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Motonemi
09:20:27 AL, mum to Nemi
Is it w4 or 5 for one year olds tomorrow?
The Old Gods
09:18:26 Void Malign
I shan't. There's 1500+ cases in the queue
The Morning Manes
09:17:02 Sam/Zane
is there a way to make more money...cuz i got a serious spending problem and can't even save a bit lol
Pon Brats
09:16:11 
Enjoy! ;D
The Old Gods
09:15:40 Void Malign
alright. To work I go
Pon Brats
09:14:41 
at least they are staying kind of small :C
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Pon Brats
09:12:35 
I mean.. he could have ended up Pon -.-
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Pon Brats
09:12:04 
one* i really can't type today
Pon Brats
09:11:46 
i can't decide which on to use for her second embryo and her last year next month
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The Old Gods
09:11:24 Void Malign
...Also the quiet resigned sigh I made when I found out work's production program was down for 4+ hours yesterday x_x
The Old Gods
09:10:01 Void Malign
x) I mean. I'm willing to put him to good use lololool
At Wit's End
09:09:29 Gosky
boy* gheez. Gotta love the stuffy nosed brainfarts
Motonemi
09:09:13 AL, mum to Nemi
V is planned as second match :)
At Wit's End
09:09:08 Gosky
Now i got the #1 poy out of nowhere and i can't even use him. Welp
At Wit's End
09:08:16 Gosky
honestly, that's what i do on some of the smaller accounts too, Eury. That's how Pon Brats has been until that random Dodger popped up.
The Old Gods
09:08:00 Void Malign
...I say this despite having ignored doing any breeding on my newest account lmfao
Motonemi
09:07:57 AL, mum to Nemi
My X and WBs are doing awesome, my TBs are ok and my rids are supermoody
At Wit's End
09:07:34 Gosky
Looks great, though i am biased <.< Use V xD
The Old Gods
09:07:22 Void Malign
I have 5, currently. Debating #6 as a purely fuck around type thing.
Motonemi
09:06:35 AL, mum to Nemi
Tosk, what do you think about this?

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Motonemi
09:20:27 AL, mum to Nemi
Is it w4 or 5 for one year olds tomorrow?
The Old Gods
09:18:26 Void Malign
I shan't. There's 1500+ cases in the queue
The Morning Manes
09:17:02 Sam/Zane
is there a way to make more money...cuz i got a serious spending problem and can't even save a bit lol
Pon Brats
09:16:11 
Enjoy! ;D
The Old Gods
09:15:40 Void Malign
alright. To work I go
Pon Brats
09:14:41 
at least they are staying kind of small :C
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Pon Brats
09:12:35 
I mean.. he could have ended up Pon -.-
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Pon Brats
09:12:04 
one* i really can't type today
Pon Brats
09:11:46 
i can't decide which on to use for her second embryo and her last year next month
-HEE Click-
The Old Gods
09:11:24 Void Malign
...Also the quiet resigned sigh I made when I found out work's production program was down for 4+ hours yesterday x_x
The Old Gods
09:10:01 Void Malign
x) I mean. I'm willing to put him to good use lololool
At Wit's End
09:09:29 Gosky
boy* gheez. Gotta love the stuffy nosed brainfarts
Motonemi
09:09:13 AL, mum to Nemi
V is planned as second match :)
At Wit's End
09:09:08 Gosky
Now i got the #1 poy out of nowhere and i can't even use him. Welp
At Wit's End
09:08:16 Gosky
honestly, that's what i do on some of the smaller accounts too, Eury. That's how Pon Brats has been until that random Dodger popped up.
The Old Gods
09:08:00 Void Malign
...I say this despite having ignored doing any breeding on my newest account lmfao
Motonemi
09:07:57 AL, mum to Nemi
My X and WBs are doing awesome, my TBs are ok and my rids are supermoody
At Wit's End
09:07:34 Gosky
Looks great, though i am biased <.< Use V xD
The Old Gods
09:07:22 Void Malign
I have 5, currently. Debating #6 as a purely fuck around type thing.
Motonemi
09:06:35 AL, mum to Nemi
Tosk, what do you think about this?

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The Official Art Critique Forum January 18, 2022 11:30 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Its my first time doing an lepoard appaloosa, so it is quite sloppy! I tried smuding the spots to make it look more like it belongs to the horse, I tried almost every opacity and it still looked horrible. Any suggestions? Also ignore the ugly tail, I tried something new and never again 😂
This is a WIP so I haven't even started grounding/lighting or the hooves so please also ignore that haha
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Oh also idiot me didn't realize I didn't have to have a thousand spots so sorry about that x)
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The Official Art Critique Forum January 18, 2022 11:55 PM


Ironclad Roan Estate
 
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I'd tone down on the number of spots and not make them so even throughout; Appy spots are typically more sporadic in nature. Something that I find helpful is to paint around the edges of the spots at a lower opacity, also - the "meeting point" of the white and colored hairs tends to be mixed.

~Pegasus Lane~ said:
Its my first time doing an lepoard appaloosa, so it is quite sloppy! I tried smuding the spots to make it look more like it belongs to the horse, I tried almost every opacity and it still looked horrible. Any suggestions? Also ignore the ugly tail, I tried something new and never again 😂
This is a WIP so I haven't even started grounding/lighting or the hooves so please also ignore that haha
Image is clicky
Oh also idiot me didn't realize I didn't have to have a thousand spots so sorry about that x)
WIP-REARING-HORSE.jpg


The Official Art Critique Forum January 19, 2022 12:03 AM


Pegasus Lane
 
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Double :-)

Edited at January 21, 2022 02:53 PM by ~Pegasus Lane~
The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2022 09:53 AM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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first time trying wings!
not sure how i feel aout it
also repainted some of the hair!
mrsmoo
The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2022 03:45 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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This looks lovely! One thing I can see is the fact that the wings don't seem to belong too well. Theres no muscles or whatever that make the wings look like it belongs.
Try using this as a reference!
The second thing i the horse seems to have no shadow on the background.
The mane looks fantasic! Keep up the great work
The Official Art Critique Forum January 24, 2022 03:45 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
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double ;-;

Edited at January 24, 2022 03:46 PM by ~Pegasus Lane~
The Official Art Critique Forum January 25, 2022 03:10 AM

Former Stable
 
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Thistleberry Farm said:
first time trying wings!
not sure how i feel aout it
also repainted some of the hair!
mrsmoo


There is something about your pieces that I really like. The horse matches the background quite well. The mane looks good but could possibly use more definition, there are heaps of tutorials (even here on HEE), I reccomend looking at some of them. Don't forget a shadow! I see lots of people forget but it really takes your grounding to the next level
The Official Art Critique Forum January 28, 2022 09:12 AM


Cain Manor
 
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i'm obviously still working on it but what do y'all think? do i need to fix anything?
The Official Art Critique Forum January 28, 2022 09:48 AM


HMH Reality Check
 
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Cool perspective!
The Official Art Critique Forum February 3, 2022 03:20 PM


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Some critique on this... It's the first completed manip with my new body prep!

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