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ghost light stables
01:46:32 Toaster rapcoon
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Anyone want to help me match this girly?
Guinness Hollow
01:43:41 Dimmed | RID
Thank you <3
Tenebris Hollow
01:40:40 Aris/Maki
Oooh dimmy she's gorg
Guinness Hollow
01:38:41 Dimmed | RID
Alright what stud for this girl
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Blindandi or the #9 boy who's unnamed freshie
Sweet Valley
01:35:32 Anna/Jewel
it wont verify it
Greenheart Stables
01:34:11 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Hi myth
Alpine Acres
01:33:44 Lily
Anna
what issues are you having exactly?
Sweet Valley
01:31:40 Anna/Jewel
I cant click ther verfication thingy for discord.. :(
Sycamore Sands
01:31:07 Dimmed | SH/PON?
Perfect thank you!!
Alpine Acres
01:30:57 Lily
white, it's easy to sign up! But I get some people don't enjoy using Discord ;)
Nightingales Ridge
01:30:08 𔓘 Issy
-HEE Click-
Mythological
01:30:05 Crowley | Krampus
Hi Green
Nightingales Ridge
01:29:41 𔓘 Issy
Well its ToTo if you want the correct answer LOL
Sweet Valley
01:28:45 Anna/Jewel
Lily - oh
Nightingales Ridge
01:28:35 𔓘 Issy
Oh this whole time I could guess decently no gene test
Whitewolf
01:28:18 
Stinks I don’t have discord. But good luck to anyone playing 🥂
Greenheart Stables
01:28:10 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-HEE Click-
Blood bay is growing on me again
Alpine Acres
01:27:41 Lily
Anna
we have moved to Discord now, since the beginning of this year :)
Mythological
01:27:20 Crowley | Krampus
ToTo and Toto have different patterns.
Sycamore Sands
01:27:06 Dimmed | SH/PON?
Toto and ToTo have multiple different patterns each. I just don't remember what that one is

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ghost light stables
01:46:32 Toaster rapcoon
-HEE Click-

Anyone want to help me match this girly?
Guinness Hollow
01:43:41 Dimmed | RID
Thank you <3
Tenebris Hollow
01:40:40 Aris/Maki
Oooh dimmy she's gorg
Guinness Hollow
01:38:41 Dimmed | RID
Alright what stud for this girl
-HEE Click-

Blindandi or the #9 boy who's unnamed freshie
Sweet Valley
01:35:32 Anna/Jewel
it wont verify it
Greenheart Stables
01:34:11 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
Hi myth
Alpine Acres
01:33:44 Lily
Anna
what issues are you having exactly?
Sweet Valley
01:31:40 Anna/Jewel
I cant click ther verfication thingy for discord.. :(
Sycamore Sands
01:31:07 Dimmed | SH/PON?
Perfect thank you!!
Alpine Acres
01:30:57 Lily
white, it's easy to sign up! But I get some people don't enjoy using Discord ;)
Nightingales Ridge
01:30:08 𔓘 Issy
-HEE Click-
Mythological
01:30:05 Crowley | Krampus
Hi Green
Nightingales Ridge
01:29:41 𔓘 Issy
Well its ToTo if you want the correct answer LOL
Sweet Valley
01:28:45 Anna/Jewel
Lily - oh
Nightingales Ridge
01:28:35 𔓘 Issy
Oh this whole time I could guess decently no gene test
Whitewolf
01:28:18 
Stinks I don’t have discord. But good luck to anyone playing 🥂
Greenheart Stables
01:28:10 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-HEE Click-
Blood bay is growing on me again
Alpine Acres
01:27:41 Lily
Anna
we have moved to Discord now, since the beginning of this year :)
Mythological
01:27:20 Crowley | Krampus
ToTo and Toto have different patterns.
Sycamore Sands
01:27:06 Dimmed | SH/PON?
Toto and ToTo have multiple different patterns each. I just don't remember what that one is

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The Official Art Critique Forum June 29, 2021 08:08 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Thank you kindly, Gem! ^^
The Official Art Critique Forum July 16, 2021 09:57 AM


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Aight, looking for critique on the piece in general, but specifically on the mane/tail (I tried a new technique for those.) I'm aware the background wasn't blurred out smoothly, that's just laziness on my part xD But otherwise, rip it to shreads! (Would love a good reflection/shadow tutorial if anyone has one.)
The Official Art Critique Forum July 21, 2021 02:41 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

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The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2021 07:44 PM

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This is sick. I love the idea.
My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground.
Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good
As far as getting it to look dynamic, add streaks of bubbles in a downward motion (like this: https://dissolve.com/video/Underwater-splash-bubbles-slow-royalty-free-stock-video-footage/001-D26-9-733) and more air bubbles around the back end of the horse. Adding whiter splashes and ripples near the contact points of water can help and here are some brushes you can download if you have PS: https://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/57610-free-splash-photoshop-brushes
Hope this helps

CC Knabbstruppers said:
I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

ante-hamersmit-0n-Aqtb7-FL-0-unsplash.png




Edited at July 27, 2021 07:46 PM by Timber Canyon
The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2021 08:10 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Timber Canyon said:
This is sick. I love the idea.
My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground.
Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good
As far as getting it to look dynamic, add streaks of bubbles in a downward motion (like this: https://dissolve.com/video/Underwater-splash-bubbles-slow-royalty-free-stock-video-footage/001-D26-9-733) and more air bubbles around the back end of the horse. Adding whiter splashes and ripples near the contact points of water can help and here are some brushes you can download if you have PS: https://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/57610-free-splash-photoshop-brushes
Hope this helps

CC Knabbstruppers said:
I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

ante-hamersmit-0n-Aqtb7-FL-0-unsplash.png





Thank you so much Timbie! X3

Also, I'll go ahead and chuck the finished product in as well: Did a bit of blurring in that background, but I feel like it's still too much. ^^'

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Edited at July 27, 2021 08:22 PM by CC Knabbstruppers
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 02:34 PM

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The only stock I used for this piece was lineart for the horse. Everything else is hand painted. With that being said, tear it apart. Tell me what's ugly, what's pretty, and what can be improved upon.
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 06:06 PM


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Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it.

Edited at July 28, 2021 06:07 PM by Yellowtail Ranch
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 06:22 PM

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Yellowtail Ranch said:
Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it.


On the sand you can see that there is a shadow, but the horse doesn't have a shadow. I'd start by adding that :) You could also add a touch of shadowing under the mane, to give it more depth. The horse itself looks nice. The pinkish sand actually looks quite nice, I would just add a light source, whether that be finding a stock image of a sunset and adding that in or making your own, it would add more life into the piece.
The Official Art Critique Forum August 3, 2021 10:33 AM


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Screen-Shot-2021-08-03-at-11-13-48-AM.pngAny critiques on this are appreciated! Its obviously not finished, and I need to fix the hooves, but other than that I'm curious as to what I can do to make this better:) This is my first time doing art in about a year and a half lol

Edited at August 3, 2021 10:39 AM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum August 3, 2021 10:42 AM

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Critique on this, please! I painted the pattern myself :)

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