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11:28:35

showing? sorry im new ;-;

SandWitch Arabians

11:28:32 Witchypoo

retired from breeding, they can still be shown

Shamrock Equines

11:28:02 Crowley

They are for showing.

11:27:42

are retired horses still any good?

11:26:06

How about... you just match all of mine? I swear I keep forgetting about it.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:25:57 Glacier Kittens

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Is a keeper

11:24:46 AL, mum to Nemi

Done matching (on this accunt), yay

11:23:53 AL, mum to Nemi

Alright, ceres/tangaroa for her

Stabulum Equorum

11:23:00

One of my favorite studs ;D

Stabulum Equorum

11:22:34

He didn't train as great, but full brother to Versace
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Rising Stars Stable

11:21:59 Willow ~ AA Breeder

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I'll take that

11:21:46 Vixie

love Tangaroa <3

Stabulum Equorum

11:21:46

He's the sire of Tarot ( #13 WBLB) and Versace

11:21:02 AL, mum to Nemi

Ouh silver <3

Stabulum Equorum

11:20:09

I am a huge Tangaroa fan

11:19:41 AL, mum to Nemi

Endeavor is weak in INT/HRT though like her

Stabulum Equorum

11:19:02

I am kind of biased, AL xD

11:18:39 AL, mum to Nemi

Not opposed if he matches

11:18:36 Cali | TBs

Actually, I vote she goes to Versace. I'm in love with his tobi

11:17:48 Cali | TBs

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11:28:35

showing? sorry im new ;-;

SandWitch Arabians

11:28:32 Witchypoo

retired from breeding, they can still be shown

Shamrock Equines

11:28:02 Crowley

They are for showing.

11:27:42

are retired horses still any good?

11:26:06

How about... you just match all of mine? I swear I keep forgetting about it.

Glacier Bay Cove

11:25:57 Glacier Kittens

-HEE Click-
Is a keeper

11:24:46 AL, mum to Nemi

Done matching (on this accunt), yay

11:23:53 AL, mum to Nemi

Alright, ceres/tangaroa for her

Stabulum Equorum

11:23:00

One of my favorite studs ;D

Stabulum Equorum

11:22:34

He didn't train as great, but full brother to Versace
-HEE Click-

Rising Stars Stable

11:21:59 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
I'll take that

11:21:46 Vixie

love Tangaroa <3

Stabulum Equorum

11:21:46

He's the sire of Tarot ( #13 WBLB) and Versace

11:21:02 AL, mum to Nemi

Ouh silver <3

Stabulum Equorum

11:20:09

I am a huge Tangaroa fan

11:19:41 AL, mum to Nemi

Endeavor is weak in INT/HRT though like her

Stabulum Equorum

11:19:02

I am kind of biased, AL xD

11:18:39 AL, mum to Nemi

Not opposed if he matches

11:18:36 Cali | TBs

Actually, I vote she goes to Versace. I'm in love with his tobi

11:17:48 Cali | TBs

AL
How opposed are you to yeeting her at Endeavour?

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Constructive criticism please <3

August 30, 2019 09:25 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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Ok. So your most recent piece is really nice. But the lighting is very, very, off. Your light source is coming from above, yet is far behind the horse.

So I went ahead and TRIED to explain the light and shadow directions via this lovely image.

https://imagizer.imageshack.com/img923/7227/CkJKRq.png

Constructive criticism please <3

August 30, 2019 09:30 PM

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Thamks very much jello that's actually really helpful ^^

Since it's. A premade ill try and see what I can do

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August 30, 2019 09:38 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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I figured color coding might make it easier to understand. XD

I'm awful at descriptive text.

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August 30, 2019 09:40 PM

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It's very useful!

That stock was a pain to match but I wnayed to at least try and do my own lighting if that makes sense?

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August 31, 2019 05:10 AM

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https://i.postimg.cc/y8tjj6Fb/Pics-Art-08-31-11-00-59.jpg

Revamped ^^

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August 31, 2019 06:31 AM

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https://i.postimg.cc/MpgNsMNC/Untitled138.jpg

Recent avatar :D

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