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Seth Farms
03:38:08 
Hahaha I have given up on rating xD im rarely active so it never gonna be finished :'D
Whispering Willow
03:37:15 
This pretty lady :D
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Siren Sound Estates
03:37:02 S҉ Sem
*sigh* Why am I doing this to me?
Me: I need to reduce my number of horses, they become unmanageable and bravery testing the 2yos takes forever each year!
Also me: Uh! Colour bravery project! Let's keep all the pretties!
Seth Farms
03:36:38 
YESSS im trying to get a grullo with all the genes, probably has been done, but its a personal goal x3
My side as a lovely dark red foal, I gotta show you i think you will like em
Siren Sound Estates
03:34:51 S҉ Sem
Oh, I love silver grullos, it's my favourite colour. ♡
But I have to admit, I *adore* manchado on a dark Red chestnut
Seth Farms
03:27:00 
These are the 2 I bred :3
First is part of my grullo project, second has my favorite Chestnut shade :D
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Guard Horseman Gang
03:25:31 GHG
I dont think so seth but here is my EEE manchado gal
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Seth Farms
03:24:33 
Oh I have a question. Did the make manchado easier to breed? I bred at least 2 yesterday
Mythological
03:24:12 Tim:2016-2026
I hate that brindle messes with the color rarity.
Guard Horseman Gang
03:22:05 GHG
why myth
Mythological
03:21:46 Tim:2016-2026
I hope I never get a WWW brindle.
Guard Horseman Gang
03:21:23 GHG
also bred a EEE peacock appy
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Tharapita Acres
03:21:08 Piia
Could someone recommend a stud for her? I'm not sure who to do an embryo to. -HEE Click-
Seth Farms
03:21:01 
Oh heck yeah thats awesome!
Guard Horseman Gang
03:19:58 GHG
out of only 2 brindle WWW horses bred this year I bred one
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Guard Horseman Gang
03:19:20 GHG
your going to love this news then seth
Seth Farms
03:18:27 
Secret Brindle :0 I love brindles xD
Guard Horseman Gang
03:17:01 GHG
just realized this a**hole is brindle
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Seth Farms
03:13:51 
Lace is white, thats just a form of sooty
Guard Horseman Gang
03:13:40 GHG
if you look at this gal she is dapple
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Seth Farms
03:38:08 
Hahaha I have given up on rating xD im rarely active so it never gonna be finished :'D
Whispering Willow
03:37:15 
This pretty lady :D
-HEE Click-
Siren Sound Estates
03:37:02 S҉ Sem
*sigh* Why am I doing this to me?
Me: I need to reduce my number of horses, they become unmanageable and bravery testing the 2yos takes forever each year!
Also me: Uh! Colour bravery project! Let's keep all the pretties!
Seth Farms
03:36:38 
YESSS im trying to get a grullo with all the genes, probably has been done, but its a personal goal x3
My side as a lovely dark red foal, I gotta show you i think you will like em
Siren Sound Estates
03:34:51 S҉ Sem
Oh, I love silver grullos, it's my favourite colour. ♡
But I have to admit, I *adore* manchado on a dark Red chestnut
Seth Farms
03:27:00 
These are the 2 I bred :3
First is part of my grullo project, second has my favorite Chestnut shade :D
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Guard Horseman Gang
03:25:31 GHG
I dont think so seth but here is my EEE manchado gal
-HEE Click-
Seth Farms
03:24:33 
Oh I have a question. Did the make manchado easier to breed? I bred at least 2 yesterday
Mythological
03:24:12 Tim:2016-2026
I hate that brindle messes with the color rarity.
Guard Horseman Gang
03:22:05 GHG
why myth
Mythological
03:21:46 Tim:2016-2026
I hope I never get a WWW brindle.
Guard Horseman Gang
03:21:23 GHG
also bred a EEE peacock appy
-HEE Click-
Tharapita Acres
03:21:08 Piia
Could someone recommend a stud for her? I'm not sure who to do an embryo to. -HEE Click-
Seth Farms
03:21:01 
Oh heck yeah thats awesome!
Guard Horseman Gang
03:19:58 GHG
out of only 2 brindle WWW horses bred this year I bred one
-HEE Click-
Guard Horseman Gang
03:19:20 GHG
your going to love this news then seth
Seth Farms
03:18:27 
Secret Brindle :0 I love brindles xD
Guard Horseman Gang
03:17:01 GHG
just realized this a**hole is brindle
-HEE Click-
Seth Farms
03:13:51 
Lace is white, thats just a form of sooty
Guard Horseman Gang
03:13:40 GHG
if you look at this gal she is dapple
-HEE Click-

