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Greenheart Stables
12:50:32 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
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Color breeding SDs fear me, got the goal of having more then 4 patterns on my Dressage SDs in less then six months
Silver Brookside
12:38:22 
Issy - the Irish capture event. Literally nothing actually useful.
Nightingales Ridge
12:36:15 𔓘 Issy
What happened to all your horses?
Nightingales Ridge
12:35:19 𔓘 Issy
Whats that regarding Brook?
Silver Brookside
12:33:34 
Man, I had the worst luck and got nothing useful. :/
Nightingales Ridge
12:28:12 𔓘 Issy
Oh gosh not AGAIN forgetting to enter horses. I entered maybe 1 barn lol oh gosh. Had such a simple quest too
fire
12:10:13 
Ok thanks
Nightingales Ridge
12:09:26 𔓘 Issy
Yes Boulder! Yes Yes yes
Eternal Chaos
12:09:25 MOD/Trish
-HEE Click- oh YOURE exciting
Nightingales Ridge
12:07:10 𔓘 Issy
Night!
Blue Diamond
12:05:35 Bluey/PM abt books^^
Night, ya'll
Eyrie of the Stars
11:45:01 Eyrie
Fire choose the section you want to post in, scroll to the bottom, and there'll be a text box to make one.
fire
11:38:08 
how do create a forum thread
Valdegras
11:36:56 
thank you!! <3
The Heights
11:36:32 
Valdegras
1am
Blue Diamond
11:36:06 Bluey/PM abt books^^
Fern?
Valdegras
11:35:10 
Dumb question - what time in EST does the server roll over into the next day?
Galloping Fields
11:02:19 
Fawn she is stunning
Gypsy Family Farm
10:53:19 
Aura, thanks for the horse treat! He really is an old boy!

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Greenheart Stables
12:50:32 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-HEE Click-
Color breeding SDs fear me, got the goal of having more then 4 patterns on my Dressage SDs in less then six months
Silver Brookside
12:38:22 
Issy - the Irish capture event. Literally nothing actually useful.
Nightingales Ridge
12:36:15 𔓘 Issy
What happened to all your horses?
Nightingales Ridge
12:35:19 𔓘 Issy
Whats that regarding Brook?
Silver Brookside
12:33:34 
Man, I had the worst luck and got nothing useful. :/
Nightingales Ridge
12:28:12 𔓘 Issy
Oh gosh not AGAIN forgetting to enter horses. I entered maybe 1 barn lol oh gosh. Had such a simple quest too
fire
12:10:13 
Ok thanks
Nightingales Ridge
12:09:26 𔓘 Issy
Yes Boulder! Yes Yes yes
Eternal Chaos
12:09:25 MOD/Trish
-HEE Click- oh YOURE exciting
Nightingales Ridge
12:07:10 𔓘 Issy
Night!
Blue Diamond
12:05:35 Bluey/PM abt books^^
Night, ya'll
Eyrie of the Stars
11:45:01 Eyrie
Fire choose the section you want to post in, scroll to the bottom, and there'll be a text box to make one.
fire
11:38:08 
how do create a forum thread
Valdegras
11:36:56 
thank you!! <3
The Heights
11:36:32 
Valdegras
1am
Blue Diamond
11:36:06 Bluey/PM abt books^^
Fern?
Valdegras
11:35:10 
Dumb question - what time in EST does the server roll over into the next day?
Galloping Fields
11:02:19 
Fawn she is stunning
Gypsy Family Farm
10:53:19 
Aura, thanks for the horse treat! He really is an old boy!

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The Official Art Critique Forum September 23, 2020 05:20 PM


Gem

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That makes much for sense 😉
You're genuinely amazing. My only 'issue' with this is the low resolution. If you were to link the image would it be higher resolution? Also could have a little more contrast in the mane <3
The Official Art Critique Forum September 23, 2020 05:25 PM

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Thank you!
The Official Art Critique Forum September 23, 2020 05:27 PM

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I would love to get some critiques and opinions on this one. I havent made a piece in quite some to and this is my first one back. Thanks in advance! https://www.deviantart.com/apexartistry/art/1-Grey-pony-cantering-in-field-856030329

Edited at September 23, 2020 05:34 PM by Apex Equestrian
The Official Art Critique Forum September 23, 2020 05:56 PM


Gem

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I think that's a really great start! Highlights are looking very nice. I would reccomend extending the shadow of the horse to be more under the front of the horse. Throw in a darker shade or two in the mane and tail at about 1.1 px. Also, give drawing the eye a shot just to add some personality. Only other suggestion is to make the bottom of the tail darker or more in shadow than the top.
The Official Art Critique Forum September 23, 2020 06:06 PM

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Gem said:
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I think that's a really great start! Highlights are looking very nice. I would reccomend extending the shadow of the horse to be more under the front of the horse. Throw in a darker shade or two in the mane and tail at about 1.1 px. Also, give drawing the eye a shot just to add some personality. Only other suggestion is to make the bottom of the tail darker or more in shadow than the top.


Thank you so much! I will definitely take all those things in mind for my future pieces. :D
The Official Art Critique Forum September 23, 2020 06:14 PM


Cain Manor
 
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Can I have some criticism and what's it worth?
The Official Art Critique Forum September 23, 2020 06:20 PM


Gem

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Not loving the orange lines you used to outline th muscles. That seems rather unnatural to me. Same with the dark brown lines on the white side of the face. If anything, the dark brown lines Gould be used in place of the orange and grey lines on the white side of the face. Main thing to look at I would say is lighting. The light source is obviously behind the horse so the highlights should be on the edges of the horse's body. The middle of the horse should be significantly darker to be realistic. There is like two black lines going underneath the right eye. What are they there for? If they're meant to be the shadow of the forelock, Gaussian Blur those suckers 😜
The Official Art Critique Forum September 28, 2020 01:51 PM


Enoki Valley
 
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uhhh... trying to do a background merge and ... it looks... dodgy. Looking for tips to make it look more realistic. Thank you :)

Edited at September 28, 2020 01:52 PM by Madsie Manor
The Official Art Critique Forum September 28, 2020 02:35 PM


Gem

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Hey!!!! I think that's looking great so far!! The images fit well together, shadows, cutting, and tinting are perfect. What would add realism is to add some significant highlights on the edges of the rock/cliff where the sun's light would be hitting it. This can be done by adding a layer on overlay, then using a white airbrush. Blend and play with opacity as needed <3
The Official Art Critique Forum September 28, 2020 02:57 PM


Villarreal Ridge
 
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I agree with Gem, they merge really well, I could only tell the merge line because of the shading (highlights). The tint and hues go amazing together and I'm sure your final piece will be strikingly beautiful.

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