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Pon Brats
03:14:51 
Nope, you can't, they are bound to your account
Pon Brats
03:14:37 
Yeah i need to switch out my set on Toskana again but i am always scared of losing the art x.x
Sindarin Stables
03:14:14 Sin
Does anyone know if you can send re-rolls to other players in the game?
Bioshock Manor
03:13:50 Storm
That Val art is one of my favorite ones
Bioshock Manor
03:13:31 Storm
I love it Ven
Dimmed
03:12:28 Dimmy
WAH Tosk that Val art is gorgeous
Dimmed
03:11:46 Dimmy
Ooh Ven I love the big hair on that
Pon Brats
03:10:29 
Hello Chic ^^
Pon Brats
03:10:19 
It is ;P but see how much you've improved.
Barbed Rose Ranch
03:10:07 Chic
Saying hello for the first time here! :) Have a great week everyone.
Vahana Hollow
03:09:48 Val
That is so old x.x
Pon Brats
03:08:16 
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;D Still with Royal Colours in frame
Pon Brats
03:07:06 
wait, i got the perfect one for comparison xD
Vahana Hollow
03:05:32 Val
Ahhh, I distinctly remember that one!
Vahana Hollow
03:05:01 Val
That is some ancient stuff, ahahaha <3 I have been thinking about remaking one of my Bluestone pieces just to compare how my style has changed.
Pon Brats
03:04:51 
Wait, here's a Val one
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Pon Brats
03:03:29 
I think all the art i got from you is Bluestone, Val
Pon Brats
03:03:11 
I'd still use it but i have no idea which account it was on
Vahana Hollow
03:02:47 Val
My gosh, that art is still under my Bluestone name, wow :O
Pon Brats
03:02:45 
this one ;D
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Pon Brats
03:14:51 
Nope, you can't, they are bound to your account
Pon Brats
03:14:37 
Yeah i need to switch out my set on Toskana again but i am always scared of losing the art x.x
Sindarin Stables
03:14:14 Sin
Does anyone know if you can send re-rolls to other players in the game?
Bioshock Manor
03:13:50 Storm
That Val art is one of my favorite ones
Bioshock Manor
03:13:31 Storm
I love it Ven
Dimmed
03:12:28 Dimmy
WAH Tosk that Val art is gorgeous
Dimmed
03:11:46 Dimmy
Ooh Ven I love the big hair on that
Pon Brats
03:10:29 
Hello Chic ^^
Pon Brats
03:10:19 
It is ;P but see how much you've improved.
Barbed Rose Ranch
03:10:07 Chic
Saying hello for the first time here! :) Have a great week everyone.
Vahana Hollow
03:09:48 Val
That is so old x.x
Pon Brats
03:08:16 
-Click-

;D Still with Royal Colours in frame
Pon Brats
03:07:06 
wait, i got the perfect one for comparison xD
Vahana Hollow
03:05:32 Val
Ahhh, I distinctly remember that one!
Vahana Hollow
03:05:01 Val
That is some ancient stuff, ahahaha <3 I have been thinking about remaking one of my Bluestone pieces just to compare how my style has changed.
Pon Brats
03:04:51 
Wait, here's a Val one
-Click-
Pon Brats
03:03:29 
I think all the art i got from you is Bluestone, Val
Pon Brats
03:03:11 
I'd still use it but i have no idea which account it was on
Vahana Hollow
03:02:47 Val
My gosh, that art is still under my Bluestone name, wow :O
Pon Brats
03:02:45 
this one ;D
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Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 11:12 AM


Cherry River Elites
 
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I need some hard critique on this. Two different wing colors as well, completely insignificant, ignore that. Be as harsh as you need to, I feel like I could improve a lot. This is actually my best art yet, but you're probably super bored with all my rambling on by now, so I'll shut up and let the masters work their critique magic.
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Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 11:19 AM

Former Stable
 
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Honestly the biggest thing for me is just how pixelated it looks, I would try using smaller brush sizes so it doesn't look as blocky. I think you were trying to do a braided mane and tail but the tail is very thin. The pink nose is also darker than it needs to be.
The definition on the chest is great though but I would try and carry that through the rest of the horse more, especially on the dark sections on the legs.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 12:53 PM


Florestä
 
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I think it looks really good. Would definitely buy.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:02 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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i think the definition on the chest is good. but with the legs you need to finish them way more smoothly, makin sure to rub out any bits coming off the legs, and maybe smudge the dark layers on the legs so they blend with the buckskin color of the horse, because at the moment they look very abrupt and not right.
with the hair you attemted to do braids, and honestly you shouldnt have. it looks odd and pixelated, a bit like dreadlocks. i would have done the hair either long, flowy and dark, or short but smooth. the pink snip on the nose is too pink, try softening that.
now with the wings. honestly, they arent that great. along the tops of them need to be more swooshy and curved, more angelic. the tip bits of them look to pixelated an round, like you have just done them with a mouse. try smudging them (use a low strenght smudge) to create a better effect.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:10 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
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White Hills- Thanks. I was actually using the smallest brushes possible, because I suck at resizing, so I was using a 500x500 canvas. But I'll definitely work on more definition on the legs.
Sage Brush Stables- I love you <3
Olive Tree Equine- Dang :'). What do you mean by 'bits coming off the legs'? The braids were actually supposed to look like that, but if I were trying to do nicer braids, I'd use a better brush. I also thought the pink looked off- just wasn't sure why. I meant to make the wings look slightly twisted. But I'll definitely use those tips for other wings I make.
Thanks everyone!
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:18 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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sorry to be so harsh XD i meant for example the front left leg, there are bis where you have repainted it darker where you havent rubbed it all out so there are small pixels coming off the leg in places.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:22 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
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Ah, I see that now. Thank you!
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:27 PM


TenaciTea
 
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My main thing with this is the wings.
If you look at bird wings, they aren't completely straight.
When I draw wings (that aren't super anatomically correct) I do two gentle curves basically going on the opposite directions.
Ignore that this is a completely different art style than what you're working with xD
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If you look at the wings on this, you see that they're not straight, and it makes the horse look more like it's in motion. If you wanted the wings to look more level to the ground, you could decrease the angle/curve of the wings.
Looking for heavy critique! February 23, 2021 01:03 AM


Azrail Elites
 
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What program do you use?
Looking for heavy critique! February 23, 2021 07:55 AM


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