Horse Eden : DDs Art advice & critique?

12:16:26 Geek, Eek

Storm

Not much. Just normal life, school, looking for a job. Tryna convince my parents to buy me a horse I like, if we buy this one house in the country.

12:15:21 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Hi Geek. What’s up?

12:15:00 Geek, Eek

Storm

Hi.

12:12:49 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Hi all

12:04:31 Geek, Eek

Shi

I meant that I, personally, don't talk about it in general. I didn't mean that nobody else couldn't talk about it.

Shipyards

11:53:02 Ship

He seems okay, I suppose. Decent rating, at least.

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Shiecka

11:44:09 Shi

oh i mean i dont care thats fine if you dont want to, you just said "we dont talk about that" and i took that as there being a rule or something i was unaware of

Glacier Bay Cove

11:38:27 Glacier Katz

Sorry I brought this topic up, what are your plans for the next RO

Fantasy Horses

11:35:47 Fantasy | Fanta

Someone I know had their puppy get hit and die soon after they got her

11:34:53 Dreamie/Aris

We'll be there in spirit peggy

11:34:45 Geek, Eek

Shi

I don't like talking about it, because I watched my dog get hit and killed a little less than a month ago.

Pegasus Lane

11:34:24 Peggy (or) Peg

I need to run down to the barn to do a night check but I'm in the middle of reading a scary & disturbing part of a book. walking down there in the dark feels like a death sentence 🤣😭

11:34:06

Well that's the reddest grey I have ever seen.

-HEE Click-

11:32:13 Dreamie/Aris

Lol

11:31:19

If my computer gets any slower I am going to need six MINUTES to finish the hats game.

Shiecka

11:28:03 Shi

noted

Glacier Bay Cove

11:27:59 Glacier Katz

I cry every time

KPH Equestrian

11:27:12 Rapcoon | Jester

preference

Shiecka

11:27:04 Shi

or is that just a preference

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NINJAGO

12:38:51 Acronix

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Like my horse?

12:16:26 Geek, Eek

Storm

Not much. Just normal life, school, looking for a job. Tryna convince my parents to buy me a horse I like, if we buy this one house in the country.

12:15:21 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Hi Geek. What’s up?

12:15:00 Geek, Eek

Storm

Hi.

12:12:49 Storm|RID/SD Lord

Hi all

12:04:31 Geek, Eek

Shi

I meant that I, personally, don't talk about it in general. I didn't mean that nobody else couldn't talk about it.

Shipyards

11:53:02 Ship

He seems okay, I suppose. Decent rating, at least.

-HEE Click-

Shiecka

11:44:09 Shi

oh i mean i dont care thats fine if you dont want to, you just said "we dont talk about that" and i took that as there being a rule or something i was unaware of

Glacier Bay Cove

11:38:27 Glacier Katz

Sorry I brought this topic up, what are your plans for the next RO

Fantasy Horses

11:35:47 Fantasy | Fanta

Someone I know had their puppy get hit and die soon after they got her

11:34:53 Dreamie/Aris

We'll be there in spirit peggy

11:34:45 Geek, Eek

Shi

I don't like talking about it, because I watched my dog get hit and killed a little less than a month ago.

Pegasus Lane

11:34:24 Peggy (or) Peg

I need to run down to the barn to do a night check but I'm in the middle of reading a scary & disturbing part of a book. walking down there in the dark feels like a death sentence 🤣😭

11:34:06

Well that's the reddest grey I have ever seen.

-HEE Click-

11:32:13 Dreamie/Aris

Lol

11:31:19

If my computer gets any slower I am going to need six MINUTES to finish the hats game.

Shiecka

11:28:03 Shi

noted

Glacier Bay Cove

11:27:59 Glacier Katz

I cry every time

KPH Equestrian

11:27:12 Rapcoon | Jester

preference

Shiecka

11:27:04 Shi

or is that just a preference

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November 9, 2024 09:21 AM

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I love how this piece turned out, but always looking for critique (i'm trying to improve on my manips :P

Edited at November 12, 2024 02:21 PM by Dash and Duchess

November 10, 2024 06:23 PM

Wolf Dancer

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The top piece is insane! *-* I wants it!

November 10, 2024 06:43 PM

Glacier Bay Cove

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Gorgeous

Dash and Duchess said:

new one - any thoughts ya'll?

November 10, 2024 07:10 PM

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Thank you! i love how it turned out!!

Wolf Dancer said:

The top piece is insane! *-* I wants it!

November 10, 2024 07:11 PM

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Thank you! I think i'm starting to improve on my manips!

Glacier Bay Cove said:

Gorgeous

Dash and Duchess said:

new one - any thoughts ya'll?

Edited at January 3, 2025 10:25 PM by Dash and Duchess

November 12, 2024 07:42 AM

SpottyButts

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The top piece on the first page is gorgeous. You can see SO MUCH improvement in so little time.

