Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

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Paradise Stables

12:05:14 Ariel / Tara

When is it next game day?

Glacier Bay Cove

12:00:32 Arctic Katz

Tomorrow I will post it again as a work in progress

Glacier Bay Cove

11:59:28 Arctic Katz

Back to working on art projects tomorrow, and looks like the one I thought I would finish tonight is going to take longer to finish. Hoping to have it finished by this coming Saturday, if possible

Hummingbird Meadows

11:49:03 Bird

My family is weird... just learned that my 3 year old first cousin once is only allowed to play with educational toys.

Acacia Riding Center

11:34:02

guys look how pretty :o , i just wish it wasnt PEE -HEE Click-

KPH Equestrian

11:24:23 Rapcoon | Jester

oh lucky! Look
-HEE Click-

KPH Equestrian

11:24:01 Rapcoon | Jester

arctic
too real😞

Lucky Ranch

11:14:49 luhckeigh

amen sister im hollering cause i hear you

Glacier Bay Cove

11:10:50 Arctic Katz

Not easy dealing with stupidly dumb people

Midnight Manors

11:08:57 Bunny ♡

Is Sweetwater okay??
Last time they were online was June 27th

Gilded Roses

11:02:10 River / Brody

Gypsy
Thank you, I feel like the eyes always turn out looking like a snake's though? any tips on that?

Gypsy Family Farm

11:01:15

It's a really handsome piece, River.

Lilac Fields

10:37:08 Lillie

Yes we need more AD Brave KNN boys!

Circle Star RIDs

10:35:09 Granny C

That you like it, is all that matters.

Gilded Roses

10:21:24 River / Brody

I'm really happy with it compared to my other manips, probably because it was a simpler coat to work with.

Greenheart Stables

10:17:27 Green|Gren|Grenlin

-HEE Click-
+ filly sevn

Pentagram Stables

10:17:24 Penta - KNNs

not bad

Gilded Roses

10:14:39 River / Brody

What do we think ?? -Click-

Mythological

10:11:46 Crowley

Lol**

Mythological

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Paradise Stables

12:05:14 Ariel / Tara

When is it next game day?

Glacier Bay Cove

12:00:32 Arctic Katz

Tomorrow I will post it again as a work in progress

Glacier Bay Cove

11:59:28 Arctic Katz

Back to working on art projects tomorrow, and looks like the one I thought I would finish tonight is going to take longer to finish. Hoping to have it finished by this coming Saturday, if possible

Hummingbird Meadows

11:49:03 Bird

My family is weird... just learned that my 3 year old first cousin once is only allowed to play with educational toys.

Acacia Riding Center

11:34:02

guys look how pretty :o , i just wish it wasnt PEE -HEE Click-

KPH Equestrian

11:24:23 Rapcoon | Jester

oh lucky! Look
-HEE Click-

KPH Equestrian

11:24:01 Rapcoon | Jester

arctic
too real😞

Lucky Ranch

11:14:49 luhckeigh

amen sister im hollering cause i hear you

Glacier Bay Cove

11:10:50 Arctic Katz

Not easy dealing with stupidly dumb people

Midnight Manors

11:08:57 Bunny ♡

Is Sweetwater okay??
Last time they were online was June 27th

Gilded Roses

11:02:10 River / Brody

Gypsy
Thank you, I feel like the eyes always turn out looking like a snake's though? any tips on that?

Gypsy Family Farm

11:01:15

It's a really handsome piece, River.

Lilac Fields

10:37:08 Lillie

Yes we need more AD Brave KNN boys!

Circle Star RIDs

10:35:09 Granny C

That you like it, is all that matters.

Gilded Roses

10:21:24 River / Brody

I'm really happy with it compared to my other manips, probably because it was a simpler coat to work with.

Greenheart Stables

10:17:27 Green|Gren|Grenlin

-HEE Click-
+ filly sevn

Pentagram Stables

10:17:24 Penta - KNNs

not bad

Gilded Roses

10:14:39 River / Brody

What do we think ?? -Click-

Mythological

10:11:46 Crowley

Lol**

Mythological

10:11:03 Crowley

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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