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Glacier Bay Cove
07:17:28 Arctic Katz
It switched to sales chat for me, and I had to switch it back
Angels angels
07:16:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol chat keep switching on us
Lucky Strides
07:15:02 Luck
Ugh my premium must have run out :/
Glacier Bay Cove
07:14:40 Arctic Katz
πŸ‘€πŸ‘€ Solar
Angels angels
07:14:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah he will probably get yeeted. Kind of forgot about him and he isn't as pretty as he was as a foal lol
MakeEm Fancy
07:13:06 Ally 💜
Oh no lol
Angels angels
07:12:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ally
-HEE Click-
He is a training project (just wanted to see how AAAs trained) because I couldn't FR him either lol lets just say it's not going well
MakeEm Fancy
07:11:30 Ally 💜
No I just couldnt FR him XD
Angels angels
07:11:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Green
Pm me anything lol
Legacy Leagues
07:11:04 Alyssa (Future Vet)
Time to capture with maps and get nothing <.<
Greenheart Stables
07:10:21 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Angel
Do you mind if I PM you with a non-snake related question
Angels angels
07:09:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol Ally is he a training project?
MakeEm Fancy
07:07:16 Ally 💜
:D
-HEE Click-
Wild_Potatoes
07:05:26 
-HEE Click-
Ok this is one of my favorite show geldings
Angels angels
07:00:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh pretty!
Wisteria Run Farm
07:00:01 Solar/Ria
wild child XD wish she was a W, but wow!
-HEE Click-
Eagle Creek
06:59:04 Eagle
Thanks Angels
Angels angels
06:57:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Apricot is ee and prlprl with no creme
Eagle Creek
06:57:32 Eagle
Stud*
Eagle Creek
06:57:11 Eagle
What sort of stuf would I need for an apricot?

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Glacier Bay Cove
07:17:28 Arctic Katz
It switched to sales chat for me, and I had to switch it back
Angels angels
07:16:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol chat keep switching on us
Lucky Strides
07:15:02 Luck
Ugh my premium must have run out :/
Glacier Bay Cove
07:14:40 Arctic Katz
πŸ‘€πŸ‘€ Solar
Angels angels
07:14:33 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yeah he will probably get yeeted. Kind of forgot about him and he isn't as pretty as he was as a foal lol
MakeEm Fancy
07:13:06 Ally 💜
Oh no lol
Angels angels
07:12:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Ally
-HEE Click-
He is a training project (just wanted to see how AAAs trained) because I couldn't FR him either lol lets just say it's not going well
MakeEm Fancy
07:11:30 Ally 💜
No I just couldnt FR him XD
Angels angels
07:11:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Green
Pm me anything lol
Legacy Leagues
07:11:04 Alyssa (Future Vet)
Time to capture with maps and get nothing <.<
Greenheart Stables
07:10:21 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Angel
Do you mind if I PM you with a non-snake related question
Angels angels
07:09:00 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol Ally is he a training project?
MakeEm Fancy
07:07:16 Ally 💜
:D
-HEE Click-
Wild_Potatoes
07:05:26 
-HEE Click-
Ok this is one of my favorite show geldings
Angels angels
07:00:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh pretty!
Wisteria Run Farm
07:00:01 Solar/Ria
wild child XD wish she was a W, but wow!
-HEE Click-
Eagle Creek
06:59:04 Eagle
Thanks Angels
Angels angels
06:57:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Apricot is ee and prlprl with no creme
Eagle Creek
06:57:32 Eagle
Stud*
Eagle Creek
06:57:11 Eagle
What sort of stuf would I need for an apricot?

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Critique Please August 20, 2019 08:00 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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New ones
https://i.postimg.cc/HxjZHKVz/DE56-D190-08-A0-459-B-977-F-E5-D27-C1-C0-C66.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/3R6LwBGT/231-C5429-2621-4-CED-AC53-E77-B38177-F15.jpg

Edited at August 20, 2019 08:00 PM by Raindrop Ridge
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:17 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Even more new ones
https://i.postimg.cc/sxx0vNS6/5411-CEE4-683-F-417-A-9-A35-598054-E49822.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/P5YVpZpj/726-A30-D0-E880-4-A35-B648-BE557-EB5077-C.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/zv4p3Xqv/B1-DC0-AD1-E38-B-40-C4-BDB8-2-D4-F5-BD602-EC.jpg
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:35 PM


Aussie Wattles
 
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They look a lot better!
They do still look kinda like a blob on the ground though. Thing about where the lights coming from and the shape of the horse. Looking at RL photos as well as others art can help give you an idea of where shadows should be. Make sure your edges are nice and soft. The hardness and the darkness/lightness of a shadow will vary between pieces.
Overall it just takes a lot of practice.

What device do you use for your art?
Critique Please September 1, 2019 02:02 AM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Hey Raindrop!

My best critique would be to work on realistic shadowing, like others have suggested. Your shadows are off to a great start! They are just too dark and too shapeless at the moment.

These DA tutorials might help!

https://www.deviantart.com/lady-entice/art/Shadow-tutorial-186362600

https://www.deviantart.com/xxsanuk/art/shadow-tutorial-for-GIMP-173291036


I would also make sure that your subject and background are well matched (size-wise). The second horse (the bay on the wood pier) stands out the most for me. He is pretty tiny, compared to the wood planks. :)

Otherwise, you do a pretty good job of finding stock with decent matching lighting/coloration to your backgrounds. Keep practicing! So many things come from just trying new things. <3 You are on your way.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 10:05 AM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Thanks Trigg and Aussie, IÂ’ll try that next time, I think itÂ’ll really help.
Aussie, I use my iPad, but sometimes my Computer.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 07:06 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Any pricing help would be nice too.

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