Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Vancouver
04:49:38 Ana / Van
Almost finished ^^
-Click-
Sagruesal
04:38:58 Ru
Tobi
Good filly! Should be able to produce a W
Cozmic Elite
04:27:45 
-Click-
And now to slowly start Goose.
starmutt
04:23:55 marsh 🌈
new art type unlocked -Click-
Bioshock Manor
04:22:00 Storm
Oh congrats.
Skyward Stud
04:21:08 
-HEE Click- oh. my god????
Neverhof Palace
04:09:01 
Come on West Team! We got this! Whoop!
Golden Rose
02:53:00 Rose/Goldy
Bay booty -HEE Click-
MK Sport Horse Yard
02:33:05 
Yay I made my banner :)
Tobiano Lady
02:10:43 Tobi | Nix
-HEE Click-
first wk3 up2 on a Dressage SD :P
Pegasus Lane
02:04:56 Peggy (or) Peg
Omg 5 years on HEE
Gypsy Family Farm
01:46:56 
Awww. I just noticed the heart on his cheek.

-HEE Click-
Siren Sound Estates
01:43:32 S҉ Sem
What happened, Boulder?
Boulder Creek
01:31:17 
It really sucks to have all your hard work ripped off.

I wish intellectual property had more recourse like art theft.
Even that isn't much.
MC Ace
01:28:01 McFossil
Let's do it~
Greenheart Stables
01:25:53 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Snowy
Nooo! That sucks to hear, what breed and discipline do you do?
@MC
Im going to brute force color on the LB or so help me
MC Ace
01:25:48 McFossil
I missed his WK3 but.... check him out~
-HEE Click-
Lunalovegood
01:25:15 Loony/Loony Tune
Someone help, My premium ran out and I’m paying riders manually:( send help
The Laboratory
01:25:08 Lab
-HEE Click-
Gotta love cute 1/1 brindles
Lunalovegood
01:24:06 Loony/Loony Tune
KPH taking a quick break to Check my foals training :)

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Vancouver
04:49:38 Ana / Van
Almost finished ^^
-Click-
Sagruesal
04:38:58 Ru
Tobi
Good filly! Should be able to produce a W
Cozmic Elite
04:27:45 
-Click-
And now to slowly start Goose.
starmutt
04:23:55 marsh 🌈
new art type unlocked -Click-
Bioshock Manor
04:22:00 Storm
Oh congrats.
Skyward Stud
04:21:08 
-HEE Click- oh. my god????
Neverhof Palace
04:09:01 
Come on West Team! We got this! Whoop!
Golden Rose
02:53:00 Rose/Goldy
Bay booty -HEE Click-
MK Sport Horse Yard
02:33:05 
Yay I made my banner :)
Tobiano Lady
02:10:43 Tobi | Nix
-HEE Click-
first wk3 up2 on a Dressage SD :P
Pegasus Lane
02:04:56 Peggy (or) Peg
Omg 5 years on HEE
Gypsy Family Farm
01:46:56 
Awww. I just noticed the heart on his cheek.

-HEE Click-
Siren Sound Estates
01:43:32 S҉ Sem
What happened, Boulder?
Boulder Creek
01:31:17 
It really sucks to have all your hard work ripped off.

I wish intellectual property had more recourse like art theft.
Even that isn't much.
MC Ace
01:28:01 McFossil
Let's do it~
Greenheart Stables
01:25:53 Green|Gren|Grenlin
@Snowy
Nooo! That sucks to hear, what breed and discipline do you do?
@MC
Im going to brute force color on the LB or so help me
MC Ace
01:25:48 McFossil
I missed his WK3 but.... check him out~
-HEE Click-
Lunalovegood
01:25:15 Loony/Loony Tune
Someone help, My premium ran out and I’m paying riders manually:( send help
The Laboratory
01:25:08 Lab
-HEE Click-
Gotta love cute 1/1 brindles
Lunalovegood
01:24:06 Loony/Loony Tune
KPH taking a quick break to Check my foals training :)

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Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:14 PM


Freesia Hill Estate
 
Posts: 6
#944617
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So I've just started doing manips and by no means anywhere near perfect, but I thought I'd ask about my first completed piece. It's also a realllly big piece, so I'm already having trouble resizing it without losing most of the quality lol
Here it is:
https://postimg.cc/bZ9t7dLx
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:17 PM

The Golden Horse
 
Posts: 1809
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It's looks good! however i would proably thicken up the tail where it joins to the body. other than that it looks pretty good! I would ask somewhere between 15-50k for it
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:29 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
Posts: 4433
#944624
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this is really well done for somebody new to art!
i have been doing manips on here for a while, so here is some advice <3
i feel like the horse is FAR too contrasted to the background, lower that contrast and up the brightness just a bit.
also if you understand how lighting works and if you are able to do that, it would be really nice to see a litthe bit of a lighter part around the horses back, because you can see in the background the sun shines through.
also it could be really nice to see some ripples in the reflection, you can do this by grabbing the smudge tool and setting it to high, and do some straight, curves or squiggly lines across the reflection to make it seem more realistic.
if you do all that, id say its probably worth 20-45k!
super well done, great job!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:36 PM


Freesia Hill Estate
 
Posts: 6
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Thank you so much guys!
Critique for a Newbie! December 8, 2021 02:42 PM


Over the Garden Wall
 
Posts: 854
#944628
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The horse feels really flat/2D and I think adding a little rim lighting or some very soft highlights could really make a difference.
I'm borrowing CC Knabs' piece from the Official Critique thread for an example:
Critique for a Newbie! December 9, 2021 07:32 PM


Wolf Dancer
 
Posts: 3816
#944836
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Great job, Starting Bid should be around 10-15k and AB 30k-40k

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