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Nightingales Ridge
10:30:51 Issy
Ciao!
Sport Pony Island
10:30:11 Solstice × Win
Bye! I gotta go
Motonemi
10:30:00 AL, mum to Nemi
Ah, I see
Minerva
10:27:55 Min
Lord only knows, AL- but I love setting them up haha. Then they go to the spreadsheet graveyard folder because I don't like maintaining them. It saves the trees though- I used to just obsessively write out lists
Nightingales Ridge
10:26:28 Issy
Min - That cotton seed is confused but happy to be of some service
Motonemi
10:26:26 AL, mum to Nemi
Spreadsheet for what Min?
Nightingales Ridge
10:25:29 Issy
Happy bday for grandma Ivy! I miss all my grandparents 😢 spend as much time as you can with them! ❤️❤️
Sport Pony Island
10:24:10 Solstice × Win
Yes
Minerva
10:23:59 Min
A spreadsheet??
Sport Pony Island
10:23:27 Solstice × Win
Min, what is that?
Minerva
10:22:51 Min
Uh oh, I'm getting the urge to make a new speadsheet.
Sport Pony Island
10:18:12 Solstice × Win
-HEE Click- Wow
Motonemi
10:17:21 AL, mum to Nemi
Hails, do 2 embryos
Minerva
10:05:42 Min
Hails I'd definitely do embryos- you could always repeat two of the matches that have given WWWs.
Sport Pony Island
10:02:57 Solstice × Win
Oof, just set him free.. :/
Glacier Bay Cove
10:02:31 Arctic Katz
That is a nice horse, Solstice
Marvel Farms
10:02:10 Hails
-HEE Click-

I am trying to decide if I pull two embryos next season or just put my all into one foal. It’s her last season and I do not always have good luck with embryos
Sport Pony Island
10:01:47 Solstice × Win
Arctic, that was a bit random, but, same..
Glacier Bay Cove
10:01:16 Arctic Katz
I hate wearing undershirts
Sport Pony Island
09:58:51 Solstice × Win
This guy is kinda pretty.. -HEE Click-

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Nightingales Ridge
10:30:51 Issy
Ciao!
Sport Pony Island
10:30:11 Solstice × Win
Bye! I gotta go
Motonemi
10:30:00 AL, mum to Nemi
Ah, I see
Minerva
10:27:55 Min
Lord only knows, AL- but I love setting them up haha. Then they go to the spreadsheet graveyard folder because I don't like maintaining them. It saves the trees though- I used to just obsessively write out lists
Nightingales Ridge
10:26:28 Issy
Min - That cotton seed is confused but happy to be of some service
Motonemi
10:26:26 AL, mum to Nemi
Spreadsheet for what Min?
Nightingales Ridge
10:25:29 Issy
Happy bday for grandma Ivy! I miss all my grandparents 😢 spend as much time as you can with them! ❤️❤️
Sport Pony Island
10:24:10 Solstice × Win
Yes
Minerva
10:23:59 Min
A spreadsheet??
Sport Pony Island
10:23:27 Solstice × Win
Min, what is that?
Minerva
10:22:51 Min
Uh oh, I'm getting the urge to make a new speadsheet.
Sport Pony Island
10:18:12 Solstice × Win
-HEE Click- Wow
Motonemi
10:17:21 AL, mum to Nemi
Hails, do 2 embryos
Minerva
10:05:42 Min
Hails I'd definitely do embryos- you could always repeat two of the matches that have given WWWs.
Sport Pony Island
10:02:57 Solstice × Win
Oof, just set him free.. :/
Glacier Bay Cove
10:02:31 Arctic Katz
That is a nice horse, Solstice
Marvel Farms
10:02:10 Hails
-HEE Click-

I am trying to decide if I pull two embryos next season or just put my all into one foal. It’s her last season and I do not always have good luck with embryos
Sport Pony Island
10:01:47 Solstice × Win
Arctic, that was a bit random, but, same..
Glacier Bay Cove
10:01:16 Arctic Katz
I hate wearing undershirts
Sport Pony Island
09:58:51 Solstice × Win
This guy is kinda pretty.. -HEE Click-

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The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2020 11:20 PM


Gem
 
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@Jumper
This is looking awesome! Two main points of improvement in my opinion; hair and lighting. I will edit with details later, have to go <3
The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2020 11:22 PM

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yeah,I still suck at hair any helpful tips? what am I doing wrong with the hair?

Gem said:
@Jumper
This is looking awesome! Two main points of improvement in my opinion; hair and lighting. I will edit with details later, have to go <3


The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2020 11:25 PM


Gem
 
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Change of plans, lol. Still here 😜
Hair is, in my opinion, probably the hardest part of doing art. Especially when aiming for realism. May I ask how you do your manes currently?
The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2020 11:30 PM

Former Stable
 
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well I do an outline and full in my darkest colour to get the general shape then go over in lighter shades of the colour in strands that follow the general direction and make some go out of the shape ect then go back to that base colour and blur the edges a bit
i use Krita btw

Gem said:
Change of plans, lol. Still here 😜
Hair is, in my opinion, probably the hardest part of doing art. Especially when aiming for realism. May I ask how you do your manes currently?


The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 07:52 AM


Gem
 
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What I'm noticing is that you need more shades and less straight lines. All of your lines should be curved at least somewhere in order for the hair to flow. I don't see the need to blur the edges of the base either. After drawing your hair, add shadows and highlights based on your lighting.
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 12:29 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Decided to keep it simple stupid XD
Thoughts??
Also how much should I charge for a piece like this? Thanks in advance!

Edited at July 28, 2020 12:30 PM by Breezie Rose
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 12:34 PM


Gem
 
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@Breezie
This piece is beautiful! Love the new body prep. Definitely matches the background well color wise but not so much lighting wise. The horse seems very bright compared to the slightly darker background. Wonderful eye and definition.
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 12:59 PM


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Rumble Team
 
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Breezie Rose said:
skinny-horse.png
This is a long-winded project XD
How does the horse look? Skinny/bony enough? I've never done something like this before


I'd thin out the back and hindquarters more
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 04:14 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Thanks you guys!
I have another piece I finished this morning(before the grey). Not super proud of it, but I need to know what not to do next time :)
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The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 04:44 PM


Gem
 
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@Breezie
The colors blend really nicely and the mane is super cute but the lighting is what throws me off. The tiger is lit from above while the horse is lit from the left side. Secondly, there is a lot going on in this image that captures the viewer's eye besides the horse and the tiger. I reccomend blurring out pretty much everything behind the tiger.

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