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-Starlight Haven-
03:51:43 Shark/Kai/Moon
Genuine question. How do you guys keep track of remarks? For week ones or week twos?
NeverGonnaTrivYouUp
03:50:35 The Mane Brains
-HEE Click- oooo my apricot is only down 1
Tosk's SHs
03:50:20 
i need her ;D
NeverGonnaTrivYouUp
03:49:22 The Mane Brains
-HEE Click- Id be lying if I said I wasnt holding my breath training worried about that Int lol
Stabulum Equorum
03:45:34 
Out of an EEE. Go figure
Morning Glory Farms
03:43:42 Dino/Digital Tyrant
oooooo Rabi
Stabulum Equorum
03:43:02 
bred this earlier
-HEE Click-
Stabulum Equorum
03:42:06 
Ohh that's amazing!
Morning Glory Farms
03:41:51 Dino/Digital Tyrant
it was a WWE, well its up everyting this week to
Stabulum Equorum
03:41:51 
Hem found a WWW in my barn earlier that i didn't even remember breeding nor did i train it ;D
Morning Glory Farms
03:41:35 Dino/Digital Tyrant
the one from Versace and that #14 or whatever she was mare
Morning Glory Farms
03:41:00 Dino/Digital Tyrant
-HEE Click- *side eye* thats fucking rude you coulda been up atleast 1 I paid a pretty penny for you
Moonlight Equestrian
03:40:53 Moon
Ohh pretty, glad she got at least one W lol
-HEE Click-
Stabulum Equorum
03:40:41 
Uhh, which one again?
Morning Glory Farms
03:40:24 Dino/Digital Tyrant
LOL youre welcome, remember that wub that I got the was WW?
Morning Glory Farms
03:40:01 Dino/Digital Tyrant
-HEE Click- To the public barn you go thats so rude.
Stabulum Equorum
03:39:24 
So kind of you to be training my future mares, Trish :D
Morning Glory Farms
03:38:45 Dino/Digital Tyrant
-HEE Click- yay I was scared for this not gonna lie
The Old Gods
03:38:41 Void Malign
I worked yesterday so my brain thinks it's tuesday
Quail Run Creek
03:38:27 Quail
Logged on for the first time in years and casually bred a WWW... quite happy! -HEE Click-

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-Starlight Haven-
03:51:43 Shark/Kai/Moon
Genuine question. How do you guys keep track of remarks? For week ones or week twos?
NeverGonnaTrivYouUp
03:50:35 The Mane Brains
-HEE Click- oooo my apricot is only down 1
Tosk's SHs
03:50:20 
i need her ;D
NeverGonnaTrivYouUp
03:49:22 The Mane Brains
-HEE Click- Id be lying if I said I wasnt holding my breath training worried about that Int lol
Stabulum Equorum
03:45:34 
Out of an EEE. Go figure
Morning Glory Farms
03:43:42 Dino/Digital Tyrant
oooooo Rabi
Stabulum Equorum
03:43:02 
bred this earlier
-HEE Click-
Stabulum Equorum
03:42:06 
Ohh that's amazing!
Morning Glory Farms
03:41:51 Dino/Digital Tyrant
it was a WWE, well its up everyting this week to
Stabulum Equorum
03:41:51 
Hem found a WWW in my barn earlier that i didn't even remember breeding nor did i train it ;D
Morning Glory Farms
03:41:35 Dino/Digital Tyrant
the one from Versace and that #14 or whatever she was mare
Morning Glory Farms
03:41:00 Dino/Digital Tyrant
-HEE Click- *side eye* thats fucking rude you coulda been up atleast 1 I paid a pretty penny for you
Moonlight Equestrian
03:40:53 Moon
Ohh pretty, glad she got at least one W lol
-HEE Click-
Stabulum Equorum
03:40:41 
Uhh, which one again?
Morning Glory Farms
03:40:24 Dino/Digital Tyrant
LOL youre welcome, remember that wub that I got the was WW?
Morning Glory Farms
03:40:01 Dino/Digital Tyrant
-HEE Click- To the public barn you go thats so rude.
Stabulum Equorum
03:39:24 
So kind of you to be training my future mares, Trish :D
Morning Glory Farms
03:38:45 Dino/Digital Tyrant
-HEE Click- yay I was scared for this not gonna lie
The Old Gods
03:38:41 Void Malign
I worked yesterday so my brain thinks it's tuesday
Quail Run Creek
03:38:27 Quail
Logged on for the first time in years and casually bred a WWW... quite happy! -HEE Click-

