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Motonemi
11:24:46 AL, mum to Nemi
Done matching (on this accunt), yay
Motonemi
11:23:53 AL, mum to Nemi
Alright, ceres/tangaroa for her
Stabulum Equorum
11:23:00 
One of my favorite studs ;D
Stabulum Equorum
11:22:34 
He didn't train as great, but full brother to Versace
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Rising Stars Stable
11:21:59 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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I'll take that
Vixen Creek
11:21:46 Vixie
love Tangaroa <3
Stabulum Equorum
11:21:46 
He's the sire of Tarot ( #13 WBLB) and Versace
Motonemi
11:21:02 AL, mum to Nemi
Ouh silver <3
Stabulum Equorum
11:20:09 
I am a huge Tangaroa fan
Motonemi
11:19:41 AL, mum to Nemi
Endeavor is weak in INT/HRT though like her
Stabulum Equorum
11:19:02 
I am kind of biased, AL xD
Motonemi
11:18:39 AL, mum to Nemi
Not opposed if he matches
Highglen Ridge
11:18:36 Cali | TBs
Actually, I vote she goes to Versace. I'm in love with his tobi
Highglen Ridge
11:17:48 Cali | TBs
AL
How opposed are you to yeeting her at Endeavour?
Stabulum Equorum
11:17:42 
Ouhh hello random!
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Vixen Creek
11:17:21 Vixie
yay c:

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Motonemi
11:16:40 AL, mum to Nemi
Any other baby daddies for this one other than Ceres and Jack O?

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Motonemi
11:15:14 AL, mum to Nemi
Oh she cute
Stabulum Equorum
11:14:48 
RbRb and white!
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Rising Stars Stable
11:14:40 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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I want to FR *Mad face*

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Motonemi
11:24:46 AL, mum to Nemi
Done matching (on this accunt), yay
Motonemi
11:23:53 AL, mum to Nemi
Alright, ceres/tangaroa for her
Stabulum Equorum
11:23:00 
One of my favorite studs ;D
Stabulum Equorum
11:22:34 
He didn't train as great, but full brother to Versace
-HEE Click-
Rising Stars Stable
11:21:59 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
I'll take that
Vixen Creek
11:21:46 Vixie
love Tangaroa <3
Stabulum Equorum
11:21:46 
He's the sire of Tarot ( #13 WBLB) and Versace
Motonemi
11:21:02 AL, mum to Nemi
Ouh silver <3
Stabulum Equorum
11:20:09 
I am a huge Tangaroa fan
Motonemi
11:19:41 AL, mum to Nemi
Endeavor is weak in INT/HRT though like her
Stabulum Equorum
11:19:02 
I am kind of biased, AL xD
Motonemi
11:18:39 AL, mum to Nemi
Not opposed if he matches
Highglen Ridge
11:18:36 Cali | TBs
Actually, I vote she goes to Versace. I'm in love with his tobi
Highglen Ridge
11:17:48 Cali | TBs
AL
How opposed are you to yeeting her at Endeavour?
Stabulum Equorum
11:17:42 
Ouhh hello random!
-HEE Click-
Vixen Creek
11:17:21 Vixie
yay c:

-HEE Click-
Motonemi
11:16:40 AL, mum to Nemi
Any other baby daddies for this one other than Ceres and Jack O?

-HEE Click-
Motonemi
11:15:14 AL, mum to Nemi
Oh she cute
Stabulum Equorum
11:14:48 
RbRb and white!
-HEE Click-
Rising Stars Stable
11:14:40 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
I want to FR *Mad face*

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM

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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM

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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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