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This looks amazing Sun, The detail is insane However the legs are a wee bit too much smudged out. There are a few points on the body the are tinged green and don't run with the colour scheme (the shoulder and down to her rump are quite green) Use the lasso tool and select those areas, and change the hue a bit, or you could duplicate the horse layer and change its hue, then turn the opacity down. The way the horse is cut is a little sharp, so after you finish cutting, go over the horse again with the eraser tool just to clean it up a bit, then when you are smudging, take a smaller brush and go around the outside of the horse. :) |
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https://ibb.co/bJJVsqS I have two other versions here, one is the original, and the other is another altered version |
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Would love to have a bit of critique here. The eye tutorial was a massive help and so was the hair tutorial I followed Edited at December 27, 2019 08:39 AM by Oak valley |
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 (Mods, I will not be selling, auctioning, or using this piece) I actually really liked how this turned out! Any crititique welcome! |
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Sagebrush said:
(Mods, I will not be selling, auctioning, or using this piece) I actually really liked how this turned out! Any crititique welcome!
Awesome Sage! The horse is a wee bit too smudged out in my opinion, however if thats what you where going for thats okay too! It still looks good. The hair is improved, its a tiny bit sticklike though, try adding hairsprings on the edges of it and you'll be golden! The horse lighting is really good! The hair lighting needs a bit more practice and thats okay; The forelock highlights are a bit too much and don't roll with the lighting and The mane needs a bit more highlight. When smudging, make sure you smudge the edge of the horse so it softens the horse! (I've said this so many times lol, but its essential in making your piece look polished and well done.) |
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I didn't do too much to this one, but I figured I'd still ask for critique. There's probably a lot I could have done but didn't lol |
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I'm looking for a bit of critique on this piece, it is a banner and horse avi and whoever wins it (it will be in a giveaway) will get a custom stable avi. These are meant to be a little opaque, it is a ghost theme :) Banner: Avi: |
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Moonglade Manor said:
I'm looking for a bit of critique on this piece, it is a banner and horse avi and whoever wins it (it will be in a giveaway) will get a custom stable avi. These are meant to be a little opaque, it is a ghost theme :) Banner: Avi:
Looks nice! Even though the horse is meant to be ghostly, it shouldn't lack detail. Let more of its color show and lighten up on the smudging (it looks like you did smudging but I could be wrong). Also, add definition lines in areas like the jaw, cheek, chest, and shoulder. Some color in the eye would be nice as well. |
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Can I have some critique on this? It is my first ever lineart |
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Sunny