One thing that sticks out for me is the lighting and shadows. Your lighting is already good so please dont think it isnt. But you could elevate it even more. Stack your lighting layers as overlay. I use a min of 2. Max 4.

Where there is light, theres also shadow. I tend to shadow my horse quite a bit to really elevate the lighting on the horse.

Your patternings seems good. Very clean on the peggy.

Id love to see a full piece wiht grounding etc with the style of the first one!

Regarding tier and prices. This all depends on a few factors.

How are you with heavy patterning? Appaloosa/peacock etc?

Can you do heavy tack removals?

How are you with crazy ideas? ETC below

If I won a custom auction from you and asked for a heavy fantasy piece, with a horse leaping out the sea with shark colours, minimal patternings

November 12, 2024 08:00 AM

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SpottyButts said:

The top piece on the first page is gorgeous. You can see SO MUCH improvement in so little time.

One thing that sticks out for me is the lighting and shadows. Your lighting is already good so please dont think it isnt. But you could elevate it even more. Stack your lighting layers as overlay. I use a min of 2. Max 4.

Where there is light, theres also shadow. I tend to shadow my horse quite a bit to really elevate the lighting on the horse.

Your patternings seems good. Very clean on the peggy.

Id love to see a full piece wiht grounding etc with the style of the first one!

-

Regarding tier and prices. This all depends on a few factors.

How are you with heavy patterning? Appaloosa/peacock etc?

Can you do heavy tack removals?

How are you with crazy ideas? ETC below

If I won a custom auction from you and asked for a heavy fantasy piece, with a horse leaping out the sea with shark colours, minimal patternings

Thank you so much!! I can definitely see where I could darken/lighten shadows, and I feel like im relatively confident in patterning but I think I can still improve, tack removals wise, I can remove pretty much anything, but it definitely looses some detail or I just cover my mistakes with wild hair xD crazy ideas wise I love trying stuff like that (way back when, I did a lil horse/fish) and the crazier the more fun 🤣

Edited at November 12, 2024 12:48 PM by Dash and Duchess

November 13, 2024 09:41 AM

Zomb

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Dash and Duchess said:

SpottyButts said:

The top piece on the first page is gorgeous. You can see SO MUCH improvement in so little time.

One thing that sticks out for me is the lighting and shadows. Your lighting is already good so please dont think it isnt. But you could elevate it even more. Stack your lighting layers as overlay. I use a min of 2. Max 4.

Where there is light, theres also shadow. I tend to shadow my horse quite a bit to really elevate the lighting on the horse.

Your patternings seems good. Very clean on the peggy.

Id love to see a full piece wiht grounding etc with the style of the first one!

-

Regarding tier and prices. This all depends on a few factors.

How are you with heavy patterning? Appaloosa/peacock etc?

Can you do heavy tack removals?

How are you with crazy ideas? ETC below

If I won a custom auction from you and asked for a heavy fantasy piece, with a horse leaping out the sea with shark colours, minimal patternings

Thank you so much!! I can definitely see where I could darken/lighten shadows, and I feel like im relatively confident in patterning but I think I can still improve, tack removals wise, I can remove pretty much anything, but it definitely looses some detail or I just cover my mistakes with wild hair xD crazy ideas wise I love trying stuff like that (way back when, I did a lil horse/fish) and the crazier the more fun 🤣

Heavy tack removals arent always needed anyways.

For pricing and tier, i would personally do a custom slot or two. See if you can get a consistant style. Then go from there.

November 13, 2024 10:16 AM

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Zomb said:

Dash and Duchess said:

SpottyButts said:

The top piece on the first page is gorgeous. You can see SO MUCH improvement in so little time.

One thing that sticks out for me is the lighting and shadows. Your lighting is already good so please dont think it isnt. But you could elevate it even more. Stack your lighting layers as overlay. I use a min of 2. Max 4.

Where there is light, theres also shadow. I tend to shadow my horse quite a bit to really elevate the lighting on the horse.

Your patternings seems good. Very clean on the peggy.

Id love to see a full piece wiht grounding etc with the style of the first one!

-

Regarding tier and prices. This all depends on a few factors.

How are you with heavy patterning? Appaloosa/peacock etc?

Can you do heavy tack removals?

How are you with crazy ideas? ETC below

If I won a custom auction from you and asked for a heavy fantasy piece, with a horse leaping out the sea with shark colours, minimal patternings

Thank you so much!! I can definitely see where I could darken/lighten shadows, and I feel like im relatively confident in patterning but I think I can still improve, tack removals wise, I can remove pretty much anything, but it definitely looses some detail or I just cover my mistakes with wild hair xD crazy ideas wise I love trying stuff like that (way back when, I did a lil horse/fish) and the crazier the more fun 🤣

Heavy tack removals arent always needed anyways.

For pricing and tier, i would personally do a custom slot or two. See if you can get a consistant style. Then go from there.

Perfect! I'm about to do one so I'll update here soon! Thank you so much by the way!!

November 14, 2024 07:10 PM