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Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 06:13 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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I did this earlier in the year and I think I want to do it again. I want you guys to be as constructive with your critiques as you can be, last time you guys were really good and I got some really good pointers and ways to improve along with what I seemed to struggle with *cough* lighting *cough*. Rip these pieces to shreds and let me know what I could do better!
These are my most recent pieces that I can show
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Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 10:19 PM


Chidori
 
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There's not much I can find wrong with these they are beautiful! But if you want me to be picky here's what I noticed:
On the second picture the front left sock of the mare is inconsistent with the other 3 socks. I would brighten that one up to match the lighting of the other ones. Or you could darken the back left leg to match the front.
The third picture looks a little jagged on the back of the horse. You can try softening your eraser brush just a tad bit so your lines arent so harsh. This will also help your lines look more fluid and natural.
The last picture is amazing but it looks like his legs are cut off to me. Something that will help him look more like he's standing in tall grass is to take your eraser brush and make grass blade strokes on his legs to let the background show through.
These are all very small details and your art is very impressive! Keep up the good work!

Edited at September 26, 2021 10:23 PM by Chidori
Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 10:30 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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Thank you so much Chidori!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 1, 2021 08:46 AM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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Still looking!!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 2, 2021 03:51 AM


Riverbreeze Stables
 
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So, I had to really look over the images, for a very long time. They are beautiful! And I am an absolute fan of your fourth image, the colour, lighting and shading are absolutely gorgeous. It is also difficult to find things to fix since art is very objective and you are talented.

Now, other than what Chidori has mentioned. Some critiques, or more like tips you can take to your new works.
- Your images are very heavily contrasted, especially the third one. It hides a lot of details that could add to your image, like colour, texture, or shading. I think that's your technique, which looks cool and not really a thing to "fix". But to try something new, you could try something less stark. Like a bright/softer image to test your abilities?
- The first image looks like it's missing a back leg. Not sure if that's the stock or not, but I noticed it and it did make the image look a little off.
- The wings on your second image could be a little more detailed at the joint, and they sort of look like they sit on the withers (unless that's the purpose and I missed it). Nothing too noticeable, but adding in feathers growing to the horse's shoulder, or defining the muscles of the wing attached to the shoulders just add that little extra detail that's nice.

That's about all I see, your work is truly amazing and always nice to see.

Edited at October 2, 2021 03:56 AM by Riverbreeze Stables
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 2, 2021 03:36 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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Still looking for more critiques anything that hasn't been said before would be awesome!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 8, 2021 09:37 AM


Wings Of Glory
 
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I would say the hair could be a bit thicker and fuller:] really just me nit-picking but I love the theme of these and I feel like the top and second one the horses don't quite match the background color wise so maybe try playing with that a little bit more
The last one I have almost no critique other than the shadow could have been a tad darker and the third one Is just stunning with the smooth skin and shading but I do feel like all together your pieces could benefit from some more small details like some accessories or some things that match the theme of the piece as a whole
Edit: I do also notice this quote frequently with your art that your horses cut out is fairly rough and sometimes has a few places where it still has some background

Edited at October 8, 2021 09:42 AM by Wings Of Glory

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