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Thank you everyone for your kind words and CC i will try that and the sparkles are like ice/snow:D Edited at October 21, 2020 05:01 AM by Your ugly Jumper
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CC Mustangs said: Would definitely like some critique on this!
Dang CC! You're going to give me a run for my money!! This is amazing! The lighting, body prep, hair, and color are all extremely well done! The only thing I think you could work on would be the eye. Horse's have rounded pupils where the horse currently appears to have one that is almost pointy. So round that out and add a reflection (really little white squiggle towards the tip of the eye) then I think you could definitely call this a Tier 2 piece of art 😍🥰
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I need help with the grounding on this piece, specifically the near front leg and the far hind leg : Pretend the credits aren't quite so large and are some color other than bright red xD. I just threw them on there and wanted them to be visible lmao. Also, this was made on a laptop using Pixlr, which does not have a lot of fancier features. Edited at October 22, 2020 03:04 PM by Diagon Alley Elites
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 Can get some pointers on lighting and grounding and pretty much anything else that could require improvement?
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I'm no expert, but maybe blur the shadow and make it look like the grass is coming over the hooves more by either erasing streaks off of it or drawing on grassy pieces. Diagon Alley Elites said: I need help with the grounding on this piece, specifically the near front leg and the far hind leg : Pretend the credits aren't quite so large and are some color other than bright red xD. I just threw them on there and wanted them to be visible lmao. Also, this was made on a laptop using Pixlr, which does not have a lot of fancier features.
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Diagon Alley Elites said: Is this better?
Aww it's pretty! Though I have to comment on the shadows, grass isn't like glass, the shadow isn't quite as clean as that. Also the sun wouldn't be directly on top of the horse like that, I would recommend grabbing a messy brush and scribbling a shadow.
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Cliffyard Stables said:  Can get some pointers on lighting and grounding and pretty much anything else that could require improvement?
Grab a very low opacity eraser and clean up the edges. Also the background you chose has very obvious sunlight, so use an airbrush to mimic that. It also would be better to have high grasses identical to the ones in the back in front of the horse itself. Beautiful concept!
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