Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Sagewood Stables
04:59:34 
that sounds awesome when is the next one XD
Alpine Acres
04:56:46 Lily
Sage
capture day happens around every 3 months where captures are half price and your chances of getting better ratings are higher
Sagewood Stables
04:55:35 
capture day?
WolfRunner Acres
04:52:09 
Whoa
Paradise Stables
04:51:53 Ariel / Tara
I've got a WWW PON and WWE RID on the capture day this month
ArcticLights
04:51:44 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Yeah, I have captured a handful of EWWs on the capture events
Paradise Stables
04:51:08 Ariel / Tara
Also capture days are worth it
ArcticLights
04:50:40 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Never toss unrated wilds LOL. You might be lucky. She is the first WWW I have ever captured
ArcticLights
04:49:58 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I captured her in mountains with a map. I honestly think map + personal luck is what determines what you get
MK Sport Horse Yard
04:48:24 
I was going to toss one mare but i decided to rate her and she has a W lol so glad i rated her first lol
Sagewood Stables
04:47:44 
do some locations matter or not really?
Sagewood Stables
04:47:19 
so lukcy im a little jealous XD
ArcticLights
04:45:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-
Sagewood Stables
04:45:52 
i need some luck XD
ArcticLights
04:45:04 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Sage, yes. You can even find WWWs if you are lucky enough
Alpine Acres
04:44:59 Lily
Sage
yup! Using maps increase your chances and you can occasionally snag W combos/WWW if you're very very lucky
Sagewood Stables
04:42:44 
wait you can find W's in the wild??
Paradise Stables
04:42:41 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-
Can anyone advice me whether I should sven this or not..?
Wild_Potatoes
04:39:28 
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Snagged this beauty from the wild yesterday
Sagewood Stables
04:37:38 
thankl you :D

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Sagewood Stables
04:59:34 
that sounds awesome when is the next one XD
Alpine Acres
04:56:46 Lily
Sage
capture day happens around every 3 months where captures are half price and your chances of getting better ratings are higher
Sagewood Stables
04:55:35 
capture day?
WolfRunner Acres
04:52:09 
Whoa
Paradise Stables
04:51:53 Ariel / Tara
I've got a WWW PON and WWE RID on the capture day this month
ArcticLights
04:51:44 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Yeah, I have captured a handful of EWWs on the capture events
Paradise Stables
04:51:08 Ariel / Tara
Also capture days are worth it
ArcticLights
04:50:40 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Never toss unrated wilds LOL. You might be lucky. She is the first WWW I have ever captured
ArcticLights
04:49:58 Ceci / (Call me) AL
I captured her in mountains with a map. I honestly think map + personal luck is what determines what you get
MK Sport Horse Yard
04:48:24 
I was going to toss one mare but i decided to rate her and she has a W lol so glad i rated her first lol
Sagewood Stables
04:47:44 
do some locations matter or not really?
Sagewood Stables
04:47:19 
so lukcy im a little jealous XD
ArcticLights
04:45:57 Ceci / (Call me) AL
-HEE Click-
Sagewood Stables
04:45:52 
i need some luck XD
ArcticLights
04:45:04 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Sage, yes. You can even find WWWs if you are lucky enough
Alpine Acres
04:44:59 Lily
Sage
yup! Using maps increase your chances and you can occasionally snag W combos/WWW if you're very very lucky
Sagewood Stables
04:42:44 
wait you can find W's in the wild??
Paradise Stables
04:42:41 Ariel / Tara
-HEE Click-
Can anyone advice me whether I should sven this or not..?
Wild_Potatoes
04:39:28 
-HEE Click-
Snagged this beauty from the wild yesterday
Sagewood Stables
04:37:38 
thankl you :D

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM


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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


Unexpected Visitor
 
Posts: 1348
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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
Posts: 927
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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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