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MC Ace
12:43:44 McFossil
Nice Star
ShiningStar Stables
12:43:14 Chey / Star
You had 767 horses compete in reg. shows earning 1740686.
My geldings did good work today!
MC Ace
12:40:08 McFossil
Ugh I do not want to track training.
Blue Diamond
12:38:12 Bluey
Echo
Thank you <3
Echo Creek
12:37:59 Echo | River
Bluey
Happy birthday !
Blue Diamond
12:37:29 Bluey
It's my birthday <3
Fantasy Horses
12:19:36 Fantasy | Fanta
Wow my geldings haven't gotten higher than 4th place in like a month
Elysium Opalus
12:13:50 anti gen ai
-HEE Click-
There is this one that looks like vitiligo but its not. Its very speckly though
Elysium Opalus
12:12:21 anti gen ai
Yeah theyre called pawprints, inkspots, and such

If I remember correctly, belton is the little spots horses sometimes get on their white leg markings or white face markings. Its not genetic you just might get onel I hear it more on dogs thoughl
KPH Equestrian
12:11:57 Rapcoon | Jester
spots on tobi horse are often called cat tracks! :D
pandemoniu_m
12:09:16 pheezy
ohh the little speckles? i've always called em pawprints 😅
pandemoniu_m
12:07:19 pheezy
belton? whats that
Elysium Opalus
12:06:35 anti gen ai
I forgot birdcatcher

Outside of that, this game has roan, new dominant white variants, tobianos where they have the little little spots, belton, vitiligo
Elysium Opalus
12:02:28 anti gen ai
Yeah there are some non-appy patterns
And real life equine mutations that can mimic appy patterns.
Arabs specifically have sabino and manchado
Elysium Opalus
12:00:47 anti gen ai
I love what Ive made of names for my gelding army
-HEE Click-
Explode with balloons
Glittercorn Magic
11:57:53 Diva`s Glitter Cave
With manchado I play pretend appy look lol
-HEE Click-
Glittercorn Magic
11:55:52 Diva`s Glitter Cave
You can't get appaloosa patterns on AA though like blankets and leopards
Meadowers
11:55:02 
Ohh,alright,thank you guys very much! :3
Glittercorn Magic
11:54:29 Diva`s Glitter Cave
Patterns you can, like splash and tobi etc
KPH Equestrian
11:54:14 Rapcoon | Jester
what patterns specifically? you can't breed an ISH to an AA, you'll just get an ISH, but they can have many of the same patterns like Tobi, Sabino, rabicano, etc

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MC Ace
12:43:44 McFossil
Nice Star
ShiningStar Stables
12:43:14 Chey / Star
You had 767 horses compete in reg. shows earning 1740686.
My geldings did good work today!
MC Ace
12:40:08 McFossil
Ugh I do not want to track training.
Blue Diamond
12:38:12 Bluey
Echo
Thank you <3
Echo Creek
12:37:59 Echo | River
Bluey
Happy birthday !
Blue Diamond
12:37:29 Bluey
It's my birthday <3
Fantasy Horses
12:19:36 Fantasy | Fanta
Wow my geldings haven't gotten higher than 4th place in like a month
Elysium Opalus
12:13:50 anti gen ai
-HEE Click-
There is this one that looks like vitiligo but its not. Its very speckly though
Elysium Opalus
12:12:21 anti gen ai
Yeah theyre called pawprints, inkspots, and such

If I remember correctly, belton is the little spots horses sometimes get on their white leg markings or white face markings. Its not genetic you just might get onel I hear it more on dogs thoughl
KPH Equestrian
12:11:57 Rapcoon | Jester
spots on tobi horse are often called cat tracks! :D
pandemoniu_m
12:09:16 pheezy
ohh the little speckles? i've always called em pawprints 😅
pandemoniu_m
12:07:19 pheezy
belton? whats that
Elysium Opalus
12:06:35 anti gen ai
I forgot birdcatcher

