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05:33:57 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Claire
Awww thanks, they are my pride and joys (except for Aphrodite since she wanted to rip her face open lol)

Gemstone Stable

05:33:57 Snow❆Gem

My gosh. Moms a bit sick and has a funky voice. She's tempting to sing along to 80s music on the the radio. LMAO XD

CrimsonValleyEstate

05:33:20 Crimson

Hi!!

madelineid

05:31:32

Hi Everyone

05:28:49 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Claire
I got pictures of them on my Stables <3

Claire´s Kingdom

05:26:24 Claire

@Greenheart
Oh my goodness I love snakes

05:26:13 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Kai
I got 4! All ball pythons

05:25:42 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Storm
Yeah it was interesting, I would've taken them to my grandmother's house who had power but the ice on the road was so bad the hour drive w was risky

05:24:09 Shark/Kai/Moon

Gren
Oh, that sucks. Cute that you have snakes!

Gemstone Stable

05:23:31 Snow❆Gem

@green

Oh my! I'm sure everyone is glad to back to normal. :D

05:23:28 Ivory

Are regular or member shows more profitable?

05:22:34 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

We just got power back after a tree fell during the winter storm we had. Snakes are glad to be out of the emergency buckets and pillowcases lol had to use handwarmers to keep them and the hermits comfortable

Gemstone Stable

05:22:19 Snow❆Gem

@a gels

Oh, my, gosh! That's so lovely! XD *boop*

05:21:56 Shark/Kai/Moon

Snow
Kind of expected, considering both Sire and Dam are mixed EW'S

05:21:37 Ivory

Angel
I rarely see chimeras where the actual "chimera" is so light, looks super pretty!

Gemstone Stable

05:20:57 Snow❆Gem

Breed a triple Premium Pearl horse (ee Prlprl CcrC)

EEE...

-HEE Click-

05:20:37 Shark/Kai/Moon

I have 40,000 in my main and then 56,000 in my savings, I'm tempted to just earn slightly more and then merge everything to get another stable. I'd be broke then if i do T-T

Angels angels

05:20:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
She's so pretty

Gemstone Stable

05:18:11 Snow❆Gem

@granny

I forgot to use the height item! *facepalm* I still have it in my inventory...

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Gemstone Stable

05:37:34 Snow❆Gem

*attempting

lol

05:33:57 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Claire
Awww thanks, they are my pride and joys (except for Aphrodite since she wanted to rip her face open lol)

Gemstone Stable

05:33:57 Snow❆Gem

My gosh. Moms a bit sick and has a funky voice. She's tempting to sing along to 80s music on the the radio. LMAO XD

CrimsonValleyEstate

05:33:20 Crimson

Hi!!

madelineid

05:31:32

Hi Everyone

05:28:49 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Claire
I got pictures of them on my Stables <3

Claire´s Kingdom

05:26:24 Claire

@Greenheart
Oh my goodness I love snakes

05:26:13 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Kai
I got 4! All ball pythons

05:25:42 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

@Storm
Yeah it was interesting, I would've taken them to my grandmother's house who had power but the ice on the road was so bad the hour drive w was risky

05:24:09 Shark/Kai/Moon

Gren
Oh, that sucks. Cute that you have snakes!

Gemstone Stable

05:23:31 Snow❆Gem

@green

Oh my! I'm sure everyone is glad to back to normal. :D

05:23:28 Ivory

Are regular or member shows more profitable?

05:22:34 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

Gemstone Stable

05:22:19 Snow❆Gem

@a gels

Oh, my, gosh! That's so lovely! XD *boop*

05:21:56 Shark/Kai/Moon

Snow
Kind of expected, considering both Sire and Dam are mixed EW'S

05:21:37 Ivory

Angel
I rarely see chimeras where the actual "chimera" is so light, looks super pretty!

Gemstone Stable

05:20:57 Snow❆Gem

Breed a triple Premium Pearl horse (ee Prlprl CcrC)

EEE...

-HEE Click-

05:20:37 Shark/Kai/Moon

I have 40,000 in my main and then 56,000 in my savings, I'm tempted to just earn slightly more and then merge everything to get another stable. I'd be broke then if i do T-T

Angels angels

05:20:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
She's so pretty

Gemstone Stable

05:18:11 Snow❆Gem

@granny

I forgot to use the height item! *facepalm* I still have it in my inventory...

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December 3, 2019 07:03 AM

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Star Catcher Estate said:
I'm going to lay this down here... It's already done (based on a photo), but I wanted some opinions. This was done on a tablet that I have called a reMarkable, it only has three pen colors, so much layering with shading had to be done. Anyhoo, thoughts?

https://i.postimg.cc/CK75k8zv/3.jpg

Your anatomy seems pretty accurate. The amount of gray used kinda looks muddy. I would add more shadows and highlights to better define the horse's features, especially in the face.

December 3, 2019 10:48 AM

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Edited at December 3, 2019 10:49 AM by Maqaroon

December 4, 2019 03:02 PM

Lambo Farms

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https://i.ibb.co/fdQjWcp/art-trade.jpg

Thoughts?

December 4, 2019 03:04 PM

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I don't know if it's intentional but the vgreen on the stomach is honestly putting me off

The pink on the muzzle should be lighter and more link, not purple

Try adding a more noticeable iris to the eye

Otherwise looks great!

December 4, 2019 03:06 PM

Lambo Farms

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Sunset Grove Farm said:
I don't know if it's intentional but the vgreen on the stomach is honestly putting me off

The pink on the muzzle should be lighter and more link, not purple

Try adding a more noticeable iris to the eye

Otherwise looks great!

Thanks, I will think about these on my next commison :D And I forgot to do the eyes glad you pointed that out XD

December 4, 2019 03:08 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpg

Critique?

Edited at December 4, 2019 03:08 PM by Lazy Duck Elites

December 4, 2019 03:11 PM

Lambo Farms

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Lazy Duck Elites said:
https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpg
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I love the concept on this but For me the forelock is throwing me off it looks stiff and has no flyways or aything. I would try adding some lower light and highlight and a few fly aways to fix that :)

Edited at December 4, 2019 03:11 PM by Lambo Farms

December 4, 2019 03:23 PM

Idle Lane Farms

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Lazy Duck Elites said:
https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpg
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Overall think this is great, but the hair is very wonky.

The forelock is far too long and stiff, it just looks super fake. Same goes for that weird long piece of mane at the withers. The horses mane is fairly short and cut straight and the really long piece at the end is most certainly not something that would happen unless the horses got a really bad haircut, haha. Just doesn't look right to me. Try adding some more highlights and lowlights to the hair too. That's my only critique for this piece though, I think it's stunning otherwise :)

Edited at December 4, 2019 03:23 PM by Amera Eventing

December 4, 2019 08:16 PM

Lumeer Arts

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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20073710

First horse avi I've done since September? (maybe longer) I definitely feel rusty, so any critiques on this would be appreciated. Will o the whisp thingies are hand drawn.

December 4, 2019 08:53 PM