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The Official Art Critique Forum November 6, 2020 11:09 AM


Wintergreen Gardens
 
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Thank you Gem!!! I will work on that! :D

Gem said:
@Purp
The body prep and muscling is really really nice. The horse fits well with the background and three of the feet are very well grounded. My issue is with the front, lifted foot. The viewer can see the entire hoof but I think you intended the tip of it to be underwater. I don't think that works in this cause because you can't see any of the other legs or even part of the other legs underwater. So maybe erase the tip of the hoof and give it a little splash. My only other suggestion is to take a look at the hair. To me, it seems somewhat pixelated. I would teccomend trying again with a softer brush. Keep up the awesome work!
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@New york
Would be happy to critique your piece, horse or not, but the image is not showing up for me.
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@Breezie
Really can't wait to see the end result on this one, super super cool concept. I think that the highlights on the horse are too strong. Particularly on the face, neck, and shoulders. Then also maybe darken the bottom of the stomach some more. <3
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@Wintergreen
Beautiful color change!!! Looks very natural and fits well. Main recommendation I have for you is to look at grounding. The horse's feet just kind of blur out as of now. To add naturalness, draw some strands of grass and foliage over the horse's feet. Very excited to see the result!


The Official Art Critique Forum November 6, 2020 01:57 PM


Gem

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No problem! <3
The Official Art Critique Forum November 6, 2020 02:03 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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looking for critique and especially pricing help on this piece
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The Official Art Critique Forum November 9, 2020 02:09 AM


Tanglewood
 
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Critique? I struggled with the grounding, any tips with that are appreciated. Blanket appy also looks a bit iffy, otherwise I can't directly pick up what's wrong with this piece :)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 9, 2020 07:43 AM


Merryland Farm
 
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Olive Tree Equine -
Your grounding is decent but I can't give much feedback since you are using a precut horse and haven't modified it much. Pricing-wise, I'd say you should be tier 3, between 5-10k. Have you tried cutting out your own stock yet? This tutorial may be helpful: https://www.deviantart.com/poeticjustice314/art/How-to-Cut-a-Horse-Out-144010574

Tangle -
I can see two issues that make the grounding look off in this piece. First, the horses are too large for the background which makes it look 'off' because it's visually disproportionate. Second, the horses don't have shadows which contributes to the floating appearance. This is a decent tutorial for how to make a shadow: https://www.deviantart.com/erraticstudios/art/Shadow-Tutorial-167949661
Your coloring and definition look pretty good. In particular, the mare's markings are very well done.

Edited at November 9, 2020 07:43 AM by Merryland Farm
The Official Art Critique Forum November 9, 2020 01:47 PM


Tanglewood
 
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Ah, thanks Merry! Ialways forget the shadow haha.
The Official Art Critique Forum November 9, 2020 02:30 PM

Former Stable
 
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Please don't be too hard on me lol, I'm pretty pleased with this one :3
The Official Art Critique Forum November 10, 2020 04:20 PM


Da Smexy Sheep
 
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Just a bit of help please :) Not all the way done mane is still a WIP but yeah. Go to town
The Official Art Critique Forum November 13, 2020 07:01 AM


Tanglewood
 
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Halp xD
First background merge on Ibis - let's just say it was a bit rocky lol. Critique please, I'm also unsure what pose the horse should be + general theme. (Yes I do realize I should have thought of that before I started xD)
(clicky it's big)
The Official Art Critique Forum November 14, 2020 01:47 PM


Cain Manor
 
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i tried a new style

Edited at November 14, 2020 01:48 PM by Cain Manor

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