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Angels angels
03:49:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
If it happens again I will find somewhere elss to work
Escott Estate
03:49:30 ~Del~
Exactly!
Angels angels
03:49:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Right now I am just going to do as I am told and let them handle the stuff I am not allowed to do anymore. See how much longer it takes them and what doesn't get done. Let them see I am not the issue.
Versailles
03:48:39 Versa
Realistically, I just don't think some people want others there, was more my point. And will constantly bend and morph rules to try and make you miserable.
Versailles
03:47:45 Versa
Del,
Well, she was whiny in general, too. I was too small to pick up a german shepherd safely and refused, suddenly it was passed off as "refusing work."

Amongst other things.

One time she snapped at me for "snarking" at her when I said, in a polite tone, "alright, I understand" to something she explained.
Escott Estate
03:46:17 ~Del~
Versa,

Thats such an odd reason to fire someone lol
Escott Estate
03:45:45 ~Del~
If thats truly how it is there, then I would start looking for a new position. Working in an environment where you have to constantly second guess yourself is stressful. Not good for the mental :)
Versailles
03:43:19 Versa
My prior internship I got "fired" from. Why? An older lady who was overseeing me and all of my daily activities dropped a can of treats on the floor. She looked really in pain when she bent over to pick them up, so I offered to help.

She looked like I just screamed an insult at her...
Angels angels
03:42:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Del
But like I said there is always two workers and we do it all together. The main person I work with and do everything with is the Manager, which is the owners second in command
Escott Estate
03:41:54 ~Del~
Sometimes people will explain how to do something one way but actually complete the task another. We dont always completely verbalize our process. There might be some unspoken rules that are at play here that you can only see if you shadow the task. Im sure this is frustrating.
Angels angels
03:41:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wichypoo
Yep. That is one of the main reasons I left my last job. I worked there for almost 6 years and did everything the same way all those years which is the way I was taught and told by the owner. Then suddenly everything I was doing was wrong.
SandWitch Arabians
03:40:35 Witchypoo
I hate those kinds of Bosses. What's right one day, is wrong the next.
Angels angels
03:40:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I mean two workers work every day and we do everything together.
Escott Estate
03:39:44 ~Del~
I would ask to shadow the owner or a coworker again for those tasks. Maybe a step in the task is escaping you and you don’t even realize it.
Transformers Acres
03:39:42 Geek, Eek
Witchypoo

Well, the owner can't have it both ways. They can't train their employees one way, and do the same thing a different way. It's just gonna confuse, and piss off said workers. They get paid to do what they're trained to do.
Angels angels
03:38:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Witchypoo
The way I was trained is the way she says it is supposed to be done. I seriously don't understand
Angels angels
03:37:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Del
I think so but I don't know. She will say one thing one day then say it is wrong another day. I only do things the way I was told or shown to do but then it is wrong.
SandWitch Arabians
03:37:23 Witchypoo
You're just a 'worker bee'.
Do what you're told, regardless of how you were trained.
Escott Estate
03:36:11 ~Del~
Is the owner the type is person where they need to do things themselves in order for it to feel like it was done right? The issue could have nothing to do with you personally. Are there other workers there you could ask to see if there is something that you might be missing?
Angels angels
03:35:01 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Witchypoo
I thought I was. I was doing everything the way I was trained

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Angels angels
03:49:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
If it happens again I will find somewhere elss to work
Escott Estate
03:49:30 ~Del~
Exactly!
Angels angels
03:49:29 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Right now I am just going to do as I am told and let them handle the stuff I am not allowed to do anymore. See how much longer it takes them and what doesn't get done. Let them see I am not the issue.
Versailles
03:48:39 Versa
Realistically, I just don't think some people want others there, was more my point. And will constantly bend and morph rules to try and make you miserable.
Versailles
03:47:45 Versa
Del,
Well, she was whiny in general, too. I was too small to pick up a german shepherd safely and refused, suddenly it was passed off as "refusing work."

