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Morning Glory Farms
12:00:37 Terici/Dino/Trish
Not sure if youre still here PK lol but if you need any help with anything you can DM me on here and I can help you
Moriarty
11:44:00 Mori
I completely forgot about her 😆
-HEE Click-
WyomingQueen
11:41:12 WyoCopenhagenGirl
I understand that all too well. my one toddler is in preschool but my other toddler is still at home and they make me want to rip my hair out
AP Legacy
11:20:11 ✨ Sassy
My toddler is going to start kindergarten in February and I cannot !! wait xD
Glacier Bay Cove
11:16:54 Glacier Kittens
Being sick is never fun
Calela Eventing
11:09:43 Cali
God I hate being sick
Fossil's Dreams
11:07:42 PK or Fossil
Oh I hope so! I had an account once there never verified it so had to create a new one lol that was fun
Morning Glory Farms
11:06:30 Terici/Dino/Trish
Thanks PK! its gonna be so super easy! so much easier for everyone compared to chatzy
Looking Glass Stable
11:02:09 IA Glass 👋
Oh she's lovely, Lilac! Congrats on a fabulous capture ♡ Are you considering gen-testing her since she's Grey? (:
Glacier Bay Cove
11:00:44 Glacier Kittens
REALLY screaming at my device right now
PK Rescue Stable
10:53:34 Fossil-sore
hey Trish, nice job! I hope I can get it right on Sunday lol
All Breeds
10:51:23 Fawn
Plus unfortunately not a whole lot of people play DT compared to HEE and WP so it's sadly dead
All Breeds
10:50:34 Fawn
The reason being is that the server is going away and the code is not compatible with the new server.
Transformers Acres
10:48:09 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Fawn

Why is DT shutting down?? :(
Fairytale Paints
10:47:45 Im Elf
This stomach flu is hell...
All Breeds
10:46:53 Fawn
I just saw that DT will be shutting down in about a month or so. I'm gonna miss my dragons
Glacier Bay Cove
10:46:42 Glacier Kittens
Exploding
Glacier Bay Cove
10:46:07 Glacier Kittens
Why, Fawn
All Breeds
10:43:30 Fawn
I'm sad now 😭
Transformers Acres
10:41:22 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I popped something on me, and when I say I met fucking JESUS. My ass saw the whole damn galaxy. X_X

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Morning Glory Farms
12:00:37 Terici/Dino/Trish
Not sure if youre still here PK lol but if you need any help with anything you can DM me on here and I can help you
Moriarty
11:44:00 Mori
I completely forgot about her 😆
-HEE Click-
WyomingQueen
11:41:12 WyoCopenhagenGirl
I understand that all too well. my one toddler is in preschool but my other toddler is still at home and they make me want to rip my hair out
AP Legacy
11:20:11 ✨ Sassy
My toddler is going to start kindergarten in February and I cannot !! wait xD
Glacier Bay Cove
11:16:54 Glacier Kittens
Being sick is never fun
Calela Eventing
11:09:43 Cali
God I hate being sick
Fossil's Dreams
11:07:42 PK or Fossil
Oh I hope so! I had an account once there never verified it so had to create a new one lol that was fun
Morning Glory Farms
11:06:30 Terici/Dino/Trish
Thanks PK! its gonna be so super easy! so much easier for everyone compared to chatzy
Looking Glass Stable
11:02:09 IA Glass 👋
Oh she's lovely, Lilac! Congrats on a fabulous capture ♡ Are you considering gen-testing her since she's Grey? (:
Glacier Bay Cove
11:00:44 Glacier Kittens
REALLY screaming at my device right now
PK Rescue Stable
10:53:34 Fossil-sore
hey Trish, nice job! I hope I can get it right on Sunday lol
All Breeds
10:51:23 Fawn
Plus unfortunately not a whole lot of people play DT compared to HEE and WP so it's sadly dead
All Breeds
10:50:34 Fawn
The reason being is that the server is going away and the code is not compatible with the new server.
Transformers Acres
10:48:09 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Fawn

