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Angels angels
01:48:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Scp
Hoofbeats Equestrian
01:48:04 Trishcognito
what glass do you need?
Angels angels
01:47:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The med and glass of course lol The filly ones are just so I don't get colts
Primal Dawn
01:46:29 MOD/Trish
Guess that depends whats the most important for you for your breeding seasons
Angels angels
01:43:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I need to buy a glass, a sexed medallion, and loads of filly straws with a few filly embryos. I can't decide if I should focus on the medallion first just incase I don't get enough to get everything by RO or buy the cheaper stuff first
Cadence Farms
01:33:30 evebot
Awe that's so sad. I know he had a lot of health problems. At least he got to do his Goodbye show.
Nightingales Ridge
01:31:31 Issy
Ah gotcha
Nightingales Ridge
01:31:16 Issy
Or was it one show? Bless either way what a hoot of a lad
Stormsong Manor
01:30:58 Ven
He did a farewell show
Nightingales Ridge
01:30:38 Issy
Wow he just toured huh
Nightingales Ridge
01:30:30 Issy
I just ran to Google
Dash and Duchess
01:30:15 DD | ~Squizard~
Ah man, Ozzy died?
Snitches' Stitches
01:30:12 Snitch
Most biologists: Let's name it this because it's self explanatory/funny
Psychologists: Last names. Lasts names only. Nothing about what it means, just Name it after the people who thought of it and wrote it down first
Stormsong Manor
01:30:07 Ven
He said he wanted to die on stage during that show lol. He knew he was going out soon
The Old Gods
01:29:41 Void Malign
Damn. Shortly after that farewell show too. He wasn't looking too great during it
Dash and Duchess
01:29:41 DD | ~Squizard~
Heya Ven!
Stormsong Manor
01:28:18 Ven
They don't make rock stars like they used to
Stormsong Manor
01:27:25 Ven
RIP Ozzy :(
Minerva
01:15:00 Min
Ooh nice update! Thanks Eve :)
Angels angels
01:13:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh yeah card view is also so helpful when mass breeding to look for anything special like chimmy before FRing the foals

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Angels angels
01:48:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Scp
Hoofbeats Equestrian
01:48:04 Trishcognito
what glass do you need?
Angels angels
01:47:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
The med and glass of course lol The filly ones are just so I don't get colts
Primal Dawn
01:46:29 MOD/Trish
Guess that depends whats the most important for you for your breeding seasons
Angels angels
01:43:08 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I need to buy a glass, a sexed medallion, and loads of filly straws with a few filly embryos. I can't decide if I should focus on the medallion first just incase I don't get enough to get everything by RO or buy the cheaper stuff first
Cadence Farms
01:33:30 evebot
Awe that's so sad. I know he had a lot of health problems. At least he got to do his Goodbye show.
Nightingales Ridge
01:31:31 Issy
Ah gotcha
Nightingales Ridge
01:31:16 Issy
Or was it one show? Bless either way what a hoot of a lad
Stormsong Manor
01:30:58 Ven
He did a farewell show
Nightingales Ridge
01:30:38 Issy
Wow he just toured huh
Nightingales Ridge
01:30:30 Issy
I just ran to Google
Dash and Duchess
01:30:15 DD | ~Squizard~
Ah man, Ozzy died?
Snitches' Stitches
01:30:12 Snitch
Most biologists: Let's name it this because it's self explanatory/funny
Psychologists: Last names. Lasts names only. Nothing about what it means, just Name it after the people who thought of it and wrote it down first
Stormsong Manor
01:30:07 Ven
He said he wanted to die on stage during that show lol. He knew he was going out soon
The Old Gods
01:29:41 Void Malign
Damn. Shortly after that farewell show too. He wasn't looking too great during it
Dash and Duchess
01:29:41 DD | ~Squizard~
Heya Ven!
Stormsong Manor
01:28:18 Ven
They don't make rock stars like they used to
Stormsong Manor
01:27:25 Ven
RIP Ozzy :(
Minerva
01:15:00 Min
Ooh nice update! Thanks Eve :)
Angels angels
01:13:03 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Oh yeah card view is also so helpful when mass breeding to look for anything special like chimmy before FRing the foals

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The Official Art Critique Forum December 16, 2020 03:39 AM


Tanglewood
 
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So I tried a hippocampus on Ibis for the first time...and I can't stand it lol. Critique? This is a WIP, so you may notice some things haven't been finished yet :)

Edited at December 16, 2020 03:40 AM by Tanglewood
The Official Art Critique Forum December 16, 2020 03:44 AM


