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Back after making the suggested edits. Thoughts now? :3
Ironclad Roan Estate said:
Hard critique, please? I'm trying to get better with each piece, particularly with the lighting.
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it's very good! the alteration definitely changed it for the better |
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hey... i'm back again >_> i really want to try diminish any consistent faults in my art, i mean that's how you improve, no? i think using larger red stock definitely helps my art, i mena the quality as far better. i don't usually do softer lighting :/ so i'm not sure if it looks right, but i was super proud of the color ( it was from bay so not that impressive really, but it's neat ) edit: plz zoom, it's very big haha |
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I love the positioning, the color, and the overall entire aspect of this. It's unique and honestly I love the blur in the foreground and the background, draws you to the detail of the horse. My critiques are very small. You have harsher lines on the outside of the horse, and rest is very soft looking. I'd add the sharper lines to the face muscles, legs, etc. Make it crisp all over, or softer all over. |
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thankyou ^-^ imma go run to ibis now lol |
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i'm back with a slightly different kinda piece, based of the direhorses from Avatar ( it's clicky, please zoom ) |
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Is there a trick for turning grey noses pink? I'm using a grey horse stock, but my desired outcome has some pink. The trouble mainly is that the face is in front of the body so I'm worried about 'pinking' over areas I don't want too. Also any tips for drawing jewellery or should I try finding stock for that? Asking mainly because I don't know how detailed to make it and I don't want it looking flat. |
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Over the Garden Wall said:
Is there a trick for turning grey noses pink? I'm using a grey horse stock, but my desired outcome has some pink. The trouble mainly is that the face is in front of the body so I'm worried about 'pinking' over areas I don't want too. Also any tips for drawing jewellery or should I try finding stock for that? Asking mainly because I don't know how detailed to make it and I don't want it looking flat.
i'd draw greyish pink-orange ( anything in between the two ) on overland or possibly one of the lightening layers and jsut erase around the nose once you've blended it out :) as for jewell's i'm afraid i can't be much help |
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Exibit A clicky as always i'm really proud of this haha but it still needs critique, always room for improvement please not pick ( PS: zoom in on the people taking pictures if your looking for attention to detail :) |
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If I zoom in some I can see the faults in your white lining. Try to clean that up a bit if you can. There's also a small sharp dip that's throwing me off. Just past where the horse body meets the fish part. Try and smooth that out (: great work though. My jaw literally dropped when I seen it. |
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Crisp, Clear, and Cool