Why is DT shutting down?? :(
Fairytale Paints
10:47:45 Im Elf
This stomach flu is hell...
All Breeds
10:46:53 Fawn
I just saw that DT will be shutting down in about a month or so. I'm gonna miss my dragons
Glacier Bay Cove
10:46:42 Glacier Kittens
Exploding
Glacier Bay Cove
10:46:07 Glacier Kittens
Why, Fawn
All Breeds
10:43:30 Fawn
I'm sad now 😭
Transformers Acres
10:41:22 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I popped something on me, and when I say I met fucking JESUS. My ass saw the whole damn galaxy. X_X

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The Official Art Critique Forum June 29, 2021 08:08 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Thank you kindly, Gem! ^^
The Official Art Critique Forum July 16, 2021 09:57 AM


Tanglewood
 
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Aight, looking for critique on the piece in general, but specifically on the mane/tail (I tried a new technique for those.) I'm aware the background wasn't blurred out smoothly, that's just laziness on my part xD But otherwise, rip it to shreads! (Would love a good reflection/shadow tutorial if anyone has one.)
The Official Art Critique Forum July 21, 2021 02:41 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

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The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2021 07:44 PM

Former Stable
 
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This is sick. I love the idea.
My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground.
Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good
As far as getting it to look dynamic, add streaks of bubbles in a downward motion (like this: https://dissolve.com/video/Underwater-splash-bubbles-slow-royalty-free-stock-video-footage/001-D26-9-733) and more air bubbles around the back end of the horse. Adding whiter splashes and ripples near the contact points of water can help and here are some brushes you can download if you have PS: https://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/57610-free-splash-photoshop-brushes
Hope this helps

CC Knabbstruppers said:
I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

ante-hamersmit-0n-Aqtb7-FL-0-unsplash.png




Edited at July 27, 2021 07:46 PM by Timber Canyon
The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2021 08:10 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Timber Canyon said:
This is sick. I love the idea.
My trouble with this piece is the horse is very detailed the background is even moreso, so my eyes do not get drawn to the horse because the background is too bright and the horse is too dark. You can blur the background to bring the horse more the foreground.
Amazing job on the detail, especially the underwater part and the face - looks REALLY good
As far as getting it to look dynamic, add streaks of bubbles in a downward motion (like this: https://dissolve.com/video/Underwater-splash-bubbles-slow-royalty-free-stock-video-footage/001-D26-9-733) and more air bubbles around the back end of the horse. Adding whiter splashes and ripples near the contact points of water can help and here are some brushes you can download if you have PS: https://www.brusheezy.com/brushes/57610-free-splash-photoshop-brushes
Hope this helps

CC Knabbstruppers said:
I need some serious help with this guy! I need to add splashes to him, around the front legs and bubble under the water to show he's moving, but I'm at a loss as to how I might do that! Any help is greatly appreciated! ^^

ante-hamersmit-0n-Aqtb7-FL-0-unsplash.png





Thank you so much Timbie! X3

Also, I'll go ahead and chuck the finished product in as well: Did a bit of blurring in that background, but I feel like it's still too much. ^^'

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Edited at July 27, 2021 08:22 PM by CC Knabbstruppers
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 02:34 PM

Former Stable
 
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The only stock I used for this piece was lineart for the horse. Everything else is hand painted. With that being said, tear it apart. Tell me what's ugly, what's pretty, and what can be improved upon.
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 06:06 PM


Tranquility
 
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Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it.

Edited at July 28, 2021 06:07 PM by Yellowtail Ranch
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2021 06:22 PM

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Yellowtail Ranch said:
Rip it apart!! I can change anything. I kinda feel like something is off with the bg though. Yes. I know it's really red. For some reason, it didn't look that red at all before I saved it so I'll go back and change it.


On the sand you can see that there is a shadow, but the horse doesn't have a shadow. I'd start by adding that :) You could also add a touch of shadowing under the mane, to give it more depth. The horse itself looks nice. The pinkish sand actually looks quite nice, I would just add a light source, whether that be finding a stock image of a sunset and adding that in or making your own, it would add more life into the piece.
The Official Art Critique Forum August 3, 2021 10:33 AM


Trillium Acres
 
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Screen-Shot-2021-08-03-at-11-13-48-AM.pngAny critiques on this are appreciated! Its obviously not finished, and I need to fix the hooves, but other than that I'm curious as to what I can do to make this better:) This is my first time doing art in about a year and a half lol

Edited at August 3, 2021 10:39 AM by Trillium Acres
The Official Art Critique Forum August 3, 2021 10:42 AM

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Critique on this, please! I painted the pattern myself :)

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