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Fantasy Horses
11:42:01 Fantasticy | Fanta
KPH
that literally made me laugh out loud LOL
Bug in a Rug
11:42:00 Bug | Flea | KPH
fanta
whats wrong with buckees😭its the most magical place on erth
Bug in a Rug
11:41:36 Bug | Flea | KPH
i just saw "die" with no context and got vaguely scared xD
Fantasy Horses
11:41:30 Fantasticy | Fanta
KPH
...what if I don't wanna?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:41:03 Glacier Katz
Die
Glacier Bay Cove
11:40:57 Glacier Katz
When I direct, I want my ashes to be scattered in Iowa
Rusty Meadows
11:40:49 Rusty
I will
Bug in a Rug
11:40:45 Bug | Flea | KPH
fanta
sacrilege!
Watercolored
11:40:42 WC
Anyone want to play stable raid?
Fantasy Horses
11:40:21 Fantasticy | Fanta
ghost
NO we are not going into buckeys
ghost light stables
11:39:48 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Furn
If you die would you like me to spread you ashes in the buckeys parking lot or the Casey's
Rusty Meadows
11:39:37 Rusty
and I have ostrich socks xD
Rusty Meadows
11:39:24 Rusty
omg yessss
Bug in a Rug
11:39:24 Bug | Flea | KPH
OH and that shirt I have with george washington riding a bald eagle on the back
Bug in a Rug
11:39:07 Bug | Flea | KPH
rusty
I should do the eagle with the bird face lol
Bug in a Rug
11:38:52 Bug | Flea | KPH
fref
why arent you in a pot

or forest
Rusty Meadows
11:38:43 Rusty
no the eagle is the clear winner
Fantasy Horses
11:38:42 Fantasticy | Fanta
fern
neither do fanta machines
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:38:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
ferns don't get a lot of sleep sometimes
Bug in a Rug
11:38:25 Bug | Flea | KPH
rusty
though I think Uncle Sam nodded in approval xD

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Fantasy Horses
11:42:01 Fantasticy | Fanta
KPH
that literally made me laugh out loud LOL
Bug in a Rug
11:42:00 Bug | Flea | KPH
fanta
whats wrong with buckees😭its the most magical place on erth
Bug in a Rug
11:41:36 Bug | Flea | KPH
i just saw "die" with no context and got vaguely scared xD
Fantasy Horses
11:41:30 Fantasticy | Fanta
KPH
...what if I don't wanna?
Glacier Bay Cove
11:41:03 Glacier Katz
Die
Glacier Bay Cove
11:40:57 Glacier Katz
When I direct, I want my ashes to be scattered in Iowa
Rusty Meadows
11:40:49 Rusty
I will
Bug in a Rug
11:40:45 Bug | Flea | KPH
fanta
sacrilege!
Watercolored
11:40:42 WC
Anyone want to play stable raid?
Fantasy Horses
11:40:21 Fantasticy | Fanta
ghost
NO we are not going into buckeys
ghost light stables
11:39:48 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Furn
If you die would you like me to spread you ashes in the buckeys parking lot or the Casey's
Rusty Meadows
11:39:37 Rusty
and I have ostrich socks xD
Rusty Meadows
11:39:24 Rusty
omg yessss
Bug in a Rug
11:39:24 Bug | Flea | KPH
OH and that shirt I have with george washington riding a bald eagle on the back
Bug in a Rug
11:39:07 Bug | Flea | KPH
rusty
I should do the eagle with the bird face lol
Bug in a Rug
11:38:52 Bug | Flea | KPH
fref
why arent you in a pot

or forest
Rusty Meadows
11:38:43 Rusty
no the eagle is the clear winner
Fantasy Horses
11:38:42 Fantasticy | Fanta
fern
neither do fanta machines
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:38:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
ferns don't get a lot of sleep sometimes
Bug in a Rug
11:38:25 Bug | Flea | KPH
rusty
though I think Uncle Sam nodded in approval xD

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Looking For Critiques/Tips October 6, 2017 08:28 AM

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hey ~ i'm somewhat new to making photomanip..s i tried to do it before and it was horrible so i went to watch tutorials and all that stuff..
and it improved but i still feel like it isn't perfect

so, what are your opinions ?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14374273

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14374410
Looking For Critiques/Tips October 8, 2017 04:32 PM

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They both look pretty good but the thing that stood out to me most was the font you used. Using pre-installed fonts is a pretty common mistake with newer artists and unfortunately it can detract from the actual art. I find that these basic fonts are either generic or silly. The font you have used in these 2 pieces falls into the second category. I would suggest downloading at least 3-5 more unique or professional-looking fonts and vary which fonts you use for which pieces based on the mood of the art piece. This will really make the art you are making pop so much better :)
You can PM me at my main 85532 if you have any questions or anything :)
Looking For Critiques/Tips October 9, 2017 06:22 AM

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Oh I never thought about that ! Thanks !
Looking For Critiques/Tips October 21, 2017 11:02 PM


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The pieces are very good, but on the second one I would lower to opacity of the white lines that are on the horse.

Edited at October 21, 2017 11:02 PM by Freedom Ranch

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