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Greenheart Stables
12:50:32 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-HEE Click-
Color breeding SDs fear me, got the goal of having more then 4 patterns on my Dressage SDs in less then six months
Silver Brookside
12:38:22 
Issy - the Irish capture event. Literally nothing actually useful.
Nightingales Ridge
12:36:15 𔓘 Issy
What happened to all your horses?
Nightingales Ridge
12:35:19 𔓘 Issy
Whats that regarding Brook?
Silver Brookside
12:33:34 
Man, I had the worst luck and got nothing useful. :/
Nightingales Ridge
12:28:12 𔓘 Issy
Oh gosh not AGAIN forgetting to enter horses. I entered maybe 1 barn lol oh gosh. Had such a simple quest too
fire
12:10:13 
Ok thanks
Nightingales Ridge
12:09:26 𔓘 Issy
Yes Boulder! Yes Yes yes
Eternal Chaos
12:09:25 MOD/Trish
-HEE Click- oh YOURE exciting
Nightingales Ridge
12:07:10 𔓘 Issy
Night!
Blue Diamond
12:05:35 Bluey/PM abt books^^
Night, ya'll
Eyrie of the Stars
11:45:01 Eyrie
Fire choose the section you want to post in, scroll to the bottom, and there'll be a text box to make one.
fire
11:38:08 
how do create a forum thread
Valdegras
11:36:56 
thank you!! <3
The Heights
11:36:32 
Valdegras
1am
Blue Diamond
11:36:06 Bluey/PM abt books^^
Fern?
Valdegras
11:35:10 
Dumb question - what time in EST does the server roll over into the next day?
Galloping Fields
11:02:19 
Fawn she is stunning
Gypsy Family Farm
10:53:19 
Aura, thanks for the horse treat! He really is an old boy!

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Greenheart Stables
12:50:32 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-HEE Click-
Color breeding SDs fear me, got the goal of having more then 4 patterns on my Dressage SDs in less then six months
Silver Brookside
12:38:22 
Issy - the Irish capture event. Literally nothing actually useful.
Nightingales Ridge
12:36:15 𔓘 Issy
What happened to all your horses?
Nightingales Ridge
12:35:19 𔓘 Issy
Whats that regarding Brook?
Silver Brookside
12:33:34 
Man, I had the worst luck and got nothing useful. :/
Nightingales Ridge
12:28:12 𔓘 Issy
Oh gosh not AGAIN forgetting to enter horses. I entered maybe 1 barn lol oh gosh. Had such a simple quest too
fire
12:10:13 
Ok thanks
Nightingales Ridge
12:09:26 𔓘 Issy
Yes Boulder! Yes Yes yes
Eternal Chaos
12:09:25 MOD/Trish
-HEE Click- oh YOURE exciting
Nightingales Ridge
12:07:10 𔓘 Issy
Night!
Blue Diamond
12:05:35 Bluey/PM abt books^^
Night, ya'll
Eyrie of the Stars
11:45:01 Eyrie
Fire choose the section you want to post in, scroll to the bottom, and there'll be a text box to make one.
fire
11:38:08 
how do create a forum thread
Valdegras
11:36:56 
thank you!! <3
The Heights
11:36:32 
Valdegras
1am
Blue Diamond
11:36:06 Bluey/PM abt books^^
Fern?
Valdegras
11:35:10 
Dumb question - what time in EST does the server roll over into the next day?
Galloping Fields
11:02:19 
Fawn she is stunning
Gypsy Family Farm
10:53:19 
Aura, thanks for the horse treat! He really is an old boy!

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The Official Art Critique Forum September 29, 2020 01:42 AM


Enoki Valley
 
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I'm blushing ☺️
thsnks so much for the tips. <3
The Official Art Critique Forum September 29, 2020 05:22 AM


Gem

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Aww, no problem 😊
The Official Art Critique Forum September 29, 2020 08:40 AM


Bridle Rock
 
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I cannot for the life of me decide what's missing. Any tips?
The Official Art Critique Forum September 29, 2020 02:24 PM


Gem

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@Breezie
A few things I can pick on, lol. First of all, the whiskers/horns/leg decal. These items seem to have no semblance of lighting, they're just there. The whisker specifically, I at first thought it was just an accidental line. It doesn't really connect to the horse at all like a real whisker. Second, draw that horse eye a reflection <3
I'm not genuinely sure what's going on with the fetlock feathery things. One looks like a fin, the back two are just hanging out, the other front one is crazy 😝 Maybe try to make those more similar to each other. Next, the (viewer's) left back leg. It seems very dark/in shadow compared to the rest of the horse's body. Try lightening it up and adding some muscling. I feel like the horse should be casting a shadow over the wall along with more of the forest. Other than that, lighting is very nice and aesthetically pleasing overall. Looking at the (viewer's) right ear, I can tell you drew the mane over it. Duplicate the horse layer, cut out the ear, then move that layer above the mane. This will make an overall cleaner appearance. Last part I'm going to pick on; the tail. Looking at both lighting and realism. Lighting is nonexistent - top should be lighter, bottom should be darker. I'm not sure what texture you were going for there. Really love the concept of this piece. Also wanted to add that I'm not trying to be rude whatsoever, just trying to help as much as I can <3 <3

Edited at September 29, 2020 02:37 PM by Gem
The Official Art Critique Forum September 29, 2020 02:40 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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I agree with everything gem said :) I also feel there should be wings, like a dragons wings. It seems weird to just have a horse in the air.
The Official Art Critique Forum September 29, 2020 03:30 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Ooops double XD

Edited at September 29, 2020 03:32 PM by Breezie Rose
The Official Art Critique Forum September 29, 2020 03:30 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Thank you both!
I really appreciate all the tips, Gem! <3 I think when I posted that I was so tired and I thought it was done, so thanks for calling me out on (many) uncomplete things XD
Madsie, I thought about doing wings, but the piece is Chinese based kinda and Chinese dragons don't have wings, so I thought it'd be cool to let the horse be wingless :D
also I absolutely hate doing wings XD
The Official Art Critique Forum September 29, 2020 03:32 PM


Gem

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@Breezie
Lol, you're very welcome <3
I hope they're at least somewhat useful 😝🥰
The Official Art Critique Forum October 2, 2020 10:29 AM


White Oak Manor
 
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First one I feel remotely happy with as of late. Pointers and price estimates would be lovely. Apologies for the poor resolution. Thanks!

Edited at October 2, 2020 10:30 AM by Purple Pegasus Farm
The Official Art Critique Forum October 2, 2020 11:34 AM

Wonderland
 
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Purple Pegasus Farm said:
First one I feel remotely happy with as of late. Pointers and price estimates would be lovely. Apologies for the poor resolution. Thanks!


First of all I am going to steal this*_*

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