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Rusty Meadows
10:20:54 Rusty
jester
low rise you say? hmm
KPH Equestrian
10:20:30 Rapcoon | Jester
athena
yeah same lol. I love how zoey raps though xD
ghost light stables
10:20:25 Ghost rapcoon(the og
I love the way the plot and how well the characters are written, I just don't like movies where theirs a ton of singing and kpop isn't really my style of music :3
FirstLightFarms
10:20:21 puck
Oh gotcha. That's still exciting!
Rusty Meadows
10:20:18 Rusty
I have been spawned
KPDH is amazing and in the next movie they better bring jinu back or I'm throwing hands
I also wanna see mysterys face
KPH Equestrian
10:20:03 Rapcoon | Jester
rusty
it issss I love that shirt
id wear it with jeans if my last good pair weren't low rise x'D
Sunset River Arabian
10:19:39 Athena - AAs
Puck
Lol Amazon. I'm a self publisher

Jester
Takedown is okay but not one I'd blast in the car for whatever reason
FirstLightFarms
10:19:10 puck
Also KPDH is so fucking good. The writing is phenomenal the songs are incredible I genuinely love all the characters. It has a bird with a hat. Zero notes, absolute perfect movie
ghost light stables
10:19:01 Ghost rapcoon(the og
I've got the same question as Puck ^^
Rusty Meadows
10:18:49 Rusty
and its not giving school uniform THAT much, if anything my outfit was more school uniform lol, plus the shirt is super cute
KPH Equestrian
10:18:43 Rapcoon | Jester
athena
how its done is such a banger omg
FirstLightFarms
10:18:34 puck
Where is it published ๐Ÿ‘€
KPH Equestrian
10:18:28 Rapcoon | Jester
rusty
๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ i cant thpell

yeah but like. i could do better๐Ÿฅ€
Sunset River Arabian
10:18:06 Athena - AAs
Golden and How its done have become favorites lol
ghost light stables
10:17:44 Ghost rapcoon(the og
I honestly don't like the movie or the songs o.O
Rusty Meadows
10:17:38 Rusty
lmao fursty I'm actually dead from that misspell

jester
but like in a good way
Sunset River Arabian
10:17:31 Athena - AAs
dulcie
Maybe if it was written better I'd be more into it but its insanely cheesy, dumb and childish. To be fair I wrote the first draft at 13 and published it 7 years later after several harsh rounds of editing but it stills reads as childish I think
KPH Equestrian
10:17:03 Rapcoon | Jester
glacier
if you like animated movies and older disney movies, yes. its got a modern animation style but the music is exactly what new disney movies are lacking
Glacier Bay Cove
10:16:41 Glacier Katz
Or listen to it’s music
Oasis Ridge Farms
10:16:41 Dandy
I love KPDH!!

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Rusty Meadows
10:20:54 Rusty
jester
low rise you say? hmm
KPH Equestrian
10:20:30 Rapcoon | Jester
athena
yeah same lol. I love how zoey raps though xD
ghost light stables
10:20:25 Ghost rapcoon(the og
I love the way the plot and how well the characters are written, I just don't like movies where theirs a ton of singing and kpop isn't really my style of music :3
FirstLightFarms
10:20:21 puck
Oh gotcha. That's still exciting!
Rusty Meadows
10:20:18 Rusty
I have been spawned
KPDH is amazing and in the next movie they better bring jinu back or I'm throwing hands
I also wanna see mysterys face
KPH Equestrian
10:20:03 Rapcoon | Jester
rusty
it issss I love that shirt
id wear it with jeans if my last good pair weren't low rise x'D
Sunset River Arabian
10:19:39 Athena - AAs
Puck
Lol Amazon. I'm a self publisher

