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Echo Creek
11:37:53 Echo | River
I won't know what she's strong in before RO 😭
-HEE Click-
Aura Show Horses
11:37:33 Pea/Aura
How are you!!?
rumi+jinu
11:36:45 usagi
hi!!

Aura Show Horses
11:35:52 Pea/Aura
Hey Usagi!
rumi+jinu
11:34:12 usagi
hi
Aura Show Horses
11:28:15 Pea/Aura
Hi chat!
The Story Writer
11:25:09 
2:30am rl which is 1:30 gt for me
Thunderbolt Stables
11:07:19 Thunder
Wait
Thunderbolt Stables
11:07:16 Thunder
What never mind
Thunderbolt Stables
11:07:01 Thunder
Dang I kinda wish it was sooner
The Fallen Rulers
11:06:21 Storm|RID/SD Lord
2:30 am game time on the 1st or something like that
Thunderbolt Stables
11:05:54 Thunder
What times rollover?
The Fallen Rulers
11:05:17 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Always ready to help if I can. (:
SUMMER OF PEARLS
11:04:23 
thank you Fallen Rulers! :) bless your heart
SUMMER OF PEARLS
11:03:16 
THANK YOU ALL for helping me get this hammered ou!!
The Fallen Rulers
11:02:10 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Pearl, I sent you two water your way. Didn’t cost me anything since I had extra credits lol
Thunderbolt Stables
11:00:28 Thunder
Items
SUMMER OF PEARLS
10:59:58 
hmmm well if it were to be in the store, what section of the store? no "water" tab, like there is for "grain" or "tack"
The Fallen Rulers
10:58:02 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Yawns
Shadow Empire
10:55:11 Pie
Not everything is in the store at all times. You can either wait, or use the search items function to buy water from member stores. You need five waters to take a 100 horse pasture from barren to lush.

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Echo Creek
11:37:53 Echo | River
I won't know what she's strong in before RO 😭
-HEE Click-
Aura Show Horses
11:37:33 Pea/Aura
How are you!!?
rumi+jinu
11:36:45 usagi
hi!!

Aura Show Horses
11:35:52 Pea/Aura
Hey Usagi!
rumi+jinu
11:34:12 usagi
hi
Aura Show Horses
11:28:15 Pea/Aura
Hi chat!
The Story Writer
11:25:09 
2:30am rl which is 1:30 gt for me
Thunderbolt Stables
11:07:19 Thunder
Wait
Thunderbolt Stables
11:07:16 Thunder
What never mind
Thunderbolt Stables
11:07:01 Thunder
Dang I kinda wish it was sooner
The Fallen Rulers
11:06:21 Storm|RID/SD Lord
2:30 am game time on the 1st or something like that
Thunderbolt Stables
11:05:54 Thunder
What times rollover?
The Fallen Rulers
11:05:17 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Always ready to help if I can. (:
SUMMER OF PEARLS
11:04:23 
thank you Fallen Rulers! :) bless your heart
SUMMER OF PEARLS
11:03:16 
THANK YOU ALL for helping me get this hammered ou!!
The Fallen Rulers
11:02:10 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Pearl, I sent you two water your way. Didn’t cost me anything since I had extra credits lol
Thunderbolt Stables
11:00:28 Thunder
Items
SUMMER OF PEARLS
10:59:58 
hmmm well if it were to be in the store, what section of the store? no "water" tab, like there is for "grain" or "tack"
The Fallen Rulers
10:58:02 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Yawns
Shadow Empire
10:55:11 Pie
Not everything is in the store at all times. You can either wait, or use the search items function to buy water from member stores. You need five waters to take a 100 horse pasture from barren to lush.

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2020 11:20 PM


Gem

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@Jumper
This is looking awesome! Two main points of improvement in my opinion; hair and lighting. I will edit with details later, have to go <3
The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2020 11:22 PM

Former Stable
 
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yeah,I still suck at hair any helpful tips? what am I doing wrong with the hair?

Gem said:
@Jumper
This is looking awesome! Two main points of improvement in my opinion; hair and lighting. I will edit with details later, have to go <3


The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2020 11:25 PM


Gem

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Change of plans, lol. Still here 😜
Hair is, in my opinion, probably the hardest part of doing art. Especially when aiming for realism. May I ask how you do your manes currently?
The Official Art Critique Forum July 27, 2020 11:30 PM

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well I do an outline and full in my darkest colour to get the general shape then go over in lighter shades of the colour in strands that follow the general direction and make some go out of the shape ect then go back to that base colour and blur the edges a bit
i use Krita btw

Gem said:
Change of plans, lol. Still here 😜
Hair is, in my opinion, probably the hardest part of doing art. Especially when aiming for realism. May I ask how you do your manes currently?


The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 07:52 AM


Gem

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What I'm noticing is that you need more shades and less straight lines. All of your lines should be curved at least somewhere in order for the hair to flow. I don't see the need to blur the edges of the base either. After drawing your hair, add shadows and highlights based on your lighting.
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 12:29 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Decided to keep it simple stupid XD
Thoughts??
Also how much should I charge for a piece like this? Thanks in advance!

Edited at July 28, 2020 12:30 PM by Breezie Rose
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 12:34 PM


Gem

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@Breezie
This piece is beautiful! Love the new body prep. Definitely matches the background well color wise but not so much lighting wise. The horse seems very bright compared to the slightly darker background. Wonderful eye and definition.
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 12:59 PM


HMH Reality Check
 
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Breezie Rose said:
skinny-horse.png
This is a long-winded project XD
How does the horse look? Skinny/bony enough? I've never done something like this before


I'd thin out the back and hindquarters more
The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 04:14 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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Thanks you guys!
I have another piece I finished this morning(before the grey). Not super proud of it, but I need to know what not to do next time :)
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The Official Art Critique Forum July 28, 2020 04:44 PM


Gem

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@Breezie
The colors blend really nicely and the mane is super cute but the lighting is what throws me off. The tiger is lit from above while the horse is lit from the left side. Secondly, there is a lot going on in this image that captures the viewer's eye besides the horse and the tiger. I reccomend blurring out pretty much everything behind the tiger.

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