Amongst other things.

One time she snapped at me for "snarking" at her when I said, in a polite tone, "alright, I understand" to something she explained.
Escott Estate
03:46:17 ~Del~
Versa,

Thats such an odd reason to fire someone lol
Escott Estate
03:45:45 ~Del~
If thats truly how it is there, then I would start looking for a new position. Working in an environment where you have to constantly second guess yourself is stressful. Not good for the mental :)
Versailles
03:43:19 Versa
My prior internship I got "fired" from. Why? An older lady who was overseeing me and all of my daily activities dropped a can of treats on the floor. She looked really in pain when she bent over to pick them up, so I offered to help.

She looked like I just screamed an insult at her...
Angels angels
03:42:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Del
But like I said there is always two workers and we do it all together. The main person I work with and do everything with is the Manager, which is the owners second in command
Escott Estate
03:41:54 ~Del~
Sometimes people will explain how to do something one way but actually complete the task another. We dont always completely verbalize our process. There might be some unspoken rules that are at play here that you can only see if you shadow the task. Im sure this is frustrating.
Angels angels
03:41:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Wichypoo
Yep. That is one of the main reasons I left my last job. I worked there for almost 6 years and did everything the same way all those years which is the way I was taught and told by the owner. Then suddenly everything I was doing was wrong.
SandWitch Arabians
03:40:35 Witchypoo
I hate those kinds of Bosses. What's right one day, is wrong the next.
Angels angels
03:40:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I mean two workers work every day and we do everything together.
Escott Estate
03:39:44 ~Del~
I would ask to shadow the owner or a coworker again for those tasks. Maybe a step in the task is escaping you and you don’t even realize it.
Transformers Acres
03:39:42 Geek, Eek
Witchypoo

Well, the owner can't have it both ways. They can't train their employees one way, and do the same thing a different way. It's just gonna confuse, and piss off said workers. They get paid to do what they're trained to do.
Angels angels
03:38:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Witchypoo
The way I was trained is the way she says it is supposed to be done. I seriously don't understand
Angels angels
03:37:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Del
I think so but I don't know. She will say one thing one day then say it is wrong another day. I only do things the way I was told or shown to do but then it is wrong.
SandWitch Arabians
03:37:23 Witchypoo
You're just a 'worker bee'.
Do what you're told, regardless of how you were trained.
Escott Estate
03:36:11 ~Del~
Is the owner the type is person where they need to do things themselves in order for it to feel like it was done right? The issue could have nothing to do with you personally. Are there other workers there you could ask to see if there is something that you might be missing?
Angels angels
03:35:01 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Witchypoo
I thought I was. I was doing everything the way I was trained

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The Official Art Critique Forum March 28, 2021 03:35 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Purple Pegasus Farm said:
Apprehensive about posting this here because I think I probably could've done better. But I feel like I've hit a wall here and would like some pointers.


I LOVE the body prep you've done here!! The eyes and mane, beautiful! Great job! I especially like how shiny the hoof is :D
The only thing I would do differently here is blur the bg directly behind the horse and a bit to the left
Purple.png
What /I/ would do (please feel free to do as you like):
Red - blur the most, I use the PS gaussian blur filter at like 2-3
Blue - blur less, I do 1-1.5
Teal - hardly blur, At this point, I use the blur tool at 35(ish) strength and play around until It looks right.
This should bring more attention to the horse and bring the piece together nicely
I hope this helps! Poke me if you have any questions :D
The Official Art Critique Forum March 29, 2021 10:32 AM


Zomb
 
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Im looking for some guidance with this tail, I'm really struggling! Any sort of pointers would help also!
Be cruel 🥺
The Official Art Critique Forum April 1, 2021 04:29 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
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It's gorgeous, Zomb, but maybe add some more definition to the strands of the mane? It looks flat and all one color at the moment.
The Official Art Critique Forum April 1, 2021 04:33 PM


Zomb
 
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Cherry River Elites said:
It's gorgeous, Zomb, but maybe add some more definition to the strands of the mane? It looks flat and all one color at the moment.