Jester
Takedown is okay but not one I'd blast in the car for whatever reason
FirstLightFarms
10:19:10 puck
Also KPDH is so fucking good. The writing is phenomenal the songs are incredible I genuinely love all the characters. It has a bird with a hat. Zero notes, absolute perfect movie
ghost light stables
10:19:01 Ghost rapcoon(the og
I've got the same question as Puck ^^
Rusty Meadows
10:18:49 Rusty
and its not giving school uniform THAT much, if anything my outfit was more school uniform lol, plus the shirt is super cute
KPH Equestrian
10:18:43 Rapcoon | Jester
athena
how its done is such a banger omg
FirstLightFarms
10:18:34 puck
Where is it published ๐Ÿ‘€
KPH Equestrian
10:18:28 Rapcoon | Jester
rusty
๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ i cant thpell

yeah but like. i could do better๐Ÿฅ€
Sunset River Arabian
10:18:06 Athena - AAs
Golden and How its done have become favorites lol
ghost light stables
10:17:44 Ghost rapcoon(the og
I honestly don't like the movie or the songs o.O
Rusty Meadows
10:17:38 Rusty
lmao fursty I'm actually dead from that misspell

jester
but like in a good way
Sunset River Arabian
10:17:31 Athena - AAs
dulcie
Maybe if it was written better I'd be more into it but its insanely cheesy, dumb and childish. To be fair I wrote the first draft at 13 and published it 7 years later after several harsh rounds of editing but it stills reads as childish I think
KPH Equestrian
10:17:03 Rapcoon | Jester
glacier
if you like animated movies and older disney movies, yes. its got a modern animation style but the music is exactly what new disney movies are lacking
Glacier Bay Cove
10:16:41 Glacier Katz
Or listen to it’s music
Oasis Ridge Farms
10:16:41 Dandy
I love KPDH!!

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The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 06:22 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20954441
Latest piece. I'm starting to enjoy my style more! What do y'all think?
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 06:30 PM


White Oak Manor
 
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Purple Pegasus Farm said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3JYnQyxn/resizedimage.jpg

Thoughts on this guy?




Guess this got overlooked? Still looking for critique. :)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 18, 2019 09:22 PM


Fox Haven Farm
 
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Purple Pegasus Farm said:


Purple Pegasus Farm said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3JYnQyxn/resizedimage.jpg

Thoughts on this guy?




Guess this got overlooked? Still looking for critique. :)



Hi! Overall, I think this is a lovely piece. A couple of notes. First, I think the cropping is causing a bit of tension. What I mean by that is the nose of the horse and the tip of his ear is rubbing up against the frame and causing visual tension. I would nudge him over a few tabs to the right to ease this and make his head more centered. I think the lighting and color scheme meshes well. Secondly, the credits are difficult to make out but it could just be the render size in the forums. Thirdly, the lighting from the background suggests this horse should be slightly backlight from the lamplight. You have two competing light sources currently, one from the back (from the background) and one from the left (foreground). I would try to even this out a bit by adding a subtle halo around the horse's head/neck.
The Official Art Critique Forum November 19, 2019 12:16 AM


Tanglewood
 
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AnimeAcres said:


Tanglewood said:
https://i.postimg.cc/3NZHNyJh/Ignitor-ed-commission.png

Thoughts? Sorry, I know the lighting sucks


It looks good. I would give the horse a more Orange ish lighting or over shade if you know what I mean.

Okay :) Thanks!
The Official Art Critique Forum November 20, 2019 01:03 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/pVKJSHC9/Untitled128-min.jpg
Most recent needs a critique!
The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 04:44 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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My most recent piece I'd like critique on:

https://i.postimg.cc/bvTbX4sJ/Buckskin-Premade-Pond.png
The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 04:46 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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This is very pretty!
Firstly try not making the markings and the hirse itself so bright, it looks glowy and quite unnatural, Tey using shadows to adjust that

Blur/smudge the highlights, anf lower the opacity slightly so their not as 'out there'

Try blurring the bg a bit to add more focus to the horse

Overall a lovely peice

Breezie Rose said:
https://i.postimg.cc/pVKJSHC9/Untitled128-min.jpg
Most recent needs a critique!



The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 04:48 PM


Sunset Grove Farm
 
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Gosh this is stunning!
Try adding some highlights to the mane, so it doesn't look just like a block fo black if that makes sense

Other than that I can't really think of anything else :')

Golden Hall Stables said:
My most recent piece I'd like critique on:

https://i.postimg.cc/bvTbX4sJ/Buckskin-Premade-Pond.png



The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 09:43 PM

Former Stable
 
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Critique? :D

https://i.postimg.cc/0j88w818/Yellow.jpg
The Official Art Critique Forum November 21, 2019 09:43 PM

Former Stable
 
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Double post.

Edited at November 21, 2019 09:43 PM by Lazy Duck Elites

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