of your back image, it is easy to get caught up in your own idea and not realize that the hair you just spent hours on is flowing in the wrong direction... im talking from experience ok lol) Keep this initial messy flowy hair separate from the final, that way you can refer to it when highlighting and such.
Specifically for feet, just small wavy strands blowing in a similar direction as the mane/tail all around where visible hair lines are seen on your horse and of course at the bottom of the hooves.

Hope that helps! (:
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 06:48 PM

Former Stable
 
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Would love some critique on this please

Edited at March 18, 2020 06:49 PM by Oak valley
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 07:19 PM


Gem

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Oak valley said:
Would love some critique on this please


Lessen your highlights. It's very cloudy yet you have some very extreme highlights and shadows on the horse :)
The Official Art Critique Forum March 18, 2020 10:45 PM


Sagebrush
 
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Critique? I'm not satisfied with this, but hey, I'm not sure what to do.

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