Ah yes at that time it wasn't finished. This is it finished now

well the horse Avi cut
The Official Art Critique Forum April 1, 2021 04:35 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
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Yes that looks a lot better <3
The Official Art Critique Forum April 1, 2021 05:45 PM


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Rumble Team
 
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I would do something like this
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/24/ec/08/24ec082d8196c3e0590f509ca873d867.jpg
The Official Art Critique Forum April 10, 2021 08:13 PM


Gem
 
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Finally getting back into this XD
First off, would love any help you can provide about drawing fire. I'm pretty happy with this but I know there is always room to improve.
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@Night Shadow Stables
Looking at the kind of spooky black horse in the forest: I genuinely really like this piece. It's very smooth, clean, and aesthetically pleasing. The colors work well together as does the perspective. The first thing I would recommend taking a look at is the eyes. Front on eyes are the absolute hardest. The tricky part is making is look like the horse isn't looking in two directions at the same time. This can be adjusted by playing with iris placement. Secondly, ditch the thick white lines around the horse's butt and legs. I do agree that there should be stronger highlights there but not in that form. Add a shadow underneath the mane and horse and also a highlight to the left eye (horse's right). Also want to mention, this is me being very picky. I genuinely love this piece and definitely want to call dibs on it if you every consider selling <3
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@CC
This is probably one of my favorite pieces you've ever done. Body prep is wonderful along with the markings. Adore the jewelry. You're making my job hard and I love it. The highlights are too strong to be realistic but I think it works in this situation. The mane looks wonderful and very realistic but something feels slightly off about the tail even though I can't quite pinpoint what. Getting really picky here, make sure you are consistent when blurring the body for the prep. I can tell which places are more or less blurred. Overall, an incredible piece <3
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@Zomb
I don't honestly feel like this piece works. I like the wildness of the mane and tail and I like the way the stock sources fit together but... the lighting is completely throwing me off. You chose both horse and wing stock that already had strong highlights and shadows. These can't be converted up simply by lightly shading over them with black or such. If you want to use a stock image with high contrast, you make need to actually relapsing parts of the horse with the color of the horse's body and then add your shadows and highlights using darker and lighter shades of the same color. Same with the wings, the lighting is way off, the left wing especially. Make sure to be more consistent when blurring the horse in body prep, otherwise it's possible to pick out where you blurred more or less. The front legs aren't really working for me either. Besides lighting work, a clipping layer + a few swipes of an airbrush with the colors of the background would go a long way. Same with the face and stomach. Grounding - use a smaller brush to imitate the individual strands of grass. The horse itself is neatly cut out so I do commend you on that. Very fun horse pose, the piece just needs a little work <3
Edit: I'm going back and looking at the differences between the full image you posted and the horse avatar. (The previous notes are for the horse avi) I can see that you did a lot of blurring both with with horse and the background between the two pieces and I don't think that worked in your favor. I like the addition of the color on the front legs from the first image but it needs just a little more as I mentioned above.

Edited at April 10, 2021 08:16 PM by Gem
The Official Art Critique Forum April 10, 2021 08:52 PM


CC Knabbstruppers
 
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Thank you so much Gem!
The Official Art Critique Forum April 14, 2021 05:21 PM


Savannah Stables
 
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This is still a WIP since I don't feel like drawing on hair yet, but any critique is appreciated!
The Official Art Critique Forum April 14, 2021 05:41 PM


Gem
 
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@Savannah
First off, the eye is not equine. It genuinely looks like it belongs on a leopard or something 😜
If that's what you intended then you nailed it but if not, make the iris smaller/pupil bigger/highlight bigger. I like the smoothness of the body, grounding is nice. The only other part I'd look at is the muzzle. There's a sort of brown stripe on it that I don't think really works. I recommend picking a single color <3

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