Outside of that, this game has roan, new dominant white variants, tobianos where they have the little little spots, belton, vitiligo
Elysium Opalus
12:02:28 anti gen ai
Yeah there are some non-appy patterns
And real life equine mutations that can mimic appy patterns.
Arabs specifically have sabino and manchado
Elysium Opalus
12:00:47 anti gen ai
I love what Ive made of names for my gelding army
-HEE Click-
Explode with balloons
Glittercorn Magic
11:57:53 Diva`s Glitter Cave
With manchado I play pretend appy look lol
-HEE Click-
Glittercorn Magic
11:55:52 Diva`s Glitter Cave
You can't get appaloosa patterns on AA though like blankets and leopards
Meadowers
11:55:02 
Ohh,alright,thank you guys very much! :3
Glittercorn Magic
11:54:29 Diva`s Glitter Cave
Patterns you can, like splash and tobi etc
KPH Equestrian
11:54:14 Rapcoon | Jester
what patterns specifically? you can't breed an ISH to an AA, you'll just get an ISH, but they can have many of the same patterns like Tobi, Sabino, rabicano, etc

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Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 06:13 PM


Spirtasi Whims

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I did this earlier in the year and I think I want to do it again. I want you guys to be as constructive with your critiques as you can be, last time you guys were really good and I got some really good pointers and ways to improve along with what I seemed to struggle with *cough* lighting *cough*. Rip these pieces to shreds and let me know what I could do better!
These are my most recent pieces that I can show
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Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 10:19 PM


Chidori
 
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There's not much I can find wrong with these they are beautiful! But if you want me to be picky here's what I noticed:
On the second picture the front left sock of the mare is inconsistent with the other 3 socks. I would brighten that one up to match the lighting of the other ones. Or you could darken the back left leg to match the front.
The third picture looks a little jagged on the back of the horse. You can try softening your eraser brush just a tad bit so your lines arent so harsh. This will also help your lines look more fluid and natural.
The last picture is amazing but it looks like his legs are cut off to me. Something that will help him look more like he's standing in tall grass is to take your eraser brush and make grass blade strokes on his legs to let the background show through.
These are all very small details and your art is very impressive! Keep up the good work!

Edited at September 26, 2021 10:23 PM by Chidori
Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 10:30 PM


Spirtasi Whims

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Thank you so much Chidori!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 1, 2021 08:46 AM


Spirtasi Whims

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Still looking!!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 2, 2021 03:51 AM


Riverbreeze Stables
 
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So, I had to really look over the images, for a very long time. They are beautiful! And I am an absolute fan of your fourth image, the colour, lighting and shading are absolutely gorgeous. It is also difficult to find things to fix since art is very objective and you are talented.

Now, other than what Chidori has mentioned. Some critiques, or more like tips you can take to your new works.
- Your images are very heavily contrasted, especially the third one. It hides a lot of details that could add to your image, like colour, texture, or shading. I think that's your technique, which looks cool and not really a thing to "fix". But to try something new, you could try something less stark. Like a bright/softer image to test your abilities?
- The first image looks like it's missing a back leg. Not sure if that's the stock or not, but I noticed it and it did make the image look a little off.
- The wings on your second image could be a little more detailed at the joint, and they sort of look like they sit on the withers (unless that's the purpose and I missed it). Nothing too noticeable, but adding in feathers growing to the horse's shoulder, or defining the muscles of the wing attached to the shoulders just add that little extra detail that's nice.

That's about all I see, your work is truly amazing and always nice to see.

Edited at October 2, 2021 03:56 AM by Riverbreeze Stables
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 2, 2021 03:36 PM


Spirtasi Whims

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Still looking for more critiques anything that hasn't been said before would be awesome!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 8, 2021 09:37 AM


Wings Of Glory
 
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I would say the hair could be a bit thicker and fuller:] really just me nit-picking but I love the theme of these and I feel like the top and second one the horses don't quite match the background color wise so maybe try playing with that a little bit more
The last one I have almost no critique other than the shadow could have been a tad darker and the third one Is just stunning with the smooth skin and shading but I do feel like all together your pieces could benefit from some more small details like some accessories or some things that match the theme of the piece as a whole
Edit: I do also notice this quote frequently with your art that your horses cut out is fairly rough and sometimes has a few places where it still has some background

Edited at October 8, 2021 09:42 AM by Wings Of Glory

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