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Oak valley said:
https://i.postimg.cc/mDBYpTdr/Untitled184.pngCritique on latest commission
The white line under the belly is a little noticeable. Not sure if that's purposeful. If not, is there any way you could dim it down? Otherwise, I love it! <3 Nice work Oak! |
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Star Catcher Estate said:
Oak valley said:
https://i.postimg.cc/mDBYpTdr/Untitled184.pngCritique on latest commission
The white line under the belly is a little noticeable. Not sure if that's purposeful. If not, is there any way you could dim it down? Otherwise, I love it! <3 Nice work Oak!
Thanks :) I didn't mean for it to be that noticeable lol I'll try to dim it down a little |
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Sunset Grove Farm said:
Still looking
Sunset Grove Farm said:
https://i.postimg.cc/kG7YnGCK/IMG-20191128-230654-240.jpg
I'd like to request some critique for this please :)
I'll try lol. Is the glow purposeful? I'm assuming that it is. If not, that's really the only thing that kinda throws me off. :D The blending and the shadows are really amazing. |
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Oak valley said:
Star Catcher Estate said:
Oak valley said:
https://i.postimg.cc/mDBYpTdr/Untitled184.pngCritique on latest commission
The white line under the belly is a little noticeable. Not sure if that's purposeful. If not, is there any way you could dim it down? Otherwise, I love it! <3 Nice work Oak!
Thanks :) I didn't mean for it to be that noticeable lol I'll try to dim it down a little
Good plan. :D |
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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/fyCbHYwv/Untitled398-20191130101746.png I need thoughts and help on how to make this better.
Also any thoughts on how to blend those feet better so it does not look like it is floating?
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Yup the glow was on purpose, it was too add a magical effect to the horse ^^
Star Catcher Estate said:
Sunset Grove Farm said:
Still looking
Sunset Grove Farm said:
https://i.postimg.cc/kG7YnGCK/IMG-20191128-230654-240.jpg
I'd like to request some critique for this please :)
I'll try lol. Is the glow purposeful? I'm assuming that it is. If not, that's really the only thing that kinda throws me off. :D The blending and the shadows are really amazing.
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Lambo Farms said:
Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/fyCbHYwv/Untitled398-20191130101746.png I need thoughts and help on how to make this better.
Also any thoughts on how to blend those feet better so it does not look like it is floating?
Still looking
I really like this piece, I like the shadow and the mane and tail <3
I got a bit confused by the background as on one side the path looks normal and the lighting is nice but in the other side it gets darker and its almost like the path is tilted up? I don't know whether this is on purpose lol. When I blend in the feet I use the smudge tool, I set the opacity fairly low and then smudge it upwards if ya get me.
Sorry if this isn't helpful |
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Oak valley said:
Lambo Farms said:
Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/fyCbHYwv/Untitled398-20191130101746.png I need thoughts and help on how to make this better.
Also any thoughts on how to blend those feet better so it does not look like it is floating?
Still looking
I really like this piece, I like the shadow and the mane and tail <3
I got a bit confused by the background as on one side the path looks normal and the lighting is nice but in the other side it gets darker and its almost like the path is tilted up? I don't know whether this is on purpose lol. When I blend in the feet I use the smudge tool, I set the opacity fairly low and then smudge it upwards if ya get me.
Sorry if this isn't helpful
Thank you! I will try to use the smudge tool for sure! |
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Lambo Farms said:
Star Catcher Estate said:
Any thoughts? This piece is kinda overdue, but any opinions would be great!And this is definitely still a work in progress https://i.postimg.cc/Vv7NtBgk/Screenshot-2019-11-30-at-5-20-53-PM.png
I think it looks great! I would add more muscleing but other than that it really like it!
How would I do that? |
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Star Catcher Estate said:
Lambo Farms said:
Star Catcher Estate said:
Any thoughts? This piece is kinda overdue, but any opinions would be great!And this is definitely still a work in progress https://i.postimg.cc/Vv7NtBgk/Screenshot-2019-11-30-at-5-20-53-PM.png
I think it looks great! I would add more muscleing but other than that it really like it!
How would I do that?
Like in the sholders and hip it needs more lines or something there to resmble muscles. |
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