Enoki Valley
 
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Tanglewood said:
So I tried a hippocampus on Ibis for the first time...and I can't stand it lol. Critique? This is a WIP, so you may notice some things haven't been finished yet :)


I love it right now! Obviously add fins, but I suggest adding colour, like even just a blue or green :) maybe paint the eye? As I said I love it :D
The Official Art Critique Forum December 16, 2020 03:59 AM


Tanglewood
 
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Madsie Manor said:

Tanglewood said:
So I tried a hippocampus on Ibis for the first time...and I can't stand it lol. Critique? This is a WIP, so you may notice some things haven't been finished yet :)


I love it right now! Obviously add fins, but I suggest adding colour, like even just a blue or green :) maybe paint the eye? As I said I love it :D


Ah, thanks :) So a fun running on its back and one by its shoulder blade + hooves?
The Official Art Critique Forum December 16, 2020 06:25 AM


Enoki Valley
 
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Tanglewood said:

Madsie Manor said:

Tanglewood said:
So I tried a hippocampus on Ibis for the first time...and I can't stand it lol. Critique? This is a WIP, so you may notice some things haven't been finished yet :)


I love it right now! Obviously add fins, but I suggest adding colour, like even just a blue or green :) maybe paint the eye? As I said I love it :D


Ah, thanks :) So a fun running on its back and one by its shoulder blade + hooves?


Yup! Also a big ending of the tail :)
The Official Art Critique Forum December 16, 2020 07:02 AM


Gem
 
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@Madsie
I really really like this piece! Beautiful job! Hair, especially the mane, is done very nicely. First thing I would reccomend is to add a shadow underneath the mane/tail where it overlaps the horse's body. The eye is seriosuly gorgeous, no critique there 😍
Grounding-wise, as opposed to just cutting off the feet, use a bunch of rather small eraser strokes to make it look like strands of grass are overlapping the feet. I do see that you have a shadow for the horse but I feel like the shadow is more direct than the lighting necessitates. With this lighting, the shadow should probably be more underneath the horse and not have much of a smsistinct shape. Will definitely watch out for this in the auction forums <3
Edit: smsistinct = distinct for those of you who can type (unlike me) 😂
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Edit #2: 50k SB, 5k MI, 150-200k AB

Edited at December 16, 2020 07:12 AM by Gem
The Official Art Critique Forum December 16, 2020 08:36 AM


Enoki Valley
 
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Gem said:
@Madsie
I really really like this piece! Beautiful job! Hair, especially the mane, is done very nicely. First thing I would reccomend is to add a shadow underneath the mane/tail where it overlaps the horse's body. The eye is seriosuly gorgeous, no critique there 😍
Grounding-wise, as opposed to just cutting off the feet, use a bunch of rather small eraser strokes to make it look like strands of grass are overlapping the feet. I do see that you have a shadow for the horse but I feel like the shadow is more direct than the lighting necessitates. With this lighting, the shadow should probably be more underneath the horse and not have much of a smsistinct shape. Will definitely watch out for this in the auction forums <3
Edit: smsistinct = distinct for those of you who can type (unlike me) 😂
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Edit #2: 50k SB, 5k MI, 150-200k AB


Will do! Thanks <3 I'm blushing 😊 the eye only took like 500 tries xD
The Official Art Critique Forum December 16, 2020 08:48 AM


Gem
 
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Well it definitely paid off. Breathtaking <3
The Official Art Critique Forum December 17, 2020 09:39 AM


Bridle Rock
 
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Alrighty, so I've realized that I'm terrible at drop shadows no matter how I try to do it, so would you all be so kind and help me figure out how to get it to look right grounding/shadow wise? Snowy settings like this are so difficult XD Obviously still a WIP (currently on step seven of HRS's lovely guide <3 )
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Edited at December 17, 2020 09:41 AM by Goat Mama
The Official Art Critique Forum December 17, 2020 10:33 AM


Gem
 
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@Breezie
I don't typically use drop shadow when the light source is directly above the horse. I use it more so for when there is a really strong light source diagonally/horizontally on the horse. I hate snow/sand so I can't help you there :/ For the horse shadow in this case, I would take an airbrush or some type of rather soft brush and make a black blob beneath the horse. Set the layer to Multiply, play with the opacity.
The Official Art Critique Forum December 17, 2020 12:24 PM


Wintergreen Gardens
 
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Here is a WIP I started last night, thought I would get some input on it :D Not sure what im gonna do with it, might auction it, might keep it and make it into a set. Not sure yet :) Anyways! I am trying a few different syles and I think I like this one the best so far <3 Im thinking about adding anters or some form of horns, we will see >:3
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Edited at December 17, 2020 12:30 PM by Wintergreen Gardens

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